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You forgot a few things. Anna's naivety also stems from the fact that she grew up with four brothers. And she thinks that since she managed to get along with her brothers, every guy will act like her brothers and she will be able to deal with them.
True to the point of the storyline that Anna has referenced her brothers. And we don't know if any of the brothers were protective of their sister--which isn't too late to mention in the story. The sibling dynamics we are not aware of but could be useful to flesh out character build of Anna.
She'd never had a close friend to talk to about girly things, so she immediately fell into Kendra's arms.
We don't know the kind of wedding Anna had, but likely a traditional one-- making no mention of who the bridesmaid (usually best friend) does point out Anna really doesn't have a circle of friends--but often women end many friendships when they enter into a relationship to focus on the relationship. However, considering Anna's fear of her father does make it likely Anna didn't have close friends growing up--and striving to achieve success (because of her father) it seems Anna didn't have much of a social life to forum relationships.
She has hyperactive post-pregnancy hormones that immediately cause hypersexuality, she is constantly horny, just an innocent word, something about sex, an innocent touch (when Kendra talks about Jack's penis during a break at work, Anna has a big problem with getting excited, which Kendra will eventually notice and at every meeting will be perfidiously used against her.
You don't need pregnancy hormones to hypersexual. Being free of repression from Anna's demanding father, free from the rigors of college and graduate school, free of internship and becoming a full lawyer, Anna can finally start 'living.' Right off she gets married and has a baby and wants more. Keep in mind Anna is 29, so she is several years behind most other women; Anna has a lot of ground to make up. Generally, some women are just more sexual then other. And then add in high level of Oxytocin and you have a perfect storm of arousal. Kendra is smart, but I don't think she has any idea of Anna's medical condition--but how Anna talks, and the girlish nature Anna and Kendra exhibit would as you say, "which Kendra will eventually notice and at every meeting will be perfidiously used against her."
That's why Anna quickly puts an end to such topics. An innocent touch, a gesture and Anna becomes sexually hyperactive. A small spark is enough for the earth to burst into flames.
Anna might have already been sensitive. Again, she had to postpone dating and sex longer than most women, so she could focus on her career. *It would make for good flashback scenes to that fact to better define Anna's character.
Anna knows the intentions of the clever old fox, because she knows that he was he was close to seducing her when she honored her father's memory, he wanted to get her drunk with his father's favorite alcohol, when he wanted to poison David because he did not add enough poison to David's food.
Three things that I haven't figured out about Anna and Grant. First, when and where did the two think it appropriate to kiss on the lips. Now the kissing isn't really romantic kissing or even passionate kissing, but it is trusting connection kissing. Second, when in her bedroom Anna wanted to have sex as much for Grant's relief but Her's as well; am thinking we as the audience need a high school graduation scene to explain that part of the relationship *{I say that because Anna would be 18, and it's totally plausible Grant would have taken Anna to lunch as a celebration, congratulating her.}
At the last moment, David saves Anna from seduction because he felt bad. As a gift, he sent Anna underwear and stockings for the wedding. When he tells Anna that they are from him, she wants, wants to burn the underwear and stockings, she is very angry with him, so she knows exactly what his intentions are and who he is. I'm 100% sure the old fox will tell Anna to wear those underwear and stockings for him to dinner. Actually, the turning point of Anna and Grant's relationship was the theft of her father's estate. Had Anna's father's Will been carried out, the only thing that would stop Anna from hooking up with Grant would be because she is married--but still emotionally vulnerable to Grant. Having suffered the 'money' betrayal, Anna caught on to Grant and reflected on their past intimacies as him not caring for her, but someone he was using.
There are many parts of this story that I am looking forward to, to see how the developer will solve the plots. In the Grant and Anna arc, the developer has a huge hill to climb to make it work. It's not a plot hole in any way, but a complicationthat will be interesting to see resolved.
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You forgot a few things. Anna's naivety also stems from the fact that she grew up with four brothers. And she thinks that since she managed to get along with her brothers, every guy will act like her brothers and she will be able to deal with them.
True to the point of the storyline that Anna has referenced her brothers. And we don't know if any of the brothers were protective of their sister--which isn't too late to mention in the story. The sibling dynamics we are not aware of but could be useful to flesh out character build of Anna.
She'd never had a close friend to talk to about girly things, so she immediately fell into Kendra's arms.
We don't know the kind of wedding Anna had, but likely a traditional one-- making no mention of who the bridesmaid (usually best friend) does point out Anna really doesn't have a circle of friends--but often women end many friendships when they enter into a relationship to focus on the relationship. However, considering Anna's fear of her father does make it likely Anna didn't have close friends growing up--and striving to achieve success (because of her father) it seems Anna didn't have much of a social life to forum relationships.
She has hyperactive post-pregnancy hormones that immediately cause hypersexuality, she is constantly horny, just an innocent word, something about sex, an innocent touch (when Kendra talks about Jack's penis during a break at work, Anna has a big problem with getting excited, which Kendra will eventually notice and at every meeting will be perfidiously used against her.
You don't need pregnancy hormones to hypersexual. Being free of repression from Anna's demanding father, free from the rigors of college and graduate school, free of internship and becoming a full lawyer, Anna can finally start 'living.' Right off she gets married and has a baby and wants more. Keep in mind Anna is 29, so she is several years behind most other women; Anna has a lot of ground to make up. Generally, some women are just more sexual then other. And then add in high level of Oxytocin and you have a perfect storm of arousal. Kendra is smart, but I don't think she has any idea of Anna's medical condition--but how Anna talks, and the girlish nature Anna and Kendra exhibit would as you say, "which Kendra will eventually notice and at every meeting will be perfidiously used against her."
That's why Anna quickly puts an end to such topics. An innocent touch, a gesture and Anna becomes sexually hyperactive. A small spark is enough for the earth to burst into flames.
Anna might have already been sensitive. Again, she had to postpone dating and sex longer than most women, so she could focus on her career. *It would make for good flashback scenes to that fact to better define Anna's character.
Anna knows the intentions of the clever old fox, because she knows that he was he was close to seducing her when she honored her father's memory, he wanted to get her drunk with his father's favorite alcohol, when he wanted to poison David because he did not add enough poison to David's food.
Three things that I haven't figured out about Anna and Grant. First, when and where did the two think it appropriate to kiss on the lips. Now the kissing isn't really romantic kissing or even passionate kissing, but it is trusting connection kissing. Second, when in her bedroom Anna wanted to have sex as much for Grant's relief but Her's as well; am thinking we as the audience need a high school graduation scene to explain that part of the relationship *{I say that because Anna would be 18, and it's totally plausible Grant would have taken Anna to lunch as a celebration, congratulating her.}
At the last moment, David saves Anna from seduction because he felt bad. As a gift, he sent Anna underwear and stockings for the wedding. When he tells Anna that they are from him, she wants, wants to burn the underwear and stockings, she is very angry with him, so she knows exactly what his intentions are and who he is. I'm 100% sure the old fox will tell Anna to wear those underwear and stockings for him to dinner. Actually, the turning point of Anna and Grant's relationship was the theft of her father's estate. Had Anna's father's Will been carried out, the only thing that would stop Anna from hooking up with Grant would be because she is married--but still emotionally vulnerable to Grant. Having suffered the 'money' betrayal, Anna caught on to Grant and reflected on their past intimacies as him not caring for her, but someone he was using.
There are many parts of this story that I am looking forward to, to see how the developer will solve the plots. In the Grant and Anna arc, the developer has a huge hill to climb to make it work. It's not a plot hole in any way, but a complicationthat will be interesting to see resolved.
