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AlfredBundy4

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There is one fun fact though.....Between JOHN and APM.....Marvin character got to the sex scene in JOHN on it's 14th update...Here also Marvin character is getting a chance to get physical with Ana on its 14th update. And that too after drinking a lil bit lol....I guess Ana is much more complicated like Sophia of AWAM and not like Jessica of JOHN in terms of not giving in to antagonist.
The day Anna becomes anything like Sophia I'm out lol. Done. It means this dev has become a dogshit writer and planner, making Anna behave like an alien.


The only issue with JOHN is the dev's work ethic. The story itself is paced somewhat decently. Too bad it gets about a single update a year at this point. Due to that Jessica finally fucking felt very anticlimactic. It felt like a lazy dev that would rather not work threw the paying fans a bone more than a natural movement of the story.
 
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DarthSpitz717

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The last event of Marvin in corrupt route was stupid. It was more of a faithful route interaction with Marvin. Either kendra will ask Ana to let that thing go and ask her to forgive marvin's mistake while drinking with her alone and serving her to marvin later on. I think that wil be the plot ...whether to forgive marvin or not..Kendra will chat up with her to boast marvin obviously. The option will be given either to forgive him for his mistake or not. There wont be any sex scene ...yea it will be tease and maximum upto pussy touching but that's it. So a little tease with Tim/Dale, then Hank and straight to Drink Marvin ....that will be the next update... In faithful route, kendra and Marvin will have interaction where Kendra will scold him for entering into Ana's room just in case if Ana doesnt forgive him and to ruin her plan. So kendra will make him do something anyways or Marvin will take advantage of drunk kendra lol idk...we will see.

Idk how long he will take but i guess he will take 3 months anyways for this short update. Else he would have taken 4.5-5 months for normal one.
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It all seems there are too many clunky aspects to the Anna/Marvin route.

Am thinking the whole "walking in on Anna" scene may have set back that path. And the possible plot solutions you proposed just hasn't been established with Kendra as being in the dynamics.

Even with Kendra and Marvin allying at the swimming pool, Kendra hasn't done anything. And so far, all Kendra has been to Anna is one of 's devils {Faust} sitting on Anna's shoulder giving her bad advice and giving Anna bad suggestions. Now if Kendra and Anna were at a dance club where there is an exciting atmosphere, plenty of hard mixed drinks, I can see Kendra egging on Anna to dance with some attractive stranger... then playfully daring Anna do dance again with him but tease him at the same time... etc... etc.

It's hard to imagine after all of Kendra's attempts to get Anna to taste Jake, it seems to be a harder sell for Kendra to make that Anna ought to do x, y, or z (whatever those would be). Anna still sees Marvin as a perverted old man with no sex appeal like Chris/Robinson/Jake. The only hope I see Marvin having is dumb luck that Anna gets sexually flustered and aroused... it just seems that when Anna gets attention it goes to her head that a man wants her... and some inner need arouses her sexually being wanted and desired. I'm almost describing Anna latent Hypersexual Disorder
 
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Adhdclassic

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The Marvin breast feeding room still bugs me. First why didn't you lock the door. Second On the so-called faithful path why didn't she cover herself when he came in or kicked him out instead of letting him stay. the dialogue is only changed a little bit from the other paths but nothing else is different. Don't know if it is more complicated to change certain things when creating multiple paths but I find that also an issue on other parts.
 

Couto25

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The Marvin breast feeding room still bugs me. First why didn't you lock the door. Second On the so-called faithful path why didn't she cover herself when he came in or kicked him out instead of letting him stay. the dialogue is only changed a little bit from the other paths but nothing else is different. Don't know if it is more complicated to change certain things when creating multiple paths but I find that also an issue on other parts.
For corrupt path it confuse me ....like on one hand she tease Marvin by unbuttoning her top, then Ana tease Marvin and let him touch her thighs in the bar, then she allow Marvin to grope her ass and boobs but when Marvin saw her topless in the last update, she gets pissed off..so last Marvin/Ana interaction doesn't get along with corrupt path at all.
 

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It all seems there are too many clunky aspects to the Anna/Marvin route.

Am thinking the whole "walking in on Anna" scene may have set back that path. And the possible plot solutions you proposed just hasn't been established with Kendra as being in the dynamics.

Even with Kendra and Marvin allying at the swimming pool, Kendra hasn't done anything. And so far, all Kendra has been to Anna is one of 's devils {Faust} sitting on Anna's shoulder giving her bad advice and giving Anna bad suggestions. Now if Kendra and Anna were at a dance club where there is an exciting atmosphere, plenty of hard mixed drinks, I can see Kendra egging on Anna to dance with some attractive stranger... then playfully daring Anna do dance again with him but tease him at the same time... etc... etc.

It's hard to imagine after all of Kendra's attempts to get Anna to taste Jake, it seems to be a harder sell for Kendra to make that Anna ought to do x, y, or z (whatever those would be). Anna still sees Marvin as a perverted old man with no sex appeal like Chris/Robinson/Jake. The only hope I see Marvin having is dumb luck that Anna gets sexually flustered and aroused... it just seems that when Anna gets attention it goes to her head that a man wants her... and some inner need arouses her sexually being wanted and desired. I'm almost describing Anna latent Hypersexual Disorder
Don't forget Kendra has a secret weapon against Anna, she will talk to her about sex, which will be hard for Anna because she gets aroused quickly, so she has to control it + wine
 

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The Marvin breast feeding room still bugs me. First why didn't you lock the door. Second On the so-called faithful path why didn't she cover herself when he came in or kicked him out instead of letting him stay. the dialogue is only changed a little bit from the other paths but nothing else is different. Don't know if it is more complicated to change certain things when creating multiple paths but I find that also an issue on other parts.
Anna behaved like a stupid bimbo:eek::ROFLMAO:. I had the impression that she was intentionally putting on that bra as slowly as she could. So that the old fish would always see something there. The creator of this scene should rework it because it's hopeless. And wasn't there a dialogue about the old fish damaging the lock on the door?
 

Couto25

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i used to really look forward to updates on this game. but lately, i really don't care that much.
Until I get some more hints about future storyline..I can wait for as long as he wants...First reason that MP clearly mentioned she will be tested with tease as she's not ready for sex yet...And second reason is Wednesday and Thursday storyline doesn't add any plot about any twist or climax between David or Ana... it'll be more like trolling updates to increase Ana's corruption. Neither we get any hints on other characters storyline..like earlier in one update all characters storyline was covered , even if they don't appear on screen but they talk to Ana via message like Marcel , grant etc that's how we know that grant will be coming to dinner on Thursday...marcel still not confirmed whether Ana agreed for personal trainer or not...and the characters who appear in the update beside main scene gets same old tease ass groping , spanking kind of thing. No info about Alexia, no David business storyline. Maybe because MP try to cover both faithful and corrupt path in same update so he might not be able to cover all characters storyline. For the time being it's just trolling kind of update. Will see from Friday story onwards.
 

ItsNotUs

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i spend night learn daz program
so i think use jake and anna geting ride
and kendra join them
and marvin cant let them alone
so kendra ask him leave them alone and he get his chance

i make this without render cause its too much for my old laptop to make it so i just show it as it is

jake : are enjoy ride anna
anna : yh its great


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kendra ( wisper marvin ) hiii you pervert dog not say you can touch my boobs
marvin ( wisper ) you say leave them alone so i have to touch something
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jake ( thinking. ) oh anna never think you be that position like that front me look that ass

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(jake look marvin wink eyes thinking ) look at me you old dog am getting anna front you soon she be mine
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Jake
 

Arunrobin

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There is lot of good games about sex but it not include topic like rape, blackmail, kidnap and even pschopath who kill members which make game look more virtual than real but bad Bobby saga has this things and now his creator leave this game without further story developed
 
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can some zoom towards both glasses and see if you can make something out of it, are they alone? i dont think so
Yeah, some lights. Or maybe those are the aliens the Dev is going to introduce that are gonna abduct the FMC, while the other girl has been an alien this entire time. Nice catch, you found the hidden aliens.
 

AlfredBundy4

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For corrupt path it confuse me ....like on one hand she tease Marvin by unbuttoning her top, then Ana tease Marvin and let him touch her thighs in the bar, then she allow Marvin to grope her ass and boobs but when Marvin saw her topless in the last update, she gets pissed off..so last Marvin/Ana interaction doesn't get along with corrupt path at all.
Agree. For the praise I've given the story and it's elements of realism (that can be had in a porn story) there is plenty of inconsistency in behavior that feels like filler for horny readers during scenes lacking any need for sexuality than an organic event.

Which is part of what I meant a few posts back. Some of the behavior we'd consider faithful or simply not-slutty needs to just be baked-in. Letting him more or less just watch her breastfeed is something few women would allow even if they were whores (and Anna is definitely not at this stage, at most she has a trist with her husband's friend that's in full bloom). It felt a bit out of character to have that.

Now, Marvin has felt her up so I get why the writer would think that was fine but it's just an odd thing to have in there even for the 1% that plays the faithful path.

I'm not complaining but if I'm going to point out the parts I think are good and realistic I need to point out the things that don't quite match those levels.
 
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