Your point of view is understandable, but the point is that in this way, through these two, the author showed us the result of what was happening to Anna. He showed us the level of her corruption, using a kind of provocation. We are used to certain heroes and the gentle development of events with them, to slow corruption. Now there has been a shot, after which the real race will begin and we will witness who will be the first and the last. Chris got Anna's mouth, now someone else will be there, and then maybe several at the same time. Hopefully, someone other than Chris will be the first on the next base.
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not problem he not replay and answer fan we know he not replay or answer for 2 year
the problem supporter only get one peek for month so they join no teas pic or post news only ...only one post and bad teas choice
that make supporter think why we here
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These two random people were unnecessary. We already have too many unnecessary characters. They are stand-ins for Anna's corruption before the sex scenes, which we don't know when they're going to happen. Like in the AWM game Sophia fucks in all the past scenes or when she's dreaming. They are stand-ins for the supporters so they don't stop supporting him. So he's telling them "Be patient, there'll be sex Sophia, I've given you a taste of what the sex will be like. Wait light years for the sex to happen for sure.
Na Leonard and Marcel still left beside Jake too..they didn't felt Ana yet.
And second point is characters relevant to the story...like I can understand MP wants to show that office guys are attracted to Ana new looks...he could have done that with Jake and Marvin with some jealousy where both of them try to grope Ana in the office..
Now if those characters (tim and Dale)are irrelevant to the main storyline, as we see nowadays that even short updates are taking 3.5months of development time. These extra characters storyline will always take half month-1month of development time. And if these characters storyline doesn't end in threesome action, just there for blueballs, then I guess not to add them would be better option.
Usually additional characters irrelevant to the storyline and just there to flirt which can be achieved by Jake/Marvin...it means more trolling.
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Leonard just wants to sniff the panties but he's seen something still more than Jake. Marcel got head from Alexia nice consolation prize.
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My opinion is any additional character to the story are just to extend the story. It is unnecessary you don't need new characters. Yes you want her to cheat but does she have to be full blown whore you can show how she goes down the rabbit hole without the extra cast. What's next the store clerk, gas attendant etc. Instead of her cheating with 6 guys she needs to fuck 20. Let's be real she is a wife, lawyer and mother of a newborn. Even cheaters have some sort of limit to what they do. If the quantity is important then fuck the story give cliff notes and just get to the sex.
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Thats also my Opinion
, another character raises the interval dates from 3 months to 6 months and extends the Game another two years for completion.The Game isn't going forward with the characters that are in it now.
Just my Thoughts.
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yes, thing are slow already and with a new character its normal to be more slower than before despite the game being a slow burn game. If i were the autor i would work first with the pre established characters from the core like hank, jake, marvin, kendra and the other guy i forgot name who have good looking and is rich, becuase they are from the core of the history and after finhished these chracters route, i would make more or add more characters.Thats also my Opinion
The Game isn't going forward with the characters that are in it now.
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Sorry guys, but not only in this game, but also in the discussion of other games, I hear a similar opinion, bordering on the author's accusations of delaying the development of the game by adding characters to the game.
Having my own experience of creating games (under a different nickname), I want to draw your attention to the fact that you are expressing your opinion, in fact, you are talking about maliciously delaying the game development process intentionally. Completely disregarding the author's desire to tell his story exactly as he sees it.
This is the reason why we see so many abandoned games. Of course, some of them were abandoned because the support was weak, but the bulk is burnout. Creative people are prone to burnout, and statements like yours only make the situation worse. When starting to create a game, the author primarily tells his story, and if he is not strong enough and psychologically stable, then such comments will simply force a person to refuse to continue working.
Just trust the authors a little more and enjoy their work. I understand that we don't have enough patience with the long wait. But it takes time to make a good game.
I wish you all patience and well-being.
Having my own experience of creating games (under a different nickname), I want to draw your attention to the fact that you are expressing your opinion, in fact, you are talking about maliciously delaying the game development process intentionally. Completely disregarding the author's desire to tell his story exactly as he sees it.
This is the reason why we see so many abandoned games. Of course, some of them were abandoned because the support was weak, but the bulk is burnout. Creative people are prone to burnout, and statements like yours only make the situation worse. When starting to create a game, the author primarily tells his story, and if he is not strong enough and psychologically stable, then such comments will simply force a person to refuse to continue working.
Just trust the authors a little more and enjoy their work. I understand that we don't have enough patience with the long wait. But it takes time to make a good game.
I wish you all patience and well-being.
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she always bad girl
but she was have big boob here
this look after loss daivd again and see anna happy get tatoo
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that has my point at all.
My point relly only on the fact that if you add too many things will start to delay and lose focus, also i never demanded anything by stating the obvious, if you are working on something for exemple: stockpile management of coca cola, you no gonna add pepsi, beer and other stuff at the same time while you are still working on you assigments because will just become a mess.
My point in resume is, if add too much stuff on a novel (has amateur writer) you ganna start losing the core of the novel and the original plot and slow down the progress of the history, just like anime created filers.
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Timothy and Dale have gone further than Jake. 100% correct there! Think that is my only gripe. They came out of nowhere got touchy feely before a major antagonist. That's more an indictment of Jake's character in the game than anything else. The Jake path I don't give a squirrel fart for. He's the weakest character in the whole game only being young, handsome and sports an anaconda in his pants-- and the whole path is BORING since its typical office romance with predictable outcomes. antagonist got a feel except him why not use a major under used antagonist. I never met you before but sure I will allow you to caress my ass and not throat punch you. I wish Mr. Palmer would put up another poll with a ranking order as to whom players think is the more interesting content... it's just a guess, but I'll bet Timothy/Dale would rank higher than Jake.
And yes..." I never met you before but sure I will allow you to caress my ass...." would fall perfectly inline as one-night stands picking up ladies at a bar or night club.
The reason Timothy/Dale's appearance in the game is so affective is:
**we know just how weak-willed Anna is in sexual situations
**the more 'complicated' and arousing the situation is, the more it flusters Anna. In this case the very mention or thought of a 3some
**it now more makes sense how in the future Grant/Marvin and to a lesser extent Hank's interactions with Anna
**the whole Timothy/Dale Anna encounter just worked so well. A surprise that did not weaken the story but strengthened it
What is see possibly coming is just how Anna might think when it gets serious between Anna and Marvin... that from Anna's point of view an old man wants her (attention) is touching her (naughty situation) seeing her exposed (aroused over Marvin's arousal), and just how naughty and forbidden the whole encounter is (lust/desire... not for Marvin, but for the act itself and pleasure Feuling both her mind and body)
it's fine ....What my point is like think about it from Ana's point of view or authors point of view...Like he want to show that Ana is attractive to other guys too beyond all the other antagonists present in the story..Like random strangers..Kind of random bar guy, random stranger from streets or random office guys anywhere. Then sure author can show these small scenes. That's what you are saying right? that's what i get from your opinion.
We trust authors, I mean few of us including me invested on his creation because we do like the story obviously.
Now there is main important thing that you talked about in here is time taken to create. Now the way the story is going ahead with slow corruption in all paths irrespective of whatever reason author gives not to jump to sex is or the situation he created around Ana like David called in between Rob massage or whatever sophistication he had added in the nature of MC where Ana is hard to get laid and needed these condition satisfied that author has defined only for this VN, I am not gonna mention other VN here..I can mention AWAM too where more reasons might be added so for just this VN, MP has added these situation for Ana until now to break a sophisticated women to cheat i.e :
1. Alcohol,2. high on hormones, 3. alone in the room with antagonist, 4. money issue to raise daughter, 5. daddy issues so trying to please old men, 6. married with child, 7. think the husband cheated on her, 8.Surrounded by perverts who always trying to impress her and flirt with her and Ana is attracted to few, 9. emotional because her father passed away, 10. Ana can't lose job, 11. she's unsatisfied sexually, 12. husband lie about his financial condition, 13. Boss taking care of husband's court case else they would have to face legal issues, 14. want her child to be with her, 15. needed someone to share with as David tell her off, 16. Lack of communication with her husband, 17. Husband always doubt on her with her working colleagues, 18. her friends motivating her to cheat, 19. her doctor suggesting her to go with the flow, 20. She's alone and none of the characters so far care about her.
I guess he created around 20+ conditions until now out of which i can think of only 20 as of now and she still hold up because she is damn sophisticated even when few called her whore for giving handjob/BJ..I can see 20+ conditions where even a normal women will cheat if 5/6 conditions will get matched in their life. So you can see how much sophistication author has added in last 3 years around all the antagonist, husband and her life with "slow corruption". You have to agree that those scene are slow corruption no matter what few say but those scenes hasn't crossed limits yet. It's unrealistic story because real girl would have cheated even if 5 of those conditions would match in any real women life. So comparing and saying that he's making it more real is unfair. We have to say he's trolling. sorry to say that but yea it's trolling. He created faithful goddess in the name of realism lol who didn't cheated yet.
So you cannot say that we are not patience...We are holding up but you have to agree it's not near realistic women and if he is going to add 20+ more situations with additional characters like he didnt even started doctor storyline, he started Tim and dale as of now, Now there will be client in business meeting too, then there will be David friends during office trip maybe, David father, Ana's mom ..so many characters and roles are still left..i guess there are 3 more characters left out in character introduction page ....then we are right at our place saying that he is just adding more conditions and more time for trolling to reach upto sex point or moving the story forward.. Sorry to say it directly but it's trolling rather moving the main story forward or moving the story path with existing antagonist.
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I disagre in this point, its not unrealistic, just sparse since the actual culture has shaped for more "open" to cheating on both sides and other stuff, but before has more harder and everyone hated who cheats on their partner it has like coomon sense.
So i don't see has troling, just he din't created the setup yet, for exemple: if she give a blow job to hank after 2nd day of working there would feel realy pushed and out of place, same with marvin.
Maybe you have meet up with easy girls(thots, modern wooman, any name you want) allot.....
Yea I am thinking about social laws too...I am just saying the situation has been created alongside where Ana got alone time with antagonist beside the 20+ situations that has been created around her...i m not saying i got easy girl but if a girl meet these situations and gets alone time with a guy she's attracted to she'll cheat. It's not about easy girl or tough girl. Like Ana got chance with Jake while Jake dropping her home he didn't created that. He introduced new character storyline instead like Tim and Dale. So that way those real build up won't take place with existing antagonist...but new character storyline begin.
And everyone hated on partner who cheated right you just said it...how they react to it??? They leave their partner right...why didn't Ana left??? And gave David chance to prove when she's getting evidences from all sides that David cheated on her? Even from David's own best friend Chris , neighbours everyone including Alexia who told her that David cheated?? Why she's waiting for proof from David side only When everyone around her telling her that David cheated.. that's why I said he created goddess rather whore...even in corruption route. Because of society laws right???
Now if she cheat, it'll be normal but introducing more characters is what I said trolling rather than moving the main theme forward. I am not talking at all about easy girl or tough girl lol...any women who meet 5/6 criteria where everyone around her tells her that her husband cheated , they'll end up according to old social laws only and move on with their life or think about living alone...it has nothing to do with tough girl or easy girl . She'll do sex with anyone she wants. And that will not be considered as cheating no matter if you live in old society or new society...the story is about new society so don't bring old policies here... it's not a stone age story or kings, queen time storyline. Where queen stick to king even if he have sex with others...the story is not of that timeline. It's today's story of USA. Ana is a modern age woman who has a job and drive herself so don't bring other cultures here when the timeline is defined already. And her faithfulness level is like 200% whatever has been made so far even in corruption route that was supposed to be where Ana should be actually naughty and all..even in corrupt route, Ana is going with 200% faithfulness where the girl, husband's best man, her neighbour everyone said that David cheated with proof. Any woman would have lived alone easily because the society around her is telling her that her husband is a cheater but she's holding up. That's what is trolling.
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You need to understand Ana in the case, theres nothing to do with "society laws" in this case, if have be in a relationship you know that depends on the person and how much that person means to you, she also has a kid with david, you have to understand her personality on this one.
Not all wooman move on, if this has true every "bad boy" would be single lol.
You are the one who bring "society" rules here, not me i just comment on it, since you keep forgeting that the world of this game is not the real world and is not built to reflect on the real world, but in the world mr.palmer created.