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andromeda421

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Jan 20, 2022
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Hi guys. You must have noticed that there is no blackmail in the version I wrote. This story is about Anna's mental transformation at a time when her life was turned upside down. The feeling of revenge she felt for David's betrayal and Keandra's malicious encouragement bring out a dark side that is already in her nature. This situation unexpectedly creates a chance for the old fish who is normally way out of her league. And the old pervert who had been dying for such an opportunity all his life, uses some of his congenital physical and hormonal abnormalities to gives the hot lawyer experience physical and mental pleasures beyond her belief. As a result, no matter how hard Anna tries to resist, she completely surrenders to the dark impulses that are repressed somewhere inside her. So there is no blackmail or coercion. There is just a relentless war between the two of them. Dark-Light, Virtue-Corruption, Quality-Sleazy, Wisdom - Ignorance, Beauty-Ugliness...
I'm writing a new chapter but I'm undecided about publishing. This may seem a bit extreme for some types. :)
Hi, I never read your stories. Could you please tell me where to find them?
 

CorruptedMindz

New Member
Aug 4, 2023
6
6
2 primaries willing to watch.
Anna and Chris. Only reason cause I want to see Chris ass kicked.
Jake and Anna. Will most likely be intense alot of piston action.
Do not want to see any side characters.
Do not want to see old people and fat Grimace people.
The stay together path (so called faithful) only want to see the story aspect.
if you want jake and anna, just read the full story on literotica.
 

andromeda421

Newbie
Jan 20, 2022
22
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2 primaries willing to watch.
Anna and Chris. Only reason cause I want to see Chris ass kicked.
Jake and Anna. Will most likely be intense alot of piston action.
Do not want to see any side characters.
Do not want to see old people and fat Grimace people.
The stay together path (so called faithful) only want to see the story aspect.
What about Marvin and Anna? Twist: he could be the father of her second son
 
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Ragnar

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Aug 5, 2016
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Nothing will happen as per survey..I know the outcome of survey ...his 97% of supporters are for corrupt route...but still the story will go as usual. 600+ votes until now and result is bent more towards corrupt route. But as always the story will go slow.
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I didn't know Chris was so popular. I prefer Hank path anyway.
 

sslovoe

Active Member
May 11, 2017
959
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Jake route is the most boring route you can develop.

The most interesting route would be Anna thinks she has control, but end up being controlled (with whomever).
i cant stand jake
also for game think take long part wasting in develop his part and its long wast to create art for him for something no action or even seduction
he is ego ,,,not know how his talk is make women think he attractive
anna think he have nice ass ?? really?,,,,anna in horny she will think dog is sexy
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sslovoe

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May 11, 2017
959
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Hi, I never read your stories. Could you please tell me where to find them?
i agree his story most creative for anna with novel detail make anna fell look real than game
and cant look all part story he make in post here
he most make page in literotica page
and collect his story chapter for not lost and can read all one place
 
Jan 14, 2024
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My ranking for Anna's path is a very unique choice:

1. Mr Stenstromberstein
2. Marvin
3. Timothy & Dale
4. Robinson
5. Chris
6. Hank
7. David
8. Darren
9. Kendra
10. Receptionist
11. Sophie
12. Everybody else in the world
13. Marcel
14. Jake

Dont think anyone would have a list looking like this Hahaha!

I just want to see Anna be a tease and a little bit of a slut eventually. I do hope she can be the one to make the first move on somebody soon.. Otherwise this game is just Molestville or Grope City. Thats fine but not every single scene! Other than Anna briefly teasing Marvin in the breastfeeding room ages ago, its only Anna being groped. Bit of variety would be good.
 

TheDuke9999

Active Member
Jan 3, 2022
571
591
no old people
in either option you choose to play she is a hoe. she wants to be bred. its a slow burn either way. either she will just leave an become a full fledged hoe or she will just cheat on him.. this isnt an ntr or nts game , its just which way will she decide to cheat on him VN
 
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Adhdclassic

Engaged Member
Mar 10, 2024
3,466
5,255
My ranking for Anna's path is a very unique choice:

1. Mr Stenstromberstein
2. Marvin
3. Timothy & Dale
4. Robinson
5. Chris
6. Hank
7. David
8. Darren
9. Kendra
10. Receptionist
11. Sophie
12. Everybody else in the world
13. Marcel
14. Jake

Dont think anyone would have a list looking like this Hahaha!

I just want to see Anna be a tease and a little bit of a slut eventually. I do hope she can be the one to make the first move on somebody soon.. Otherwise this game is just Molestville or Grope City. Thats fine but not every single scene! Other than Anna briefly teasing Marvin in the breastfeeding room ages ago, its only Anna being groped. Bit of variety would be good.
Youngest at the bottom oldest at the top. Letting them get a shot before they die. Making sure they get a..happy ending.:ROFLMAO:
 
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andromeda421

Newbie
Jan 20, 2022
22
19
My ranking for Anna's path is a very unique choice:

1. Mr Stenstromberstein
2. Marvin
3. Timothy & Dale
4. Robinson
5. Chris
6. Hank
7. David
8. Darren
9. Kendra
10. Receptionist
11. Sophie
12. Everybody else in the world
13. Marcel
14. Jake

Dont think anyone would have a list looking like this Hahaha!

I just want to see Anna be a tease and a little bit of a slut eventually. I do hope she can be the one to make the first move on somebody soon.. Otherwise this game is just Molestville or Grope City. Thats fine but not every single scene! Other than Anna briefly teasing Marvin in the breastfeeding room ages ago, its only Anna being groped. Bit of variety would be good.

While not sure about No. 3 (they had to little interaction with Anna), Chris could be her blowjob trainer and Robinson her anal trainer)
 
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Sadowdark

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Mar 4, 2020
7,185
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While not sure about No. 3 (they had to little interaction with Anna), Chris could be her blowjob trainer and Robinson her annal trainer)
The anal trainer will be a penguin if it is added to the game and if the creator finds time for it.:eek::ROFLMAO:
 

Adhdclassic

Engaged Member
Mar 10, 2024
3,466
5,255
My ranking for Anna's path is a very unique choice:

1. Mr Stenstromberstein
2. Marvin
3. Timothy & Dale
4. Robinson
5. Chris
6. Hank
7. David
8. Darren
9. Kendra
10. Receptionist
11. Sophie
12. Everybody else in the world
13. Marcel
14. Jake

Dont think anyone would have a list looking like this Hahaha!

I just want to see Anna be a tease and a little bit of a slut eventually. I do hope she can be the one to make the first move on somebody soon.. Otherwise this game is just Molestville or Grope City. Thats fine but not every single scene! Other than Anna briefly teasing Marvin in the breastfeeding room ages ago, its only Anna being groped. Bit of variety would be good.
I just noticed number 11 nope
 

DarthSpitz717

Active Member
Mar 28, 2023
553
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Hi guys. You must have noticed that there is no blackmail in the version I wrote. This story is about Anna's mental transformation at a time when her life was turned upside down. The feeling of revenge she felt for David's betrayal and Keandra's malicious encouragement bring out a dark side that is already in her nature. This situation unexpectedly creates a chance for the old fish who is normally way out of her league. And the old pervert who had been dying for such an opportunity all his life, uses some of his congenital physical and hormonal abnormalities to gives the hot lawyer experience physical and mental pleasures beyond her belief. As a result, no matter how hard Anna tries to resist, she completely surrenders to the dark impulses that are repressed somewhere inside her. So there is no blackmail or coercion. There is just a relentless war between the two of them. Dark-Light, Virtue-Corruption, Quality-Sleazy, Wisdom - Ignorance, Beauty-Ugliness...
I'm writing a new chapter but I'm undecided about publishing. This may seem a bit extreme for some types. :)
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Awh the infamous Jess2001... Sadly, it's only of late that I've become familiar with your thoughts and work Nevertheless, I'd like to pick your thoughts and get your take


Hi guys. You must have noticed that there is no blackmail in the version I wrote. This story is about Anna's mental transformation at a time when her life was turned upside down. I'd like to ask you with in the story's canon if you think Anna's desire for revenge is more an excuse to allow herself to tread on the dark path or is a tool she uses to make herself feel better. It's clear Anna "knows" David has cheated(sic) but holds out some hope David is guiltless. Still, I've always thought Anna was more invested in being married and the concept of marriage then being invested in David. As a side note, unrelated I've always held one can be married without the legal papers that says you are married and, legally married but not be married in spirit.
The feeling of revenge she felt for David's betrayal and Keandra's malicious encouragement bring out a dark side that is already in her nature. Excellent in my view that you are taking Mr. Palmer's outline of Anna's character and it's not others corrupting her but she herself is otherwise corrupted and flawed. It's a huge difference when you are discussing a character's motivation.
This situation unexpectedly creates a chance for the old fish who is normally way out of her league. And the old pervert who had been dying for such an opportunity all his life, uses some of his congenital physical and hormonal abnormalities to gives the hot lawyer experience physical and mental pleasures beyond her belief. How much of a plot problem might that be? Everyone knows that Chris and Jake make the most sense and is the most logical paths. I've always held there has to be a darker more insidious reasons with any old fossil would have a possibility with her. It's easy to see how Hank has a path toward Anna (being a boss, influencer to her future, a threat to her financial situation), but and I can be wrong, Mr. Palmer isn't going to go down that route by itself. So, that said would it be more a hidden kink in Anna's fantasies to be used and exploited like some bondage play?

As a result, no matter how hard Anna tries to resist, she completely surrenders to the dark impulses that are repressed somewhere inside her. So there is no blackmail or coercion. There is just a relentless war between the two of them. Dark-Light, Virtue-Corruption, Quality-Sleazy, Wisdom - Ignorance, Beauty-Ugliness... A past of repressed exploration and unfulfilled desires?


I'm writing a new chapter but I'm undecided about publishing. This may seem a bit extreme for some types
 

Jess2001

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Jul 22, 2024
24
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Awh the infamous Jess2001... Sadly, it's only of late that I've become familiar with your thoughts and work Nevertheless, I'd like to pick your thoughts and get your take


Hi guys. You must have noticed that there is no blackmail in the version I wrote. This story is about Anna's mental transformation at a time when her life was turned upside down. I'd like to ask you with in the story's canon if you think Anna's desire for revenge is more an excuse to allow herself to tread on the dark path or is a tool she uses to make herself feel better. It's clear Anna "knows" David has cheated(sic) but holds out some hope David is guiltless. Still, I've always thought Anna was more invested in being married and the concept of marriage then being invested in David. As a side note, unrelated I've always held one can be married without the legal papers that says you are married and, legally married but not be married in spirit.
The feeling of revenge she felt for David's betrayal and Keandra's malicious encouragement bring out a dark side that is already in her nature. Excellent in my view that you are taking Mr. Palmer's outline of Anna's character and it's not others corrupting her but she herself is otherwise corrupted and flawed. It's a huge difference when you are discussing a character's motivation.
This situation unexpectedly creates a chance for the old fish who is normally way out of her league. And the old pervert who had been dying for such an opportunity all his life, uses some of his congenital physical and hormonal abnormalities to gives the hot lawyer experience physical and mental pleasures beyond her belief. How much of a plot problem might that be? Everyone knows that Chris and Jake make the most sense and is the most logical paths. I've always held there has to be a darker more insidious reasons with any old fossil would have a possibility with her. It's easy to see how Hank has a path toward Anna (being a boss, influencer to her future, a threat to her financial situation), but and I can be wrong, Mr. Palmer isn't going to go down that route by itself. So, that said would it be more a hidden kink in Anna's fantasies to be used and exploited like some bondage play?

As a result, no matter how hard Anna tries to resist, she completely surrenders to the dark impulses that are repressed somewhere inside her. So there is no blackmail or coercion. There is just a relentless war between the two of them. Dark-Light, Virtue-Corruption, Quality-Sleazy, Wisdom - Ignorance, Beauty-Ugliness... A past of repressed exploration and unfulfilled desires?


I'm writing a new chapter but I'm undecided about publishing. This may seem a bit extreme for some types
In the original story, her experiences with Mr. Stenstromberstein and Marvin give us hints of Anna's dark side. No woman would allow someone, especially an old pervert, to touch her body just because she feels sorry for him. And no woman licks a banana while fantasizing about an old pervert just because she feels sorry for him :) So there's enough evidence to suggest that she has a fetish for horny old man.
In fact, her husband's betrayal creates an environment for her to get to know herself again Kendra's plays rekindle some urges that she had completely forgotten and repressed. These are all excuses for her to reflect her true nature. The story tells of her inner battles, her mental transformation and her gradual degeneration.
 
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3.80 star(s) 127 Votes