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rdtree

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This is getting over the top now. What is this chick the ultimate super villain with connections everywhere, striking fear into everyone who crosses her. Come on. This is the most frustrating game I have ever played which of course, makes this a great game and keeps me playing. Chris is a pig and his demise will be joyful.
 
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For all you unhappy gentlemen complaining about this and that, look at the bright side. You're getting this game/story free of charge. I personally think the story is quite entertaining and the artistry exceptional. That said, my expectations are clearly a little more tempered than others. This is after all, an adult gaming site.
Don't offer me choices,than make them not matter.
 
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Mr_Palmer

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Basically the reason I'm so hard on the plot is because it claimed that the plot mattered but more and more it's feeling like it just doesn't. Maybe it's dumb of me to feel this way but my fundamental starting point is: If it's an ntr game, than just make it an ntr game. Don't blow smoke up my ass saying that the choices matter if it's actually just a choice between "town bike" and "fuck you you're doing it wrong."
Maybe you’re new to this story, but there’s been at least ten warnings that if you don’t like ntr then stay the hell away from this. This story is clearly not for you. You want Anna to be something she’s not, so you will forever be disappointed. Anna is Anna, that can’t be changed. You can influence her decision-making but you can’t change her. She’s a very naive woman with some emotional problems, and now that her marriage has hit a rough patch, the sharks are circling. That’s the story. You’ve figured it out - you just aren’t willing to accept it, which is totally fine, but I’ve been clear what this is and what to expect.

By the way, Anna wasn’t aware Mr. S was sniffing her arse. Perhaps I should’ve made that more clear. I’m definitely not perfect and am not a professional novelist… this is something I do with my free time!
 

Mr_Palmer

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The question is very easy:
the developer is diluting the broth to maximize the income from the followers.
That's it.
There’s 1000 porn games on this site and a near infinite amount of porn on the internet. If anyone is looking for that, they have plenty of options. The vast majority of supporters enjoy the story and want to see it continue. They aren’t dumb… if I had some scheme to rip them off I’m sure they’d pick up on it and stop contributing.
 
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Maybe you’re new to this story, but there’s been at least ten warnings that if you don’t like ntr then stay the hell away from this. This story is clearly not for you. You want Anna to be something she’s not, so you will forever be disappointed. Anna is Anna, that can’t be changed. You can influence her decision-making but you can’t change her. She’s a very naive woman with some emotional problems, and now that her marriage has hit a rough patch, the sharks are circling. That’s the story. You’ve figured it out - you just aren’t willing to accept it, which is totally fine, but I’ve been clear what this is and what to expect.

By the way, Anna wasn’t aware Mr. S was sniffing her arse. Perhaps I should’ve made that more clear. I’m definitely not perfect and am not a professional novelist… this is something I do with my free time!

Not to jump into this,but at least in Anna's cases,you'd be better off making this a kinetic novel till act 3.

Because she's gonna keep justifying all kinds of shit from all the guys no matter what the player choices are correct? Like I found Chris obnoxious as fuck,actively chose anti him options.......didn't fucking matter. Anna's gonna keep being some sort of submissive autist,who can apparently justify ANYTHING. Which is annoying.

That said it's your game,do you,just don't be upset when people vent.
 

Mr_Palmer

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Not to jump into this,but at least in Anna's cases,you'd be better off making this a kinetic novel till act 3.

Because she's gonna keep justifying all kinds of shit from all the guys no matter what the player choices are correct? Like I found Chris obnoxious as fuck,actively chose anti him options.......didn't fucking matter. Anna's gonna keep being some sort of submissive autist,who can apparently justify ANYTHING. Which is annoying.

That said it's your game,do you,just don't be upset when people vent.
By all means vent, but damn, I can vent too when someone has to post ten times trying to claim this story should be something it’s not.
And Chris is meant to make you angry and frustrated if you reject him… I plan/hope to give you a path that ultimately satisfies you.
 
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Euron13

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Not to jump into this,but at least in Anna's cases,you'd be better off making this a kinetic novel till act 3.

Because she's gonna keep justifying all kinds of shit from all the guys no matter what the player choices are correct? Like I found Chris obnoxious as fuck,actively chose anti him options.......didn't fucking matter. Anna's gonna keep being some sort of submissive autist,who can apparently justify ANYTHING. Which is annoying.
She really is one of the most frustrating characters I've seen in a long time. Other than the sunk cost fallacy and the notion that co-parenting can't be a thing, I really have no idea why the fuck David would care about reconciling with her at this point.
 

Mr_Palmer

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I get the frustration with old shriveled dicks, but don’t worry, it’s not a fetish that’s a focal point of the game. It’s meant to show how depraved these men are.

I’ll add, I held a vote a while back with the patrons for them to pick a character to feature. They selected Mr. Stenstromber from a list of characters. He’s not going to play a prominent role in the story, but Anna will face him as more of a side plot. The reader wont be forced to have sexual interactions with him.
 

Ragnar

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She really is one of the most frustrating characters I've seen in a long time. Other than the sunk cost fallacy and the notion that co-parenting can't be a thing, I really have no idea why the fuck David would care about reconciling with her at this point.
Maybe because she's hot as fuck, she's the mother of his child, he loves Anna,...
I get the frustration with old shriveled dicks, but don’t worry, it’s not a fetish that’s a focal point of the game. It’s meant to show how depraved these men are.

I’ll add, I held a vote a while back with the patrons for them to pick a character to feature. They selected Mr. Stenstromber from a list of characters. He’s not going to play a prominent role in the story, but Anna will face him as more of a side plot. The reader wont be forced to have sexual interactions with him.
I don't think the problem is the old geezers but how the scenes play. We're waiting for some Anna action with dudes, not waiting for dick pics :ROFLMAO:
Still you do your game how you want and don't pay too much attention to our ramblings. Many games go to shit thanks to players "input".
 

Sadowdark

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That's fair. How many endings do you have planned?

Also Chris has X-Pac heat,at least with me.
:)Conclusions drawn from the game How many endings can there be and what kind ?

:unsure:If I remember correctly, there are supposed to be three endings,:unsure: I don't know if they will end like that.
My percentages work like this:
100% - I'm sure this will happen
50% - high probability of some changes
99% - I'm sure but there may be some slight change 30%- unlikely

1. 100% Anna and Dawid overcome the crisis by not cheating on each other and having more children. . The guilty go to prison for many years, or something worse happens to them.
2.50%=50% David Returns to Kendra. Or he returns to Anna, forgives her for all her betrayals for Sophia's sake. They face an uncertain future, they both go to therapy
3. 99%Anna is the whore of one of the sexual predators. David divorces Anna, Anna gets custody of her daughter, or David can visit his daughter. 30% David takes revenge on everyone who caused this. After revenge, he arranges life with someone else .

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3.80 star(s) 117 Votes