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jamdan

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So there is no way the corruption is too fast. Infact it's not fast at all. I guess the pace of the story towards corruption got reduced. The amount of time he took to tell the story of Chapter 1 and 2 without nudity, and Ana knowing all characters of the story in advance. I thought we would be seeing sex directly from chapter 3 onwards in corruption route. As MP said it's slow buildup not slow corruption....but I guess even after all the slow buildup with tease and groping, it has yet failed to reach to the sex point in part 3 and adopted the path of AWAM style too. The thing is we saw last 2 updates only with Chris as main event i.e. same character corruption route.
Slow buildup and slow corruption are effectively the same thing. She's not going to suddenly turn from a caring mom into a slut overnight either way though.

I think people are misinterpreting what this game is meant to be. It's not a sex game, it's a story game where Anna is meant to be slowly built-up (corrupted) into cheating on her husband. It's making steady progress towards that point, from the texting, groping and so on.

But most players do not care about that, they want, as you alluded to, lots of sex. This happens to basically every slower paced story game sooner or later. Be it FMC games of MMC games, people want sex over story almost every time, logic be damned.
 
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atrebor68

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Damn how I would like see her nipples spraying milk while some cock enters in her mummy-pussy !…
 

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Slow buildup and slow corruption are effectively the same thing. She's not going to suddenly turn from a caring mom into a slut overnight either way though.

I think people are misinterpreting what this game is meant to be. It's not a sex game, it's a story game where Anna is meant to be slowly built-up (corrupted) into cheating on her husband. It's making steady progress towards that point, from the texting, groping and so on.

But most players do not care about that, they want, as you alluded to, lots of sex. This happens to basically every slower paced story game sooner or later. Be it FMC games of MMC games, people want sex over story almost every time, logic be damned.
There's a huge difference between slow build up and slow corruption...slow build up means reaching to the story point where we see the difference in characteristics of MC based on choices right? Building the base story in different paths.....Part 1 and 2 are made to choose those path whether faithful/confused/corruption. That's known as slow buildup.

Based on the choice we made, Ana should act differently on different paths. So why not we expect sex in corrupt path? When the corruption path becomes slow corruption/stepwise corruption, then it's what I guess comes to your point. Here in this VN Confused path is same as corrupt path.

When MP said he needed time to buildup the base of the story, he meant to define FMC characteristics based on interaction with different antagonist to explain the relationship of MC with those antagonist whatever story he has in his mind.

But when you choose corrupt route for CH3, it should come as Ana getting naughty, seducing and cheat (And David also pissed out at Ana from his POV) as compared to confused path where Ana has feelings for David (where we can play by keeping David calm from David POV) but still her inner self wana enjoy sex. This is big difference where slow corruption lovers reject to understand. Here, output for both confused and corrupt path is almost same. What logic are you talking about? The logic is there for slow corruption lovers of what you like tease fest forever. Ana should remain in confusion even when she meet Chris for the 4th time even when she knows his intentions and feeling horny? That girl did not gave BJ to her own husband while she can do sex with him because of her background story...but now she gave it to chris before sex..is that logic?

I mean I can understand you might be slow burn lover...and I agree you want step wise corruption with story and dick touch with every antagonist before sex for logic..like confused path forever.....the same going for AWAM as Sophia want to measure dick from a teen to old men of her city before involving in real sexual activity via dick touch or HJ. That is not slow corruption my friend. And what is logic behind if Ana is horny, she should give handjob to others?? Just an example...Suppose you get horny, so you will masturbate or do sex with someone right?? Logically ..But what we are seeing is like you might just go and finger some girl and sleep...right?? what Ana /Sophia of AWAm are doing???... whenever they get wet and horny, they gives HJ/BJ to someone else...Even if you fight with your own partner, this is not logical from any sense...Same with AWAM, Sophia feels horny everytime....she go and give HJ to others....These actions doesn't make them slut for those who love this logic? That's what slut do....whether they're horny or not, they give HJ/BJ/sex to others.... not for their own sexual pleasure but for money....Here Ana/Sophia need sexual pleasure whoever they're comfortable with...but they are giving HJ/BJ to others as slut ......They're just doing it for free ...Instead of getting themselves sexually satisfied because they want it, they are giving sexual pleasure to others because guys wants it from them????Logic?? but offcourse if you wanna praise the way it was developed without logic then you can defend with all your points.

And final point is if a FMC or MMC do sex for their own pleasure.. they're called nymphomaniac...but if they do for other' pleasure then they're slut....here whatever action is shown in slow paced story, FMC do those tease fest for other person favours..so they're slut. I wanted them to develop where they go for it for their own pleasure if they're doing it for free until some dominating scenario or blackmail scenario. That is not defined as slut.
 
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A week before this update, almost everyone complained that corruption is too slow and that it will take a year or two before some sexy scene happens. And now the majority complains that corruption is too fast.
The truth is somewhere in between. Mr. Palmer noticed that the number of patrons was decreasing, so he sped up the story a little bit, so that the first sexy scenes would appear. Who wants to play a porn game where there is no sex? From what I'm reading now, mr.Palmer would like to slow it down a bit and reduce it to teasing.

Some scenes are well done, but some are not. The scene with Anna and those two in the office looks more like something Stacy would do in The Office Wife. And the scene with Marvin was a bit disappointing. I expected him to steal her bra and blackmail her: to let him suck her tits or to spend the rest of the day without a bra in a see-through blouse. Any option would be great.

Looks like we'll have to wait for Jess2001 to write a proper scene with Marvin and Anna.

Jess2001 save us from this teasing with a proper Marvin and Anna scene, preferably with a big gangbang finale. After that, I'll forget about this game for the next 2-3 years, until Mr. Palmer himself starts drawing juicy scenes.
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cyberSpacePirat,
A week before this update, almost everyone complained that corruption is too slow and that it will take a year or two before some sexy scene happens. And now the majority complains that corruption is too fast. Oh? Perhaps those "too fast" concerns come from another forum... biggest complaints I've noticed was the length of time it was taking between updates and/or no indications just when things would be done. Regardless, the developer has made it clear from the beginning things gets done on his time scale with real life issues affecting production. More to the point MP has said he has to get things just right in his mind and how he wants to present the content.

The truth is somewhere in between. Mr. Palmer noticed that the number of patrons was decreasing, so he sped up the story a little bit, so that the first sexy scenes would appear. Who wants to play a porn game where there is no sex? From what I'm reading now, mr.Palmer would like to slow it down a bit and reduce it to teasing. Is it your interpreting his intent or have you seen some information some of us don't have access to? Going off chapters 1-to-3, it's pretty clear MP gives us the road map and motivations of his characters and continues to expand little bits of background information. The pacing seems natural and logical, especially with Chris. Now to be fair there are some issues I have in the story--the main one is how Chris seduces Anna without trying to kiss or nibble on Anna to get her aroused. It doesn't seem plausible that Chris can get all the treats without working for them.

Some scenes are well done, but some are not. The scene with Anna and those two in the office looks more like something Stacy would do in The Office Wife. It's just a guess, but the Timothy/Dale scene had a point to it rather than just some random event. I suspect its MP's showing us just how lusty Anna is, even with basically strangers. I'd like to think of it as foundation setting for what happens with the main characters to establish some plausibility.

And the scene with Marvin was a bit disappointing. I expected him to steal her bra and blackmail her: to let him suck her tits or to spend the rest of the day without a bra in a see-through blouse. Any option would be great. Ok... how? So he walked in on Anna and... what?

See what others keep hitting on is Marvin installing cameras for a blackmail angle, and I keep saying getting naughty footage is pretty weak blackmail. Plus if anything Anna could turn it around and have those involved arrested. Blackmail is only as good as to how much damage it can do. Thing is even if Marvin gets compromising footage, it just might upset him if it's something like Jake and Anna getting it on in private. Using it to threaten Anna to show it to her David is pretty weak since she almost already has one foot out the door.

Thing about the Marvin/Anna scene and her reactions has set up a plot hole. How does MP revive the Anna/Marvin plot that remains plausible? And if I miss understand the timeline, next update is Marvin and Anna.


Looks like we'll have to wait for Jess2001 to write a proper scene with Marvin and Anna.

Jess2001 save us from this teasing with a proper Marvin and Anna scene, preferably with a big gangbang finale. After that, I'll forget about this game for the next 2-3 years, until Mr. Palmer himself starts drawing juicy scenes. Where I can agree with you somewhat is introducing us to Timothy and Dale does open the door for something steamier. But still it could be as I said that those two are a plot tool to better define Anna and her mindset.

funny all part we wait was no as we waiting for
jake not see her lingerie shop or spy or touch
marvin part not as we think
dal and tim is my best not expected see and i like this add

marvin can make him do lot thing exciting open story action
but every time marvin show up is disappoint
first when pool this part have to be swimming and he can grope her under water>>> pool no swim
when go her office only part she was top off show boobs he act like sorry >>> after all touch her body he not do anything

next update with marvin
if only do is install camera in office will be wast ... what use ??
there no action and not thing he can blackmail her with vedio and not fun we want anna let him make move with her fell horny

he best character can create old pervert anna let him be bad
and he now less one do something

dal and tim is now my fav one wish there part she go there section for some fun
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sslovoe,
funny all part we wait was no as we waiting for
jake not see her lingerie shop or spy or touch I can only guess and from what has already been shown us, is that Jake isn't there yet. I think the whole shopping thing was to put into Anna's mind the possibilities about Jake. And damn it's such an old plot in games where they go shopping and something happens. So what was shown was "cock worship" {like in many games}, Jake has a snake hiding in his trousers. Honestly the whole Jake thing is a yawn fest because it's so damn predictable-- its like looking at a calendar and knowing when winter starts.

Now instead of Jake, I'd rather have had Office boy character... a kid right out of graduating high school working to save some money to go to college... an innocent and naive nerdy type that Anna takes a liking to and its Anna who likes him and teases him accidently trapping herself in a relationship. But that is just me and some half-baked idea.



marvin part not as we think Marvin has always been that "yah, but" plausibility character when it comes to a relationship with Anna.
dal and tim is my best not expected see and i like this add We have really no idea if we are going to see those two again but it was a welcome surprise

marvin can make him do lot thing exciting open story action
but every time marvin show up is disappoint
first when pool this part have to be swimming and he can grope her under water>>> pool no swim
when go her office only part she was top off show boobs he act like sorry >>> after all touch her body he not do anything Still all plausibility problems. For a 50sih old fossil, the guy looks like he's not far off from having his dirt nap. Hank at least has a direct path when it comes to pathetic old men chasing Anna.

next update with marvin
if only do is install camera in office will be wast ... what use ?? EXACTLY!
there no action and not thing he can blackmail her with vedio and not fun we want anna let him make move with her fell horny THANK YOU:)

he best character can create old pervert anna let him be bad
and he now less one do something

dal and tim is now my fav one wish there part she go there section for some fun After the intro of Timothy and Dale, yes I would agree there should be a little more of them
 

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cyberSpacePirat,
A week before this update, almost everyone complained that corruption is too slow and that it will take a year or two before some sexy scene happens. And now the majority complains that corruption is too fast. Oh? Perhaps those "too fast" concerns come from another forum... biggest complaints I've noticed was the length of time it was taking between updates and/or no indications just when things would be done. Regardless, the developer has made it clear from the beginning things gets done on his time scale with real life issues affecting production. More to the point MP has said he has to get things just right in his mind and how he wants to present the content.

The truth is somewhere in between. Mr. Palmer noticed that the number of patrons was decreasing, so he sped up the story a little bit, so that the first sexy scenes would appear. Who wants to play a porn game where there is no sex? From what I'm reading now, mr.Palmer would like to slow it down a bit and reduce it to teasing. Is it your interpreting his intent or have you seen some information some of us don't have access to? Going off chapters 1-to-3, it's pretty clear MP gives us the road map and motivations of his characters and continues to expand little bits of background information. The pacing seems natural and logical, especially with Chris. Now to be fair there are some issues I have in the story--the main one is how Chris seduces Anna without trying to kiss or nibble on Anna to get her aroused. It doesn't seem plausible that Chris can get all the treats without working for them.

Some scenes are well done, but some are not. The scene with Anna and those two in the office looks more like something Stacy would do in The Office Wife. It's just a guess, but the Timothy/Dale scene had a point to it rather than just some random event. I suspect its MP's showing us just how lusty Anna is, even with basically strangers. I'd like to think of it as foundation setting for what happens with the main characters to establish some plausibility.

And the scene with Marvin was a bit disappointing. I expected him to steal her bra and blackmail her: to let him suck her tits or to spend the rest of the day without a bra in a see-through blouse. Any option would be great. Ok... how? So he walked in on Anna and... what?

See what others keep hitting on is Marvin installing cameras for a blackmail angle, and I keep saying getting naughty footage is pretty weak blackmail. Plus if anything Anna could turn it around and have those involved arrested. Blackmail is only as good as to how much damage it can do. Thing is even if Marvin gets compromising footage, it just might upset him if it's something like Jake and Anna getting it on in private. Using it to threaten Anna to show it to her David is pretty weak since she almost already has one foot out the door.

Thing about the Marvin/Anna scene and her reactions has set up a plot hole. How does MP revive the Anna/Marvin plot that remains plausible? And if I miss understand the timeline, next update is Marvin and Anna.


Looks like we'll have to wait for Jess2001 to write a proper scene with Marvin and Anna.

Jess2001 save us from this teasing with a proper Marvin and Anna scene, preferably with a big gangbang finale. After that, I'll forget about this game for the next 2-3 years, until Mr. Palmer himself starts drawing juicy scenes. Where I can agree with you somewhat is introducing us to Timothy and Dale does open the door for something steamier. But still it could be as I said that those two are a plot tool to better define Anna and her mindset.


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sslovoe,
funny all part we wait was no as we waiting for
jake not see her lingerie shop or spy or touch I can only guess and from what has already been shown us, is that Jake isn't there yet. I think the whole shopping thing was to put into Anna's mind the possibilities about Jake. And damn it's such an old plot in games where they go shopping and something happens. So what was shown was "cock worship" {like in many games}, Jake has a snake hiding in his trousers. Honestly the whole Jake thing is a yawn fest because it's so damn predictable-- its like looking at a calendar and knowing when winter starts.

Now instead of Jake, I'd rather have had Office boy character... a kid right out of graduating high school working to save some money to go to college... an innocent and naive nerdy type that Anna takes a liking to and its Anna who likes him and teases him accidently trapping herself in a relationship. But that is just me and some half-baked idea.



marvin part not as we think Marvin has always been that "yah, but" plausibility character when it comes to a relationship with Anna.
dal and tim is my best not expected see and i like this add We have really no idea if we are going to see those two again but it was a welcome surprise

marvin can make him do lot thing exciting open story action
but every time marvin show up is disappoint
first when pool this part have to be swimming and he can grope her under water>>> pool no swim
when go her office only part she was top off show boobs he act like sorry >>> after all touch her body he not do anything Still all plausibility problems. For a 50sih old fossil, the guy looks like he's not far off from having his dirt nap. Hank at least has a direct path when it comes to pathetic old men chasing Anna.

next update with marvin
if only do is install camera in office will be wast ... what use ?? EXACTLY!
there no action and not thing he can blackmail her with vedio and not fun we want anna let him make move with her fell horny THANK YOU:)

he best character can create old pervert anna let him be bad
and he now less one do something

dal and tim is now my fav one wish there part she go there section for some fun After the intro of Timothy and Dale, yes I would agree there should be a little more of them
Camera part I don't think it will be Marvin I think Kendra. She is the one that wants it setup. Think just my opinion she is planning for sex or a sex act in the room. that will be the blackmail point. Marvin as gross as it sounds I feel:sick:breastfeeding is on the way.
 

DarthSpitz717

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Camera part I don't think it will be Marvin I think Kendra. She is the one that wants it setup. Think just my opinion she is planning for sex or a sex act in the room. that will be the blackmail point. Marvin as gross as it sounds I feel:sick:breastfeeding is on the way.
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Regardless of who installs a camera, what point would it serve? At best any naughty of Anna with Hank or Jake (and if Marvin installs it would be aware of it so that doesn't work) Kendra could do with the footage is give it to David... like rubbing salt in a wound kind of spite. And even Kendra has to think regardless, David might forgive Anna.

Still no one can tell me just how affective sex blackmail is. It's the 21st century and office sex happens... it's a thing. Having office sex can only be an issue if some other aspect of it has a consequence. Like a lawyer involved with another lawyer where they are representing opposing sides in the same case.... or a lawyer is having sex with a witness in a legal action ... a judge and a lawyer appearing on a same case... whatever it is there has to be a conflict of interest that strikes a legal ethics and law.

And even if Kenda post it on a porn site like PornHub, it's not like Anna is the only naked woman on such a site. At most its embarrassing... and then there is Hank

Hank who rules the office can just fire people:

*he can fire Jake if he finds out Jake is making a play on Anna
*he can fire Kendra if he discovers she is behind any kind of plots against his favorite toy
*he can fire Marvin for... pick one there are plenty of reasons

Marvin does have the best path for some kind of kink so maybe sure, breast feeding
 

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Regardless of who installs a camera, what point would it serve? At best any naughty of Anna with Hank or Jake (and if Marvin installs it would be aware of it so that doesn't work) Kendra could do with the footage is give it to David... like rubbing salt in a wound kind of spite. And even Kendra has to think regardless, David might forgive Anna.

Still no one can tell me just how affective sex blackmail is. It's the 21st century and office sex happens... it's a thing. Having office sex can only be an issue if some other aspect of it has a consequence. Like a lawyer involved with another lawyer where they are representing opposing sides in the same case.... or a lawyer is having sex with a witness in a legal action ... a judge and a lawyer appearing on a same case... whatever it is there has to be a conflict of interest that strikes a legal ethics and law.

And even if Kenda post it on a porn site like PornHub, it's not like Anna is the only naked woman on such a site. At most its embarrassing... and then there is Hank

Hank who rules the office can just fire people:

*he can fire Jake if he finds out Jake is making a play on Anna
*he can fire Kendra if he discovers she is behind any kind of plots against his favorite toy
*he can fire Marvin for... pick one there are plenty of reasons

Marvin does have the best path for some kind of kink so maybe sure, breast feeding
I agree with a lot of the stuff you are saying but lets look at a few things.
Kendra can threaten her with it. Remember she wants to destroy her not just her marriage.
She can threaten to tell David, Anna would not want that. Let's be real she wouldn't tell David on her own she has proven it time and time again she thinks she can handle things. Kendra can have her have sex with people of her choosing. Kendra is not stable she would do things or have Anna do things that would humiliate her. She would hold it over her head till either she has had enough or someone comes to Anna rescue. You are looking at it through ethics and legality that's real world. But look at the game, boss and employees feeling up the LEAD lawyer another employee is trying to get her to look at his dick. That is a shady law firm rules do not apply. Putting on a website is a possibility too black out her face in the first video if she doesn't do what Kendra says she puts the video on without the blackout.
Now lets look at David, Kendra is well aware he would not tolerate or stay with his wife if he saw her getting plowed by a bunch of guys. He would take his daughter and drop Anna.
Hank could be her saving grace but even that would come with a price.
Marvin breastfeeding :sick:
 
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I agree with a lot of the stuff you are saying but lets look at a few things.
Kendra can threaten her with it. Remember she wants to destroy her not just her marriage.
She can threaten to tell David, Anna would not want that. Let's be real she wouldn't tell David on her own she has proven it time and time again she thinks she can handle things. Kendra can have her have sex with people of her choosing. Kendra is not stable she would do things or have Anna do things that would humiliate her. She would hold it over her head till either she has had enough or someone comes to Anna rescue. You are looking at it through ethics and legality that's real world. But look at the game, boss and employees feeling up the LEAD lawyer another employee is trying to get her to look at his dick. That is a shady law firm rules do not apply. Putting on a website is a possibility too black out her face in the first video if she doesn't do what Kendra says she puts the video on without the blackout.
Now lets look at David, Kendra is well aware he would not tolerate or stay with his wife if he saw her getting plowed by a bunch of guys. He would take his daughter and drop Anna.
Hank could be her saving grace but even that would come with a price.
Marvin breastfeeding :sick:
Anna cannot be blackmailed with security camera pictures because that person will be fired immediately. Camera spying is prohibited in every company, especially by using the company's resources.
The pictures from the camera could only serve to send it to David, to undermine the relationship between David and Anna.
 
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It's just a guess, but the Timothy/Dale scene had a point to it rather than just some random event. I suspect its MP's showing us just how lusty Anna is, even with basically strangers. I'd like to think of it as foundation setting for what happens with the main characters to establish some plausibility.

And the scene with Marvin was a bit disappointing. I expected him to steal her bra and blackmail her: to let him suck her tits or to spend the rest of the day without a bra in a see-through blouse. Any option would be great. Ok... how? So he walked in on Anna and... what?
Take the fucking bra that is laying on the table.


It would be desirable to find another hobby. You're shouting at everyone who thinks differently and this mountain of text does not serve anything, unless you're part of mrPalmer's team, so you have to defend him at every turn. I didn't say that corruption became too fast for me, but some other people said that, see 15-20 pages back.

The scene with those two monkeys in the office is unnecessary. Women don't work that way. They don't suddenly become promiscuous with everyone. At first, they cheat with one character, and only then they try something more. And it's one thing to seduce someone (by shaking her ass), and it's another to let them grab your ass (why not let them grab her tits). Until someone fucks her (Chris, Hank, or whoever) it's too soon to expect her to be promiscuous with everyone.

The only reason why those two monkeys were inserted is to dilute/extend the story. For the same reason, all the other characters not in the original stories were included. I wouldn't mind if it had a normal sequel release cycle, but at this rate, it will come to 2 releases a year, which is too much.
 
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Anna cannot be blackmailed with security camera pictures because that person will be fired immediately. Camera spying is prohibited in every company, especially by using the company's resources.
The pictures from the camera could only serve to send it to David, to undermine the relationship between David and Anna.
that is real world law. APM law you can sexually harass someone no problem. boss can slap your ass and tell you to dress sexy. coworkers can grab your ass no problem. in the real world camera recording for blackmail purpose is a crime so is sexual harrasment real world law does not apply.
 
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