VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3] [Mr Palmer]

[snof]

I guess seeing comments best bet is waiting end of 2024, and probably middle of 2025. To see some progress into hot parts.

 

[Ragnar]

Smh. Literally every other post in here is people complaining about slow burn and lack of content even though dev had already made clear about their plan since beginning of the game, Everyone knows what they are getting into. If only these people spent even half the time reading notes instead of complaining.

Maybe the natives are getting restless because Part 3 was suposed to be the sexy times part of the game.

Part Three will continue the story beyond the first week, and this is where the real action will happen.

But nobody told them what that real action was. Last update you get some dick pic and this update has some old wankers beating their meat, or so people say I haven't played it.
Enjoy it.

 

[Tinez82]

It's a good thing Anna is so fckn hot cause that's the only fruit that's on the tree. If not for her then nobody would still be here. I mean don't get me wrong, the dev is a talented writer/story teller but these are called "visual" novels. But my eyes are left parched from thirst

 

[atlas114]

It's a good thing Anna is so fckn hot cause that's the only fruit that's on the tree. If not for her then nobody would still be here

yep 100% the Anna model is gorgeous. blue balls aside it’ll be like christmas once we can finally see her naked (or at least lingerie show for Jake)

 

[Haha9999]

well i just hovered over images and didn't find it appealing enough to go through whole story. i just don't have enough energy to go through it with all my focus.

 

[Thickgravy49]

bro... you better put some effort in the anna/david path. and cut the crap with the ntr bulshit. otherwise just say so, so i can ignore this game and move on

 

[AlfredBundy4]

This is one of 3 VNs I even keep up with so please see this story to the end. It's very good, from story to pacing to visuals...it's very good. The pace doesn't feel like it's being set up for milking. The story makes sense in that events don't seem like total nonsense. It feels grounded even in the inherent insanity of porn logic all adult VNs live in. The visuals are good in the they may not be elite but they're plenty good for an adult VN.

Too many devs fuck that combo up but this is going well so please don't mess up lol.
This, Heart Problems and...that's about it are the only VNs I even look forward to as the rest I liked have been abandoned. A few others are decent quality but are blatant milk-jobs for a dev that stopped caring a long time ago about anything but money.

Please don't change, dev.

 

[atlas114]

I know it's pretty early since this is moving at snail's pace, but does it have any roadmap about endings planned?

I see it tries to be realistic, so can we possibly see the first ntr game where a (faithful) husband actually kicks the slut to the curb and takes custody of his daughter? I like to think the choices relating to how he reacted to accusations, especially the lines about his house and daughter, mean he will fight for those.

I don’t think any roadmap was shared but we could speculate:

1) Anna and David reconcile and marriage is saved (lol)
2) Anna stays in the marriage but got side action with any of the guys
3) Anna divorces David
4) Anna gets with any one or multiple iterations with the guys going after her and gets dumped
5) Anna divorces David and marries one of the other guys.
6) Anna turns into a cumslut fucking everything that moves to get back at David

i think #2 and #4 would be my preferred endings. This marriage lost trust and won’t recover especially once she started sending sexy selfies to Chris and let Marvin grope her.

 

[AlfredBundy4]

This is great, the depth of story is just right, characters are believable, renders mighty fine, flirting, corruption ... lead on! Jumping to the patreon page after finishing posting this. tvm

I never support a first work out of principle due to seeing so many devs abandon, quit and milk after making a few bucks on their first work.

If this dev keeps it up and finishes this story at the same quality they're on now? I'll absolutely be a supporter. No doubt. I just refuse to do it on a devs first work at this point.

But this dev deserves it if you do so I applaud you!

 

[AlfredBundy4]

I know it's pretty early since this is moving at snail's pace, but does it have any roadmap about endings planned?

I see it tries to be realistic, so can we possibly see the first ntr game where a (faithful) husband actually kicks the slut to the curb and takes custody of his daughter? I like to think the choices relating to how he reacted to accusations, especially the lines about his house and daughter, mean he will fight for those.

I can actually see a decent and realistic conclusion over the next couple years (real world time). Which for a good VN isn't bad at all. If you get an update every few months, that's not bad.

I think the key will be in keeping it as grounded as it has been. If so, everything should kinda fall apart and snowball (for her/their marriage) quickly, leading to many different ends.
The worst and dumbest thing that could happen is the classic move of adding more and more characters. That and infinite scenarios where guys have her at their mercy and they decide to only touch her tits or whatever. That kind of weak stalling has to be avoided, IMO.

If it is, you could easily have an end for those that want her to be faithful or only lightly scathed by other men very soon.
The other end of multiple men take advantsge of her (what many refer to as a "slut path") can be finished in a couple years if done right.

 

[Ghost'Xo]

The wife is dumb as fuck

 

[AlfredBundy4]

The wife is dumb as fuck

She seems like a classic reformed party girl and that makes sense in a story of corruption. The woman has to be a bit dim witted and/or naive for it to make any sense.

In this last update she even admits to being a bit of a problem as a teen. That doesn't have to mean she was a whore or an idiot but it points to a woman that inherently likes to have fun and feel good, logic and consequences be damned.

I like her so far. She seems on the more realistic side of adult VN main females.

 

[AlexLord]

Great update! I'm glad you're not in a hurry to turn Anna into a whore. More old perverts and all sorts of dirty depraved things

 

[AlfredBundy4]

Great update! I'm glad you're not in a hurry to turn Anna into a whore. More old perverts and all sorts of dirty depraved things

It's a good pacing and balance so far. She didn't become a whore getting gangbanged in the 2nd update but it also feels like shit could start to snowball for her real quick lol.

It dosen't feel like a "she first fucks or sucks another man 7 years from now" story and that's good.
In fact, those wanting a more faithful story seem like they could have their ending rather soon. The husband being back in the house even on a run where you want her to be corrupted feels like an opening for a quick reconciliation and maybe even turning the tables.

Those of us (most players) corrupting her, it feels like the tipping point is near as opposed to years down the line like some VNs *cough awam john cough* .

 

[PepeNino]

Some image preview from the last update?

 

[Tinez82]

Some image preview from the last update?

Just Google old man penis and there you go

 

[Frankbob]

Just Google old man penis and there you go

Ya this update had the most nude shots to date, to bad they were guys dicks tho

 

[Newguy1]

lol came to check here for posts on any scene that i might have missed in the update... ended up reading cries and griefs instead. It seems like some folks don't understand story plots and progression, keeping the skip button held and bolting through the story in search of sex scenes, just to not find any... isn't the game's fault.

Played the update, enjoyed the story and plot, loved that the dev continued that slow grind. I'm enjoying how the story actually matters here... how external forces is causing confusion and ripping the innocence from anna in every aspect of her life. I am though a bit concerned about the balance in the amount of people who are involved in the corruption...

I feel the game might need few neutral members, as of this update, there are only few prominent members in this story who are neutral (with hint that they too will fall prey). Too many negative characters might get a bit confusing. However loved the update, please keep this well paced narrative grind that slowly forms the characters as we move along with the story.

As for those who are disappointed and probably wish to leave cuz they aren't getting 'sex scenes', you can simple play Anna exciting affections and spare this anna for a proper storytelling. The dev simply has a story to tell, and we are his audience. Telling him what to put into his story is like literally writing the story yourself, at that point might as well make the game too.

That's the actual reason why most good games (on f95) either gets delayed indefinitely or gets abandoned. Listening to the public push the narrative, destroys creativity, originality and motivation to continue. Some devs have literally chosen to reduce their interaction on here due to the lack of constructive criticism. Let the dev do his thing and write his own story, if he needs help with decisions, he'll ask for it, and probably on his patreon where it actually matters.

The scene where Chris wants another photo but anna wants to sleep instead and cannot be bothered - you know its a good story, one that you are somewhat invested into, when both you and Chris are either desperate or disappointed with anna not sending a photo

 

[Jstforme]

No family court judge will take the child away from Anna. She can argue that she is just as much a victim of intrigue as David. What's more, she can even produce a medical report that she was subject to hormonal mood swings after her pregnancy, which influenced her decisions.
Anna is also a well-educated, high-earning woman, which the family court judge would also take into account. The fact that she fucked around is morally reprehensible, but is no reason to take the child away from Anna.
Anna would have to have hit rock bottom, take drugs and therefore no longer be able to care for the child, then David would have a chance of gaining sole custody.
In real life, there is therefore no chance that a family court would take the child away from her.

No, I was more thinking further down the road, after the divorce and she's on her way down the rabbit hole. The attention she's seeking/getting are the types that thrive at putting a well-educated, high-earning woman in a collar. Drugs and all that would start (if they haven't already) with her drinks, they'll want to lower her decision making...most of us all know the drill and how it can go from there.
But you're correct, family court would side with the mother.

 

[atrebor68]

Ok, now we can say, strong AWAM vibes.