VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

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Adhdclassic said:
The Marvin breast feeding room still bugs me. First why didn't you lock the door. Second On the so-called faithful path why didn't she cover herself when he came in or kicked him out instead of letting him stay. the dialogue is only changed a little bit from the other paths but nothing else is different. Don't know if it is more complicated to change certain things when creating multiple paths but I find that also an issue on other parts.
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Anna behaved like a stupid bimbo:eek::ROFLMAO:. I had the impression that she was intentionally putting on that bra as slowly as she could. So that the old fish would always see something there. The creator of this scene should rework it because it's hopeless. And wasn't there a dialogue about the old fish damaging the lock on the door?
 
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Couto25

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robrize2169 said:
i used to really look forward to updates on this game. but lately, i really don't care that much.
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Until I get some more hints about future storyline..I can wait for as long as he wants...First reason that MP clearly mentioned she will be tested with tease as she's not ready for sex yet...And second reason is Wednesday and Thursday storyline doesn't add any plot about any twist or climax between David or Ana... it'll be more like trolling updates to increase Ana's corruption. Neither we get any hints on other characters storyline..like earlier in one update all characters storyline was covered , even if they don't appear on screen but they talk to Ana via message like Marcel , grant etc that's how we know that grant will be coming to dinner on Thursday...marcel still not confirmed whether Ana agreed for personal trainer or not...and the characters who appear in the update beside main scene gets same old tease ass groping , spanking kind of thing. No info about Alexia, no David business storyline. Maybe because MP try to cover both faithful and corrupt path in same update so he might not be able to cover all characters storyline. For the time being it's just trolling kind of update. Will see from Friday story onwards.
 
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sslovoe said:
i spend night learn daz program
so i think use jake and anna geting ride
and kendra join them
and marvin cant let them alone
so kendra ask him leave them alone and he get his chance

i make this without render cause its too much for my old laptop to make it so i just show it as it is

jake : are enjoy ride anna
anna : yh its great


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kendra ( wisper marvin ) hiii you pervert dog not say you can touch my boobs
marvin ( wisper ) you say leave them alone so i have to touch something
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jake ( thinking. ) oh anna never think you be that position like that front me look that ass

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(jake look marvin wink eyes thinking ) look at me you old dog am getting anna front you soon she be mine
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Arunrobin

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There is lot of good games about sex but it not include topic like rape, blackmail, kidnap and even pschopath who kill members which make game look more virtual than real but bad Bobby saga has this things and now his creator leave this game without further story developed
 
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Davidleene said:
can some zoom towards both glasses and see if you can make something out of it, are they alone? i dont think so
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Yeah, some lights. Or maybe those are the aliens the Dev is going to introduce that are gonna abduct the FMC, while the other girl has been an alien this entire time. Nice catch, you found the hidden aliens.
 
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Couto25 said:
For corrupt path it confuse me ....like on one hand she tease Marvin by unbuttoning her top, then Ana tease Marvin and let him touch her thighs in the bar, then she allow Marvin to grope her ass and boobs but when Marvin saw her topless in the last update, she gets pissed off..so last Marvin/Ana interaction doesn't get along with corrupt path at all.
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Agree. For the praise I've given the story and it's elements of realism (that can be had in a porn story) there is plenty of inconsistency in behavior that feels like filler for horny readers during scenes lacking any need for sexuality than an organic event.

Which is part of what I meant a few posts back. Some of the behavior we'd consider faithful or simply not-slutty needs to just be baked-in. Letting him more or less just watch her breastfeed is something few women would allow even if they were whores (and Anna is definitely not at this stage, at most she has a trist with her husband's friend that's in full bloom). It felt a bit out of character to have that.

Now, Marvin has felt her up so I get why the writer would think that was fine but it's just an odd thing to have in there even for the 1% that plays the faithful path.

I'm not complaining but if I'm going to point out the parts I think are good and realistic I need to point out the things that don't quite match those levels.
 
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AlfredBundy4 said:
Agree. For the praise I've given the story and it's elements of realism (that can be had in a porn story) there is plenty of inconsistency in behavior that feels like filler for horny readers during scenes lacking any need for sexuality than an organic event.

Which is part of what I meant a few posts back. Some of the behavior we'd consider faithful or simply not-slutty needs to just be baked-in. Letting him more or less just watch her breastfeed is something few women would allow even if they were whores (and Anna is definitely not at this stage, at most she has a trist with her husband's friend that's in full bloom). It felt a bit out of character to have that.

Now, Marvin has felt her up so I get why the writer would think that was fine but it's just an odd thing to have in there even for the 1% that plays the faithful path.

I'm not complaining but if I'm going to point out the parts I think are good and realistic I need to point out the things that don't quite match those levels.
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Maybe That kind of situation is required for the story to start with Ana/Kendra bar scene about Marvin discussion...but its fine. Yes, there are so many dialogues and events that doesn't get along with path. And if we ask MP, he will justify with something and people will have to get along with that reason even if they dont want to. Like he will say Ana was drunk in all those previous scene but Ana is sober in recent one and she was topless so she got pissed off. Any justification will do.

And nah its better not to take these VN as realistic lol...The thing is when someone consider and take the story as realistic, and do a deep dive into all characters or if they've gone through similar situation in their own life, they try to relate it as per their own experience....even if a normal breakup might have happen, they will see themselves as David lol. And MP will unnecessary add more boring slow events just to extend the project that would have ended in 5 years will now take 8/9 years lol because of more slower pace. The more someone dive into realism in any individual character path, the more problem MP will create for himself. I mean right now Ana ass is being groped by 5 people per day lol that's not realism at all. Who knows when her corruption will grow, she will give 4 handjobs per day lol.

MP took idea from original VN and he try to add corruption in all characters path that were there in original VN. So he will get stuck at many points where even if it doesn't make sense for a faithful/corrupt path, he will show those things to produce the desire corrupt/faithful outcome without changing the main storyline. So yea many events will be absurd that were not present in original VN and MP is creating now for this VN... original VN my guess showed confused path ending.... he's creating extra faithful and corrupt path. Wednesday and Thursday there's not much events to show beside main bar scene and meeting with grant, so whatever he write for these 2 days is pure MP creativity beside those 2 events.
 
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Couto25 said:
Maybe That kind of situation is required for the story to start with Ana/Kendra bar scene about Marvin discussion...but its fine. Yes, there are so many dialogues and events that doesn't get along with path. And if we ask MP, he will justify with something and people will have to get along with that reason even if they dont want to. Like he will say Ana was drunk in all those previous scene but Ana is sober in recent one and she was topless so she got pissed off. Any justification will do.

And nah its better not to take these VN as realistic lol...The thing is when someone consider and take the story as realistic, and do a deep dive into all characters or if they've gone through similar situation in their own life, they try to relate it as per their own experience....even if a normal breakup might have happen, they will see themselves as David lol. And MP will unnecessary add more boring slow events just to extend the project that would have ended in 5 years will now take 8/9 years lol because of more slower pace. The more someone dive into realism in any individual character path, the more problem MP will create for himself. I mean right now Ana ass is being groped by 5 people per day lol that's not realism at all. Who knows when her corruption will grow, she will give 4 handjobs per day lol.

MP took idea from original VN and he try to add corruption in all characters path that were there in original VN. So he will get stuck at many points where even if it doesn't make sense for a faithful/corrupt path, he will show those things to produce the desire corrupt/faithful outcome without changing the main storyline. So yea many events will be absurd that were not present in original VN and MP is creating now for this VN... original VN my guess showed confused path ending.... he's creating extra faithful and corrupt path. Wednesday and Thursday there's not much events to show beside main bar scene and meeting with grant, so whatever he write for these 2 days is pure MP creativity beside those 2 events.
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But in the original story there are no old fish, so it's a completely different game than the original story.
 
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