Mr_Palmer so far the game is absolutely amazing. I have been following around since the beginning and you absolutely nailed the NTR build up, character development and corruption progress until now.
There is but one little fear I have developed over the last few updates: U keep on adding more and more villains/NTR antagonists. There are imo too many by now. By now we have Chris, Hank, Jake, Marvin, Robinson, maybe even Braxton and maybe I even forgot some other side chars.
While I do like all the basic set ups for the different antagonists I just fear that the more you add the shallower each route with each antagonist will become. At least thats whats happened with 99% of the other NTR adult games that are out there. Either that, or production and development will take forever. I would rather like to see you focus on 3 maybe 4 antagonists and really have their stories fleshed out and see many details, scenes and corruption levels with those few, then 6 antagonists with less story, details and corruption levels. Maybe make some side characters, but really I would advice you to focus on less. Most of the times less is more. Games and devs that want too many things at the same time often fail. And last I want is to see you fail or the development of the game to take forever.
Personally I would prefer to see Chris, Hank (as they were the first antagonists to be introduced) and maybe Marvin or Robinson as the main antagonists and the others as mere side antagonists. But thats just my preference.
However you decide, please dont add any additional NTR antagonists. IMO this would just kill the immersion and great build up you have come up with so far and take away most of the anticipation that I have developed for the ongoing story as it can only fall short.
Other then that I can only say stay on the path that you are going, everything has been great so far and the game really stands the chance to become one of the very few western NTR ren'py masterpieces in existence. Good luck with everything, I will be watching
cheers!
There is but one little fear I have developed over the last few updates: U keep on adding more and more villains/NTR antagonists. There are imo too many by now. By now we have Chris, Hank, Jake, Marvin, Robinson, maybe even Braxton and maybe I even forgot some other side chars.
While I do like all the basic set ups for the different antagonists I just fear that the more you add the shallower each route with each antagonist will become. At least thats whats happened with 99% of the other NTR adult games that are out there. Either that, or production and development will take forever. I would rather like to see you focus on 3 maybe 4 antagonists and really have their stories fleshed out and see many details, scenes and corruption levels with those few, then 6 antagonists with less story, details and corruption levels. Maybe make some side characters, but really I would advice you to focus on less. Most of the times less is more. Games and devs that want too many things at the same time often fail. And last I want is to see you fail or the development of the game to take forever.
Personally I would prefer to see Chris, Hank (as they were the first antagonists to be introduced) and maybe Marvin or Robinson as the main antagonists and the others as mere side antagonists. But thats just my preference.
However you decide, please dont add any additional NTR antagonists. IMO this would just kill the immersion and great build up you have come up with so far and take away most of the anticipation that I have developed for the ongoing story as it can only fall short.
Other then that I can only say stay on the path that you are going, everything has been great so far and the game really stands the chance to become one of the very few western NTR ren'py masterpieces in existence. Good luck with everything, I will be watching
cheers!
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