VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

[keeper95]

I found 3 stories revolving around the same characters. After reading all of them:

1st story where there is 1 act of cheating by Anna with co-worker, after being setup by Kendra, pretty tame, with marriage surviving
2nd story where cheating is more passionate on Anna's part, she really goes for it multiple times, it feels more focused on Anna and her passionate/wild side but ultimately marriage survives
3rd story that is after the 1/2, introduces the pervy boss and Chris, the husband's friend, but it only has 1 chapter, the story is incomplete

The game seems like some kind of amalgamation of all three which I see as a good thing, more potential for bigger/longer story and we as audience won't know what will happen exactly in the game future, building up the anticipation.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

I found 3 stories revolving around the same characters. After reading all of them:

1st story where there is 1 act of cheating by Anna with co-worker, after being setup by Kendra, pretty tame, with marriage surviving
2nd story where cheating is more passionate on Anna's part, she really goes for it multiple times, it feels more focused on Anna and her passionate/wild side but ultimately marriage survives
3rd story that is after the 1/2, introduces the pervy boss and Chris, the husband's friend, but it only has 1 chapter, the story is incomplete

The game seems like some kind of amalgamation of all three which I see as a good thing, more potential for bigger/longer story and we as audience won't know what will happen exactly in the game future, building up the anticipation.

Is Alexia a stripper or escort in all 3 stories too?

 

[Sadowdark]

I found 3 stories revolving around the same characters. After reading all of them:

1st story where there is 1 act of cheating by Anna with co-worker, after being setup by Kendra, pretty tame, with marriage surviving
2nd story where cheating is more passionate on Anna's part, she really goes for it multiple times, it feels more focused on Anna and her passionate/wild side but ultimately marriage survives
3rd story that is after the 1/2, introduces the pervy boss and Chris, the husband's friend, but it only has 1 chapter, the story is incomplete

The game seems like some kind of amalgamation of all three which I see as a good thing, more potential for bigger/longer story and we as audience won't know what will happen exactly in the game future, building up the anticipation.

Just no spoilers please

 

[Mr_Palmer]

yeah, i didn't like that ending at all, to tame and didn't understand the husbands point of view. So i hope that is not how its going to end up, and i hope Anna is little sluttier or at least in one of the routes

This VN is not the same story.

 

[Mr_Palmer]

Mr_Palmer

Here's a bug, it should have been here when Chris left the bar, not David

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[TeamEquipe]

This VN is not the same story.

To all you gamers out there.

As the author of the Literotica story I can absolutely confirm that this VN is completely different, apart from some of the character names and the odd early scene.
So any speculation that this game may follow my story is a complete waste of your time. It won't.

 

[Honamyzer]

Good content..hoping for more

 

[acidnightmare]

i really like this game but the latest update didn't have any hot content, we didn't even get to see what Chris did in the morning while Anna was in the shower.

 

[arimfan]

i really like this game but the latest update didn't have any hot content, we didn't even get to see what Chris did in the morning while Anna was in the shower.

i believe the dev suggested to wait until 0.5 for that reason

 

[chrizzyCL]

i really like this game but the latest update didn't have any hot content, we didn't even get to see what Chris did in the morning while Anna was in the shower.

in part 2 it will be seen, when the story is seen from Anna's point of view

 

[Sadowdark]

i believe the dev suggested to wait until 0.5 for that reason

This we will see in CH2

 

[jimbo88]

This we will see in CH2

... incoming micro grumble ... apologies ... but whatever happened in the shower between Chris and Anna could've been included imho, on the basis that it would've been from Chris's PoV ... and I would have still very much looked forward to how Anna experienced it in her releases. As that has been normal narrative mechanic from Mr Palmer, i.e. anyone's PoV except Anna's for these part 1 episodes/releases (although there has also been a bit of Anna PoV already). BUT, Mr Palmer's the man with the plan, and I'm muchly enjoying his endevour.

 

[bradleycooper69]

Very very good game, quality writing and a slow burn, I'm super immersed. And the wife is perfect.
Even though not much lewd happened, it's still pretty fucking hot. Little things like:

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The only gripe I have is where things going regarding Alexa:

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But anyway, great job so far Mr_Palmer, can't wait for future updates.

 

[Sadowdark]

People always have high expectations of a game, but they don't read what Dev says on the front page and then have a grudge. If they read this, they would know:

- it is slow burning
-The game is divided into three chapters
CH1- David's Perspective
CH2- Anna's perspective
Ch3 - Perspective David, Anna, sexual things
Kinetic choices, but important to the character
CH1, CH2
-The marriage can be saved
By making the right choices
Anna won't go further with the other men if you choose well
-Next 0.5V version probably October, possibly the last from David's perspective, will feature playable days: Friday, Saturday NTR-Type = Netorare
Anna will try to force her to cheat on the basis of false evidence of betrayal of her husband by sexual predators by any means possible to turn the marriage against each other.

 

[TeamEquipe]

... incoming micro grumble ... apologies ... but whatever happened in the shower between Chris and Anna could've been included imho, on the basis that it would've been from Chris's PoV ... and I would have still very much looked forward to how Anna experienced it in her releases. As that has been normal narrative mechanic from Mr Palmer, i.e. anyone's PoV except Anna's for these part 1 episodes/releases (although there has also been a bit of Anna PoV already). BUT, Mr Palmer's the man with the plan, and I'm muchly enjoying his endevour.

Have faith in the process.
All will be revealed in the fullness of time.

 

[packard1928]

love to see " Sharing " in the Genre....

 

[Sadowdark]

... incoming micro grumble ... apologies ... but whatever happened in the shower between Chris and Anna could've been included imho, on the basis that it would've been from Chris's PoV ... and I would have still very much looked forward to how Anna experienced it in her releases. As that has been normal narrative mechanic from Mr Palmer, i.e. anyone's PoV except Anna's for these part 1 episodes/releases (although there has also been a bit of Anna PoV already). BUT, Mr Palmer's the man with the plan, and I'm muchly enjoying his endevour.

When you read their SMS conversation carefully, you should know that Chris came upstairs and saw Anna naked as she was getting dressed for work. And he thanked Anna in a text message that Anna was naked, to which Anna said she was mad at him.

 

[dikdik48]

for make clear,
please make WT to if Anna perspective added in future update,
and we don't miss the scenes

 

[Sadowdark]

for make clear,
please make WT to if Anna perspective added in future update,
and we don't miss the scenes

Dev said let's see it in Ch2

 

[dikdik48]

Dev said let's see it in Ch2

okay thanks for the answer