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cyberSpacePirat,
A week before this update, almost everyone complained that corruption is too slow and that it will take a year or two before some sexy scene happens. And now the majority complains that corruption is too fast.
Oh? Perhaps those "too fast" concerns come from another forum... biggest complaints I've noticed was the length of time it was taking between updates and/or no indications just when things would be done. Regardless, the developer has made it clear from the beginning things gets done on his time scale with real life issues affecting production. More to the point MP has said he has to get things just right in his mind and how he wants to present the content.
The truth is somewhere in between. Mr. Palmer noticed that the number of patrons was decreasing, so he sped up the story a little bit, so that the first sexy scenes would appear. Who wants to play a porn game where there is no sex? From what I'm reading now, mr.Palmer would like to slow it down a bit and reduce it to teasing.
Is it your interpreting his intent or have you seen some information some of us don't have access to? Going off chapters 1-to-3, it's pretty clear MP gives us the road map and motivations of his characters and continues to expand little bits of background information. The pacing seems natural and logical, especially with Chris. Now to be fair there are some issues I have in the story--the main one is how Chris seduces Anna without trying to kiss or nibble on Anna to get her aroused. It doesn't seem plausible that Chris can get all the treats without working for them.
Some scenes are well done, but some are not. The scene with Anna and those two in the office looks more like something Stacy would do in The Office Wife.
It's just a guess, but the Timothy/Dale scene had a point to it rather than just some random event. I suspect its MP's showing us just how lusty Anna is, even with basically strangers. I'd like to think of it as foundation setting for what happens with the main characters to establish some plausibility.
And the scene with Marvin was a bit disappointing. I expected him to steal her bra and blackmail her: to let him suck her tits or to spend the rest of the day without a bra in a see-through blouse. Any option would be great.
Ok... how? So he walked in on Anna and... what?
See what others keep hitting on is Marvin installing cameras for a blackmail angle, and I keep saying getting naughty footage is pretty weak blackmail. Plus if anything Anna could turn it around and have those involved arrested. Blackmail is only as good as to how much damage it can do. Thing is even if Marvin gets compromising footage, it just might upset him if it's something like Jake and Anna getting it on in private. Using it to threaten Anna to show it to her David is pretty weak since she almost already has one foot out the door.
Thing about the Marvin/Anna scene and her reactions has set up a plot hole. How does MP revive the Anna/Marvin plot that remains plausible? And if I miss understand the timeline, next update is Marvin and Anna.
Looks like we'll have to wait for
Jess2001 to write a proper scene with Marvin and Anna.
Jess2001 save us from this teasing with a proper Marvin and Anna scene, preferably with a big gangbang finale. After that, I'll forget about this game for the next 2-3 years, until Mr. Palmer himself starts drawing juicy scenes.
Where I can agree with you somewhat is introducing us to Timothy and Dale does open the door for something steamier. But still it could be as I said that those two are a plot tool to better define Anna and her mindset.
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sslovoe,
funny all part we wait was no as we waiting for
jake not see her lingerie shop or spy or touch
I can only guess and from what has already been shown us, is that Jake isn't there yet. I think the whole shopping thing was to put into Anna's mind the possibilities about Jake. And damn it's such an old plot in games where they go shopping and something happens. So what was shown was "cock worship" {like in many games}, Jake has a snake hiding in his trousers. Honestly the whole Jake thing is a yawn fest because it's so damn predictable-- its like looking at a calendar and knowing when winter starts.
Now instead of Jake, I'd rather have had Office boy character... a kid right out of graduating high school working to save some money to go to college... an innocent and naive nerdy type that Anna takes a liking to and its Anna who likes him and teases him accidently trapping herself in a relationship. But that is just me and some half-baked idea.
marvin part not as we think
Marvin has always been that "yah, but" plausibility character when it comes to a relationship with Anna.
dal and tim is my best not expected see and i like this add
We have really no idea if we are going to see those two again but it was a welcome surprise
marvin can make him do lot thing exciting open story action
but every time marvin show up is disappoint
first when pool this part have to be swimming and he can grope her under water>>> pool no swim
when go her office only part she was top off show boobs he act like sorry >>> after all touch her body he not do anything
Still all plausibility problems. For a 50sih old fossil, the guy looks like he's not far off from having his dirt nap. Hank at least has a direct path when it comes to pathetic old men chasing Anna.
next update with marvin
if only do is install camera in office will be wast ... what use ??
EXACTLY!
there no action and not thing he can blackmail her with vedio and not fun we want anna let him make move with her fell horny
THANK YOU
he best character can create old pervert anna let him be bad
and he now less one do something
dal and tim is now my fav one wish there part she go there section for some fun
After the intro of Timothy and Dale, yes I would agree there should be a little more of them
