VN Ren'Py A mod for ProjectSAGE

[Paco Loco]

A little teaser for you guy's, although to day has been a bit busy so I won't get a lot done, things are still progressing. View attachment 2004993

Nice!

Just take your time.

Don't rush things and don't try to just please the audience. There are all kinds of perverted minds here but only you decided to do a remake from PS.

The originals are as good as dead. This is your project now and good luck.

If you need some help, you can send a DM.

Bless you.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

thank you!
only thing that could make that better is if she was wearing shorter shorts

or even no shorts at all

 

[atlas114]

or even no shorts at all

 

[Gunsothegreat]

And always wear propper attire when gaming or bad/good things may happen.

 

[baka]

the peeping/shower/bath was one of my favorite scenes.
but since its random I was force to "scroll back" until I got the person I wanted to peep.
and not only that, also, if shower or bath, so many variations.
and I liked that it was slow. took a bit to progress.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

the peeping/shower/bath was one of my favorite scenes.
but since its random I was force to "scroll back" until I got the person I wanted to peep.
and not only that, also, if shower or bath, so many variations.
and I liked that it was slow. took a bit to progress.

I was thinking about increasing the odds of someone peepin the more they like Amy, and putting in a few choices each day that increase relationship, I already put in dinner choice, sit between uncle and young brother or aunt and older brother, so you get a relationship bonus with the people you choose to sit next to. this might be an interesting addition to scenes at home.

 

[atlas114]

I was thinking about increasing the odds of someone peepin the more they like Amy, and putting in a few choices each day that increase relationship, I already put in dinner choice, sit between uncle and young brother or aunt and older brother, so you get a relationship bonus with the people you choose to sit next to. this might be an interesting addition to scenes at home.

could also see this raising suspicion from the aunt if Amy keeps sitting next to Uncle

 

[Gunsothegreat]

could also see this raising suspicion from the aunt if Amy keeps sitting next to Uncle

That might actually be a good Idea, a suspicion variable for the aunt triggered by scenes where Amy is getting a little too friendly while the aunt is around.

 

[atlas114]

just a suggestion but in terms of further reducing complexity; what are your thoughts on keeping the first week (7 days) to building relationship and comfort level within the household?

i think what eventually doomed the project was far too many branches and characters early on that paperwork eventually George RR Martin’d himself with an overwhelming story and cast.

Maybe after that first week Amy says that she wants to help out and then goes out to try to get a job, then slowly build out new characters from there. Just a thought.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

just a suggestion but in terms of further reducing complexity; what are your thoughts on keeping the first week (7 days) to building relationship and comfort level within the household?

i think what eventually doomed the project was far too many branches and characters early on that paperwork eventually George RR Martin’d himself with an overwhelming story and cast.

Maybe after that first week Amy says that she wants to help out and then goes out to try to get a job, then slowly build out new characters from there. Just a thought.

That might actually be a good idea. still it would require writing a number of new scenes, but I suppose if I kept the scenes to a minimum it does make sense to let the player get a little more familiar with the family before going on to all the other stuff. What do the rest of you think, would a few day's at home with the family sound interesting to you?

 

[atlas114]

baka Jude6 thoughts?
not sure if a lot needs to be written; much of the progression within the home happens in the future so it would be a matter of bringing it earlier into the story

didn’t want to cause more work on your end unnecessarily.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

baka Jude6 thoughts?
not sure if a lot needs to be written; much of the progression within the home happens in the future so it would be a matter of bringing it earlier into the story

didn’t want to cause more work on your end unnecessarily.

I'll take a quick look through the script and check out the home scenes to see how much work it would be to let the family stuff run it's course a bit before going on to the other stuff.

 

[atlas114]

i’ll look through as well later tonight, i think i had some 60 or 80 something saves right before something interesting happened because there was no gallery option

 

[trektant]

What do the rest of you think, would a few day's at home with the family sound interesting to you?

Absolutely. Could use it as an opportunity to develop Amy's thoughts before she suddenly decides her vagina is no-mans-land and trains herself for butt stuff. Seriously the anal fixation from day 1 is so awkward.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

i’ll look through as well later tonight, i think i had some 60 or 80 something saves right before something interesting happened because there was no gallery option

Unfortunately, I unpacked the resource files and then deleted them to avoid conflicts, so my game is not in a runnable state until I finish the code for video night with the boys, since I added a choice to drink more or stop drinking at the truth or dare part.
so I'll have to read through the scripts

 

[Jude6]

I have mixed feelings about focusing on home-only scenes for the first week.

I think focusing on the home stuff in the early game could have upsides and downsides.

The balance between 'Amy at home' scenes and 'Amy out and about' scenes helped provide variety in the storylines covered on each game day for people who may not like one storyline or another.

Having said that, there were days devoted so heavily to new storylines and characters that for a while it felt like Paperwork had forgot about the family characters, so shuffling/bringing forward the family events could remedy that.

If it does result in a need for additional writing then I'd be happy see it, also more than happy to volunteer as a proof-reader or editor if you think you might want one Gunsothegreat

 

[atlas114]

that’s a really good point Jude6 ; up
to dev how he wants to structure it.

i agree for variety purposes she could probably do other things, my main point was to spend more time with the family to flesh out those relationships, increase her comfort level with skimpier outfits and eventual nudity before going to the outside world with that level of corruption in place.

that corruption being nurtured by people close to her instead of random people she just met. it’s late so i’ll stop posting for today lol

 

[Gunsothegreat]

I would have to rebalance the stat requirement, but I'll have to do that anyway since I've already added possible extra gains on day one, but that's fairly easy to do. some stats like exhibitionism have a home variable and a general, that makes sence to my that she would start experimenting in a fairly safe environment before exposing herself to the world. I'll look into this option but make no promises

 

[atlas114]

I'll look into this option but make no promises

i’m just happy you are doing this at all!

the characters so far look great and Amy is gorgeous! can’t wait to see more

 

[baka]

what I think is the some branches need to go completely.
and its not easy since everybody likes different things. thats what made PS unique.
but I could see it more natural if:

- family
well of course she moves there, so those events are important. that we all agree on

- school
that is also important that she immediately attend to school, part of life.
that way we can introduce the virgin dude. I think the principal should be more passive and
the blackmailing lighter, so he asks her to help the virgin dude. so his branch.
and I prefer that Amy is the dominant one and take charge. I dont like that he share her with others.
I like it that its secretive, and that she is dominant. and that she stands and helps him against bullies.
but later, I would like the principal to start participate, as a branch. and he will dominate both of them.

- work cafe
soon the family ask her to help out, and this could be introduced, she can look for a job.
but I dont like all the blackmailing part. the bitch and the spying outside. just working
and the clients part is interesting.

- no boyfriend
I don't like this part. he should be more passive, just a friend of the brothers,
Amy maybe is attracted to him, but nothing happens. maybe some light flirting
that will make the brother jealous.

- hobos
I would skip the entire thing. she could get injured, but its part of the family-events

- beach / convenience store
I would like it more that she get to know the 2 dudes and they spend time together.
when going to beach (that we should be able to choose as afternoon event)
could also have the homeless dude and the event in the store.
I kind of like it a bit.

- neighbor
Im conflicted here. some part are hot, some are just tiring.
I would prefer that she just help out, cleaning and chores and help with the poker game.
so lots of teasing, light touching. and I like it that she help with future poker games.

- the craftsmen
not sure here. too much too soon. another conflicted decision. how much and what.
I don't like the part he takes her to town. I like the home-events only.

- branches that I don't care at all:
train molesting, kids homework, modelling/beach contest, rpg, dreams