VN Ren'Py A Mother's Love [Part 1-14 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

[Jstforme]

I got the impression it was in the morning when she took her skinny dip in the ocean. So the heart to heart talk will be on the train home, not under the stars. It could be that she's washing away what she did that night with the MC, resolving herself to rekindle her marriage with John.
It also won't surprise me if she leaves for home without the MC, it's not like it would be a good idea to arrive back at home together on the same train anyway. She'll probably avoid the MC at any cost moving forward, springing a plan to action by the MC to expose John.
John is no fool however, so we'll see what happens...just wish we didn't have to wait till August or w/e to find out.

 

[Mormont]

I got the impression it was in the morning when she took her skinny dip in the ocean. So the heart to heart talk will be on the train home, not under the stars. It could be that she's washing away what she did that night with the MC, resolving herself to rekindle her marriage with John.
It also won't surprise me if she leaves for home without the MC, it's not like it would be a good idea to arrive back at home together on the same train anyway. She'll probably avoid the MC at any cost moving forward, springing a plan to action by the MC to expose John.
John is no fool however, so we'll see what happens...just wish we didn't have to wait till August or w/e to find out.

Remember John is out of town with Slyvia so they'll be okay to travel back unless of course, Chloe gets word that the MC is returning. And as for catching him out, I think the MC needs to gather up some proof about what John has been getting up to.

 

[Jstforme]

Remember John is out of town with Slyvia so they'll be okay to travel back unless of course, Chloe gets word that the MC is returning. And as for catching him out, I think the MC needs to gather up some proof about what John has been getting up to.

Just because he says he's leaving town, doesn't mean he's actually leaving town. He could be with the MC's parents, using Sylvia to keep dad busy while he does the nasty all night long with Mom. Would be a good Segway to providing the proof of John's actions to Nicole.

Edit: I can see it now...MC coming home to see John having coffee at his house with a big shit eating grin. Dad looking like hell, and mom locked in her room. MC gets a talk about consequences of ones actions...haha, who knows...we'll see

 

[msleomac]

Plus version doesnt have any extra scenes, it has a photo gallary with some exclusive renders for each girl.

Oops. Sorry. I actually meant to say extra pictures. Thanks for correcting me

 

[ekobella282]

Except for the Beeman route, that's just gross.

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Yeah man at one time i accidentally went through that way and it made me feel sick.

 

[Alfius]

Wow, wow, wow... what a game!

I remember playing this game a long time ago and thinking: Erghh, Why would I go for the mom, she's kind of a bitch.
Marilyn is cute, but she is a lesbian and at most a friend with benefits. Even the girlfriend is cute...Why would I want the mom over my GF that clearly loves me, with perky breasts to boot. I played until the fist dinner with the husband and then stopped playing.

I did not dislike the game, in fact I found it enjoyable, but it felt like a dime a dozen corruption game. The ones where the girl(mom) turns into a stupid brainless person with no personality or backbone. So I just stopped playing it. Not for any specific reason. But every time I looked for games to play there were just other ones I wanted to play first, until it fell so far behind that I kinda forgot about this one.

It pop up a few times on "Latest updates", but I always though... later.

So a couple of days ago, I decided to try play it again. My saves were so long ago, that, it did not even pick them up anymore. So I started from start again (Blessing in disguise)

I was blown away... The story and characters were so frigging good.

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I could go on.... but nothing short of a masterclass in erotic storytelling.

My only and biggest negative....
Fuck me, the moms pubic hair is so badly done, it's almost distracting.
Can the Dev please, please sort that out? Even if there are some pussy continuity issues.
I mean you sorted Marylin's hair out perfectly... Why can he resolve the mom's little bush.

Marilyn Before

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Please, I understand when the game started of, pubic technology was very rough around the edges, but please upgrade Nicole's hair.

 

[Englen]

Wow, wow, wow... what a game!

I remember playing this game a long time ago and thinking: Erghh, Why would I go for the mom, she's kind of a bitch.
Marilyn is cute, but she is a lesbian and at most a friend with benefits. Even the girlfriend is cute...Why would I want the mom over my GF that clearly loves me, with perky breasts to boot. I played until the fist dinner with the husband and then stopped playing.

I did not dislike the game, in fact I found it enjoyable, but it felt like a dime a dozen corruption game. The ones where the girl(mom) turns into a stupid brainless person with no personality or backbone. So I just stopped playing it. Not for any specific reason. But every time I looked for games to play there were just other ones I wanted to play first, until it fell so far behind that I kinda forgot about this one.

It pop up a few times on "Latest updates", but I always though... later.

So a couple of days ago, I decided to try play it again. My saves were so long ago, that, it did not even pick them up anymore. So I started from start again (Blessing in disguise)

I was blown away... The story and characters were so frigging good.

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I could go on.... but nothing short of a masterclass in erotic storytelling.

My only and biggest negative....
Fuck me, the moms pubic hair is so badly done, it's almost distracting.
Can the Dev please, please sort that out? Even if there are some pussy continuity issues.
I mean you sorted Marylin's hair out perfectly... Why can he resolve the mom's little bush.

Marilyn Before

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Marilyn After

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Please, I understand when the game started of, pubic technology was very rough around the edges, but please upgrade Nicole's hair.

There was actually a patreon poll back in January where we could vote on the pubes for Nicole, sadly majority voted against changing them.

These were the options

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[Alfius]

There was actually a patreon poll back in January where we could vote on the pubes for Nicole, sadly majority voted against changing them.

These were the options

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All 3 of them are better then the current one. Number 2 or three would have been perfect.

For me it's just so jarring. Everything else is perfect, but then you have the clearly fake pubes.
To be honest, it does not look so bad in the poll, but a lot of times it's zoomed in on the pussy, and then it's just distracting for me.

Pity...Was the poll on here or on Patreon?

 

[Englen]

All 3 of them are better then the current one. Number 2 or three would have been perfect.

For me it's just so jarring. Everything else is perfect, but then you have the clearly fake pubes.
To be honest, it does not look so bad in the poll, but a lot of times it's zoomed in on the pussy, and then it's just distracting for me.

Pity...Was the poll on here or on Patreon?

on Patreon.

 

[NeedAGirlFriend]

That's a great game so far, I managed to avoid the NTR but now I'm a bit worried cause Chloe is(was ?) still MC's girlfriend and caught him banging her mom during the school dance. I don't see the harem tag but I'd like to keep them both. But seeing how the story looks like, I guess that's over for her

 

[Alfius]

That's a great game so far, I managed to avoid the NTR but now I'm a bit worried cause Chloe is(was ?) still MC's girlfriend and caught him banging her mom during the school dance. I don't see the harem tag but I'd like to keep them both. But seeing how the story looks like, I guess that's over for her

In my playthrough, they did not get caught, she thought she caught them, but it was a different couple.

So yeah in my playthrough, Chloe is still my Girlfriend.

So my bit of speculation for my possible end.

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[Englen]

In my playthrough, they did not get caught, she thought she caught them, but it was a different couple.

So yeah in my playthrough, Chloe is still my Girlfriend.

So my bit of speculation for my possible end.

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hmm and how would the the eventual Nicole pregnancy fit into your endings?

 

[Alfius]

hmm and how would the the eventual Nicole pregnancy fit into your endings?

Lol...well I'm hoping she's not pregnant...but that will change things of course.

I have not really participated in any fan theories or dev statements for the game at this stage, so for me the game I have played is the only canon. Obviously there is hint's that she might be pregnant, but it's not a sure thing as far as I'm concerned. I'm like the MC in that instance, deal with it if it happens.

I would actually not mind that ending...I just hope the John problem is resolved by then.

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

No idea how the pregnancy point thing will work since so far as i remember Nicole was on the pills everytime my Protagonist came on her.

 

[Englen]

No idea how the pregnancy point thing will work since so far as i remember Nicole was on the pills everytime my Protagonist came on her.

that might be the case for you, but mine sure as hell came inside her when she wasnt using birth control. Then again pills arent 100% foolproof as stated by Nicole herself in the lastest update.

 

[Alfius]

No idea how the pregnancy point thing will work since so far as i remember Nicole was on the pills everytime my Protagonist came on her.

I fucked her like mad. Cumming inside her every time. It was however a 2 day period, so if it was the correct time of the month...she would be pregnant. I think a woman is fertile for roughly a week every month. So about 25% chance of pregnancy.

Like I said, the game does hint about the possibility, but will handle the problem when we get there.

 

[msleomac]

In my playthrough, they did not get caught, she thought she caught them, but it was a different couple.

So yeah in my playthrough, Chloe is still my Girlfriend.

So my bit of speculation for my possible end.

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You do realize it is also possible that the MC and Chloe get together with Nicole as one big happy family. The most common trope. Not technically a Harem (I feel should Marlyin be added can be considered as such).

Plus i'm sure would make a majority of players happy (moi included ).

 

[BlackCobalt]

You do realize it is also possible that the MC and Chloe get together with Nicole as one big happy family.

That'd make for an amusing relationship. I find it weird though to have Chloe suddenly become your stepdaughter especially if she's still your girlfriend... but that's just from my perspective.

 

[Alfius]

You do realize it is also possible that the MC and Chloe get together with Nicole as one big happy family. The most common trope. Not technically a Harem (I feel should Marlyin be added can be considered as such).

Plus i'm sure would make a majority of players happy (moi included ).

This game does not have a harem feel to it. I mean normally a harem game would have Marylin also fall in love with you, with you and the nurse also getting into a relationship (Plus the MC's mom for good measure) and then all of them lives happily ever after. I have come to realize, after a couple of good games, that I do not really like harem endings. It takes all the realism away for me.

I prefer games where you have sex with all the girls (minus the MC's mom in this game) during the playthrough, but eventually you end up with just one girl (Cheating and side-girls excluded) . To me that is more grounded in real life.

Back to Chloe and Mom...I just don't see it. Chloe was already devastated when she thought she caught them.
Maybe, possible... I don't know. Also the MC clearly does not enjoy sex with Chloe that much. So the harem would consist of unequal love or lust. The current dynamic is that the MC is totally smitten with Nicole, Chloe is for convenience and Marylin is friend with benefits. in terms of passion I would put down the MC commitment to 80% Nicole, 10% Chloe and 10% Marylin. I don't see Chloe excepting 10%. Marylin could go for it, since Marylin only have eyes for Nicole, and a harem could be her only way to achieve that. The dev would really need to be good to be able to pull it off, otherwise the game would fall flat.

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So to conclude, I don't exclude the possibility of a mini-harem ending, but I don't see it at this stage. The dev would need to be extremely good to pull it of for me. Seeing how he well he did the mom corruption (Close to the best I have played on this site), he has the talent, but maybe that is not what he is going for.

 

[msleomac]

That'd make for an amusing relationship. I find it weird though to have Chloe suddenly become your stepdaughter especially if she's still your girlfriend... but that's just from my perspective.

I was thinking more of the lines of MC and Chloe getting married and Nicole living with them. But your suggestion is definitely more entertaining . It would be different from the my standard thinking. And the sexual interactions between the three of them would be mind-boggling.