VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

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Davidleene

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Adhdclassic said:
i played the update didnt really see anything different. I really watched the Dad conversation, Dad doesnt trust Chris plus he brought up Janet. Something tells me he is going to get involved on the downlow. Maybe hire a detective they are messing with his son and family.
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Can you share screen shots of the new part only
 
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DarthSpitz717 said:
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Even though I'm a big fan of the writing in this game. Latest update was not of the quality I expected. Dialogue felt cliche and repetitive. Having the dual playthroughs of David and Anna, should have David giving us a glimpse and tease of what Anna is up to. As this sets up a high anticipation of Anna's sexy scenes. I wonder if its more an evolving character of Anna. The options for David in how he reacts has to be setting up something down the road. Your choices range from reluctant acceptance of the situation to David being upset. But I believe the developer's idea is at this stage David is totally unaware of what has been going on with Anna and other people. All we get from David from glimpses is 'jealous husband' even if there was nothing going on and Anna was behaving herself as a loyal wife.

To your point "As this sets up a high anticipation of Anna's sexy scenes" more work could have been done. Several factors would have made for a better set up for the 'naughty' later on in the release. Anna is fully aware of the photos she had sent, and it should have been in the back of her mind, especially when David hadn't yet arrived. Anna could have and should have been in some sort of emotional turmoil of distress throughout Chris and Anna's private conversation. I would like to think of it as if a wolf having a conversation with the sheep--awkwardness, fear of the unknown, unease, heighten senses and maybe thrill and excitement. Second, Anna is well aware of Chris' interest in her and with his newfound knowledge of her body, Anna would be aware he would be checking her out even more closely. Lastly, Chris has proven he would pull some stunt from past encounters... an excited and jittery Anna KNOWING something was going to happen and then when it did happen would have made Chris' first grope of Anna all the better.

This is what I assumed is 50% of the reason to have a David playthrough for the game.
Then Anna's playthrough showing us everything. There was nothing of that. Seemed lazy with the writing. I think it comes down to the complexity of the plot and story. So many factors are in play just with the dinner party, it could almost have been the entire release in itself. Now it's just me but I wouldn't have had a shower scene 2.0. I would have broken down the sex scenes in two parts. Part one would have more action taken place before David coming home. Chris coming up behind Anna and starting with just some gentle touching of her hips talking seductively with a stunned and thrilled Anna just dumbly standing there. Then have Chris starting to kiss Anna's neck and collar bone changing the more harmless touches to getting more provocative till he flips up Anna's top to grope her breast leading to Chris lowering a hand to her groin. Anna would eventually come to her sense with the fear of David coming home and that things were getting too far out of hand... later on a guilty Anna would be in bed (would use flash back of Chris' seduction and inner monologue to explain Anna's feelings and inner emotional turmoil).

Second part would have Anna coming out of the shower in the morning with naked Chris (covered only in a towel) having already showered in the spare bathroom standing in her bedroom. More seductive talk with Chris walking up to Anna pinning her against the wall and then convince Anna to jerk him off with both Chris and Anna staring into each other's eyes. Eventually Chris would remove Anna's towel and start kissing Anna's neck and ears while groping her with the scene ending when Chris's hand finds Anna's naked pussy.

Easily could have had David coming home seeing Anna and Chris in the kitchen. Anna's top slightly moved or hair a bit messy. Presumably as they finish straightening up their clothes just before David walks in. Then showing the full scene with Anna later. Its sets up the anticipation so much more. These foreshadowing scenes need to happen in his playthrough as Davids scenes are more story driven and have almost no sexual content. 4 1/2 months for that update and couldn't setup a small scene that fuels the lewd act. Feels lazy and a missed opportunity, especially when there is basically nothing else for even a tease scene in the update until the end. The problem is David is stuck in some sort of limbo status with Anna and their relationship. But yes, having David notice a strange behaving Anna would have built up to a better 'shower scene'. At best Anna would be a little flustered after having been groped and having the potential of being 'caught' in the act would have been a nice touch
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:eek::ROFLMAO:You demand seduction from Chris. Anna will forget. Chris is a macho type, he only wants to satisfy his sexual drive, nothing more. He sees a woman sticking her ass out and grabs her. Don't expect any kisses from Chris, Anna will get them from Jake(y):)
 
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Sadowdark said:
After all, naive idiot David threw away his father Daren's good advice not to trust a fake friend. What David does, of course, informs his fake friend that he intends to hire a private detective. This terrifies Chris and he immediately tries to dissuade David from this idea.
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Thats why I think dad is going to investigate in the shadows. He knows his son trust people to easy. Dad pointed out all the people who could cause this problem but he didn't believe it but dad has his suspicion.
 
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in regards to an earlier post regarding David telling Chris about hiring a PI, he doesn't dismiss the idea. he wonders why Chris is behaving strangely and this along with Darren's advice is making David start to questing Chris' motivations. he knows Chris is not really helping him and this will lead to David finding out that Chris is trying to fuck his wife..and then the shit will hit the fan. i am only playing 2 routes now. save the marriage and Anna will cheat only with Jake since she sees him differently than before and she still sees Chris as a fake friend to David trying to get in her pants. but she keeps rejecting him and it makes me laugh my ass off. i really hate Chris and he will never get with Anna as long as the choices i made don't get changed by Mr. P. #DEATHTOCHRIS
 
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robrize2169 said:
in regards to an earlier post regarding David telling Chris about hiring a PI, he doesn't dismiss the idea. he wonders why Chris is behaving strangely and this along with Darren's advice is making David start to questing Chris' motivations. he knows Chris is not really helping him and this will lead to David finding out that Chris is trying to fuck his wife..and then the shit will hit the fan. i am only playing 2 routes now. save the marriage and Anna will cheat only with Jake since she sees him differently than before and she still sees Chris as a fake friend to David trying to get in her pants. but she keeps rejecting him and it makes me laugh my ass off. i really hate Chris and he will never get with Anna as long as the choices i made don't get changed by Mr. P. #DEATHTOCHRIS
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lol sounds exactly like mine:
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I only wish the game reflected this kind of path more in dialogue - it's pretty obvious where it's trying to steer you.... I mean she doesnt do anything with them, but her rejections of Chris or Marvin definitely aren't harsh enough...and they come up repeatedly, again and again.

The end of game dinner convo with Chris also sounded super sketch, already the David-Chris relationship is testing the bounds of believability.... but he was particularly sus during that; to which any normal guy would have thoughts- you'd expect to be him clearly on his side...
Sadowdark said:
:eek::ROFLMAO:You demand seduction from Chris. Anna will forget. Chris is a macho type, he only wants to satisfy his sexual drive, nothing more. He sees a woman sticking her ass out and grabs her. Don't expect any kisses from Chris, Anna will get them from Jake(y):)
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Chris is even worse than that, he's a wannabe macho type so he overcompensates.
Sadowdark said:
After all, naive idiot David threw away his father Daren's good advice not to trust a fake friend. What David does, of course, informs his fake friend that he intends to hire a private detective. This terrifies Chris and he immediately tries to dissuade David from this idea.
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I did like the inclusion of Daren though - at least someone talking sense to David now, instead of this "obvious to the world and all the people doing him wrong", he now has an ally in his corner.
 
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Davidleene said:
Whoever knows this game well, what can we expect in the next update? Can we expect Chris again? Or Jake development?


What I don't understand is how will Anna have sex with jake? Nothing is explained well,
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1.Dinner Anna with the old fox Stormeberg(Grant)

2. Business trip Anna and the penguin (Hank)

3.Drunken weekend where Kendra gets Anna drunk with wine

4. Meeting of Anna and the fake doctor She makes a cobra to convey Anna's lies about David or find out what is wrong with David and Anna's relationship

5. Anna will wear a more daring outfit to work (patrons voted on what Anna should show her breasts or legs, her boobs won). It will probably be possible to unbutton her blouse to see Anna's breasts)

6.:unsure: I don't know, but Anna and Jake are going to the store to buy underwear for Jake's non-existent girlfriend.

:unsure:Chris will likely not appear in this update coming now. That's all we know for now
 
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Jake’s route is definitely my favorite right now.

Yeah, it’s hot to see Chris corrupt Anna…

But it’s even hotter to see Anna being attracted to a guy who she knows is going to bang her brains out: Jake.

As for the old guys—meh. Netorare to me is all about jealousy, and how could I be jealous of an old, ugly, fat dude who can only get with a beautiful woman by forcing them? But for those with that fetish I think the story does well.
 
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Adhdclassic

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Sadowdark said:
You meant to say there was supposed to be a choice here.Anyway, I think I have a similar choice at the beginning of Ch2
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during the lunch with her boss there was a choice to accept or decline. when he came in the house he saw her outfit and he could choose to compliment the outfit forgot what the other option was. I'm doing a quick playthrough to make sure Im correct. but i remember because she got tight in both situations.
 
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