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Hello patrons. Nothing much to report, just wanted to let you know that I’m working on the next update, and I’ll pass sneak peeks along as they’re ready. One thing I plan to post in the next day or so is more info about Anna’s love history… just some bonus content that didn’t make it into the story at this point.

There’s so much content about the characters, but I’ve been trying to trim it so the story doesn’t become too wordy and boring. This project is way more a novel than a porn game, but I also understand too much detail in the VN can turn readers off. Interested to get your feedback on this.

I want to point out that this next update is more buildup to part 3. Anna has some interesting interactions, but nothing wild happens, so you should measure your expectations. I hate spoiling things, but I’ll just say, her mindset on Friday is more about improving things with David, and keeping her thoughts and emotions in check, especially these lewd thoughts that have suddenly been so prevalent now that Kendra is in her head combined with her hormonal imbalances.

Thank you for your patience, and especially your support! - Mr. Palmer
 

Eye-switcher

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I dont think its a problem with a wordy VN as long as the writing is good, what is a problem though is if its only wordy.
I feel and many with me i think that i didn't sign up here to read Dickens, so if there is no porn or very little or only teasing then it becomes boring very fast.
 

mindexcursion

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Mr. Palmer,

keep up the good work! The dance towards the volcano is just too exciting. They manage to integrate feelings in a fantastic way. Nothing, or only a little (caretaker) is cheap. Of course, there will be more sex and I'm also curious for whom Anna will spread her legs first. Thank you for excellent entertainment, excitement and reading fun. I'm already looking forward to the update.
 

psl_cricket

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Mr. Palmer,

keep up the good work! The dance towards the volcano is just too exciting. They manage to integrate feelings in a fantastic way. Nothing, or only a little (caretaker) is cheap. Of course, there will be more sex and I'm also curious for whom Anna will spread her legs first. Thank you for excellent entertainment, excitement and reading fun. I'm already looking forward to the update.
She's gonna spread her legs for Chris first. Mark my words :)
 

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He tried to pressure her despite not having a condom, telling her he’d pull out, but she told him no. He kept on trying, despite her telling him no, to the point where she was very scared he was a closet rapist.
(Hmm, this guy sounds familiar)
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yes Chris does sound very much like the closet rapist that Anna was afraid of in college...so..i now wonder if perhaps Chris will try to rape Anna after getting always rejected by her and David will walk in on it and beat Chris to death..thus having Anna jump his bones and get the pussy pounding she has been craving from none other than her hubby..you go David boy..i am in your corner..no one is good enough for your Anna...(y)(y)(y)
 

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yes Chris does sound very much like the closet rapist that Anna was afraid of in college...so..i now wonder if perhaps Chris will try to rape Anna after getting always rejected by her and David will walk in on it and beat Chris to death..thus having Anna jump his bones and get the pussy pounding she has been craving from none other than her hubby..you go David boy..i am in your corner..no one is good enough for your Anna...(y)(y)(y)
nah, Hank and Marvin going to walk in and save the damsel in distress. Then the shagging begins! :ROFLMAO:
 

psl_cricket

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yes Chris does sound very much like the closet rapist that Anna was afraid of in college...so..i now wonder if perhaps Chris will try to rape Anna after getting always rejected by her and David will walk in on it and beat Chris to death..thus having Anna jump his bones and get the pussy pounding she has been craving from none other than her hubby..you go David boy..i am in your corner..no one is good enough for your Anna...(y)(y)(y)
Chris is gonna fuck Anna and get her pregnant :)
 

Pdr602

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Question for all you APM enthusiasts. Does your health insurance cover blue balls? Might want to look into that. At least until we get the chapter 3.
 
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yes Chris does sound very much like the closet rapist that Anna was afraid of in college...so..i now wonder if perhaps Chris will try to rape Anna after getting always rejected by her and David will walk in on it and beat Chris to death..thus having Anna jump his bones and get the pussy pounding she has been craving from none other than her hubby..you go David boy..i am in your corner..no one is good enough for your Anna...(y)(y)(y)
What Does Anna Look Like? To the other bitches that Chris fucks? Instead of being concerned with pleasing her husband (Oral Sex), Messaging with Chris. When Chris acts on it, she gets angry. Anna's on her way to being the biggest bitch you've ever seen. In the original story, After his wife fucks jake multiple times. David defeated Jake. Is this a win.

I'm sure she gave a blowjob to Erik but as for her husband Anna doesn't want. Anna stole David's love for her ego. David please get rid of this narcissistic bitch, find yourself a woman who deserves you.

I will see only Anna fucks other guys in game (Bored). I was wrong I thought David would leave this bitch and go on other adventures.

Have fun
 

Haha9999

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honestly the back story of Anna makes her even more sluttish and easy going rather than we feeling the burn.
now she's just goona smash 3 more dudes.
her story would have been much more compelling and interesting.
if she was virgin and David was her first man. and she broke up with her first boyfriend because she didn't wanted sex before marriage.

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moreover Kendra's brainwashing would have to compelling because Anna was naive and innocent because she didn't have any past experience.
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now she's just dump and slutish and don't understand the fact that man near her are hitting on her or she deeply wants to have sex with them.
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honestly after the bonus content Anna's portrayal has drastically reduced as a pure innocent woman, to dump and slutty girl who act naive.
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now let me address the elephant in the room.
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now Mr.palmer fan boy and NTR haters will get angry and say non sensible dumb fuckin unreasonable shit.
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it's my non humble opinion to make the emotions hit hard while we're seeing Anna the innocent beauty getting pounded by man.
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now it'll be +1 dick and not the actually feeling we get in NTR when innocent woman are getting fucked.
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and if you agree with me then buddy you have strong artist taste.
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and fuck you snowflake.
 

Mr_Palmer

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honestly the back story of Anna makes her even more sluttish and easy going rather than we feeling the burn.
now she's just goona smash 3 more dudes.
her story would have been much more compelling and interesting.
if she was virgin and David was her first man. and she broke up with her first boyfriend because she didn't wanted sex before marriage.

.
moreover Kendra's brainwashing would have to compelling because Anna was naive and innocent because she didn't have any past experience.
.
now she's just dump and slutish and don't understand the fact that man near her are hitting on her or she deeply wants to have sex with them.
.
honestly after the bonus content Anna's portrayal has drastically reduced as a pure innocent woman, to dump and slutty girl who act naive.
.
.
now let me address the elephant in the room.
.
now Mr.palmer fan boy and NTR haters will get angry and say non sensible dumb fuckin unreasonable shit.
.
it's my non humble opinion to make the emotions hit hard while we're seeing Anna the innocent beauty getting pounded by man.
.
now it'll be +1 dick and not the actually feeling we get in NTR when innocent woman are getting fucked.
.
.
and if you agree with me then buddy you have strong artist taste.
.
and fuck you snowflake.
The story has already stated that she's slept with five guys, which, in this day-in-age isn't even close to being a number that makes her slutty. And you have to consider the amount of men who have tried to sleep with her in her lifetime... five is an extremely small number relative to her opportunities.

Keep in mind, David is the only man she's had sex with in over six years. She's not a born-again virgin, but having sex with another man is a distant memory for her... something she's not thought about for a long time until recently when Kendra asked about her past lovers.
 
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