I was about to rate this game with 2 stars but canceled because I see how well it was received, so I thought maybe I'm missing out something here but I couldn't sit myself to read this for several hours to get to the good part, if any. So I'm writing my summary of thoughts here.
I'm not saying it to make people here mad or something but just point out which parts IMO could be written better and maybe there are developers who read this and inspired by this game which maybe will think to present the premise in a more coherent way. I didn't read the thread here but It's a shame because I'm sure that I'm not the only one who dropped this game for these reasons. The developer missing out potential supporters like this.
I'm not a know it all but the points I state here are really basic I think.
I couldn't get past the first 1-2 hours of the story.
The writing is (sorry to say it) really repetitive and lacking IMO, need revision.
Nicole is so unbelievable character (at least up to where I got) with all the "I'm doing it for my daughter.." like, come on man... Also the MC in every second sentence "It's not cheating, It's not cheating..", dude..
I know it's an adult game and its made for the sake of corrupting the mother, but man it could be presented better than this.
What broke me was the part when the MC came in her mouth and she just swallowed it later in the bathroom with her ridiculous inner dialogue, JESUS, I was dumbfounded, no way, no matter how depraved she was and how long she didn't have sexual relationship, she wouldn't do something like that (more later on this part). It felt so out of place and made up, like the writer leads the character on a certain path just to progress the story to fit his desire and won't let the character act as she would by herself. I don't know, maybe she is addicted to swallowing semen since she was a teen and it could make sense, but as long as the writer doesn't present this knowledge to the reader and meticulously build his character to do this shit, everything the character does is fake and make her a puppet.
Whats even more absurd is that the story, especially at the beginning, surrounding 1 character and its Nicole, she had to be written top notch, you can't do her like that.
Sorry, had to spit it out.
While everyone is entitled to their opinion, what is not fair is down voting the game without even having played it thoroughly...
Your personal biases shouldn't affect a rating of a game that's (so far) perfectly scored. Just because YOU don't understand it, doesn't mean the majority don't either. Clearly the game is well received but it's not to say it's without flaws (as no games are).
I feel as if you are being overly hyper-critical of a PORN game... Did you expect this to be a real life simulator? The writing doesn't have to describe things on an intricate level otherwise the developer will be working on this forever! He writes enough for you to fill in the gaps with your imagination, you have to take things with a pinch of salt (...or semen in Nicole's case).
I never understood when people criticize the transitions in the dialogue, like...it's a porn game dude, how lonely and deprived are you to want to have things draw on parallels in real life? It's fantasy, not real life...he's allowed creative liberties to progress the story in a "natural way" (within the realms of the story).
Why it may not seem like natural progression to you is because you are expecting to score with your girlfriend's hot mom using these untried methods? Who knows...
Like I said, you're entitled to your opinion but keep it here...the saddest part is you were willing to 2-star rate a game just because you are looking for a 'Picasso' without realizing how badly you've criticized it yourself...without having played it properly! (to your own self-admittance).
I'll tell you where I never took the game's dialogue seriously...during the first few mins of the game when MC blackmailed Nicole to get naked and show off her body...No woman in their right mind would get naked in front of someone who's arguably a stranger and the same age as her child just to protect her daughter...you would smack the shit out of him and call his parents...LOGIC.
...and I still love the game because of it! It's comical in a sense and it imbeds the title of the story into action. If Nicole is so protective of Chloe that she would go this far, to now sleeping with her daughter's boyfriend...imagine how that conversation would go? Like I said...it's all sexual fantasy, it doesn't have to be real...just real enough to get to the hot lewd scenes! (and erotic dialogue).
Also if you want something more "real", you should check out "A Wife And A Mother" (AWAM) ...that sounds like something to your liking... but be warned... that game takes FOREVER to update (now you will see why most devs don't go for the simulator route...it's PORN!). It's been 4 years and no sex scene yet and when an update does come out, it's all inner dialogue and getting into situations to SLOWLY (and I mean VERY SLOWLY) corrupt her.
Let me know how that one turns out in another hundred years, hopefully 2 updates will be released by then.
Meanwhile, I will enjoy this one
