New release will def be around the mid/end of march or just straight up april with minimal content added. LOL, I'm calling it.
See y'all next year after 1 or 2 updates.
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New release will def be around the mid/end of march or just straight up april with minimal content added. LOL, I'm calling it.
See y'all next year after 1 or 2 updates.
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It was likely February but as we already know the game has updates every one or three months the Dev has already made it clear here.
I plan to update this every one to three months, depending on my available time.
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Again This topic comes back here like a boomerang. So at the beginning of the story, and the game is similar at the beginning, it's the same characters. But there are several different stories that only have the same heroes. And nothing else connects these stories to the game.
We will always have to warn that the developer has already warned that CH3 will be completely new and will have no connection with this other story.
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Maybe I should write an explanation of this on the first page?
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Yes I think you need it or we asked Dev to make it very clear with big letters and yellow colors maybe that works better lol
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As pointed out already, the short story and the game/vn aren't identical. There are many differences:
The most striking one is Anna exclusively cheating on David with Jake several times in the story (3x or 4x times, don't remember exactly until David catches them). Since all the cheating happens with Jake and to some lesser extend also with Alexia, there is no Hank, Marvin, Chris (Chris actually exists but plays no role other than being mentioned as a friend of David) or Mr. Strenstromber and also not the stereotypical black intern bbc or Latino Renaldo.
The latter as a new npc makes no sense anyway, since Jake Ventura having Italian descent, therefore being at least Mediterranean concerning his looks and being a womanizer according to the story is supposed to have almost the exact same qualities as the supposed ones of the Latin Lover. Maybe the skin tone would be slightly different, but that's about it.
Therefore the roles of Jake Ventura and Renaldo would be very much the same, which is absolutely pointless in my book.
Btw in the short story Jake has got a huge dick, so introducing a bbc into the game, which doesn't exist in the story, is just the attempt of Mr_Palmer to split up Jake's special qualities and to assign them to different characters. There is no real need for it in my opinion other than catering to the stereotypical interracial bbc fantasy fans.
Another major difference is Anna not having any Daddy issues in the story. Nothing like that is mentioned and according to the story David and Anna still have got both of their parents.
The told time of the story compared to the game is also much longer. In the story the plot is taking place during a couple of weeks (which makes a lot more sense concerning realism about shaking the very foundations of Anna's and David's so far happy marriage), while in the game it's a lot more rushed/cramped together and supposed to happen during one week only.
There are many more minor changes, too, like Kendra being the one taking the photos of David and Alexia during the clubbing night, instead of Chris.
Also Alexia is a blonde beauty and not dark haired like in the game.
The nightly calls and text messages from Alexia to David in order to make Anna suspicious don't seem to happen in the game.
After her failed attempts to seduce David in the gym, she directly tells Anna, that she's cheating with her husband. A scene which also doesn't seem to happen in the game.
In the end it's speculation, if the game will take the main direction of short story. After all Mr_Palmer is taking his creative freedoms from the original story and he is entitled to do so. One thing is for sure so far, not only Jake will be able to take advantage of Anna.
We most likely will have ending scenes in the aftermath involving some tough decisions involving David and Anna sitting in front of their couple therapist either leading to a break-up or a reconcilement. If it follows the original story it's doubtful that David will have the chance to do some "revenge" cheating as well. In the original story he is the one, who didn't entirely fall for the honey trap Alexia, unlike Anna with Jake.
I hope we will have some scenes in the game featuring David doing naughty things, too, because in the story it felt unfair, that he had to endure it all despite staying faithful most of the time. But so is life: unfair. Anyway I hope Mr_Palmer gives David some action, too.
The original short story is entertaining, but has got its flaws, too, like some logical plot holes and a certain degree of unrealism:
F.e. Anna is drinking wine on several occasions, while still having a baby in need of breastfeeding (no responsible mother would do so, since the alcohol deposits in the mother's milk). Although breastfeeding is never mentioned in the short story, but it is in the game.
It also bothered me, that David never complains or confronts Alexia about the extensive texting and phone calls during the night. We know the motive of Alexia doing it, like being payed for it by Kendra and in order to make Anna suspicious, but David doesn't react at all. Seriously if you're in a relationship and your gf being already suspicious and arguing with you most of the time, wouldn't you tell the other woman to stop calling and texting every night?
All the many scenes of breast-play happening in the story are also not very realistic in my opinion. It's very rare that a woman is actually turned on by a guy doing breast-play. In my experience many, if not most rl women (not all of course) are either indifferent or don't enjoy extensive breast-play at all. The latter are so sensitive concerning their nipples, that they really don't want you to suck, lick, squeeze or slightly bite on their nipples and will stop you from doing so. According to the story Anna has got very sensitive nipples, but still she seems to totally enjoy a guy like Jake doing extensive breast-play again and again, which makes no sense. It's mostly a very male fantasy and not so much a female one. (Which is unfortunate, because I'm a breast lover, not an ass guy.)
Another unrealistic silliness is Anna having one orgasm after another with Jake according to the short story. First of all Jake seems to have a monster cock and it hurts Anna in the beginning. But then her pussy loosens up and she gives in to the pleasure leading to one orgasm after another. This is pure fantasy of course.
Usually too big isn't good (just as too small) and women won't be able to enjoy it (in porn they often take muscle relaxation drugs next to painkillers and lots of lube, because certain scenes are painful for the women). It's also mostly a male fantasy, that a huge cock would drive a woman into joyful oblivion, while the initial pain just needs to be overcome.
I've had a talk with a woman in rl, whose ex had a huge penis (a white guy btw). She said, that she never enjoyed sex with him, because it was painful for her all the time, she just endured it. She had loved him for different reasons, but surely not for the sex. The latter was something she avoided during their relationship, because it didn't bring her pleasure, but pain, despite using lube and her being wet. I actually heard it from more than one woman so far, that too big, just means pain. So far for the (mostly male) fantasy about monster cocks being pure joy.
Also Anna despite having a "tight pussy" and being used to vanilla sex according to the short story is never sore down below after Jake fucked her hard several times a night with his too big dick. In the story she will take it like a pro again and again without ever being sore and this goes on for at least 3 days. Jake also has got a ridiculous amount of stamina. It's really absurd.
After all having wild sex takes its toll in real life. If you fuck a woman hard and without lube several times a night, she will definitively be sore the next day and most likely not willing to do it again so soon.
Furthermore having sex with a stranger for the first time is usually not the totally fulfilling, mind-blowing, ecstatic sex. It's very seldom, that a ons can give you that much sexual pleasure as described in the short story concerning Anna cheating with Jake. It might happen on a rare occasion, but often it takes a few attempts to find out more about each other in bed, until sex is enjoyable for both. However in the originally story Anna is completely blown away by having sex with Jake each and every time with multiple orgasms.
But enough criticism of the original story. After all it's a porn fantasy featuring lots of exaggeration and not something to be taken too seriously.
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No, I think not.
Early March would be my guess.
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You are the author of the original story. What's the facepalm for? Didn't like my reality check of your erotic short story? I was just being honest. Well, seems like you've got a problem with bearing constructive criticism...
You are the author of the original story. What's the facepalm for? Didn't like my reality check of your erotic short story? I was just being honest. Well, seems like you've got a problem with bearing constructive criticism...
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Jake and his newborn son he is teaching him his method of how he conquered his mother Anna.
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Hahaha, reality check? Really?
Reading your post it seems to come down to opinions and it's just that yours happen to differ from mine.
For instance :-
Breasts - The women I've been with loved their breasts being man-handled, especially my wife who I could get to orgasm just by playing with her breasts and nipples.
Cock size - yeah, you're right, all of it, but as a long time contributor of stories to Literotica, most readers (guys predominently) think that their women all crave bigger cocks. Stereotypical I know but that's the way it is.
I'm not going to pick through your points one by one because frankly, I can't be bothered.
And just to finish I have no problem with criticism, constructive or otherwise. You learn to grow a thick skin very quickly to withstand some of the toxic comments you receive on Literotica.
And going back to this game, Mr Palmer has posted before that it does not follow the plot line of my story. There are odd bits of similarirty with some characters names and odd scenes early on but there it ends. So please, stop trying to draw comparisons.
People just need to ignore my original story and concentrate on following a game that I personally find to be developing into one of the very best on the market.
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When an author tells you to ignore their story you know they are being serious. A little piece of them has to die inside to say that.
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