VN Ren'Py A Mother's Love [Part 1-14 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

[RoadWulf]

Personally, I think more and more that Kyle should take a long look at this game to improve his Dual Family.

Eh DF is forever going to be more of an Art Game than a Porn Game. Hell it's barely passable as an Adult Game right now.

This game has potential, but I hate the linear nature of it just like I hate DF's point system of lies. The accepting the mother's offer should be a path not a requirement. This game would be so much better if you could make the choice to go after the mother or be loyal to the girlfriend. Or say "fuck em both" and go after Psychic Gamer Girl.

Like, in all honesty, the main character does not play this as smart as he thinks he does. All he would have had to say to Chloe was a long the lines of:
"I think we should stop going out on dates in the weeks leading up to the College Exams. This doesn't mean I'm breaking up with you, we'll still call and text. We'll also see each other at school. But I really want you to be able to concentrate on your studies until the exams so you can get into the University you want. I'd hate it if I was the cause of why you couldn't get in. Once that's done we can start going out like normal again. And if you want, I can talk to your mom, that way you can ask her if she thinks you're doing well enough in you studies. If she thinks you are then I can come over and hang out with you without us having to worry about it."

This fulfills the deal, puts the burden on the mother as to who is stopping you from being together no matter how good she does, and leaves the door open for him and the girlfriend once the exam is over. Plus he gets to have fun with the mother and still has the option of blackmailing her into stuff she doesn't want to do by threatening to tell Chloe that he's "changed his mind" and "can't stand to be away from her for so long".

 

[J0K3RXXX]

Eh DF is forever going to be more of an Art Game than a Porn Game. Hell it's barely passable as an Adult Game right now.

This game has potential, but I hate the linear nature of it just like I hate DF's point system of lies. The accepting the mother's offer should be a path not a requirement. This game would be so much better if you could make the choice to go after the mother or be loyal to the girlfriend. Or say "fuck em both" and go after Psychic Gamer Girl.

Like, in all honesty, the main character does not play this as smart as he thinks he does. All he would have had to say to Chloe was a long the lines of:
"I think we should stop going out on dates in the weeks leading up to the College Exams. This doesn't mean I'm breaking up with you, we'll still call and text. We'll also see each other at school. But I really want you to be able to concentrate on your studies until the exams so you can get into the University you want. I'd hate it if I was the cause of why you couldn't get in. Once that's done we can start going out like normal again. And if you want, I can talk to your mom, that way you can ask her if she thinks you're doing well enough in you studies. If she thinks you are then I can come over and hang out with you without us having to worry about it."

This fulfills the deal, puts the burden on the mother as to who is stopping you from being together no matter how good she does, and leaves the door open for him and the girlfriend once the exam is over. Plus he gets to have fun with the mother and still has the option of blackmailing her into stuff she doesn't want to do by threatening to tell Chloe that he's "changed his mind" and "can't stand to be away from her for so long".

You are very right. There could also be the option that MC can get everything: money, a rented apartment -he is still living with his parents, although they have not yet appeared in the game- and Nicole payment, while he is hiding his relationship with Chloe and his other relationship with Mary Jinx. And as for that proposal, the MC is quite naive because if you accept the money (and the rented apartment), you should ask for an immediate advance for the day after the family dinner to ensure the payment of the agreed money and not wait an entire week to get paid, because what would happen if Nicole refused to pay the MC seeing that the breakup was so thoughtless by him that Chloe would refuse to talk to him, could save a lot of money and have to pay several months for rent when her daughter's relationship is over forever, although he tries to tell the truth to her -he would be fatal to her because he would have put a price on their relationship-. And that advance could also begin to be the beginning of the Nicole payment.

A visual novel should be programmed to have a multitude of options that trigger many alternative paths and endings, although these are only slightly different in certain aspects. For example, I have played this game several times, and when the time comes to take advantage of her after Nicole is masturbing herself in the sofa, sometimes I don't get the option of MC can insert his cock in her mouth while she is asleep. Or when he asks she jerk him off in the sofa, sometimes her reaction is completely scandalized and other times she is more resigned. So, if there is a walkthrough to this game, I think it should be established as a decision tree and not a literal walkthrough as the DF walkthrough.

 

[fortuna95]

What a great game and much content at 0.1. Only the unrealistic mind read bothers me a little, but 4,5/5 atm. Way to go!

 

[J0K3RXXX]

What a great game at 0.1 and much content. Only the unrealistic mind read bothers me a little, but 4,5/5 atm. Way to go!

If I'm not wrong, I think that this game is planned to have only 2 parts -look in the OP-, although I hope to make mistakes and that its developers decide to expand it a lot, since it has a lot of great potential.

 

[Trasher2018]

Uhm - just started, but is there a way to get that text out of the middle of the screen to the bottom where it belongs? This destroys everything ...

 

[RoadWulf]

Uhm - just started, but is there a way to get that text out of the middle of the screen to the bottom where it belongs? This destroys everything ...

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No, bad decision making on the Dev's part. What I can guess he was trying to do was eliminate the need for H or Middle Mouse buttoning the Text Box away from blocking sex content, so that you could watch and read at the same time.

 

[Trasher2018]

No, bad decision making on the Dev's part. What I can guess he was trying to do was eliminate the need for H or Middle Mouse buttoning the Text Box away from blocking sex content, so that you could watch and read at the same time.

ok, then I can skip that. There is no fun in that blocking text - its 10000 times worse than any textbox ...

 

[abaragambii]

1 GB vs. 52 MB. Unbelievable.

 

[Steel44]

Does it contain animated sex scenes?

 

[Richard Perkins]

I had fun, until i got to the action part where you had to take a step, and keep up with it. i dont like them games!!!!!

 

[tehcatsmiaw]

Great game. I really like these kind of "corruption" games. Bitch please, everybody knows you a low key hoe. Who you trying to fool ? Acting like you don't enjoy it. I guess she just needs some training until she fully drops the act xD

 

[RoadWulf]

I had fun, until i got to the action part where you had to take a step, and keep up with it. i dont like them games!!!!!

It's not timed or in a rhythm. Just got taptaptaptap until it's over.

 

[Otyi]

Thanks Guys! That was good.

 

[went]

Hi guys, how can I unblock this scene with marylin?

Spoiler: marylin bj

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[J0K3RXXX]

Hi guys, how can I unblock this scene with marylin?

Spoiler: marylin bj

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If I'm not wrong, when you don't go to the bowling alley with Chloe, you meet Marilyn after seeing her mother. Whatever you decide then, you will get that blowjob scene.

 

[Stanley Potter]

Well, for a part 1, this game has a lot of potential, very good plot. Only downside is the little english syntax error here and there. It would be a lot better without those, otherwise, it's brilliant.

 

[J0K3RXXX]

Well, for a part 1, this game has a lot of potential, very good plot. Only downside is the little english syntax error here and there. It would be a lot better without those, otherwise, it's brilliant.

I agree with you. It's a very great promising game, although I would add another error. The central place where he place dialogues during game's spicy animations.

 

[went]

If I'm not wrong, when you don't go to the bowling alley with Chloe, you meet Marilyn after seeing her mother. Whatever you decide then, you will get that blowjob scene.

no, when mc meet marylin out of chloe house he go to her house, but no bj, he just sit on the bed. :-(

 

[J0K3RXXX]

no, when mc meet marylin out of chloe house he go to her house, but no bj, he just sit on the bed. :-(

The blowjob scene occurred is during the second time MC visits Marilyn's house. You are referring to his first visit, when MC discovers Marilyn is a cam girl.

 

[botc76]

Huge step-up from the devs previous games. It was finally time to start a longer story that could develop over time.