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DarthSpitz717

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If Mr_Palmer Is taking his time to releasewhich I understand atleast release a teaser or 2 to get your audience excited even if he takes additional 3 months which I have no problem but release something every 2 weeks to get us excited.

I say this fully understanding how difficult it is to render.

Most of yall would agree with me on this
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Problem with 'teasers' especially the ones out now, most people can accurately guess what's going on. A steamier teaser likley would give something away-- like tearing a piece of a Christmas present off and knowing pretty much what is inside
 
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And the argument with David might be because of she might have arrived late from the office after shopping for Jake...So David might have said something about taking care of their daughter plus he already hate Jake so he will argue anyways. That might piss her off.
especially if she lets it slip that she just modeled lingerie for Jake, or David takes her phone and finds what she has been doing with Chris! lots of ways that late night scene with David can shake out or go sideways.
 

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Wonder if mom has something to do with the argument. She came after while they were in the shower. She noticed Chris and Anna wet and later said something to David and David thought back to his father's words. If you think about it if Anna was in control of the situation she would not look sad and be leaving she would have made David leave. Just a assumption from that one Pic.
 

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It’s gonna be 100% about Anna’s dress. There’s no way Anna will tell David she went lingerie shopping with Jake.
also if Anna knows that her mom saw her and Chris coming out, no way she would be relaxed at her office as shown in the sneakpeeks.
It’s all going to be about Anna frustrated with David’s comments and part guilt for handjob to Chris and possibly trying lingerie for Jake.
 
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Only thing I would want in the coming update is if there’s a sex scene of any kind with Chris, don’t make it cause Anna was drunk. I want to see Anna doing it cause she wanted to and not because alcohol blocked her inhibitions. It’ll be wild to see Anna in complete control during the scene.
 

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Aah Sophia TV took the content from this forum for sneak peek. Anyways here's the sneak peek:
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There's one more possibility that it might be Jake's house and she's smiling because of the lingerie show.
After a fight with her husband about a new outfit for work, she runs out of the house angry and sad. :unsure:She can meet fake rehabilitation doctor Rob Cobra. And he can comfort her, and then they talk about David, and Rob Cobra tells some lies about David.
 

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After a fight with her husband about a new outfit for work, she runs out of the house angry and sad. :unsure:She can meet fake rehabilitation doctor Rob Cobra. And he can comfort her, and then they talk about David, and Rob Cobra tells some lies about David.
I was thinking same thing rob or Chris....she don't have to go to rehabilitation...rob might see her upset and he invite her for massage,.....but I still feel if she's out alone she will meet Chris somehow like she's angry so she go out to the bar to chill. Chris will not have to make excuse to stay at Ana's home ...I was guessing that previously that Chris might make some excuse to stay at David house...but we see Ana getting out of the house so she might meet rob or go out for a drink at bar where she meet Chris.
 
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Sadowdark

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this most peak i think be wild not cause he old perverts even i like what marvin also do
but for game and what he do in restaurant think here he may make move
pic look he walk her do something
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:unsure:There will probably be a choice here (the same as when stopping Jack at Anna's office) to stop the penguin. Well, it's smart to explain something to her under the pretext. To have a better view of Anna's shape in the new outfit, which she chose herself and no one told her to dress like that, except Kendra and Penguin:eek::ROFLMAO:.
 

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maybe this developer plan is misleading what we expected
chris and marvin not show up as teas peak make you think this update there no role for them or any space in story this update
but he mention something spoiler he said
not everyone will get sex in next update mean is there is one will ?
and chris if favorite one he mention it for reason
and last msg he talk about hank
so MR palmer misleading our imagination or just exciting no reason for just future not now

Eventually, old Fish will come to her, pretending to fix the air conditioning in the office. Rob will be there too. Anna will go talk to him. I don't know if when she runs out after the fight with David, she won't meet him in front of her house. The creator is trolling us, spoiler, there will be no sex in this update, only teasing . It is not known in what form Chris will appear, I don't count on seeing him as a character, maybe (phone, text), because someone will tell the creator that he only gives a favorite character, and not others.
 
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Adhdclassic

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Think Rob might end up being Chris achilles heel. Both want the same thing wouldn't be surprised down the road he has a hand in the fate of Chris.
 
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Sadowdark

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especially if she lets it slip that she just modeled lingerie for Jake, or David takes her phone and finds what she has been doing with Chris! lots of ways that late night scene with David can shake out or go sideways.
Forget about Anna's phone. She deletes all calls and text messages at the end always, unless she forgot to delete something, then there is a chance.
 

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Forget about Anna's phone. She deletes all calls and text messages at the end always, unless she forgot to delete something, then there is a chance.
Think there is a higher potential David will see Chris phone than Annas. They hanging out drinking Chris shit i left my phone let me borrow your phone. Chris drunk gives it over as david was about to dial a message from Anna and a nude selfie pops up.
 

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Eventually, old Fish will come to her, pretending to fix the air conditioning in the office. Rob will be there too. Anna will go talk to him. I don't know if when she runs out after the fight with David, she won't meet him in front of her house. The creator is trolling us, spoiler, there will be no sex in this update, only banter. It is not known in what form Chris will appear, I don't count on seeing him as a character, maybe (phone, text), because someone will tell the creator that he only gives a favorite character, and not others.
Of course chris will text or try sexting with her, he can’t go a day without stalking her on her phone. Would be funny if she texted him back
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I was thinking same thing rob or Chris....she don't have to go to rehabilitation...rob might see her upset and he invite her for massage,.....but I still feel if she's out alone she will meet Chris somehow like she's angry so she go out to the bar to chill. Chris will not have to make excuse to stay at Ana's home ...I was guessing that previously that Chris might make some excuse to stay at David house...but we see Ana getting out of the house so she might meet rob or go out for a drink at bar where she meet Chris.
:unsure:She won't meet a false friend in this update in a non-physical form. Because someone will say that the creator favors the same character all the time and others are omitted. Not after what they did together in the shower. She will suggest time to think. (Quoting the movies I'll call you later ok:eek::ROFLMAO:)
 

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Part three

Everything Anna knew about Marvin was nothing more than lies made up by him and Keandra. In fact, he had never been married. He had never even had a girlfriend until now. It wasn't just because he was an ugly man. His soul was as vile as his appearance. He was a sneaky, ignorant, corrupt scumbag who had no respect for anything. If he came across a flower on his way, he would crush it instead of going around it. Knowing him even a little was enough to hate him, probably even his mother didn't have any like for him. Moreover, he was a pervert. He spent most of his free time watching porn and having endless masturbation sessions. The real few sexual experiences he had were with cheap, old, ugly whores. Normally, a flawless beauty like Anna wouldn't waste even a second of her time for him. But an extraordinary, deceitful and mysterious web of events had brought them to this point.

The old bastard, who had been dreaming of this moment for long years, wasted no time and grabbed his cock with one hand and aligned it with the entrance to her channel. The young blonde panicked as she felt the spongy, mushroom-shaped huge head of his cock pressing against her pussy lips. But before she could react, he suddenly violently thrust his hairy hips forward and impaled his thick cock into her tight pussy with one thrust. The big head of it disappeared into her in a moment. Anna wasn't ready for this yet, her piercing blue eyes opened wide and she let out a long scream.

"ARRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH"

Then he immediately grasped her waist tightly with both hands and began to drive his dick deep inside her without any hesitation. She could feeling the hard knots of his overly gnarled cock rubbing roughly against the walls of her pussy stretched to its limits.

"ARGGGHHHH!.... MARVIN! WAİT! WAIT!.... ARGGGGHHHHH!" She barely called out to him between her screams.

With ignored about her demand, he continued to fill her until he was resting his limp hairy crotch against her firm ass cheeks. As finally he buried his dick to the hilt in her, her pussy lips clamped tightyly on the base of his cock like a vice. They cried out loudly together, the old pervert with pleasure, while the young blonde with shock.

"ARRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH"

"OHHHHHHHHHHHH"

She'd never felt this full before. David's cock was an average thickness. It couldn't compare to the monster filling her right now. Without waiting for her recover, he started pulling his dick out of her by flexing her pussy lips outwards. When he had pulled out half of it, he suddenly stuffed it all back into her in one powerful thrust. Then the same way again and again and again and again... It was obvious that she was having a hard time handling him, but the old pervert didn't care. He was shaking her world to its foundations every time by burying his dick up to his balls in her her impossible tightness.

"ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH"

Marvin built up a rhythm with deep and hard thrusts that made her scream each time. She tried to stand but the old bastard quickly placed one hand on her back forcing her to stay down on the counter. She desperately reached forward with right arm and grasped the iron rod of the faucet tightly as if her life depended on it. She had her other hand balled into a tight fist on the counter. She couldn't suppress her screams as he continued to stuff her again and again.

"ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH"

Then he gathered the fabric of her t-shirt in his palm, and used it as leverage, increasing his speed. As he was still holding her waist tightly with his other hand he was fucking her by blowing his large hips violently back and forth. Their flesh waved together as his loose hairy crotch made a sharp slapping sound each time it hit her firm ass cheeks. Anna couldn't stand still now. She placed her hands on the counter for support and raised and lowered her upper body repeatedly, as if doing push-ups. The old bastard suddenly reached forward and firmly grabbed the base of her ponytail with his right hand and pulled hard, forcing her to upright. Then he quickly wrapped his left arm around both arms from her behind and started fucking her standing up. Because Anna was at least an inch and a half taller than him, he was standing on his tiptoes. Even this position could not slow down his pace. His huge hairy flaccid sack was slapping the back of her legs over and over again. He continued to pull her hair hard until the back of her head rested on his left shoulder. Her scalp was stinging from his tight grip. Deep wrinkles formed on her normally smooth forehead as she grimacing. As she was howled towards the ceiling, revealed snow-white teeth that sparkled like pearls,

"UUUUGGGHHHHHH... UUUUGGGGHHHHHH... UUUUGGGGHHHHHH

After six-seven minutes, her tight pussy had adapted well to his huge tool. The pleasure was shocking. While still holding her hair tightly with one hand, he released her arms and hastily gethared her t-shirt, the straps of which had already slipped off her shoulders, towards her waist. He grabbed her now completely naked left breast with hairy hand and squeezed it hard without ever letting go. Her firm flesh was jutting out between his thick fingers. Anna reached left arm behind her and placed hand on his protruding beer stomach, hoping to gain some control over his thrusts. She instinctive gathered the fabric of his sweat-soaked shirt in her palm and squeezed it tightly. Her movement caused the buttons of his shirt to break off, revealing a large portion of his hairy belly. His reaction was to tighten his grip on her breast and hair and fuck her even harder.

"ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH”

He locked his mouth on her neck again and began sucking and nibbling roughly. Soon red marks started to appear all over her neck as his stinky drool ran down her tanned skin. But she wasn't in a position to worry about that. All she could focus on was the thick, his gnarly big cock that was turning her inside out. Extremely overwhelmed, the young blonde was shaking her head wildly from side to side, even though she was gripping her hair tightly by him. So much so that hair, once tied into a tight ponytail, began to loosen in his hairy hand. She braced her elbows and forearms firmly on the counter to support herself when Marvin roughly pushed her from behind and bent her over again. She was arched her back as far towards him as possible like a strung bow, the old pervert could count every vertebra in her spinal cord. The heavy effect he had on her made him even hornier. He increased his speed even more while holding her waist tightly with both hands. Upper of her fit body was jolting violently from the solid blows she received from behind and her big firm breasts were swaying back and forth. His hairly, saggy groin and her flawles firm ass-cheeks were starting to blush from being slammed together non-stop.
Now this balding ignorant asshole, older than her father, was showing her the difference between the make love and being fucked. As the two howled together, sharp slaps echoed repeatedly in the kitchen.

"ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH... ARRRGGGGHHHHHH"

Having been getting the fuck of her life for twenty minutes, Anna knew that the orgasm that was building inside her would be unlike anything she had ever experienced before. Suddenly, her screams stopped and her whole body began to tremble from head to toe. Realizing what was coming, the sneaky bastard buried his dick to the hilt in her and stayed there. Then he grabbed her ponytail and shoulder and forced her to stand up until her back rest to his chest again. A significant part of the front of his shapeless body was stuck to the back of her fit body. His sticky sweat was oozing thickly through the forest of hair on his flaccid chest, smearing her flawless skin.

Her mouth still was wide open, but her loudly screams had been replaced by a silent scream. He let go of her hair and shoulder grabbing her breasts tightly and pulled her even more towards him. He imprisoned her completely with tight embrace. Her already tight pussy latched onto the base of his cock to death. But even that couldn't stop him, as the old bastard rose up on his toes, gaining extra depth inside her until his massive balls were crushed behind her legs. He started flexing his dick inside her engorged pussy. A guttural scream ripped from the top of the lungs of the young blonde, who had been silent for a while.

"OHHHHHH MYYYYYY GODDDDDDD!!! ARRRRGGGGHHHHHHH!!!"

With that, her bodily fluids began to squirt onto the base of his cock and his crotch as her whole body was shuddering. Her spasms were so intense that he held her breasts tighter than ever to keep her violently convulsing body under control. She couldn't suppress her screams.

"AARRRGGGGHHHHHH...UNNNNGGGHHHHH....AARRRGGGGHHHHH"

Her tight pussy was clenching around the base of his dick to the death while it trying to milk the giant load in his balls by twitching repeatedly. However, it effort was in vain, the old bastard wasn't even close to cumming. She didn't know what she was getting into. She was trapped in his tight hugged as she went wild with a devastating orgasm. She needed some space but the old pervert continued to embrace her tightly from behind, without taking his dick out of her even an inch. Her bodily fluids soaked his massive balls, groin, inner thighs, and pants around his ankles by gushing out one after another.

"AARRRGGGGHHHHHH...UNNNNGGGHHHHH....AARRRGGGGHHHHH"

Extremely overwhelmed, the young blonde lifted one foot off the ground and started stomping while shaking her head wildly from side to side. He was now having a hard time keeping her under control. The two of them began to stumble backwards together, but they nearly fell as his feet caught on his pants that were around his ankles. At the last moment he managed to guide her to the refrigerator and pin her against it. While all this was happening, he didn't pull his cock even an inch, it up to the hilt was still inside her tight pussy. Anna pressed her palms on its gray surface whle groaning deeply.

As Marvin pressed her back with one hand, with his other hand he ripped off the remaining buttons of his sweaty shirt. So his loose chest and protruding beer belly, covered in dense curly black hair, were fully exposed. As soon as her crazy orgasm, which had been going on for long minutes, finally started to subside, he hurriedly started working his dick in and out of her pussy again. The old pervert wasn't giving her any chance to collect herself. Her deep moans turned into screams again.

"AHHHHHH!.... OHHHHHH!... AHHHHHHH!

He grabbed her ponytail in his sweaty palm and increased his speed. Soon the sharp slapping sounds began to echo again. Driven crazy Anna turned her right hand into a tight fist and started beating the refrigerator. The heavly effect he was having on the young blonde was driving him crazy. He continued to grabbed her by her hair by resting his right forearm and elbow on her back, while his other hand grasped her T-shirt and skirt gethared around her waist and he started fucking her like a man possessed. As he increased his speed even more, his cock and hairy wide hips blured. Unable to hold on any longer, the young blonde's knees began to buckle, but the old pervert used the tight grip on her hair to force her to stand upright.

His pounces were so hard that the sound of things being scattering and falling over could be heard inside the shaking refrigerator. There was complete chaos in the kitchen.

"AARRRGGGGHHHHHH...UNNNNGGGHHHHH....AARRRGGGGHHHHH"

Never slowing down his pace, he fucked her like this for another about twenty minutes. Having never experienced anything like this before, Anna's mind was numb in a fog of pleasure and lust. Now the old pervert too was very close to his first orgasm. He felt his swolled balls overflow with the heavy essance drawn from the farthest corners of her body. With one last powerful thrust he rammed his cock to the hilt into her tight pussy and stayed there. Anna panicked when she felt his thick cock twitch violently deep inside her. She knew what was coming, but she didn't have the strength to object. She could only moan.

"ARRGHHHHH... UUGGHHHH... UNGHHHHH"

The old pervert held her one shoulder and hair tightly with both hands and started to squirt his heavy load from the tip of his dick, roaring like a wild animal.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!"

His wildness hit her hard again. She was squirting all over his cock and hairy balls as he shoted huge masses of his semen deep inside her, one after another. As two howled together, he put his ugly face in her hair and rested forehad on the back of her head.

"UNNNNGGGHHHHH... .UNNNNGGGHHHHH... .UNNNNGGGHHHHH..."

Both of their bodies were shaking from head to toe, as if they had been struck by a strong electric current. Every muscle in his hairy loose ass contracted and relaxed over and over again as he continued to squirt inside her. The pressure of his first five squirts was incredible, his sperms was jerking his thick shaft violently as it passed through his pee hole. Anna could feel the boiling semen hitting hard against her pussy walls, one after another, churning and bubbling along her channel, reaching deeper and deeper. The pleasure was sensational and overwhelming, their legs began to bend at the knees and they squatted a little in sync. She leaned one cheek on the surface of the refrigerator and placed her hands both of side her head. Marvin leaned further into her back and placed his chin on her shoulder as he kept pumping his endless cum inside her. He was filled her to the brim. Huge globs of his dense cum overflowing from her pussy stretched to its limits were slowly rolling down the insides of her legs. Eventually the spurts stopped, but a strong stream of semen was still flowing into her from his pee hole. Their intertwined bodies were still writhing against each other while two moaning deeply. It took long minutes for him orgasm to subside. Finally, when his balls were completely dry, he slowly pulled his dick out of her. Thus, another giant pile of semen began to leak from the entrance of the young blonde's pussy. It was so dense that it longer about one and a half feet without breaking, like melted cheese in the area between her legs, and hung there before reaching the ground.

Anna seemed to be in some kind of trance. She was still shaking while she trying to catch her breath. David and her exes were the type who were head over heels in love with her and always treated her very nice. Until now. Marvin was a corrupt, hedonistic scumbag who had no respect for anything. He was just basically human. There was no trace of love, respect or empathy in his actions. All The old pervert thought about was fucking and and he was fuck the perfect 27 year old blonde so badly for about forty minutes.

Anna sat up with difficulty, out of breath. Her mind was still blurry. She started only walking slowly, not knowing why or where she was going. After taking a few steps, the thick rope of sperm hanging between her legs swayed and stuck to the inside of her left leg. She was having difficulty standing upright on her shaking legs. She stopped and placed one hand on the kitchen counter for support. She still never looked at Marvin. She wasn't ready to face him yet.
Marvin was very thirsty because of his superhuman performance. He grabbed an upturned beer can from the refrigerator, which was in disarray from their hard fucks. He drank it all in one gulp without taking his eyes off her for a moment. Her hair, which was once in a tight ponytail, was now completely undone and disheveled. Tanned skin of her back, wet with mix of their sweats, was shining. Her skirt and t-shirt were still bunched up around her waist and her firm ass-cheeks were flushed. As he watched her, he felt his balls fill with cum again. He couldn't wait to bury his gnarled huge cock, which showed no signs of softening, back into her tight pussy. He was really, really obsessed with her. He got rid of his trousers, which were still around his ankles, and quickly took off his sweaty shirt, the buttons of which were already broken. He was left completely naked with only his smelly, hole, black socks on. The view was a complete disaster.

He gritted his crooked yellow teeth as he looked at the young blonde. He wouldn't give her time to recover. He approached her from behind, sneakly, like a hyena preparing to tear apart its exhausted prey. He suddenly grabbed her arms tightly from behind and guided her towards the kitchen door. She realized what was going to happen when the old bastard's swinging hard dick slammed into her ass a few times as she walked right in front of him. There would be no break, the second round was starting.
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we want more of anna by fan writer make fan story
hoop writer make more chapter of anna with marvin or chris
 

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:unsure:She won't meet a false friend in this update in a non-physical form. Because someone will say that the creator favors the same character all the time and others are omitted. Not after what they did together in the shower. She will suggest time to think. (Quoting the movies I'll call you later ok:eek::ROFLMAO:)
MP already said Chris will win Ana in this update too... scene has already been created.... he's just working on 5% of faithful path to reject hank or any other character approach storyline..
 
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maybe this developer plan is misleading what we expected
chris and marvin not show up as teas peak make you think this update there no role for them or any space in story this update
but he mention something spoiler he said
not everyone will get sex in next update mean is there is one will ?
and chris if favorite one he mention it for reason
and last msg he talk about hank
so MR palmer misleading our imagination or just exciting no reason for just future not now
criss zzz, the most virgo of all characters
 

JRU2356

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MP already said Chris will win Ana in this update too... scene has already been created.... he's just working on 5% of faithful path to reject hank or any other character approach storyline..
I only came across the msg where MP said Chris will crawl back in this update and that Anna will not have sex with everyone. Haven’t came across Chris getting Anna though.
 
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