- Sep 6, 2018
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- I've played the update (Ch.11) midway thus far and here are my honest thoughts;
- Story1 -- The core plot of MC gathering evidence for John's infedility is getting to a point beyond convoluted. To begin with since the dev already showed us a 3rd person view of John's sadist nature, the suspense and the reveal is out of the window. Looking at Nicole's nature, even if MC presents her with all the evidence, John has a hold on her and also dismissing her outright which he had when Nicole discovered Silvia's thong. So unless MC takes it up to the law, I don't see how John would be out of the picture.
- Story2 -- Add to that the useless tangents and characters. Abigail is a great character and looking at how her model was designed, could have been easily 'friends-with'benefits' and could have added some fragility to MC or tested his fidelity. On top of which MC's parents clearly have an indirect yet unresolved business with John as the MC's dad had hinted in the previous updates. MC's mom is as alluring as they come, so there's potential to explore some hot content as well. Plus there's Silvia and all other females. Point is, unless there's some hot chemistry between them without MC going all the way to Sunday, what's the point in having numb conversations with these characters that neither progresses the story nor any action?
- Story3 -- Specific to Abi in Ch.11, the abuse was uncalled and completely unnecessary. If the MC is hero to her, I almost expected Abi to have warm --> hot feelings for MC, but it lead to nowhere, yet. If the only purpose of Abigail's arc was to gain a half useful medical clue of every female working at Magic Grand without any sparks, why make her character at all? You already have a love-her-hate-her-can't-ignore-her friend in Marilyn.
- I'm yet to reach the end but I'm guessing we'll be at another cliffhanger which turns into an anti-climax whenever the update comes. The only saving grace is Nicole but her glacial progress with MC is baffling. Last I checked, the number of creampies to Nicole was 13-15, in real life there would be a pint sized posse with those many melted ice-creams in a honey pot such as Nicole's. Ultimately we want to see Nicole and MC drive into the sunset with Chloe accepting it any which way and John doing life for his deeds. If the progress is this slow, the dev is setting the fans up with huge expectations and burdening himself to exhaustion.
- My hunch is that with whatever life issues are eclipsing his artistic side, it's weighing down on the game's story in a bad way. Lucky for us Nicole is pleasing us since her inception.
