The problem with APM is not being a corruption story because she is already a slut in many ways, would be the “realistic” way of looking at it but also the boring way.Yeah, the problem is that this Anna is not a corruption story, she is a slut who had normalized many things that are not normal, who played the "good mother" acting the years required to get a valid man to become the father, and now she is returning to her slut mode. Pretty common nowadays with women waiting until mid 30s to search for a husband when their biological clock is ticking, and this is why clever men search for their slut past and red flag old slut women, they never recover at all, they are wasted.
Its not only that she is sexually unfaithful. Its worse, because at the end of the day, if you are in a 40 years marriage from 35 to 75, if one day you had pleasure sex with no connection, is not that big of a deal, you just don't talk about it. The problem is that your husband is supposed to be your life partner, and her flirting with his best friend or letting it happen, is several levels down in her loyalty if that exist at all.
First of all, not telling his husband that his "best friend" is not his friend, he is playing behind his back. Second, she is the partner in crime of that betrayal. Sex or not (sex itself is highly overrated), she is not just sexually cheating, she is a truly bad person by playing this game behind his back and not letting him know. I know this game is played by young and naive guys, and all it takes for them is to show a "damsel in distress" so they can play "captain save a hoe" or the "white knight", but she is truly bad person, playing truly dark and twisted games, AND SHE KNOWS.
The only thing left in this novel is watching her perform the cheating, then it's dead because not a single one of this characters are truly likeable.
I'm with you on this one because we know why we waited over three months for an update and with Friday and Saturday it's already going to help a lot to find out what Anna will do about the betrayal and who she'll turn to for help.yeah it's frustrating waiting on a game we enjoy but i prefer that Mr. Palmer gives us the rest of the chapter including the saturday morning so we can see what exactly Anna hears about David's cheating on her. and then hopefully we can get an idea of what David plans to do to prove his innocence and regain his wife's trust..and of course, the fun part allowing Anna to begin her descent into whoredom..
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Hello Patrons,
I've made a lot of progress this week. The artist now has all the story material needed to complete Part 2. He's currently working on three scenes in Saturday. I have no regrets not releasing Friday on it's own... I wouldn't have been able to get him everything for Saturday to work on by now.
I still have a lot to do for programming/writing/editing, but I'm moving along. One of the scenes in Friday was the largest script for a scene so far in the story, so I'm glad to be past it and can focus on the rest of the scenes.
As I've mentioned before, this update will be heavy on Marvin/Jake/Kendra/Anna, and there will be a new character. David, Chris, and Hank aren't involved much in this update.
One thing I had done after releasing the last update was to go through the entire story again. It's easy to treat each update as its own entity where I feel like I have to add enough content to make it entertaining for you all, but I'm cognizant of making the entire story flow when connecting all the updates, so that's why I wanted to go back and see how the story flows. In doing so, there were two things I've edited out of the story:
1- The inclusion of Renaldo, the co-worker of David's. I had planned to use him in part 3, but in the interest of not dragging this story on for years, I have to limit the amount of characters featured... he was one that I've decided to take off the board. If at a future date I change my mind, I can always re-insert him in to the script.
2- The lengthy description of the time when Anna and David first started dating and they went to the party where Anna played beer pong with a group of guys. I'd love to include a flashback scene one day, but for now, it seemed to bloat the story. Maybe I can release the scene as additional content, as I do think it's an interesting mini-story that shines some light on Anna, David, and their dynamic... and there is an interesting thing that nearly happened that Anna doesn't even remember. But for now, it just seemed to bloat the story, so I trimmed it down to be very little in the next update.
I'm not going to give a timeline for a release right now, but I'm definitely making good progress of late. I'm starting to realize it's pointless to get people's hopes up by giving a projected release date if there's a chance I can't make said date. While the vast majority understand and can accept reasonable delays, there's a vocal minority who send me hate mail or post on F95 that I'm "milking" supporters, which is ridiculous if you knew me. So I'm going to refrain from the whole release date projection until I'm pretty rock solid on it.
I still stand by 1-3 months that you can expect updates. For this one, I'm releasing Fri and part of Sat, which combined has more scenes than any other update I've done to date, so naturally it has taken longer, in addition to time-consuming life events.
And as I've stated before, I'd like to take a bit of time once Part 2 is done to give a road map of sorts - with no spoilers - on what to expect for Part 3. This may help clarify choices you make throughout the story.
Thanks for your patience, support and encouragement!
Anna was not a "whore" in college! If you read carefully then she just entered college and liberated herself from the "oppression" of her father! She had several boyfriends, one of them was to "rebel" with whom she knew many different "delights" of sex, but she did not like to do a blowjob and when he offered her group sex - she broke up with him! Having entered the "law school" she did not meet with anyone!With the utmost respect for a person who does a job for others, it must be noted that history so far has already given clues to the character Anna, usually in stories of couples, there is a sort of pre-preparation or motivation, horns etc. but here, especially after this update of his, he suggests that Anna was already a slut in college, is that now she will pick up where she left off, once again a slutty wife and also a new mother, the usual cuckold teddy bear husband, it's the usual row of cocks ready for Anna, things, views and magazines, excluding one novelty, having implemented the story on two points of view, but which in the long run could get boring, being in pricinpio the same story, but with different thoughts, too bad. another copy and paste game. With due consideration.
I'm not saying that Anna is a saint!I'm sorry, you're there, Dev introduces update referring to the Beer Pong game it's clear that something is unclear there, or what would be the point of doing the flashbacl or an addition, and honestly how can you say that Anna was a good girl having 4 boys like flirting, let me understand, under 5 boys you are a saint, but if you increase, you have bonuses, hahaahhaha, then even without his libido for hormones, it seems to me that with The friend we fkirtam he gets his ass tickled, in front of the crib of the daughter, if she is not a slut, she should have told her husband, especially the shower scene, not to mention the chatt with the photos, this is always part of the good girl, and all this, even before having the suspicion of betrayal of the husband
That's where you're wrong the part of the room where the son of a bitch touches her ass was the scene I hated the most because there was a baby in the room like you said and I already expressed what I think about it. And you forgot one detail I DIDN'T... had a choice in that. Otherwise I would never allow that It could be Hank Jake-snake I still would have the same thought I don't think I even need to comment on the rest. even because the choices were not mine.so for you, having your ass touched in your daughter's room, not leaving the bathroom when your friend is naked, having a night chat with him, is sending him hot photos, then touching and imagining that fucking another, etc. for you enter the norm of a faithful wife, congratulations.
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So it is, but we have a choice of whom to think about during masturbation.II agree with you up to a certain point, but let me say, that she doesn't do a single solitary or ambiguous action for a faithful wife, she does more actions, which as they say, 3 clues make a test, if you mentally pass a number of thoughts and you masturbate thinking of another instead of your husband, well it is clear that the road is traced towards betrayal,
TRUE some stories are identical but here there will be a change in CH3 it will be completely from scratch and with many choices please have to have.So it is, but we have a choice of whom to think about during masturbation.
Well, to be completely honest, this story has already been written on the site of literotica, there was a competition and there are many such stories with the theme of the same characters in different variations, the author took it as a basic, changing it in his own way.
I think you'll find that my post was not directed at you.So what makes you and I different?
I disliked how the last updates happened, for me they ruined the story, and I argued why. I read it, though about it, wrote about it.
You dislike my post, for you it ruined the fun, and you just shamed me with no real content at all. You read my post, though about it, and wrote about it.
You are not that different
good news just wish it had some specific date. And it's also sad to know that one of the characters will be removed I'm sad for a friend of mine I'm glad Marvin and Hank don't take that risk
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Hello Patrons,
I've made a lot of progress this week. The artist now has all the story material needed to complete Part 2. He's currently working on three scenes in Saturday. I have no regrets not releasing Friday on it's own... I wouldn't have been able to get him everything for Saturday to work on by now.
I still have a lot to do for programming/writing/editing, but I'm moving along. One of the scenes in Friday was the largest script for a scene so far in the story, so I'm glad to be past it and can focus on the rest of the scenes.
As I've mentioned before, this update will be heavy on Marvin/Jake/Kendra/Anna, and there will be a new character. David, Chris, and Hank aren't involved much in this update.
One thing I had done after releasing the last update was to go through the entire story again. It's easy to treat each update as its own entity where I feel like I have to add enough content to make it entertaining for you all, but I'm cognizant of making the entire story flow when connecting all the updates, so that's why I wanted to go back and see how the story flows. In doing so, there were two things I've edited out of the story:
1- The inclusion of Renaldo, the co-worker of David's. I had planned to use him in part 3, but in the interest of not dragging this story on for years, I have to limit the amount of characters featured... he was one that I've decided to take off the board. If at a future date I change my mind, I can always re-insert him in to the script.
2- The lengthy description of the time when Anna and David first started dating and they went to the party where Anna played beer pong with a group of guys. I'd love to include a flashback scene one day, but for now, it seemed to bloat the story. Maybe I can release the scene as additional content, as I do think it's an interesting mini-story that shines some light on Anna, David, and their dynamic... and there is an interesting thing that nearly happened that Anna doesn't even remember. But for now, it just seemed to bloat the story, so I trimmed it down to be very little in the next update.
I'm not going to give a timeline for a release right now, but I'm definitely making good progress of late. I'm starting to realize it's pointless to get people's hopes up by giving a projected release date if there's a chance I can't make said date. While the vast majority understand and can accept reasonable delays, there's a vocal minority who send me hate mail or post on F95 that I'm "milking" supporters, which is ridiculous if you knew me. So I'm going to refrain from the whole release date projection until I'm pretty rock solid on it.
I still stand by 1-3 months that you can expect updates. For this one, I'm releasing Fri and part of Sat, which combined has more scenes than any other update I've done to date, so naturally it has taken longer, in addition to time-consuming life events.
And as I've stated before, I'd like to take a bit of time once Part 2 is done to give a road map of sorts - with no spoilers - on what to expect for Part 3. This may help clarify choices you make throughout the story.
Thanks for your patience, support and encouragement!
We barely knew you Ronaldo
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Hello Patrons,
I've made a lot of progress this week. The artist now has all the story material needed to complete Part 2. He's currently working on three scenes in Saturday. I have no regrets not releasing Friday on it's own... I wouldn't have been able to get him everything for Saturday to work on by now.
I still have a lot to do for programming/writing/editing, but I'm moving along. One of the scenes in Friday was the largest script for a scene so far in the story, so I'm glad to be past it and can focus on the rest of the scenes.
As I've mentioned before, this update will be heavy on Marvin/Jake/Kendra/Anna, and there will be a new character. David, Chris, and Hank aren't involved much in this update.
One thing I had done after releasing the last update was to go through the entire story again. It's easy to treat each update as its own entity where I feel like I have to add enough content to make it entertaining for you all, but I'm cognizant of making the entire story flow when connecting all the updates, so that's why I wanted to go back and see how the story flows. In doing so, there were two things I've edited out of the story:
1- The inclusion of Renaldo, the co-worker of David's. I had planned to use him in part 3, but in the interest of not dragging this story on for years, I have to limit the amount of characters featured... he was one that I've decided to take off the board. If at a future date I change my mind, I can always re-insert him in to the script.
2- The lengthy description of the time when Anna and David first started dating and they went to the party where Anna played beer pong with a group of guys. I'd love to include a flashback scene one day, but for now, it seemed to bloat the story. Maybe I can release the scene as additional content, as I do think it's an interesting mini-story that shines some light on Anna, David, and their dynamic... and there is an interesting thing that nearly happened that Anna doesn't even remember. But for now, it just seemed to bloat the story, so I trimmed it down to be very little in the next update.
I'm not going to give a timeline for a release right now, but I'm definitely making good progress of late. I'm starting to realize it's pointless to get people's hopes up by giving a projected release date if there's a chance I can't make said date. While the vast majority understand and can accept reasonable delays, there's a vocal minority who send me hate mail or post on F95 that I'm "milking" supporters, which is ridiculous if you knew me. So I'm going to refrain from the whole release date projection until I'm pretty rock solid on it.
I still stand by 1-3 months that you can expect updates. For this one, I'm releasing Fri and part of Sat, which combined has more scenes than any other update I've done to date, so naturally it has taken longer, in addition to time-consuming life events.
And as I've stated before, I'd like to take a bit of time once Part 2 is done to give a road map of sorts - with no spoilers - on what to expect for Part 3. This may help clarify choices you make throughout the story.
Thanks for your patience, support and encouragement!