Mikiyo

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Ello!
After finish part 14 I have to share my opinion on the story so far.

1-Marilyn
Ever since the release of Part 13, I feel like her character and personality have change 360. Before the release of part 13, Marilyn have always been playful with the MC. Teasing here and there. We know she had a small feeling for MC which is why her character is very playful toward the MC. Start of part 13 her character and personality seem to feel like it took a 360. The way her interaction toward the MC doesn't feel playful anymore and more like she just being mean cause she can and attack MC with every comments he made. Before she would go out of her way to help MC with his problem and now she would happily give him the cold shoulders or only help if there a benefit for her. We know as a fact she fancy Nicole and never give MC bad feeling about MC getting laid with Nicole but now Marilyn act out on MC having so much sex with Nicole and comments on MC cheating on Chloe every chance get to tell MC. I don't know why the Dev decide to give Marilyn a personality change but for me I don't like it.

2-NTR & Magic
Let start with I don't have problem with NTR as it make the story so people don't suddenly attack me with comments on it. The NTR make sense in the story since MC is as a fact Cheating on Chloe with her mother so no defend on that as to why Chloe would Cheat on MC with Beeman. Also seem like Chloe may have a secret fetish for old man and rough sex even if she doesn't admit it. But as of release part 14 and learning Mr Heaven have offer a job for MC mother, with that scene alone it make me wonder if the Dev decide to Aim for one of people to marketing the game. Why did I think the Dev just throwing NTR for marketing? Cause it make no sense in the story. Which come down to the Magic in the story. Did part of the story with magic been remove to make this scene come truth? There were scenes in the past story I can remember with MC Parents and Marilyn known about Mr Heaven and I know the magic part of the story haven't completely been remove as it show Marilyn can still read MC mind. So would MC parents accept Mr Heaven offer knowing what they know about him. I like to believe not. But as I read the comments page a few people feel the same with how MC mother story going to turn out. Which is why I believe the remove of parents magic scenes been remove to make up for this part of the story to Aim for more people to play the game which it fine even if it seem a little desperate.

Overall it does feel like the story just move a bit forward like we only halfway, removing Beeman, Nicole affair with MC and how will Chloe romance with MC remain going forward. So far it feel like Mr Heaven have control of everything since MC start working for him with no way of winning even with How MC and Silvia trying to find Evidences against him or I believe Mr Heaven letting them find them as part of his bigger plan. What not in Mr Heaven plan is there seem to be someone else looking into Mr Heaven business to get back at him which I find interesting. Anyway let end with how I'm happy the game haven't been Abandoned. Thanks.
 

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btw in part12 dev said he is not gonna making fan dissapointed let jhon sex with nicole but dude still making scene jhon have sex with nicole even tho it just mc though. my point is dev want to make this game hard ntr as possible but pull down and now he is targeting mc mom to become victim. orb is ntr lover for sure
 

EnterpriseNL

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I just played it after some difficulties with saves, and that cliffhanger is huge, this is going to be bad, it's a Silvia situation all over again
 
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NebulousShooter

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Man, I see NTR as a more comprehensive issue, like the MC may not be interested in his mother, but she is a person he loves and wants to protect and the antagonist wants to corrupt and degrade the MC's loved ones. I never complained about other characters because they weren't important to the MC, but the mother is another story, doesn't always need to be a sexual relationship or a romantic relationship, but any important person in the MC's life is what I consider NTR, let's think along this path, your mother who is married to your father and you love you mom is kidnapped by someone and corrupted to become a sexual object or someting else, you wouldn't be mad about that? or you'd be fine with them doing that to your mother? NTR was very condensed into a single style where the MC's love interest is stolen, but I think the term NTR should be more comprehensive and add family members as well, like you may not be romantically interested in a loved one but you love that person and don't want that this happens to her. I know it's just a game, but you start to have an attachment to the characters you play with over time that what hepen to me i don't nw if you is the same or any other.
NTR could be family members(in non incest stories), even childhood friend trope as well. The one time definition retards scholars in this forum don't look to Japan is coincidently when it doesn't fit their biases. Not that it fucking matters how you call it when it has the same narrative purpose, it targets the same audience and is designed to elicit the same type of emotions.
 

fishbrain

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He graduated, he's an adult can't force him to do anything but it'll be interesting to see what happens next. At least we're one update closer to kicking rat face's teeth down his throat.

Someone give me the save file of the previous version
You can start from the new chapter.
 
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cxx

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hi dev
all my 11 pages of saves are creating an exception
can you have a look
thanks
1. dev not here
2. when was last time you restarted game?
3. did you play with wt-mod?

Yh I got the same thing, I don't think there has been a mention yet in the chat regarding a fix
answer 2nd and 3rd questions above.

Not according to the official walkthrough. The test results will come back negative if you have 8 or less cumming inside nicole points.
well she hasn't had sex with others than mc so it should be his baby. doubt there are many who haven't chosen to fill her pussy.
 
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Filipis

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Not according to the official walkthrough. The test results will come back negative if you have 8 or less cumming inside nicole points.
That's honestly wack, as Nicole's pregnancy is seemingly what confirms her infidelity to John (even if he strongly suspected something was going on before, end of CH13 confirmed it) and moves John's sinister plans forward.

Not gonna lie, the story in this game makes a LOT less sense if you don't pursue Nicole. If you even can not pursue her, feels like the game gave you a choice in that at the start - or did I misinterpret that?
 

m3nic

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For me...
Its sad there is no sex MC with Marlyn, Slivia or Abi. MC too focus to Nicole and Chloe only and the sex only competition between MC and Beeman. This game almost finish, I bet the game will finish after John/Mr Heavens go to jail and MC happy ending w Nicole.
 
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Mikiyo

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For me...
Its sad there is no sex MC with Marlyn, Slivia or Abi. MC too focus to Nicole and Chloe only and the sex only competition between MC and Beeman. This game almost finish, I bet the game will finish after John/Mr Heavens go to jail and MC happy ending w Nicole.
Ello!
Well there are a lot of teasing play with Marilyn if your decide to choose Chloe NTR path with Beeman. I like to believe there was a Path for Marilyn in the past if you choose to let the MC ignore Nicole and Chloe which make Marilyn the choice to have any sexual in a Porn VN game. As for the other ladies sure as Silvia and Abigail I again like to believe there were a Path for them with MC helping to heal them from Mr Heaven buuuuut, like I wrote in my post, the Dev seem to decide all sexual forward will mostly be with MC or NTR Mr Heaven since removing Beeman for Chloe. With how part 14 ended we will see many NTR with Mr Heaven in the future update, many force sex might be the Dev focus going forward. Thanks.
 

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So you get a scene where she says pregnant women can't have caffeine but only if you bought coffee over tea. Does the Dev not know that tea has caffeine in it?
 

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I would love to see the mom start dressing younger and sluttier, now that she realizes that she is falling for the younger MC. She convinces her daughter that she is just feeling better about herself and just wants to look better. When they go out, they start doing risky things like making out in a movie theater, or in a restaurant. They go to a club, she's wearing a super short outfit, the MC removes her panties in the club, and she gets drunk and starts acting like a real slut in the club, even dancing and being groped by other men with the MC's encouragement. Mom is starting to like this "new me", feeling younger and carefree.
I haven't finished the game yet, but, I'm hoping that Nicole works parttime in the bar as a waitress and has to wear a slutty outift and is groped and molested by the drunks in the bar. (maybe, if she gets corrupted enough, she'll start making money on the side, doing favors).
 
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