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Couto25

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dev is trying to get symathy. he himeslf said 1 update per month but his last update which was in march i guess had almost zero content and its been 2 yrs. comon guys its writing on the wall
When did he said 1 update per month? I have been following him since years..I didn't remember where he mentioned that he will provide 1 update per month..Can you please mention the post where he said that? I would also like to read about what he said before.
 
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After this dialogue, it seems that Anna is confused, she doesn't know what to do, she is confused. She wants to believe David and can go home for Sophia's sake, but she has doubts about whether she did the right thing, Kendra deepens them, she doubts again whether Kendra's good advice is sincere. Following Kendra's advice, she would like to dress sexier for work, but she doesn't want to hurt David. He just has to choose (that is, we, the players, choose) who he wants to make happy. So Anna wants to do something, but she is full of doubts and fears.
I can see some introduction of new characters like Ana's Mom and brothers lol maybe in future but I don't see Ana sexual desire level in those dialogue. Whether she wants it or not..that's where the cheating will happen. It's normal like yea Ana kept David back and going through normal routine listening to people around her. And it's not fear that is stopping her from wearing sexier dress..it's her figure, she said she hasn't excercise in past few days else she would have wear sexier dress..she want to hurt David, you can see where she think that: I could probably wore sexier dress and thought she could've put some fear into David that Ana's not to be messed with(last 2 lines).
 

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I can take criticism. You can call me slow as fuck and I’ll be okay with that. I agree I’m very meticulous… and put way more effort into the script and the buildup than is probably needed, but that’s the way my brain operates. I will, however, get defensive when people claim this is a milking operation, because it’s factually wrong. If you don’t want to believe me that’s on you for being stubborn and lazy. All you need to do is the math to realize after I pay taxes on 100% of the receipts and pay the artist, I’m not Scrooge McDuck here swimming in money. And people want to call patrons morons for feeding the beast, but the alternative is no money coming in… how is that going to make the process any better or faster? Still waiting for an answer on that.

As for the lack of sex/nudity stuff, I can take criticism for that. The story won’t always be like that, so it doesn’t bother me at all. I’ve said before, the way I’m crafting this is like a Hallmark movie that turns down a dark path. You have to establish the Hallmark element of it first in order to make the dark turn unique. Whether or not it ultimately falls flat I can’t say, but my intent is to make it an extremely enjoyable experience for those who have invested all the time. That’s not a milking strategy. That’s always been the plan. But guess what? We are at the point where shit starts to get real, so relax.
How soon or how long still to wait in real time?
 

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dev is trying to get symathy. he himeslf said 1 update per month but his last update which was in march i guess had almost zero content and its been 2 yrs. comon guys its writing on the wall
do you think it's easy to be Dev? is it easy to make games? If so, start making games yourself and stop waiting here for monthly updates.

No one forces you to stay. !!!

it's Dev's choice to make the game the way he wants
 
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Ive been a Patreon to many games and currently am for couple now too. That doesn't give me the right to trash others and devs because I pay money. Theres no respect shown. People can get their point across by being rational and saying things without being rude. When you say the same things over and over for months or even years and attack others on top of that. Thats trolling. You can defend him all you want. Doesn't help the situation one bit though, or stop him and others from acting the way they do. It only encourages them to act that way and continue to be even worse.
He doesn't like a few storylines and characters I like in games very much, but I am not going to have a cry about it.
 

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I can see some introduction of new characters like Ana's Mom and brothers lol maybe in future

Mama Anna was supposed to be introduced earlier, but the creator said it depended on the time he had for the game. Ultimately, Mom was rejected, but maybe she will be in the future. additional characters will increase the waiting time for the update.
 

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What was that ? Is that a teaser or spoiler? I can go to the game directory and find any image no different from this, one Mr_Palmer really needs to step up his game. As in his spoilers or teasers
 
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What was that ? Is that a teaser or spoiler? I can go to the game directory and find any image no different from this, one Mr_Palmer really needs to step up his game. As in his spoilers or teasers
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Its comments like this that Mr. Palmer ought to release spoof teasers and really do some Jedi mind tricks on us.

Problem with a lot of spoilers is they give away too much taking away surprise when a release comes out. Or the spoiler causes misunderstandings. Besides there is enough fan art mucking up the game as it is.

The best spoilers from the point of view of keeping surprises and not causing confusion and misunderstandings are just pictures of various characters without any kind of context referring to any plots. But then that would be as bland as oatmeal. However, if Mr. Palmer continues a discussion with the audience, here, and not have to slap down or comment on some of our nonsense, it'll be a better experience overall. All developers and story writers need positive feedback--not complimenting them on their good job or short comings but how they are seeing the game unfold as they play it.

I have a general idea HOW things ought to progress... and What SHOULD be covered... but that is me and I am sure anyone with a strategic thinking brain has their own ideas as well. Thing I'd freely admit is I have no working clue what Mr. Palmer and company has instore... going back to my taco sauce theory its either mild, medium, hot, or out of your mind napalm; pretty safe bet that I am right there but that isn't saying anything.
 

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Its comments like this that Mr. Palmer ought to release spoof teasers and really do some Jedi mind tricks on us.

Problem with a lot of spoilers is they give away too much taking away surprise when a release comes out. Or the spoiler causes misunderstandings. Besides there is enough fan art mucking up the game as it is.

The best spoilers from the point of view of keeping surprises and not causing confusion and misunderstandings are just pictures of various characters without any kind of context referring to any plots. But then that would be as bland as oatmeal. However, if Mr. Palmer continues a discussion with the audience, here, and not have to slap down or comment on some of our nonsense, it'll be a better experience overall. All developers and story writers need positive feedback--not complimenting them on their good job or short comings but how they are seeing the game unfold as they play it.

I have a general idea HOW things ought to progress... and What SHOULD be covered... but that is me and I am sure anyone with a strategic thinking brain has their own ideas as well. Thing I'd freely admit is I have no working clue what Mr. Palmer and company has instore... going back to my taco sauce theory its either mild, medium, hot, or out of your mind napalm; pretty safe bet that I am right there but that isn't saying anything.
I think the spoilers should be made to create confusion and to keep the audience predicting the outcome..I agree to what he said to step up on spoiler because it should tease the audience for knowing what's coming to them..Just an example last time he gave spoiler of ana drunk night with Chris...Tbh the spoiler was good but story wise for me it ended up badly lol as I thought there would have been more tease scene in the upcoming update but there was nothing in the game beside sexting and chris putting his hand over her lap which was not even that much hot of a tease scene. And dude Fan art guys do provide better tease than the game itself, Most of us can agree on that part. There are few people on this fan art and I do like their work. You can see that sometimes fan art people or a fan game is way better than the real one. So it's on developer to maintain the standard of the game, it's not on him or he cannot control if some fan can create better than his original game. He can only try to create better or can hire his fan as his artist if he wants.

He should add hotter scene and for exciting the audience he could give who ana /david gonna meet..that's not bad at all...This game is not much of a detective game to find a clue or something..it's a cheating wife game so it's not that bad to give a heads up on who is going to meet who...or if there's anything where we need to make a decision to make ana corrupt or remain faithful..... that kind of crossroads he can give as a spoiler...... so that while he develop the story on both crossroad, we can enjoy arguing whether ana should do that or not lol.
 
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I think the spoilers should be made to create confusion and to keep the audience predicting the outcome..I agree to what he said to step up on spoiler because it should tease the audience for knowing what's coming to them..Just an example last time he gave spoiler of ana drunk night with Chris...Tbh the spoiler was good but story wise for me it ended up badly lol as I thought there would have been more tease scene in the upcoming update but there was nothing in the game beside sexting and chris putting his hand over her lap which was not even that much hot of a tease scene. And dude Fan art guys do provide better tease than the game itself, Most of us can agree on that part. There are few people on this fan art and I do like their work. You can see that sometimes fan art people or a fan game is way better than the real one. So it's on developer to maintain the standard of the game, it's not on him or he cannot control if some fan can create better than his original game. He can only try to create better or can hire his fan as his artist if he want.

He should add hotter scene and for exciting the audience he could give who ana /david gonna meet..that's not bad at all...This game is not much of a detective game to find a clue or something..it's a cheating wife game so it's not that bad to give a heads up on who is going to meet who...or if there's anything where we need to make a decision to make ana corrupt or remain faithful..... that kind of crossroads he can give as a spoiler...... so that while he develop the story on both crossroad, we can enjoy arguing whether ana should do that or not lol.
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Actually to satisfy that naughty itch everyone has would be some flash backs of Anna before David....

It would serve two main purposes:

First, it would further develop who Anna is and what Mr. Palmer is trying to portray Anna as. It'll make more sense how Grant and Anna's relationship was and why Grant coming into the picture again in her life has meaning and importance. It would help explain how Marvin can do what he has been able to get away with... or why Kendra has such an impact on Anna.

Second, it would help show what Anna is capable of so when it does happen, the audience is already clued in as to how Anna works and thinks.

**We all know eventually most if not all the love interests will get a crack at Anna--so how does the story plausibly gets there. You got fat Hank--why would Anna subject herself to that and how might she truly surrender herself to him if at all. There is creepy Marvin, so what is the secret sauce that will allow him to get x, y, and z from Anna. Grant--somehow there has to be a back story that allows for reconciliation of their relationship and expand on it. Robinson, Jake and Chris are all understandable built in because of plausibility-- there doesn't need to be a back story for those three for Anna to cheat. Some back story is most definitely needed if you are going to have a Marcel route. All these combos will be that much better for the player to experience when the moments come up. What would be disappointing is all of a sudden Anna and Grant do the deed without understanding how the frak did that happen and why.
 

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I might look for writing help on my next project, but this project is something I’ve wanted to write and program on my own, as it’s my first. I’m doing this for my enjoyment as much as anything else. If circumstances change or I get burnt out, I could seek help, but right now I’m enjoying it.
Keep this genre open and keep it updated because as far as I can see...this cheating wife genre is needed on this forum and if I compare this game with other games, this game has the potential to surpass the best game of this genre..You made the story..Just stick to the story and try to keep building it up with introduction of new characters or multiple paths later on...But seriously this game need to step up on tease and hot scenes...story wise its good..everyone understand the basic theme and background story...just change the gear. And while you create the upcoming story, you can get time to think beyond the end too...like what else could happen after that....Because seriously all games of this genre sucks as of now...they do create a good background but that's it, whenever it comes to shifting gear to hot scene..all developers failed to deliver good scene that made the audience say it's the best game...either they keep prolonging the tease and milk their supporters or they make wife a complete whore..I hope that you will keep the balance properly. And keep the story going on with sex too...Think of it this way, sex should not mean to end the story...sex should be the part of the story, and hopefully the story should be interesting.
 
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Actually to satisfy that naughty itch everyone has would be some flash backs of Anna before David....

It would serve two main purposes:



Second, it would help show what Anna is capable of so when it does happen, the audience is already clued in as to how Anna works and thinks.

**We all know eventually most if not all the love interests will get a crack at Anna--so how does the story plausibly gets there.
First, it would further develop who Anna is and what Mr. Palmer is trying to portray Anna as. It'll make more sense how Grant and Anna's relationship was and why Grant coming into the picture again in her life has meaning and importance. It would help explain how Marvin can do what he has been able to get away with... or why Kendra has such an impact on Anna.

I think he spent 2 years on developing who ana is and how Mr. Palmer trying to portrat Anna as....I don't think he should waste more and more time on portraying Anna's nature else it will become boring. And about Grant, kendra, Chris and Marvin etc...be it anyone.... those are characters. Just take an example, you meet different people in your life right? You get hit by all kind of girls, few directly few indirectly..and it's on you on how much you wanna give in while they make a move on you right? If your character will be like I wanna know more about him/her then dont give in to the corruption..or if you dont wanna know more and enjoy being in the moment then you will enjoy..I don't think there is any need to deep dive on each and every characters of the story....there is already 2 MC in the story and that's enough ...we did spent 2 years knowing david and ana's thought process on how they will react. We don't need to know why chris/marvin/grant doing that or acting that way else it will become boring plus alot of time will be waste on rendering. If they appear in the story, I am sure Mr. Palmer will explain the objective of their appearance without deep diving into their nature.

You got fat Hank--why would Anna subject herself to that and how might she truly surrender herself to him if at all. There is creepy Marvin, so what is the secret sauce that will allow him to get x, y, and z from Anna. Grant--somehow there has to be a back story that allows for reconciliation of their relationship and expand on it. Robinson, Jake and Chris are all understandable built in because of plausibility-- there doesn't need to be a back story for those three for Anna to cheat. Some back story is most definitely needed if you are going to have a Marcel route. All these combos will be that much better for the player to experience when the moments come up. What would be disappointing is all of a sudden Anna and Grant do the deed without understanding how the frak did that happen and why.

Let the story progress..As of now your choices decide after Ana got promotion, how she is gonna get involved with Hank on part 1..If your choices is not based on submission of what Hank asked for then Ana will not surrender to him.
There is another condition depending on David financial condition...There was a phone call where Hank wanted Ana and he knows David financial condition and wanted Ana to beg him for money so that he could take advantage of her...We will see along with the story of what gonna happen before surrendering to Hank. Obviously, before approaching to any character we will know the objective of why those character make a move to ana for sex...it will not be like Ana go to them and she open her clothes directly lol...But those are story part, That thing does not require to deep dive on individual nature of different characters. And the developer has already explained the nature of Ana and David for 2 years and we selected by our choices on how they will react on certain situation. So, I think that is good enough. The only option till now that I find missing is the option to submit to her uncle and neighbour. We were not given any option to control Anna with her uncle/neighbour and she submitted to their groping because of the situation. Rest with everyone until now, I think there were options given to us.

But the thing is These stuffs has nothing to do with the spoilers ....one teasing pic of what will be next in the update will not tell us the whole story about it...but it will keep us guessing depending on if there will be some good punch line too. The main objoective of spoilers is to tease the audience of what's coming next so that they can't wait for the next update plus making sure that the scene will be much hotter than the tease that has been provided in the spoiler.

Like if in the next update if he show a spoiler as Hank groping ana's ass and telling her he knows about David's financial situation. That will make everyone think of how story will proceed and how we played as Ana(where she will submit to Hank/not) and David (if he told about financial situation to Ana or hid it) ...so that kind of spoiler is required...Simple plain spoiler of Ana sitting in the office/ Jake standing in the office is boring. It doesn't mean anything.

I just wanna say one thing..yea make all the story as you want but just give proper scene from now onwards and dont left it with just a tease because it's a slow corruption. If there is some scene that is supposed to happen, then let it be within the same update from the start to the end rather then leaving the scene in the middle for the next update. and offcourse story wise keep going forward.
 
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First, it would further develop who Anna is and what Mr. Palmer is trying to portray Anna as. It'll make more sense how Grant and Anna's relationship was and why Grant coming into the picture again in her life has meaning and importance. It would help explain how Marvin can do what he has been able to get away with... or why Kendra has such an impact on Anna.

I think he spent 2 years on developing who ana is and how Mr. Palmer trying to portrat Anna as....I don't think he should waste more and more time on portraying Anna's nature else it will become boring. And about Grant, kendra, Chris and Marvin etc...be it anyone.... those are characters. Just take an example, you meet different people in your life right? You get hit by all kind of girls, few directly few indirectly..and it's on you on how much you wanna give in while they make a move on you right? If your character will be like I wanna know more about him/her then dont give in to the corruption..or if you dont wanna know more and enjoy being in the moment then you will enjoy..I don't think there is any need to deep dive on each and every characters of the story....there is already 2 MC in the story and that's enough ...we did spent 2 years knowing david and ana's thought process on how they will react. We don't need to know why chris/marvin/grant doing that or acting that way else it will become boring plus alot of time will be waste on rendering. If they appear in the story, I am sure Mr. Palmer will explain the objective of their appearance without deep diving into their nature.

You got fat Hank--why would Anna subject herself to that and how might she truly surrender herself to him if at all. There is creepy Marvin, so what is the secret sauce that will allow him to get x, y, and z from Anna. Grant--somehow there has to be a back story that allows for reconciliation of their relationship and expand on it. Robinson, Jake and Chris are all understandable built in because of plausibility-- there doesn't need to be a back story for those three for Anna to cheat. Some back story is most definitely needed if you are going to have a Marcel route. All these combos will be that much better for the player to experience when the moments come up. What would be disappointing is all of a sudden Anna and Grant do the deed without understanding how the frak did that happen and why.

Let the story progress..As of now your choices decide after Ana got promotion, how she is gonna get involved with Hank on part 1..If your choices is not based on submission of what Hank asked for then Ana will not surrender to him.
There is another condition depending on David financial condition...There was a phone call where Hank wanted Ana and he knows David financial condition and wanted Ana to beg him for money so that he could take advantage of her...We will see along with the story of what gonna happen before surrendering to Hank. Obviously, before approaching to any character we will know the objective of why those character make a move to ana for sex...it will not be like Ana go to them and she open her clothes directly lol...But those are story part, That thing does not require to deep dive on individual nature of different characters. And the developer has already explained the nature of Ana and David for 2 years and we selected by our choices on how they will react on certain situation. So, I think that is good enough. The only option till now that I find missing is the option to submit to her uncle and neighbour. We were not given any option to control Anna with her uncle/neighbour and she submitted to their groping because of the situation. Rest with everyone until now, I think there were options given to us.

But the thing is These stuffs has nothing to do with the spoilers ....one teasing pic of what will be next in the update will not tell us the whole story about it...but it will keep us guessing depending on if there will be some good punch line too. The main objoective of spoilers is to tease the audience of what's coming next so that they can't wait for the next update plus making sure that the scene will be much hotter than the tease that has been provided in the spoiler.

Like if in the next update if he show a spoiler as Hank groping ana's ass and telling her he knows about David's financial situation. That will make everyone think of how story will proceed and how we played as Ana(where she will submit to Hank/not) and David (if he told about financial situation to Ana or hid it) ...so that kind of spoiler is required...Simple plain spoiler of Ana sitting in the office/ Jake standing in the office is boring. It doesn't mean anything.

I just wanna say one thing..yea make all the story as you want but just give proper scene from now onwards and dont left it with just a tease because it's a slow corruption. If there is some scene that is supposed to happen, then let it be within the same update from the start to the end rather then leaving the scene in the middle for the next update. and offcourse story wise keep going forward.
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I think he spent 2 years on developing who ana is and how Mr. Palmer trying to portrat Anna as....I don't think he should waste more and more time on portraying Anna's nature else it will become boring. And about Grant, kendra, Chris and Marvin etc...be it anyone.... those are characters. Just take an example, you meet different people in your life right? You get hit by all kind of girls, few directly few indirectly..and it's on you on how much you wanna give in while they make a move on you right? If your character will be like I wanna know more about him/her then dont give in to the corruption..or if you dont wanna know more and enjoy being in the moment then you will enjoy..I don't think there is any need to deep dive on each and every characters of the story....there is already 2 MC in the story and that's enough ...we did spent 2 years knowing david and ana's thought process on how they will react. We don't need to know why chris/marvin/grant doing that or acting that way else it will become boring plus alot of time will be waste on rendering. If they appear in the story, I am sure Mr. Palmer will explain the objective of their appearance without deep diving into their nature.
You're missing my point... while we wait for Anna's adventures to really start, my suggestion to give people a taste of the naughty that has been missing to this point to use flash backs. Two-fold win here. You get the bump and grind NOW (of ancient history) but also you get more information about Anna that makes upcoming adventures more intense and helps the story/plots with plausibility


Let the story progress..As of now your choices decide after Ana got promotion, how she is gonna get involved with Hank on part 1..If your choices is not based on submission of what Hank asked for then Ana will not surrender to him.
There is another condition depending on David financial condition...There was a phone call where Hank wanted Ana and he knows David financial condition and wanted Ana to beg him for money so that he could take advantage of her...We will see along with the story of what gonna happen before surrendering to Hank. Obviously, before approaching to any character we will know the objective of why those character make a move to ana for sex...it will not be like Ana go to them and she open her clothes directly lol...But those are story part, That thing does not require to deep dive on individual nature of different characters. And the developer has already explained the nature of Ana and David for 2 years and we selected by our choices on how they will react on certain situation. So, I think that is good enough. The only option till now that I find missing is the option to submit to her uncle and neighbour. We were not given any option to control Anna with her uncle/neighbour and she submitted to their groping because of the situation. Rest with everyone until now, I think there were options given to us.
Case of some flawed logic here. First of all, in game choices that puts events into motion. One choice sets up the other or puts the brakes to it--the Hank Route or not. Regardless of whatever choice one makes for Anna about Hank, David is still going to have financial difficulties--I can't find any part in the game where that reality is part of the plot if Anna rejects Hank on all levels to that point. Furthermore, when or if a player chooses the Hank route, the question still remains why would Anna allow herself to be subjected to Hank? It is subjective after that point what the future would bring with a Hank and Anna route... is it constant misery for Anna to endure Hank, or does Mr. Palmer have Anna corrupt herself and become a submissive actually enjoying Hank's advances. My idea of flashbacks doesn't seem that bad as a way to enhance the plot.

But the thing is These stuffs has nothing to do with the spoilers ....one teasing pic of what will be next in the update will not tell us the whole story about it...but it will keep us guessing depending on if there will be some good punch line too. The main objoective of spoilers is to tease the audience of what's coming next so that they can't wait for the next update plus making sure that the scene will be much hotter than the tease that has been provided in the spoiler. That is the hope that the teaser is just one lick at the ice-cream cone... but if one were to think about it and ask, 'what is the point of spoilers,' eventually you will come to one of the real answers and that is to keep interest in the game and keep you and I arguing over the finer points.

Like if in the next update if he show a spoiler as Hank groping ana's ass and telling her he knows about David's financial situation. That will make everyone think of how story will proceed and how we played as Ana(where she will submit to Hank/not) and David (if he told about financial situation to Ana or hid it) ...so that kind of spoiler is required...Simple plain spoiler of Ana sitting in the office/ Jake standing in the office is boring. It doesn't mean anything. God I hope not that that is Mr_Palmer's plot for Hank and Anna :( "FUCK ME OR YOUR HUSBAND'S BUSINESS GOES UP IN SMOKE" blackmail route. A 7th grader could write that as a plot in their story. Or a better plot point is Anna is a closet submissive that she has repressed, and Hank brings it out of her? Would be a total WTFrak moment if suddenly Anna is willingly enjoying her own daddy/daughter fling with Hank without any setup--plenty of other H-games don't seem to have those kind of plot problems mainly because not much though was put into them

I just wanna say one thing..yea make all the story as you want but just give proper scene from now onwards and dont left it with just a tease because it's a slow corruption. If there is some scene that is supposed to happen, then let it be within the same update from the start to the end rather then leaving the scene in the middle for the next update. and offcourse story wise keep going forward. I am one of the most impatient people one would ever meet. I fly everywhere and rent a car when I reach where I want to be or need to be, even though it might be just a 16-hour drive. It really seriously has to be a special occasion to sit at a restaurant and wait for the food. If something needs to be done, It had been better done yesterday... BUT, when it comes to a good novel, glaciers move faster than my impatience gives out. It's about the only time when the adventure is better than the journey is true for me.
 

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In adult games, good girl, gone bad storylines, their is usually a catalyst, like in Anna exciting affection she gets hit by a car and it causes her to turn into a nympho due to head injuries combined with visiting a hypnotist therapist and in the office wife, it is in the form of an amulet, that makes it's wearer horny.
Some good action is incoming, the catalyst is Kendra as part of her revenge streak, don't know what update. Everyone just needs to chill. Go and complain on AWAM that is the worst offender of all games in the universe, the AWAM developer is a really bad developer, that got lucky with Sophia, the amount of data v the amount of action is a crime against the universe.
 

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You're missing my point... while we wait for Anna's adventures to really start, my suggestion to give people a taste of the naughty that has been missing to this point to use flash backs. Two-fold win here. You get the bump and grind NOW (of ancient history) but also you get more information about Anna that makes upcoming adventures more intense and helps the story/plots with plausibility
The thing is he should have started Ana's naughtiness side on part 2 itself... that's what I meant when I said "tease"... the intimate tease without showing sex. And now, if he leave the updates with just the tease, and without any further sexual advances in part 3, it will take a long time to cover story with all characters involved. You can understand if there are 8 probable partners for Ana, and if he start showing an update with naughtiness and then sex, it will take 1 year to complete story with 1 partner and there are minimum 8 for ana as of now. Or even if he try to cover 2 partners storyline in one year ..it will take 4 years to reach the story to sex with every characters...that will become long and boring. The story after sex will still be remaining so let's say 6 years minimum to complete the story which I think as Mr. Palmer said he doesn't think to spend that much time on this project.


Case of some flawed logic here. First of all, in game choices that puts events into motion. One choice sets up the other or puts the brakes to it--the Hank Route or not. Regardless of whatever choice one makes for Anna about Hank, David is still going to have financial difficulties--I can't find any part in the game where that reality is part of the plot if Anna rejects Hank on all levels to that point. Furthermore, when or if a player chooses the Hank route, the question still remains why would Anna allow herself to be subjected to Hank? It is subjective after that point what the future would bring with a Hank and Anna route... is it constant misery for Anna to endure Hank, or does Mr. Palmer have Anna corrupt herself and become a submissive actually enjoying Hank's advances. My idea of flashbacks doesn't seem that bad as a way to enhance the plot.

The story starts with Ana getting promoted so how come she rejects the promotion? It has been covered previously that Hank did tried to make a move on Ana in a flashback scene, I think when she was pregnant, and after that it's Ana's choice to go to the office, accept the promotion and work..this is implied that she decided and she accepted it because she wanted to work even after Hank made a move on Ana previously. The two options were either to be submissive or to act like a complete professional in office without much to give in. That's all. There's no choice to stop Hank when he made a move on Ana too previously. So it's something already implied in the story. Bosses are like that in the office... normally employees do have to endure their bosses temper for money...yea as of now there's no I quit the job option for Ana yet..So, whether it's a misery or enjoyable for the workers, it's on employees and not the boss so I don't think anyone has to deep dive in hank character on that part beside what has been shown already...Like getting a massage and being groped by neighbour.. can't do anything about it.

That is the hope that the teaser is just one lick at the ice-cream cone... but if one were to think about it and ask, 'what is the point of spoilers,' eventually you will come to one of the real answers and that is to keep interest in the game and keep you and I arguing over the finer points.

Obviously if the teaser is something that people will argue about or discuss about it then it shows viewers interest in the story..how come Jake standing in the office is a teaser? It's just yea everyone will look forward to Jake story that's all, no argument, no discussion...it will be like yea we will see how it goes. So that's poor spoiler choice. On the other hand Spoiler like Ana getting drunk with Chris was better that actually teased people and those who hated Chris to discuss about it....yea that kinda spoiler was good. Although the update was disappointing for me with Chris as there was not much of a naughtiness from Ana side even after getting drunk beside sexting, but the spoiler was good.

God I hope not that that is Mr_Palmer's plot for Hank and Anna :( "FUCK ME OR YOUR HUSBAND'S BUSINESS GOES UP IN SMOKE" blackmail route. A 7th grader could write that as a plot in their story. Or a better plot point is Anna is a closet submissive that she has repressed, and Hank brings it out of her? Would be a total WTFrak moment if suddenly Anna is willingly enjoying her own daddy/daughter fling with Hank without any setup--plenty of other H-games don't seem to have those kind of plot problems mainly because not much though was put into them

Well I just gave an example,spoiler like that will be good.. it's not 7th grade ... it's how Hank was portrayed wanting to blackmail Ana..Hank planned to blackmail her and he doesn't care that his company will kick him out as he's close to retirement...He just wanted Ana to reach him out for his help Where he can take advantage of her. So it's kind of blackmailing only..now he can write it either as 7th grader or as a PhD in literature but that's what the story plot is with Hank until now.

I am one of the most impatient people one would ever meet. I fly everywhere and rent a car when I reach where I want to be or need to be, even though it might be just a 16-hour drive. It really seriously has to be a special occasion to sit at a restaurant and wait for the food. If something needs to be done, It had been better done yesterday... BUT, when it comes to a good novel, glaciers move faster than my impatience gives out. It's about the only time when the adventure is better than the journey is true for me.
See story progress is more important ...one has to understand if the story demand romantic route then yea details deep dive into each and every steps is required. But if suppose I am playing to corrupt ana and if I get Ana to bed with one character after looong years of wait and corrupting ana, and with other character if I have to start again from slow corruption process it will be boring for me...Just giving you an example...if Mr. Palmer somehow make details story of Ana with marvin slowly by corruption and then eventually marvin fucks her.....and in other storyline suppose with Hank, I have to start corrupting ana again from zero, my interest will be gone. As I will know there are 8 more characters and with everyone he is going to cover details storyline from zero corruption and seduction. So progress main thing story part, show sex scene whenever it's required with some intimacy like undressing fingering bj all at once..not like a whore like direct sex...but it's not required to cover all side characters nature.

Oops Left my comments on your quoted post.
 
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