VN Ren'Py A Mother's Love [Part 1-15 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

[ThorinKing]

Minor things, like what you just pointed out, do not bother me that much. I usually know what they meant. Larger errors do though. I haven't gotten to the newer content in this yet, been replaying it from the start.

I think the worst I ever seen was several screens in a foreign language totally, but that wasn't this game. My guess was whomever did the translation didn't check for errors or missed text.

But yeah, it depends on the severity of the errors. If I hate it enough, I'll demand my money back.

I only pointed out those items to the poster because of his claims to not be bothered by language. Figuring out what something is supposed to mean or be saying isn't difficult, but when a VN is riddled with mistakes and awful constructions, it really takes away from the enjoyment of it.

I get that many of the devs don't know or speak conversational English - and may use something like Go-dawful-ogle to translate. Even if it isn't excessively egregious, it does start to distract, particularly when it is constant and there is no apparent effort to improve upon it. I've offered no-cost review to some of the guys that have otherwise good VNs, but awful language editing, in hopes of helping them improve. But, they don't seem to want to be better, and that is truly annoying.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

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Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.
(For the script WIP, I've decided to add it along with the tittle photo. Hopefully that fixes the blurriness)

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

Judging by the 2nd picture, everything went well, especially by Nicole’s appearance, she was noticeably already completely succumbing to Mc

 

[cxx]

Judging by the 2nd picture, everything went well, especially by Nicole’s appearance, she was noticeably already completely succumbing to Mc

she has fo a quite a long time.

 

[Deleted member 1329272]

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Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.
(For the script WIP, I've decided to add it along with the tittle photo. Hopefully that fixes the blurriness)

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

Thank you 4 sharing.

 

[Night Hacker]

I only pointed out those items to the poster because of his claims to not be bothered by language. Figuring out what something is supposed to mean or be saying isn't difficult, but when a VN is riddled with mistakes and awful constructions, it really takes away from the enjoyment of it.

I get that many of the devs don't know or speak conversational English - and may use something like Go-dawful-ogle to translate. Even if it isn't excessively egregious, it does start to distract, particularly when it is constant and there is no apparent effort to improve upon it. I've offered no-cost review to some of the guys that have otherwise good VNs, but awful language editing, in hopes of helping them improve. But, they don't seem to want to be better, and that is truly annoying.

Agreed. There definitely needs to be some beta testing to check for errors. Many of these feel like they were rushed out the door without checking them at all. And for that I put some of the blame on people whining and complaining about how long it takes.

 

[ThorinKing]

And for that I put some of the blame on people whining and complaining about how long it takes.

Considering most of them are pirates, I'd just tell 'em to fuck off.

 

[Aiden619]

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Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.
(For the script WIP, I've decided to add it along with the tittle photo. Hopefully that fixes the blurriness)

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

Pic 1... I guess we would finally Take Nicole on the Kitchen Counter in continuation to the Nicole Welcome Dinner Deal when we made out with her hard....
Pic 2... As much as I want it to be the MC, Looking at those lips of the Man... I feel its John...

 

[Barretto24]

*do not bother me

And poor grammar and spelling do detract from the experience for most folks - at least those of us that are intellectually blessed.

Do not bother me is a statement. Doesn't bother me is a reaction. The correct usage would be Doesn't bother me but swings and roundabouts lol

 

[Optimus69420]

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Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.
(For the script WIP, I've decided to add it along with the tittle photo. Hopefully that fixes the blurriness)

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

Thank you for sharing again Raminita!

Theory time:
For Pictures 1 & 2: I'm assuming this take place the night after MC (Us) & Nicole's night together at the end of Part 12.

Picture 1: Looks like MC's (Our) breakfast is going to be Nicole. I hope this leads to a sex scene with her that can be accessible for all players even if you're on the love or corruption route with Nicole. And I can't wait to see this new green outfit on Nicole!

Picture 2: I'm guessing this is the continuation for players who are in the corruption path with Nicole. Because Nicole apeears to be naked. While in the love route she had her black lingerie nightgown still on.

 

[ThorinKing]

Do not bother me is a statement. Doesn't bother me is a reaction. The correct usage would be Doesn't bother me but swings and roundabouts lol

Look at the context - it's dependent upon the subject. The subject (errors) is plural, thus "do" is correct; if the subject were singular, then "does" would be appropriate.

If I were in full on editing mode and not simply making a point, what started as this:

Spelling errors unless extremely glaring does not bother me.​

Would become this:

Spelling errors, unless extremely glaring, do not bother me.​

​

You really don't want to challenge me on this - I'll run circles around you.

 

[BlenderGuy]

It's impossible for me to get past the mothers room. The speed of clicking is absurd, does anyone have any suggestions?

I can't believe the game ends for me after a minute of gameplay.

After the third mouse click I'm already toast.

 

[BlenderGuy]

It's impossible for me to get past the mothers room. The speed of clicking is absurd, does anyone have any suggestions?

I can't believe the game ends for me after a minute of gameplay.

After the third mouse click I'm already toast.

I'm loving the game, I loaded it from Chapter 2 but am gutted I can't get past the minigame start of mouse clicking.

 

[Angelray]

Can't you put your mouse where the button will appear, then rollback (using your mouse wheel) and just click fast multiple times? it's how I do it each time when I miss the first try.

 

[Optimus69420]

Hello everybody. I just wanted to share the 3rd WIP picture for "A Mother's Love Part 13" posted by dev Orb on his Patreon.

Thank you Raminita for sharing this with me and allowing me to share this with you guys.



My thoughts:
According to this piece of dialogue, I'm assuming this takes place in MC's room. Because Marilyn sometimes enters or exits via MC's (Our) window in his room. And Marilyn is being both cheeky and still suspicious of Sylvia.

This caught me by surprise is that Sylvia is here and she's visiting MC (Us) at our house. I'm assuming this is where Sylvia is going to ask how our secret mission went at Magic Grand. I bet when we're about to get to the juicy parts of the dialogue this is where Marilyn enters through the window ruining the moment.

What do you guys think? I would like to hear your thoughts.

 

[cxx]

It's impossible for me to get past the mothers room. The speed of clicking is absurd, does anyone have any suggestions?

I can't believe the game ends for me after a minute of gameplay.

After the third mouse click I'm already toast.

might need to use autoclicker.

 

[Raminita]

WIP - A Mother's Love Part 13 *Earth-Child #5

Hey everyone! Here are two more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

 

[Deleted member 1329272]

WIP - A Mother's Love Part 13 *Earth-Child #5

Hey everyone! Here are two more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

I don't know who looks more scarier but damn those faces looks scary

As always thanks 4 the share.

 

[J0K3RXXX]

Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13. (Sorry this post was posted later than usual, something went wrong with scheduling the post.)

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

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Hey everyone! Here are three more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.
(For the script WIP, I've decided to add it along with the tittle photo. Hopefully that fixes the blurriness)

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

Hello everybody. I just wanted to share the 3rd WIP picture for "A Mother's Love Part 13" posted by dev Orb on his Patreon.

Thank you Raminita for sharing this with me and allowing me to share this with you guys.

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My thoughts:
According to this piece of dialogue, I'm assuming this takes place in MC's room. Because Marilyn sometimes enters or exits via MC's (Our) window in his room. And Marilyn is being both cheeky and still suspicious of Sylvia.

This caught me by surprise is that Sylvia is here and she's visiting MC (Us) at our house. I'm assuming this is where Sylvia is going to ask how our secret mission went at Magic Grand. I bet when we're about to get to the juicy parts of the dialogue this is where Marilyn enters through the window ruining the moment.

What do you guys think? I would like to hear your thoughts.

WIP - A Mother's Love Part 13 *Earth-Child #5

Hey everyone! Here are two more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

Thank you very much for your shares, Raminita. And I say the same for Optimus69420.

As for the content shown in this last preview, it seems that MC will discover Beeman's hiding place and confront him to take revenge for what happened on Day 20 (Part 11) and recover the stolen urn.

However, the content of the last screenshot is what seems most worrying to me. I don't like the way John is doing at all and I don't like that the woman he's hugging is probably Nicole.

 

[Optimus69420]

WIP - A Mother's Love Part 13 *Earth-Child #5

Hey everyone! Here are two more WIP's from the developments of A Mother's LovePart 13.

Thank you all for your patience and as usual, see you soon

Thank you for sharing again Raminita!

Theory time:
For the 1st picture: I agree with J0K3RXXX theory about MC (Us) discovering Beeman's hideout and we're going to have round 2 of our fight with him in order to get Abigail's sisters urn back. From what I'm guessing, it can take place in a forrest or in a special cliff.

For the second picture: Nicole appears to be wearing the same dress she had on when MC's (Our) parents had their first dinner together at the Heaven's household. But I fear the look on John's face when Nicole gave that hug to her husband (if the woman hugging John is Nicole). This is where I ask myself, what did Nicole do to make John give that expression?

 

[Page11]

*do not bother me

And poor grammar and spelling do detract from the experience for most folks - at least those of us that are intellectually blessed.

What? It's "Doesn't bother me" however you look at it. Because it uses elipsis. The full sentence would be "[This fact] does not bother me" where "this fact" refers to all the things that he means, i.e. "typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences."

Just like he said, "Do not bother me" would make no sense, except the case where you'd use the multiple subject to highlight what you mean. So it would be "The typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences don't bother me." Otherwise you default to the singular that encompasses the whole. I have studied linguistics. Please tell me how this is wrong, oh self-appointed intellectual that runs circles around the simple mortals.

So the full sentence would actually be "The fact that typos, spelling errors, grammatical errors and nonsensical sentences are present does not bother me." It's nobody's fault that you can't make a simple correlation, but at least don't correct others when you have no idea what you're talking about.

You could use "Those don't bother me." This would also be correct. But they way he said it is also correct. So you attacked him for no fault of his, just because you wanted to feel superior on a porn website.

I'll probably not see your reply anyway, since I log in here once in a blue moon, but I felt like replying.

I do agree with your other point.