VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3] [Mr Palmer]

[Ragnar]

Renders are fine, not top of the line but not trashy ones either. Anna model is pretty good, she's the hook of the game. The writing is good enough and everything is ready for Anna to jump on some cocks.
The only thing we haven't seen is if the artist can do good sex scenes. This is really important in an erotic VN and so far we have no clue of his skills in that regard.

 

[Sadowdark]

Power Vacuum - this is an ordinary visual, sometimes even not very good because of its disproportionate characters!

I'm telling you as a creative person that visualization is very important. I'm not saying that doesn't need a plot, good dialogue and well-developed characters!

Remember Stoper until he gave up on his project, he was at the top! Visual-characters-plot.

Here is a game in which the visuals, like a locomotive drag, beautiful girls through the beautiful expanses of nature.

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Here's another beautiful project.

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I don't mind simple visualization if it's in a co-op with a plot and "actions"!

I like ugly original graphics. As long as the characters looked different, not the same, for their age. That without the signatures I wouldn't know who is the mother and who is the daughter because they look the same . All you need to do is age the figure of the mother in relation to the daughter.

 

[stiltoboglovian412]

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Gotta send Mr. Palmer's artist that dick model, cuz they did Marcel dirty in the current version of the game. Hope they fix that, or at least don't use the same plastic looking one for any future scenes.

 

[ItsNotUs]

Renders are fine, not top of the line but not trashy ones either. Anna model is pretty good, she's the hook of the game. The writing is good enough and everything is ready for Anna to jump on some cocks.
The only thing we haven't seen is if the artist can do good sex scenes. This is really important in an erotic VN and so far we have no clue of his skills in that regard.

I would agree with your words but:
- I'm not saying that the visual here is bad, it's good = ordinary(normal).
- Anna’s model is beautiful, but personally i liked better the artist’s works the ones in the restaurant that many people complained about because they were plastic, but they were of high quality!
- The plot is good, i don’t argue with that either! But don’t you think the preparation for "dessert" took too long?
- We saw Anna's sex with David - boring, in clothes.
- A blow job scene for a bbc trainer, where his dick doesn’t even have textures!
- Anna manstrubates in clothes, we don't see her "secret cave"!
- It’s hard to judge from Chris dick and masturbating grandpants what sex scenes with Anna’s participation might be like!

And you’re wrong that she’s ready to jump on a dicks right here - the dev said that the story is only halfway there!

 

[ItsNotUs]

Gotta send Mr. Palmer's artist that dick model, cuz they did Marcel dirty in the current version of the game. Hope they fix that, or at least don't use the same plastic looking one for any future scenes.

I missed time with your post. xD

 

[Sadowdark]

I would agree with your words but:
- I'm not saying that the visual here is bad, it's good = ordinary(normal)
- Anna’s model is beautiful, but personally i liked better the artist’s works the ones in the restaurant that many people complained about because they were plastic, but they were of high quality!
- The plot is good, i don’t argue with that either! But don’t you think the preparation for "dessert" took too long?
- We saw Anna's sex with David - boring, in clothes.
- A blow job scene for a bbc trainer, where his dick doesn’t even have textures!
- Anna manstrubates in clothes, we don't see her "secret cave"!
- It’s hard to judge from Chris dick and masturbating grandpants what sex scenes with Anna’s participation might be like!

And you’re wrong that she’s ready to jump on a dicks right here - the dev said that the story is only halfway there!

I've always liked old artist renderings rather than new ones. The old renders were very atmospheric and natural. The new ones seemed very plastic, artificial, like a Barbie doll, unnatural, very shiny and bright. But I'm used to it now

 

[Satiro]

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Is there more fan art like this?

 

[ItsNotUs]

I've always liked old artist renderings rather than new ones. The old renders were very atmospheric and natural. The new ones seemed very plastic, artificial, like a Barbie doll, unnatural, very shiny and bright. But I'm used to it now

I didn't mean the old artist!
I meant this:

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The original model has such a skin, there’s nothing you can do about it!

 

[ItsNotUs]

Is there more fan art like this?

Yep, but you'll have to look for them on "previous" pages.

 

[Sadowdark]

A small correction to people who accuse me of only wanting a regular route in this game and not wanting there to be a route where Anna cheated. I never said that!!! For me, the more routes in the game, the better, because I can play in many different ways and I won't get bored quickly. The wizard creates all the routes at the same time anyway, so don't worry, everyone will receive the route that interests them. And now I'm playing the vanilla route because I'm more interested in it than other routes at the moment. And every failure of sexual predators to destroy a marriage. I'm glad he ruined their plans, he's like honey to my heart and I laugh when I see how angry they are.

 

[MIkedante]

Yep, but you'll have to look for them on "previous" pages.

Great work, but I think that this dude have as black man too "white" dick. Please don't forget of rules of Nature (which many Devs do), that genital color is darker about 2 tones, than skin itself (except of few redheads).

 

[Ragnar]

- The plot is good, i don’t argue with that either! But don’t you think the preparation for "dessert" took too long?

Indeed, I think this is already in the blueballs territory.

And you’re wrong that she’s ready to jump on a dicks right here - the dev said that the story is only halfway there!

I think he means the game is halfway done, not that we have to wait another year to see some action.

 

[Mr_Palmer]

"halfway"?
Two years have passed, but we are still halfway there!
Due to the increase in time for the development of new updates, we will still have to go next halfway for at least three years? Lol
Good luck...

Maybe I wasn’t clear enough - I said parts 1 and 2 can be looked at as half of the story since they cover the same period of time. We’ve only spanned a week so far. Not sure why you’d be shocked to know that there’s still at least a weeks worth of content to finish the story. The good news is it won’t be covered from each character’s perspective in two parts; rather, the povs are blended in Part 3.

 

[Mr_Palmer]

I think he means the game is halfway done, not that we have to wait another year to see some action.

Correct

 

[ItsNotUs]

Maybe I wasn’t clear enough - I said parts 1 and 2 can be looked at as half of the story since they cover the same period of time. We’ve only spanned a week so far. Not sure why you’d be shocked to know that there’s still at least a weeks worth of content to finish the story. The good news is it won’t be covered from each character’s perspective in two parts; rather, the povs are blended in Part 3.

So, i understood incorrectly, ok, thanks for the clarification!

But then, if this is the middle of the story, then, as many expected, sex is the finish line, so to speak, after which, one update or two and the end of the story(two updates on considering the consequences and how to get out of them or whether to go further along the path of betrayal)? Those. in that case, we shouldn't expect multiple sex scenes with the same character?

 

[Lennyrabbitz]

So, i understood incorrectly, ok, thanks for the clarification!

But then, if this is the middle of the story, then, as many expected, sex is the finish line, so to speak, after which, one update or two and the end of the story(two updates on considering the consequences and how to get out of them or whether to go further along the path of betrayal)? Those. in that case, we shouldn't expect multiple sex scenes with the same character?

Sex is not the finish. It is a gateway for Anna's desires to be realised. There would be multiple sex with the same character. However I'm sure that there will be a reveal of Kendra's plan and repercussions of what has transpired.

This is what I infer from what has been told so far.

 

[ItsNotUs]

Sex is not the finish. It is a gateway for Anna's desires to be realised. There would be multiple sex with the same character. However I'm sure that there will be a reveal of Kendra's plan and repercussions of what has transpired.

This is what I infer from what has been told so far.

How can you fit multiple sex with one character into such a short period of time? If we haven't even gotten to the first sex scene yet! There is only half of the story left until the end.
According to this logic, Anna should start fucking left and right by Wednesday or Thursday, several times in day, with different characters and so on until the end of the week!

 

[Seewolf]

Maybe I wasn’t clear enough - I said parts 1 and 2 can be looked at as half of the story since they cover the same period of time. We’ve only spanned a week so far. Not sure why you’d be shocked to know that there’s still at least a weeks worth of content to finish the story. The good news is it won’t be covered from each character’s perspective in two parts; rather, the povs are blended in Part 3.

If the story is already half finished and only one week left to tell (I thought the plot duration of part 3 would be more than just one week), then the upcoming week needed to be crammed with sex scenes, IF you plan to have Anna having sex with the same characters multiple times. Otherwise it seems like there will be only one sex scene for each of her suitors, which is kind of lame.

 

[Ragnar]

Yeah, the only one week left is not a good idea imo. How about an entire month with Hank in the Seychelle Islands? Or maybe half year trapped in Marvin's closet?

 

[exazubi]

If the story is already half finished and only one week left to tell (I thought the plot duration of part 3 would be more than just one week), then the upcoming week needed to be crammed with sex scenes, IF you plan to have Anna having sex with the same characters multiple times. Otherwise it seems like there will be only one sex scene for each of her suitors, which is kind of lame.

It won't be like that. The central core of the game is not sex, it is Kendra's revenge. And this story, across all LIs, must first reach its climax and then be told to the end. Part 3 is guaranteed not to be a single gang bang. Also the game won't end so soon.