VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

[robrize2169]

i see this story as more improbable that just about any storyline i have come across. that is what makes it interesting to play though. it's so unlikely that a series of events like this all take place at once around a happily married couple that are new parents.
1. Kendra works with Anna and blames Anna for getting a promotion she wanted.
2. Anna happens to be married to Kendra's ex bf David whom she lost her mind over and ended up forcing him to put a restraining order on her and get mental help. which she desperately needs.
3. every guy in Anna's office wants to fuck her and will go to great lengths to make it happen esp. with Kendra now on the warpath and helping some of them to break up her marriage and get her fired from her job.
4. David's best friend or so he thinks is trying damn hard to trick Anna into fucking him to get back at David for what he think is David rubbing it in that his life is perfect. which it isn't we find out
5. Anna is horny all the time and David is too tired to give the proper good fucking she needs. he won't eat her out and she won't blow him. both parties are not receiving something they want from their spouse.
i mean this right here is the initial stuff that is driving the story along, but there is so much more to it.
all this for most of us is enough to keep us eagerly waiting for the next update. but some are here only for fapping material and continuously whine about the slow burn. they need to go play other games to get their needs filled. this one is going to take a while.
ok nuff said for now..

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

i see this story as more improbable that just about any storyline i have come across. that is what makes it interesting to play though. it's so unlikely that a series of events like this all take place at once around a happily married couple that are new parents.
1. Kendra works with Anna and blames Anna for getting a promotion she wanted.
2. Anna happens to be married to Kendra's ex bf David whom she lost her mind over and ended up forcing him to put a restraining order on her and get mental help. which she desperately needs.
3. every guy in Anna's office wants to fuck her and will go to great lengths to make it happen esp. with Kendra now on the warpath and helping some of them to break up her marriage and get her fired from her job.
4. David's best friend or so he thinks is trying damn hard to trick Anna into fucking him to get back at David for what he think is David rubbing it in that his life is perfect. which it isn't we find out
5. Anna is horny all the time and David is too tired to give the proper good fucking she needs. he won't eat her out and she won't blow him. both parties are not receiving something they want from their spouse.
i mean this right here is the initial stuff that is driving the story along, but there is so much more to it.
all this for most of us is enough to keep us eagerly waiting for the next update. but some are here only for fapping material and continuously whine about the slow burn. they need to go play other games to get their needs filled. this one is going to take a while.
ok nuff said for now..

I agreed with your summary - but such is just my point; it's not unlikely at all given the goal of the writer. It would be extremely unlikely in the real world. But again, time will tell, the third section will be the deciding factor.

 

[Ass Fan]

I remember how many of us were unhappy with the first poll that old fox Mr. Garet Stormberg won. We were afraid that we would not see other characters. But the creator said that we will see all the characters. The survey was just a pretense that the creator saw what characters were popular, like this survey about the side stories we will see in the game.

It's good that we will see everyone equally, including the most anticipated by all "THE MOM MILF" David's bastard will do well with her if it's like I imagine...

 

[Adolfo]

Nothing changes. Chris rules. Anonimous BJ second. Marvin & Kendra, the odd couple, third. Hank the pressing boss, fourth (go Hank, go!). Jake the snake, fith. Stenstromber and his lingerie, sixth. Last place to the absurd competetion between Jake and Marvin. It's better to colaborate and don't fight.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

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Nothing changes. Chris rules. Anonimous BJ second. Marvin & Kendra, the odd couple, third. Hank the pressing boss, fourth (go Hank, go!). Jake the snake, fith. Stenstromber and his lingerie, sixth. Last place to the absurd competetion between Jake and Marvin. It's better to colaborate and don't fight.

@ The results, not your post, I appreciate you conveying them.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

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Nothing changes. Chris rules. Anonimous BJ second. Marvin & Kendra, the odd couple, third. Hank the pressing boss, fourth (go Hank, go!). Jake the snake, fith. Stenstromber and his lingerie, sixth. Last place to the absurd competetion between Jake and Marvin. It's better to colaborate and don't fight.

So you patrons would rather see creepy stalker Chris then Anna practicing blowjobs at the office or on kielbasas
Maybe she can hire this lady to teach her deepthroating

 

[Sadowdark]

So you patrons would rather see creepy stalker Chris then Anna practicing blowjobs at the office or on kielbasas
Maybe she can hire this lady to teach her deepthroating

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it sounds Polish - Kiełbasa

 

[Chaosguy]

Woohoo Chris for the win!!!

 

[garret64]

Hank and Chris are the alphas in this game.

They act alone, do not act for others and cannot be bought with money.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

So you patrons would rather see creepy stalker Chris then Anna practicing blowjobs at the office or on kielbasas
Maybe she can hire this lady to teach her deepthroating

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Chris has the odd personality of being a whiny weasel betaboy as the antagonist, usually you see him as the MC in ntr games lol, I dont see how people like that character.

Hank and Chris are the alphas in this game.

I think your betarometer may be miscalibrated. He hangs on Anna's every word.

 

[Sadowdark]

Hank and Chris are the alphas in this game.

They act alone, do not act for others and cannot be bought with money.

Chris unknowingly helped Kendra. And she already knows him, and it's only a matter of time before he meets her and they work together. Hank will have people in the firm for that.

 

[NewTricks]

Unpopular opinion but I don't care who won the poll. Or about the poll. Any dev who allows their VN to be written by committee deserves everything that is coming to them when too many cooks in the kitchen spoil the broth. When the VN collapses under its own weight like The Adventurous Couple did because the dev took every suggestion instead of just writing the story they wanted to I guess we will be back here in two years waiting for the re-release of A Perfect Marriage The Original Story (APMTOS) wondering what the fuck happened.

 

[Alea iacta est]

Unpopular opinion but I don't care who won the poll. Or about the poll. Any dev who allows their VN to be written by committee deserves everything that is coming to them when too many cooks in the kitchen spoil the broth. When the VN collapses under its own weight like The Adventurous Couple did because the dev took every suggestion instead of just writing the story they wanted to I guess we will be back here in two years waiting for the re-release of A Perfect Marriage The Original Story (APMTOS) wondering what the fuck happened.

Agree with you analysis.

Every work must have a soul, it cannot be a chaotic gathering of heterogenous ideas!!

 

[exazubi]

I remember how many of us were unhappy with the first poll that old fox Mr. Garet Stormberg won. We were afraid that we would not see other characters. But the creator said that we will see all the characters. The survey was just a pretense that the creator saw what characters were popular, like this survey about the side stories we will see in the game.

Why is everyone so worried about the poll? It doesn't mean that if the players choose a specific direction, the game will only develop there. That's just the order of what is done when. A game of this quality can hardly be developed spontaneously. I'm sure a finished script is already on the table. I know the same thing from many other developers. And now the only question is when and what will be done about it. So I'm not too concerned about that. sooner or later everything that the developer has planned will come into play. The only thing I'm worried about is that in the end the NTR haters will prevail again and the developer will tip the whole game towards vanilla. However, there shouldn't be much left of the game then.

Unpopular opinion but I don't care who won the poll. Or about the poll. Any dev who allows their VN to be written by committee deserves everything that is coming to them when too many cooks in the kitchen spoil the broth. When the VN collapses under its own weight like The Adventurous Couple did because the dev took every suggestion instead of just writing the story they wanted to I guess we will be back here in two years waiting for the re-release of A Perfect Marriage The Original Story (APMTOS) wondering what the fuck happened.

The Adventurous Couple isn't really that bad because of the overloaded content. The game was rather poorly written from the start. In addition, many bad renders, some bad animations. There are some scenes in it that are good. But at many places we just shimmy from one lewd scene to the other. It's just not good dialogue, not good storytelling. And with such a rather weak basic structure, of course, sex doesn't go well either. There is simple lack on quality. That's why I don't like the game either, even though I'm a fan of pretty much all of the content in it. The whole package just doesn't add up

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

Why is everyone so worried about the poll? It doesn't mean that if the players choose a specific direction, the game will only develop there. That's just the order of what is done when. A game of this quality can hardly be developed spontaneously. I'm sure a finished script is already on the table. I know the same thing from many other developers. And now the only question is when and what will be done about it. So I'm not too concerned about that. sooner or later everything that the developer has planned will come into play. The only thing I'm worried about is that in the end the NTR haters will prevail again and the developer will tip the whole game towards vanilla. However, there shouldn't be much left of the game then.




The Adventurous Couple isn't really that bad because of the overloaded content. The game was rather poorly written from the start. In addition, many bad renders, some bad animations. There are some scenes in it that are good. But at many places we just shimmy from one lewd scene to the other. It's just not good dialogue, not good storytelling. And with such a rather weak basic structure, of course, sex doesn't go well either. There is simple lack on quality. That's why I don't like the game either, even though I'm a fan of pretty much all of the content in it. The whole package just doesn't add up

As long as he makes the NTR optional, then the cream puffs can’t cry about it

 

[exazubi]

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I doubt it. So far we have 4 Li for Anna: Chris, Jake, Marvin, Hank. Probably 2 more coming soon. And for David, apart from Anna, we have Alexia. Maybe more will come. So we already have 5 routes in which there will be at least cheating. Of course there will be a vanilla route with Anna and David, which is already confirmed . But you will have to live with the fact that the vast majority of all content in this game will be cheating and/or NTR, maybe cuckold. And that can't all be optional.

 

[Sadowdark]

Why is everyone so worried about the poll? It doesn't mean that if the players choose a specific direction, the game will only develop there. That's just the order of what is done when. A game of this quality can hardly be developed spontaneously. I'm sure a finished script is already on the table. I know the same thing from many other developers. And now the only question is when and what will be done about it. So I'm not too concerned about that. sooner or later everything that the developer has planned will come into play. The only thing I'm worried about is that in the end the NTR haters will prevail again and the developer will tip the whole game towards vanilla. However, there shouldn't be much left of the game then.

Don't worry you will have NTR road

 

[Sadowdark]

I doubt it. So far we have 4 Li for Anna: Chris, Jake, Marvin, Hank. Probably 2 more coming soon. And for David, apart from Anna, we have Alexia. Maybe more will come. So we already have 5 routes in which there will be at least cheating. Of course there will be a vanilla route with Anna and David, which is already confirmed . But you will have to live with the fact that the vast majority of all content in this game will be cheating and/or NTR, maybe cuckold. And that can't all be optional.

You forgot old Fox Mr. Garet Stomberg.

 

[hzjujk]

Why is everyone so worried about the poll? It doesn't mean that if the players choose a specific direction, the game will only develop there. That's just the order of what is done when. A game of this quality can hardly be developed spontaneously. I'm sure a finished script is already on the table. I know the same thing from many other developers. And now the only question is when and what will be done about it. So I'm not too concerned about that. sooner or later everything that the developer has planned will come into play. The only thing I'm worried about is that in the end the NTR haters will prevail again and the developer will tip the whole game towards vanilla. However, there shouldn't be much left of the game then.
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If I remember correctly they mentioned that they are working on a book. I would suggest you write the most important chapters and paragraphs right away. Best you send me a short summary and I tell you then what I am particularly interested. Do that first and publish your novel, short story or non-fiction book. The rest they can then deliver later. I'm sure this won't hurt the popularity of your work or the sales figures.

 

[Haha9999]

why the fuck am i so unlucky.i said the same thing and i got zero likes heck nobody even read it. look I've 147 comments and 147 likes. fucking shit.