Great story plot
I been playing the game for a while and just watching to see how the plot developed before commenting on it. And perhaps a few here can provide some insights I may have missed. It may seem surprising, but I am Story/plot first, and naughty last. Plenty of games out there that are the other way around--hence, BORING.
First, I hope the developers monitor this post to get feedback. And on the same hand be able to ignore the nonsense posts that offer poor criticism. Second, that the developers are flexible to adapt future content to continue this successful game.
So... of what I have seen and played, it's a great game. Strong renders and art help a lot because it makes the plots even better. Some will think the last update was weak, but honestly, it's the strongest one. It develops the mind set Anna for future events. And how David reacts is very realistic. The plots and schemes of the villains are plausible. But this latest update puts into motion a lot of moving pieces and possible outcomes.
Having said all that, there are several pitfalls with the plot and storyline. To be honest, if Anna gets involved with her boss, Hank, that whole rout ought to be one of "reluctance" and "submission." The thing about creating a strong moral character like Anna, you can't just flip a switch from upstanding wife to slut without ruining the whole character. Grief and regret from what happen between Anna and her boss should be the main themes in that relationship arc.
The Chris rout seems to be an obvious plotline. But for Anna at some point to give in because first Chris is hung like a horse or is just horny would-be weak plot. However, at some point when Anna is emotional vulnerable and Chris "strikes" at such a moment of weakness then the story keeps its plausibility. Anna knows too well Chris' intentions and her current character wouldn't allow herself to accept Chris. But if Anna is in deep despair and wants a moment to forget her troubles a Chris/Anna moment becomes possible. The best part of that story arc is that Anna swears to herself that it would never happen again, but Chris continues after her because he can't get enough. Eventually Anna out of loneliness, horniness, and anger at David turns toward Chris for relief. More a friends with benefits especially if Anna thinks things will end in divorce with David.
Marvin in this game ought not be the kinky end the game ought to be seeking, but a shocking plot twist. If Anna sees him mostly as harmless and in a key event Marvin surprises Anna and she is stunted, the game keeps its plausibility. Out of surprise Anna lets Marvin make advances on her and Anna finds herself aroused from the kinky situation; you have a Marvin/Anna rout. For Anna it ought to be a shock to herself that she finds it kinky and surprising as close to being a forbidden taboo as she can go.
OK, then there is the pretty boy Jake... it is such a simple rout. A charming good-looking man on the prowl finding a woman in a relationship problem with her husband. Not hard to make that old theme work.
What could add to the story? First a pregnancy scare once things starts happening. Anna and David could have a moment of anger sex, but being estranged in their marriage a possible pregnancy could complicate the story plot. But if Anna has had sex with any of the other men in the story, that adds to the story plots... even better if its several of the men in the game not knowing if she is pregnant for sure or who the father is even more story plot.
. Pregnancy is good story material for the dev to work with, for sure.
