Raminita

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Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13. (Sorry this post was posted later than usual, something went wrong with scheduling the post.)







Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon :)
 

Optimus69420

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does F95zone has the plus version
The first post in the first page should have links to the Plus version Part 12 of the game.

Thank you for sharing this Lady Aspen! :love::love: I just like to ask, did you make this?

Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13. (Sorry this post was posted later than usual, something went wrong with scheduling the post.)







Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon :)
Thank you for sharing again Raminita!:love::love:

My thoughts about each WIP pictures:

Picture #1: I'm assuming Marilyn and MC (Us) are at his parents house. She's probably hanging out with MC's (Our) parents while we're on our way from the Heaven's household due to spending the night with Nicole. From Marilyn's facial expression, I'm assuming MC (Us) asked her a very important question. But I have no idea what MC (Us) asked her. Feel free to chime in on this one.

Picture #2: I'm assuming we're in John's office. I'm guessing John will question us, if MC (Us) chose the option to look through the papers on his desk when we snuck into his office in Part 12. Feel free to add in more details and thoughts about this photo.

Picture #3: As for this picture, looks like Beeman is out of hiding. I'm assuming this outcome only happens if you're still in the "Chloe is Still my GF" route in Part 12 because, correct me if I'm wrong, is that during the dance in Part 12 MC (Us) and Chloe get to do a prank on Beeman's classroom. And I'm guessing it has to involve cookies. Again, feel free to add in details and thoughts about this photo.
 

Rundmck

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The last few updates are riddled with typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences. Really disappointing and totally ruins the mood of the story.
 

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The last few updates are riddled with typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences. Really disappointing and totally ruins the mood of the story.
right thread? since before .12 update there was "tiny" break between updates.
 

Rundmck

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right thread? since before .12 update there was "tiny" break between updates.
I'm replaying it from the start so can't pinpoint the exact update number but this issue's becoming impossible to ignore post the beach trip.
 

Barretto24

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The last few updates are riddled with typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences. Really disappointing and totally ruins the mood of the story.
Doesn't bother me and doesn't detrack from the experience or the story for me.
 

ThorinKing

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Nothing wrong with my spelling pal, as I said. Spelling errors unless extremely glaring does not bother me.
*do not bother me

And poor grammar and spelling do detract from the experience for most folks - at least those of us that are intellectually blessed.
 

Night Hacker

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*do not bother me

And poor grammar and spelling do detract from the experience for most folks - at least those of us that are intellectually blessed.
Minor things, like what you just pointed out, do not bother me that much. I usually know what they meant. Larger errors do though. I haven't gotten to the newer content in this yet, been replaying it from the start.

I think the worst I ever seen was several screens in a foreign language totally, but that wasn't this game. My guess was whomever did the translation didn't check for errors or missed text.

But yeah, it depends on the severity of the errors. If I hate it enough, I'll demand my money back. ;)
 

Raminita

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Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.
(For the script WIP, I've decided to add it along with the tittle photo. Hopefully that fixes the blurriness)


Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon :)
 
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