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Though I might be in the minority,
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Shyguy1369
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You're not in the minority. Nicole is the only one for the MC ... for me.
However, this is absolutely brilliant... wouldn't expect any less from you
I wonder if there is any planned content with John and MCs mother as a revenge storyline, would make for some interesting scenes
Shyguy1369
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If there is, I hope it's avoidable. Just personally speaking. The Green Goblin needs to go down with all the shit he's done already, that happens. Nothing short of severe murder would suffice.
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Boi, what i wouldnt give to see Abi in action with nurse clothing. Them legs
Im going to military in half a day for 6 months of service, tried my utter best to finish this damn amazing piece of work, finally did it before hours of departing. Thankfully vn finished at the very nice spot. I'll be missing Nicole a lot during my time of absence but at least devs are working hard on this amazing project and i'll surely see more of her after the end of my service, so im happy in the end. Take care everybody.
Im going to military in half a day for 6 months of service, tried my utter best to finish this damn amazing piece of work, finally did it before hours of departing. Thankfully vn finished at the very nice spot. I'll be missing Nicole a lot during my time of absence but at least devs are working hard on this amazing project and i'll surely see more of her after the end of my service, so im happy in the end. Take care everybody.
If I was voting, I would go with #2 and #4. I like showing more skin in #2, even if the strapless top would be easier to slip down for action shots. I think ripped jeans are overused and the other bottoms are tight but not yoga pants.
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Wow, and here i thought i had it worst by leaving my family and good high-speed internet/desktop behind, to work on an island for a year in a hospitality industry company. Joining a military is a whole new level for me if i would want to do it myself haha. I would immediately drop out since i have a soft heart.Boi, what i wouldnt give to see Abi in action with nurse clothing. Them legs
Im going to military in half a day for 6 months of service, tried my utter best to finish this damn amazing piece of work, finally did it before hours of departing. Thankfully vn finished at the very nice spot. I'll be missing Nicole a lot during my time of absence but at least devs are working hard on this amazing project and i'll surely see more of her after the end of my service, so im happy in the end. Take care everybody.
mannice431
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I really hope someone can polish up the script, if this had proper english attached to it, it'd be amazing.
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This is truly shaping up nicely. I like that Nicole seems to have essentially accepted that resisting us is pointless by this point, she doesn't want to. I think for a while she knew deep down she didn't want to "resist", but did so b/c she felt it was what she was supposed to do, and the script is written in a way that feels natural.
I mean despite the bizarre english in it at times (why is the word "mine" always pluralized to "mines" lol.)
Really looking forward to seeing how the situation with John turns out, and how the story ends.
I mean despite the bizarre english in it at times (why is the word "mine" always pluralized to "mines" lol.)
Really looking forward to seeing how the situation with John turns out, and how the story ends.
Shyguy1369
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The Dev's first language isn't English, and usually those kinds of grammatically mistakes get fixed in future updates. Like if you were to download and play it from the beginning. The earlier chapters get corrected. It's usually just the new update that has errors. And to be perfectly honest, even with the errors, I still think it's better than many other VNs out there AND has an amazing love story. In my opinion.
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After a few days of voting, the results are finally in! Chloe's outfit number four wins with 51%, Marilyn's outfit number 3 wins with 59%.
If you missed this time poll or didn't get what you voted for, I am sorry, but there will be more in the future to participate again.
Lastly, for all patrons who helped made this possible, Thank you!
As usual, see you soon.
mannice431
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Do earlier chapters really get grammatically fixed? (And are they?)
I'll be honest, i played this a long time ago and don't really remember, so if what you're saying is true, great!
Edit: Scratch that, i've skimmed through the first chapters quickly and the grammar still isn't fixed, oh well, i'll check this game out in 1-2 years, maybe it'll be fixed by then.
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I can't attest to how it was before, but in my experience so far the game is quite understandable and fairly easy to read despite any "hiccups" in the writing. Some of the passages are oddly written and requires the reader to muddle through them, but you'll always get the general idea. It's certainly miles better than many of the games found on here with native English speakers.
Btw mannice431, what is going on with your avatar? ^^'
mannice431
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It seems like a slow descend, the first chapters seem to be mostly okayish (i think that has to with the fact that according to the creator some of these were fixed) but every release seems to be getting worse (and the worst part is, the creator doesn't seem to have any interest in releasing a patch to fix this, you could probably get someone on here to do it for free so i dunno).
As for the avatar, well, babies aren't always handsome when they're born, right?
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