VN - Ren'Py - A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

I've always wanted a VN like this - a story with the downfall of a good marriage and a the fall of the husband and the wife. This one seems to do it perfectly. There's so many people trying to tear it down, many temptations all around and the game gives us the choice to try to keep the marriage intact.

As a massive fan of the cheating spouse category, I'm eagerly looking forward to future updates.

Pros:
+ an eye for detail (like serving food and other things to let it look more realsitic/believable - even with photos etc and that in a porn game wow!)
+ nice renders!
+ multiple mc's (i hope for anna perspective soon)
+ mc anna looks really pretty! (even tho i think she could use a bit more curves especially after mentioning it in Davids inner monologue cause i couldn't really see a difference before and after pregnancy)
+ creepy old guy option (even tho i think he is a bit too fat and tall)
+ nicely written dialogue
+ Alexia (gym girl) looks damn sexy too and that as a side character wow!
+ choices (even very minor at the moment)
+ i like how christ tries to get nudes etc from her and she resists even being a more or less naive person which fits the character, her role and the built up of corrupting really nice!

Cons:
- girl could look a bit curvier especially after mentioning it in husbands dialogue (i hope she will have big nipples )
- seems like slow pased which isn't bad at all just hope it won't be just one character per updare who will have fun
- old guy Hank should be a bit smaller and should have a bit less fat but could have an even older face currently he looks too big for (hopefully later sex scenes)
- more old guy options missing (would love to see a small old asian guy maybe as a neighbour or business partner? could recommend models, please!)
- can't see big impact on choices at the moment but maybe this comes with later updates


overall game with nice potential and a great base. dev has an eye for detail and a more or less realistic environment with believable characters and thoughts. female mc is hot even lacking a bit of curves (i mean even alexis the gym girl seem to have more if i have seen right) old boss seems way too big for sex scenes - hope he will get imrpoved or that there will be other smaller old creepy characters later on. otherwise a really solid story built up with really good english and good readable text and hopefully more impactful decissions later on.

beautiful story start up and the character work is also too good waiting for more updates and would love to play the game with more updates updated sooner...........(^) would also love to know how this intresting story goes on with all the character put to use

Love where this is going. It's far too short, but it does say it's a prologue. I just hope this doesn't get lost in the head smacking emojis. Great potential. Great start. To be honest I'm giving it five stars in part because I hate how NTR games take such a big hit. Even the ones that deserve to have five. Also, I hate when authors get discouraged because of the low votes and don't finish the VN. I'm voting on this one and following til completion. Keep it up! Can't wait til the next update!

Critique - v1.0

The story consists of a lot of backstory at the moment and one very tame sex scene between hubby and wife.

The renders are a little basic for my taste, can't really say much in terms of plot as it's not very far along yet. No serious animations and maybe one sex sound so far.

Look forward to some racy updates.

My Rating of [v1.0] is:

Pros:
+ Great Renders
+ Beautiful Women
+ Long Game play
+ Hot Story
+ Easy Game Play

Cons:
- Not much Sex (V1.0)

Conclusion:

This Game has great graphics and also the characters are is pretty good.
Hank has already caught my Eye in the Story and hope to see some Hot scenes in the Future.
The Story is clean and in depth without you getting tired of reading, just my bag of tee.
The Game just came out so there weren't many Sex Scenes yet, but I still love how the Story was told & that the first Release told you a lot of the Background of the married couple, how they met etc. so that the player is not left in the dark about how they came together.

Hope the Dev Keeps it up and brings out regular updates, because this game seems worthy of my support in the future releases.

Damn worth the Download.