to start i can't speak about the long period of this AVN been onhold for more than two years because i'm relatively new to it (started since the dev came back) otherwise i would have something to say about it
in terms of romance in AVNs i think this's the 2nd best written scenario between an MC and LI only behind LOF Cece from all the AVNs that i viewed so far
now i want to go about couple of plot points:
without reading anything here i suspected first that John is MC's father but that theory quickly put to rest by well informed members here that dev has no intentions of that whatsoever
since NTR is my favorite genre in AVNs i started my first readthrough with it in mind but due to my surprise of how strong the romantic element and writings for it is in this i resorted to it only for viewing Chloe scenes or to test what's best for Nicole focused love path, but i appreciated all the Chloe's NTR action nonetheless
other thing i wished the dev put a little more time to creating additional renders for John exploits rather than only few for each of his scenes with Silvia and others since he's the main antagonist of the story
now then let's get serious:
since the introduction of Hal & Jenny i always questioned their existence since up until the final scene in the latest update they served no purpose whatsoever but thankfully dev finally remedied that, now the way i would've gone about it is revolve around John power trip over MC and a little lesson for him which is what the dev is hopefully finally will be heading the story in that direction
the way dev going about it tells me we're miles behind of this AVN completion and that's fine, because up until the ending of the camping trip the romance been perfect and without high stakes the romance will turn stale and will be derailed and toned down so that's why i thought it's about time to separate MC and Nicole unwillingly
And since John is depicted as this menacing villain type he didn't do shit yet to MC, he knows about Mc affair with his wife and the child she's with isn't his and you think he's ok with it!!!!!??????
for the people that complaining about what's to come hopefully the dev is with me on this and this AVN isn't for the faints of hearts, get the fuck outta here with your vanilla suggestions, no romance story is compelling without grave suffering first
this was my original scenario for Jenny and John: upon the first meeting when you introduce the parents at first family gathering suddenly Jenny becomes nervous when she sees John at the doorstep & at the dinner table i wish there was a scene where Jenny has to use the bathroom upstairs and John follows her without rousing suspicion and mc follow after to catch them arguing in the upstairs corridor and we later found out that they have history together when she worked for him in the past, dev now chose to activate that storyline and explore it from the beginning, hopefully John will turn Jenny into a submissive whore and we see it with enough renders
like i said anymore with Nicole for now and it'll turn stale and it'll feel like it become repetitive, it needs a breather, so it feels like this AVN just received a second life, i liked Abi and Silvia interactions and scripts, in any other AVN their stories will make great romance, but in this we'll never have the choice to romance them i think, so in the new city that MC will move to it'll be a great opportunity to meet new characters like these two and the Aunt and form new bonds while still communicating with Nicole and figure out solutions to be together
also John must teach MC a lesson, there's always consequences to your actions: first with Jenny, and something more hardcore later, nothing is good about vanilla story with no consequences: no romance is good without tragic first, and if dev don't start to show John true sadistic and sinister nature then why hyping him up slowly to be the antagonist and villain!???
if you can believe it due to the blue file that Hal has and the inactions of John so far i thought MC is a clone of John to harvest organs from him later type shit
hopefully this AVN keep delivering and continue its good story so far
