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- May 3, 2018
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Considering that most of the facial qualities of Chloe's genetics seems to have come from John.
First time trying the game, liking it so far. I'm gonna start working on doing some proofreading for it in my spare time. I'm going to try to get in touch with the dev, does anyone know if he/she/they come to these forums? If I can't get in touch with them I'll just release the proofread files as a mod here.
- Dec 22, 2018
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I think thats mc's house.
if you do not accept John's offer to sleepover.
they(nicole/chloe) come to MC's house to give the gift.
The English is broken for sure, but it's not unreadable. That said, this is just a personal project of mine at the moment, so it may take a while for me to get through all the current content.
- Nov 30, 2018
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Nitpicking at it's worst there is nothing wrong with the English in fact this is the first time I've seen anyone actually complain about it. 
I mean, it's definitely not the worst out there, but I highly doubt it has ever been proofread by a native English speaker.Nitpicking at it's worst there is nothing wrong with the English in fact this is the first time I've seen anyone actually complain about it.
- Nov 30, 2018
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You are making it sound like it's incoherent but it's not a few typing errors give or take. Here I thought it was something serious judging by these posts.
- Aug 28, 2018
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So Marilyn is making Chloe act like a hoe with beeman?
That fucking figures cause there is no narrative reason you can provide as to why she somehow can't handle MC's cock when she handling something bigger way easier.
That fucking figures cause there is no narrative reason you can provide as to why she somehow can't handle MC's cock when she handling something bigger way easier.
- Aug 28, 2018
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Also chloe isn't ugly... She is a shit girlfriend on either playthrough but come on now, she ain't ugly, she definitely ain't her mom tho..
- Sep 6, 2017
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I hope we will find a spell to turn Marylin into a Pig.
- Jun 28, 2018
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Reminds me a bit of Chuckie ( the killer doll). Has that Oh-look-how-nice-I-am smirk...wooosh, pulls out a kitchen knife.
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Also in the NTR playthrough, she slaps MC after he FINALLY confronts her about being a shit girlfriend and her fucking beeman.... Then she cries and runs too beeman... HA..
And they have a conversation about Beeman hurting MC? Honestly... lol Can't wait for the next update... Might even play NTR first just to see where this goes..
And they have a conversation about Beeman hurting MC? Honestly... lol Can't wait for the next update... Might even play NTR first just to see where this goes..
- Sep 29, 2017
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what the heck? the progress with both Nicole and Chloe was perfect, and all of a sudden MC becomes a professional the rapist... no wonder John wants him to work for his company
I never said it was incoherent at all. In fact in one of my first posts I said it was readable. It's one of those games that doesn't really have any big grammatical problems, but there are a lot of little things, that for me personally, add up.
- May 20, 2019
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Its not incoherent but its more than typing errors, the sentence structure and certain expressions gets quite funny sometimes.
But as Nicole says - "I tolerate"
There are certainly much worse examples on the site.