VN Ren'Py A Mother's Love [Part 1-15 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

[heebyweeby]

This sure is one I'd like to see wrapped up with a bow.

 

[Ano00]

i hope he's doing well and comeback soon,but god please dont rebot the game....it is one of the best games and it will be more the worth the waiting and see the game continues even with outdated rends and stuff just for the storyline

 

[Zerorox]

Somewhat cringe but Good Game at the beginning, perfect main LI, good slow burn... but later characters build up fails, at some moment become boring like hell, and when you start skipping (all) dialogs - it's time for uninstall

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

So Mr orb is in dilemma whether to reboot and make everything fresh with new graphics and all that or to continue with this to the end.

I probably think, either way is fine just don't alter the story which is quite interesting and we don't even know what comes next so it's kinda exciting. We all are waiting for our majesty the Queen Nicole to enter our realm again ❤❤❤.

I hope Mr orb get fit again to continue his remaining work, I wish your family and your close relatives a good health . Takecare always and thanks for giving us the content we needed.

Hard reboot is unnecessary imo, but the game needs to overhaul its dialogues. It easily has one of the worst Engrish I've ever had the (dis)pleasure of reading. Hire a better proofreader or a new wordsmith or something, just anything to improve the dialogues because there's a hidden gem buried under the terrible Engrish.

 

[montsalvage]

no reboot pls, just continue the game

 

[Barretto24]

Hard reboot is unnecessary imo, but the game needs to overhaul its dialogues. It easily has one of the worst Engrish I've ever had the (dis)pleasure of reading. Hire a better proofreader or a new wordsmith or something, just anything to improve the dialogues because there's a hidden gem buried under the terrible Engrish.

He says, making spelling errors and grammar mistakes in his own post.

The game is perfectly fine how it is, doesn't need a reboot at all. Story needs completing however.

 

[Zerorox]

He says, making spelling errors and grammar mistakes in his own post.

The game is perfectly fine how it is, doesn't need a reboot at all. Story needs completing however.

As for Me, Story needs total rewriting after first half

 

[Snugglepuff]

He says, making spelling errors and grammar mistakes in his own post.

What spelling mistakes has he made in that post?

The game is perfectly fine how it is, doesn't need a reboot at all. Story needs completing however.

He said a reboot is unnecessary.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

He says, making spelling errors and grammar mistakes in his own post.

The game is perfectly fine how it is, doesn't need a reboot at all. Story needs completing however.

Doesn't make my point moot. The reality is the dialogues are painful to read through, so improving them will make the game much, much better. It's a Visual Novel after all, your writing needs to be on point.

It'll take a lot of time and effort to fix them all, but I think it'll be worth it.

 

[Barretto24]

What spelling mistakes has he made in that post?



He said a reboot is unnecessary.

Didn't realise you spell English like that....

 

[Snugglepuff]

Didn't realise you spell English like that....

He's wasn't using the word English, he was using Engrish. Look it up sometime and you'll understand his intent.

 

[Barretto24]

He's wasn't using the word English, he was using Engrish. Look it up sometime and you'll understand his intent.

Never heard that word in my life but fair enough. I stand corrected.

 

[Snugglepuff]

Never heard that word in my life but fair enough. I stand corrected.

It's really old, probably older than half the userbase here. I became aware of it with dodgy translations of 8-bit era games from Japan.
It's changed in scope to basically apply to any non-native English speaker writing English in a way that shows they don't speak/write English as a first language.

There's plenty of it on these forums too.

 

[cxx]

Never heard that word in my life but fair enough. I stand corrected.

here engrish is used if game's english isn't good even if reader can understand what text says.

 

[Keef012590]

Just downloaded the game and every time I try to start the game it keeps popping up a error message

While running game code:
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 282, in script
python:
ScriptError: could not find label 'start'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "C:\Users\DeviousChip5\Downloads\AMothersLovePLUS-Part11PLUS-pc\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 316, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "C:\Users\DeviousChip5\Downloads\AMothersLovePLUS-Part11PLUS-pc\renpy\main.py", line 578, in main
run(restart)
File "C:\Users\DeviousChip5\Downloads\AMothersLovePLUS-Part11PLUS-pc\renpy\main.py", line 143, in run
renpy.execution.run_context(True)
File "C:\Users\DeviousChip5\Downloads\AMothersLovePLUS-Part11PLUS-pc\renpy\execution.py", line 908, in run_context
context.run()
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 282, in script
python:
File "C:\Users\DeviousChip5\Downloads\AMothersLovePLUS-Part11PLUS-pc\renpy\script.py", line 898, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'start'.

 

[cxx]

Just downloaded the game and every time I try to start the game it keeps popping up a error message

okay let's start with usual:

1. from where did you dl it?
2. with what you dl'd it? (jdownloader2 recommended)
3. with what you extracted it?
4. size of unpacked packet?

 

[Belzeebub$]

Just downloaded the game and every time I try to start the game it keeps popping up a error message

While running game code:
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 282, in script
python:
ScriptError: could not find label 'start'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "C:\Users\DeviousChip5\Downloads\AMothersLovePLUS-Part11PLUS-pc\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 316, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "C:\Users\DeviousChip5\Downloads\AMothersLovePLUS-Part11PLUS-pc\renpy\main.py", line 578, in main
run(restart)
File "C:\Users\DeviousChip5\Downloads\AMothersLovePLUS-Part11PLUS-pc\renpy\main.py", line 143, in run
renpy.execution.run_context(True)
File "C:\Users\DeviousChip5\Downloads\AMothersLovePLUS-Part11PLUS-pc\renpy\execution.py", line 908, in run_context
context.run()
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 282, in script
python:
File "C:\Users\DeviousChip5\Downloads\AMothersLovePLUS-Part11PLUS-pc\renpy\script.py", line 898, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'start'.

Which renpy version are you using? I think this one uses older version like 7.4.11 (maybe...). But maybe the errors are somewhere else like cxx suggested. Best of luck....

okay let's start with usual:

1. from where did you dl it?
2. with what you dl'd it? (jdownloader2 recommended)
3. with what you extracted it?
4. size of unpacked packet?

I am not an expert but besides these, I think there may be a difference in renpy version! Just a suggestion though I may be wrong.

 

[cxx]

well unless he tries to run game on renpysdk or with newer renpy shouldn't have those errors.

 

[Barretto24]

It's really old, probably older than half the userbase here. I became aware of it with dodgy translations of 8-bit era games from Japan.
It's changed in scope to basically apply to any non-native English speaker writing English in a way that shows they don't speak/write English as a first language.

There's plenty of it on these forums too.

I usually avoid Jap games on here so that's why I didn't know the word lol

 

[Snugglepuff]

I usually avoid Jap games on here so that's why I didn't know the word lol

When I say "8-bit era", I'm talking decades ago. Late 80's & early 90's.