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Couto25

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I think there will be one more update as per developer part B where there will be no scene the sunday part..maybe Feb...after that we will see how the story and Ana sex goes. Next update will be the last update as far as tease part is concerned. Not sure if he will extend tease part after that.
 
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Ilcoriglianese forte

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I think he's very naive. Even Darren himself knows what his fake friend wants but David doesn't listen to his father.:HideThePain:
Hahahah David dug his own grave having an enemy like that around. It would be cool if it were possible but I don't know. David doesn't have enough brains it seems.




Find me a cuckold MC who proves to be intelligent, one of the characteristics of cuckold MCs is their deficiency,
 
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Except you are wrong. Mine is an original story, as was Temptation, written by RNebular.

HERE'S WHAT ACTUALLY OCCURED.
As often happens on Literotica an author will get asked to write a story based on an idea that the "fan" wants to see written. In this case it was fairly well fleshed out with a basic plot and character names for the main protagonists.
I was contacted, as was RNebular. Neither of us knew the other was writing a similar story.
That is why the premise is similar, as are the names of the some of the main protagonists.
So - no modification there.
After my story was released I was pressured into writing a sequel. I eventually did submit one but I did delete it when another author asked to do his own version.
Mr_Palmer then took it over to make a VN game out of the idea instead.

And this is where we are now.

And as has been stated many times in the past, there is NO similarity to my story and the game going forward.
Loved your story by the way!!
 
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I'm pretty sure Mr. Palmer himself mentioned there is a path where Anna and David remain faithful to each other.

As for myself, I'll take the bittersweet ending with a side dish of revenge, thanks :giggle:
Who wants Anna to stay faithful?! :)
But anyone hoping that David can somehow really take revenge or draw level will be sorely disappointed.
 
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Couto25

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Who wants Anna to stay faithful?! :)
But anyone hoping that David can somehow really take revenge or draw level will be sorely disappointed.
I am not disappointed about David story too.

Developer didnt spend time on the story of David corrupted side...I played on David corrupted path...tried to hide everything from Ana ...full cheating David path...We can say that it's just his bad luck of David that he couldn't went all the way to sex with Alexia that turned out to be kendra's bitch. He tried his best to cheat though.

Ana's cheating would have made more sense if Developer would have showed david full corruption path same as ana.
 
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I think there will be one more update as per developer part B where there will be no scene the sunday part..maybe Feb...after that we will see how the story and Ana sex goes. Next update will be the last update as far as tease part is concerned. Not sure if he will extend tease part after that.
DEV already said he is pushing for Jan-rls for v07b, so maybe in march we we'll have monday (depends on the artist and how much content , animation). Monday could be spicy, just sayin'!

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DEV already said he is pushing for Jan-rls for v07b, so maybe in march we we'll have monday (depends on the artist and how much content , animation). Monday could be spicy, just sayin'!

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And she's having lunch with Hank!! Oh baby! :)
 
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DEV already said he is pushing for Jan-rls for v07b, so maybe in march we we'll have monday (depends on the artist and how much content , animation). Monday could be spicy, just sayin'!

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I can already imagine her fulfilling her wish at her office desk.
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and other positions if she wants Jake-snake is the guy.:cool: While they're at it... I have a theory that there will be cameras filming everything for future blackmail maybe.
 

Michael174

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I should NOT have looked in the Walkthrough :D Seems this game will have the thing I really dislike in NTR games... you have to treat wifey badly and be insecure little jerk in order for her to have some fun. I hope I am wrong and wifey can still have fun if I want MC to be kind and supportive and is happy that he has such a sexy fun wife :)
This is exactly what makes the best NTR. Exactly as you say. A good guy make Mc who isn’t wimpy or overly small.
 
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Sadowdark

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I can already imagine her fulfilling her wish at her office desk.
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and other positions if she wants Jake-snake is the guy.:cool: While they're at it... I have a theory that there will be cameras filming everything for future blackmail maybe.
:unsure:There will probably be cameras, but only in the rooms where Anna will be staying, not in all of them. :unsure::eek:o_OIt was hard for me to imagine a camera in Piguin's office. And Marvin's old fish watches Anne and Pigwin. And then the old fish gives the movie to Kendra and she blackmails them with this Pigwin and Anne movie
 
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Obviously I don't mind if Anna ends up cheating, but it will be tainted and much less satisfying if it's under the false premise that David cheated. I know the game creator wants people to feel emotions in their story, but god damn it's actually robbing my enjoyment of the game. the only two people she's talked to about this are people actively rooting for her relationship to fail.

I believe it cheapens and diminishes the scandalous nature of her (soon to be) affairs if she feels justified in doing it. If David is exonerated within the next two updates, I'll become a Patreon subscriber. Otherwise, fuck this. I actually fell out of love with APBLU because of how weak and pathetic they continued to make the MC, and didn't end up finishing it.

Not that anyone cares. Just my 2 cents
 
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