VN Ren'Py A mod for ProjectSAGE

[atlas114]

lots of home stuff to work through
> shower or bath (leave open or "i don't care that it's open"
> Matt, Chris, or Stephen look, and have the option to keep looking before Amy catches them
> option for them to leave politely or stay and chat
> Amy gets back from the beach, Uncle Stephen watches her undress and go into the shower. She showers while he gets naked and watches. Amy walks past him, and he showers while she peeks
> Amy asks for help undressing after she hurts her ankle in front of Uncle Stephen
> Amy eventually gets enough courage to walk around the house topless, or nude (later on)
> Amy goes to shower, sees Uncle Stephen in the bath, showers in front of him, then sits down on the tub and talks with him, even spreading her legs
> Breakfast scene with the family where she is wearing a white crop top and tight white pants. Aunt takes notice and begins getting jealous

I think that's all of the scenes I could find of the family events. I'm sure there may be some I missed.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

Is there a detailed render of Amy? I admit I am surprised about the quality until now and the "tuning" of Stephen und Aunty (which I hope to see in a later releases "interacting" more lovely with Amy ...) but for me, because it is based on Project Sage, I will always compare to the original (which can be a burden), so I need a drop dead gorgeous Amy (yeah somehow she was although the exaggerated body proportions). With her, for me, the game succeeds or fails. So giving her big, but not so protruding boobs (look maybe for Emily Bloom or omg omg Katie Darling aka YourLittleAngel, those are natural boobies to die for ) and longer legs with a tight, slightly muscular belly and of course a very pretty face (and maybe a not so tanned skin at the beginning (so we can later start a tan line discussion )). Just my five cents Good luck with your game!


Don't listen to him One of the hottest scenes was the molesting and showing her off when she was drunk after the cosplay modelling! So we definitely need some train molesting (of course starting low and increasing over time ).

Since I'm almost done with day 1 renders, and Amy is in almost all of them, her looks are for the most parts fixed since I would have to re-render 95% of the imager if I change her. I like the idea of having some bad guy's in the game like blackmailing and molesting, since I don't like the world to seem too safe, although I agree with Baka that the principal should be toned down a bit. I'm hoping I've done a good job with Amy's look, to me she looks almost perfect
I'll throw in a couple of full body renders to show her off.

 

[atlas114]

I'll throw in a couple of full body renders to show her off.

can’t wait!

 

[Gunsothegreat]

I'm wondering, did anyone like the boyfriend? personally, I didn't.

 

[atlas114]

I'm wondering, did anyone like the boyfriend? personally, I didn't.

i hated him with a passion.

if you tried to turn him down he turned out to be a complete asshole.

 

[trektant]

I'm wondering, did anyone like the boyfriend? personally, I didn't.

Nope. Was an annoyingly forced rich boy character.
He came off as the author's angle at breaking down or warping Amy's views on traditional relationships. Given that I played Amy, it was incredibly annoying to deal with a forced asshole boyfriend so I skipped his sections.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

So here are a few quick renders of Amy and the three hairstyles I use.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

I'll probably mostly use the ponytail hairstyle, the twin tails style is a pain to pose.

 

[atlas114]

i like the single ponytail style as well

 

[baka]

I'm wondering, did anyone like the boyfriend? personally, I didn't.

yeah. I don't like him.
as I already wrote:
if u add him, he should be a side-character, a friend of the brother
maybe some flirting but just to make the brother jealous.
but, really, the brother has other friends, so if u want to remove him completely I will not say anything.
now, this dude will "help" Amy in some scenes, but I think u could rewrite it a bit so someone else can help her instead
or just remove it all. as I dont care about the café blackmail thing.

 

[atlas114]

So here are a few quick renders of Amy and the three hairstyles I use.

Amy is absolute perfection. you really did a good job on her.

maybe another week or two before we can see Day 1?

 

[Gunsothegreat]

Amy is absolute perfection. you really did a good job on her.

maybe another week or two before we can see Day 1?

If all goes well I'd say 2-3 days left, so it might be this weekend. I'm sure I'll find out I missed a couple of pics somewhere and I still have to fix the meeting the family images (Still has the hot aunt and fit uncle) but I'm very close.

 

[Diconica]

ProjectSage was a poorly written story to start with. It would take near a complete rewrite to fix it. The plot holes it had were massive.

You would be better off just creating a new game using it as inspiration at most.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

ProjectSage was a poorly written story to start with. It would take near a complete rewrite to fix it. The plot holes it had were massive.

You would be better off just creating a new game using it as inspiration at most.

I am working on a script for a game somewhat inspired by projectSAGE, the office wife and a few other games focused on exhibitionism. However I'm not a fast writer and I'm hopelessly addicted to making graphics, so I took this up as a side project. The story in the game is a bit raw but I did like it, surprisingly since I'm not a fan of HS models, but yes I do think there's room for improvement. The new scenes I add will test if my writing is crap or not, and I have a few fans of the game that are willing to be my test subjects in this.

 

[Randeep44]

I am working on a script for a game somewhat inspired by projectSAGE, the office wife and a few other games focused on exhibitionism. However I'm not a fast writer and I'm hopelessly addicted to making graphics, so I took this up as a side project. The story in the game is a bit raw but I did like it, surprisingly since I'm not a fan of HS models, but yes I do think there's room for improvement. The new scenes I add will test if my writing is crap or not, and I have a few fans of the game that are willing to be my test subjects in this.

I like what you have done with the game so far if you want message me i can help write for free offcourse i also want to try my hand at erotic game making as soon as i get my new pc but in the mean time i can help you out cheers.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

I might as well share this while I'm at it, It has nothing to do with this project other than being made by me a couple of years ago the first chapter of a porn comic.

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Never shared it before.

 

[atlas114]

I might as well share this while I'm at it, It has nothing to do with this project other than being made by me a couple of years ago the first chapter of a porn comic.

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Never shared it before.

thanks! will check it out later tonight

 

[Jude6]

I'm wondering, did anyone like the boyfriend? personally, I didn't.

I like the idea of Amy getting a boyfriend / having boyfriend prospects eventually.

The boyfriend we got I wasn't a huge fan of, but Paperwork was also signalling pretty clearly towards a story-arc in which Hank cheats on Amy, which would have been interesting to see how it would then affect her relationships with the other men in her life.
Also Paperwork did say (right before the end) that Amy would have a few different options for boyfriends and the game was seemingly in the early stages of setting up the guy from the Wet T-shirt contest (fish costume guy) as another potential boyfriend.

... I like the idea of having some bad guy's in the game like blackmailing and molesting, since I don't like the world to seem too safe ...

Strongly agree, optional storylines with blackmail & molesters are vital to the game - Amy is a beautiful girl that all the guys wanna be with, some not taking no for an answer really helps reinforce that idea.

Also I disagree that the game had bad writing, the plot/story pacing was definitely messy but I was consistently impressed by Paperwork's writing when it came to dialogue and Amy's internal monologue, it's what made me like her so much as a character.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

I wouldn't say the writing is bad, but a bit raw, it feels like a first draft. Now obviously he does take some liberties with what the character's reactions are in the story that you wouldn't say were realistic, but I do think you shouldn't let reality ruin a good fantasy But what scenes we like and don't like is obviously just taste. I think he did quite well with the tools he had.

 

[Diconica]

I am working on a script for a game somewhat inspired by projectSAGE, the office wife and a few other games focused on exhibitionism. However I'm not a fast writer and I'm hopelessly addicted to making graphics, so I took this up as a side project. The story in the game is a bit raw but I did like it, surprisingly since I'm not a fan of HS models, but yes I do think there's room for improvement. The new scenes I add will test if my writing is crap or not, and I have a few fans of the game that are willing to be my test subjects in this.

I haven't looked at your work. So won't comment on it.
Lets start with if your wife, child, grand child, cousin came to you telling you they were being blackmailed would you leave it in their hands to resolve if you had the skills to deal with it and even if you didn't have the skills would you get someone to deal with it.

The character makes no use of the current level of technology demonstrated in the game to protect herself.
She is supposed to be smart but never once is her decisions in the game exhibit that.

The entire game felt like someone made a list of shit they want to put in the game and stuck it together.
The entire thing is written as if the author has no understanding of what the difference between plot,story and concept is.
"Mary, went to the park kicked the soccer ball and knocking out Tom's teeth", has more of a story than the game currently does.
He has a concept. " The story is about an independent young girl who decides to move to another country to start a new life after losing her family. Slowly, she discovers herself, her heritage and her destiny. " No overall story or plot.

You can find thousands of better source about girls finding themselves in another country to get ideas from. Go check out a used book store, library, web search ... free online pdf books.