Not sure if I fancy this one. I kind of like the character art but the writing is kind of juvenile. It seems like something I'd expect from a 12-year-old kid.
After giving it a little more of a chance, I think I've been far too nice. This game is trash, and I'm really not sure why anyone would like it.
The English is terrible. Almost as bad as a machine translation, if it isn't already one.
The woman this kid is lusting after is way less attractive than the daughter he is already with. Makes no sense. You aren't even given an option on whether to pursue her, she is just thrown into your face.
UncleVT's submissions suck ass.
Were...we playing the same game?
By and far the
syntax in this game is good, so it bewilders me that you choose that as a font of criticism. And it has to be syntax you are arguing because a machine translation wouldn't have grammar issues.
Now, given a good syntax and grammar, what would make a story infantile is a lack of character progress or proper story structure. Given the serial nature of games such as these, I will freely admit that the game might feel like it meanders but, with that said, that is more of a limit of the genre then anything else. And the characters in this story, with the exception of the magicked daughter admittedly, have a natural organic progression to them.
So when you say that the writing is juvenile...can I assume that you mean the
plot? Because blackmailing a grown ass woman by using consensual sex with her daughter as the leverage IS pure authorial fiat. It shows a rather immature understanding of relationship dynamics. But this type of fiat, you see, more of a staple of PORN then it is 12 years olds.
So I am left wondering if you refuse to see pizza boys get pussy as their payment instead of their 3 dollar tip as well; A 12 year old could have conceivably come up with that as well!
If you cannot get past the porny premise of the game, then yeah I guess that game is not for you.
Oh and the last part criticism does not merit a direct response; That's just your taste dude. A product that does not cater to them is not instantaneously bad. Or good.