VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

[Sadowdark]

i reject marvn even not talk accept him ignore him
and he join her in dinner
how he be there when she not accept him in first place
so developer not want make dinner without marvin so he be make other action with jake so he better keep marvin cause he only choice for this part
why all reject choice if he will show up dinner ?
also chris even you reject him all game goes same result

Because the creator once said he would have to figure out how to get rid of the old fish prematurely. Which would take more time to create the update. And so he has the problem solved until the final decision to discard the old fish.Because the creator said that even if you reject the old fish for example, he will still try to win Anne over. Until he gives you the final choice to get rid of him forever. But it seems like we are getting to that point. I also think there should be different behaviors and choices for Anne and dialogue that says you rejected the old fish and Anne stopped talking to him.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

Because the creator said that even if you reject the old fish for example, he will still try to win Anne over. Until he gives you the final choice to get rid of him forever. But it seems like we are getting to that point. I also think there should be different behaviors and choices for Anne and dialogue that says you rejected the old fish and Anne stopped talking to him.

“Molester” Marvin will stalk her until the end of the game or until his heart stops ticking

 

[sslovoe]

for ppl want game for waiting
ExploringtheBigApple-Ep.5-pc

look different game
what happen when you let you wife with other guy in house

i like idea of wife model and guy take pic take advantage be with her also game give you fantasy be ok reject

what i like he make you see both viw wife and husband or husbnd view so you be play man only and not know what real happen


game add some character but bad not use it in game and its end with one path

like his father coworker his boss think they also be part game why this game not let game open
its complete game i think but its good

 

[catgameryt011]

for ppl want game for waiting
ExploringtheBigApple-Ep.5-pc
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look different game
what happen when you let you wife with other guy in house
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i like idea of wife model and guy take pic take advantage be with her also game give you fantasy be ok reject
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what i like he make you see both viw wife and husband or husbnd view so you be play man only and not know what real happen
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game add some character but bad not use it in game and its end with one path

like his father coworker his boss think they also be part game why this game not let game open
its complete game i think but its good

is that the game, the bald guy there, I prefer even if it's the protagonist's father.

 

[cyberSpacePirat]

for ppl want game for waiting
ExploringtheBigApple-Ep.5-pc

Exploring the Big Apple is an interesting game but it has a very similar story to other games from the same author (Dimajio333), like Pineapple Express.

 

[secretcador]

for me i like add new character this give game good rout

If you want to add new character for good route, we can suggest a new character. I suggest Palmer add a Nerd who invite Anna to play DnD, which within the game Mr Palmer can add other numerous characters that include a goblin and a zombie that try to slowly grab her ass.

6 update and will be just teas no sex

6 updates will be spread. 1 for marvin, 1 for penguin, 1 for workmates, 1 for jake, 1 for chriss, 1 for hank there already 6 updates and the 7th one gonna be for Rob. And 6 updates will take around 24-36 months or around 2 till 2 and half years, just for each character move 1 step further.

Why developer doing like this? because if the game is finish, it means he has to make a new-game to keep his passive income running. New game means he need to build everything again from the zero, and that's a lot of effort if he want easy money.

 

[sslovoe]

If you want to add new character for good route, we can suggest a new character. I suggest Palmer add a Nerd who invite Anna to play DnD, which within the game Mr Palmer can add other numerous characters that include a goblin and a zombie that try to slowly grab her ass.



6 updates will be spread. 1 for marvin, 1 for penguin, 1 for workmates, 1 for jake, 1 for chriss, 1 for hank there already 6 updates and the 7th one gonna be for Rob. And 6 updates will take around 24-36 months or around 2 till 2 and half years, just for each character move 1 step further.

Why developer doing like this? because if the game is finish, it means he has to make a new-game to keep his passive income running. New game means he need to build everything again from the zero, and that's a lot of effort if he want easy money.

i agree with time will take forever to get this part

that why i said its good as novel
you see anna novel some fan creat with marvin he make many chapter with many detail cant make art like novel
cause in novel you read many chapter with detail and also slow burn
not same game is need make character and art take time
that different and written story is more open with many character you not need to short talk or chose one person
you can move in time and place and in fell
that why i mean is good story

and for game i think two character add is better than old wast two year teas
dal and tim add spicy part
and she invite them her office
and they invite her to there section party after work
so think this will make spicy game more than boring jake
if you chose jake and old grant or this two guys i think you not want more boring jake story
add dal and tim is better for game

 

[catgameryt011]

for me i like add new character this give game good rout
this guy is different they not play by kendra so they act devil and pervert guy be out kendra control or do what she want
for me its ok slow corruption for not be slut one day but lot character she allow hj or bj or marvin fell her ass and panty how not be sex in this part he get the point to fall to sex
also rob after make her naked play boobs he can play her body and let her see him get erection
but as any game want stop thing phon call...she afraid husband come.... she go work
but if developer make 2 month update story can go on and everyone accept non sex cause they can wait for 2 month and be action for every character
but 4 to 5 month its life wast
as you say if i want this new character update show how long will take to game back to show them again mean i not see them until maybe 6 update and will be just teas no sex
in general its goes good as novel not as fan want and no one can wait 7 year like other game no sex i fell bad for fan wait this long its wast for nothing

if you decide to add a new character, it would be david's father.

 

[Davidleene]

i can feel it, jake will be the first one to romance with Anna,

 

[sslovoe]

i can feel it, jake will be the first one to romance with Anna,

for me wane be remove jake from game he useless
balloon talker

 

[Sadowdark]

for me wane be remove jake from game he useless
balloon talker
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But on the faithful path, he will thwart the plans of Kendra and the old fish during Happy hour. Because he will sit instead of the old fish next to Anna. Just as the old fish sat instead of Jake during the first Happy hour

 

[sslovoe]

But on the faithful path, he will thwart the plans of Kendra and the old fish during Happy hour. Because he will sit instead of the old fish next to Anna. Just as the old fish sat instead of Jake during the first Happy hour

kendra will find way let them alone not think jake will join them this time
even kendra not like jake behave with marvin almost ruin night cause he hate marvin

 

[Sadowdark]

kendra will find way let them alone not think jake will join them this time
even kendra not like jake behave with marvin almost ruin night cause he hate marvin

He will invite himself because 100% or by accident Anna will invite him like the old fish invited by accident. Kendra will not invite him after the first happy Houer saw how jealous he was that the old fish sat next to Anna instead of him. So she does not want the same thing to happen again.

 

[Couto25]

for me wane be remove jake from game he useless
balloon talker
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Lol Jake should be the main character as per original story with whom Ana should cheat. And Ana gets attracted to Jake. The only character that David doubt the most...He don't doubt on Chris,Marvin,Marcel etc. or his poker friends ...He doubt Jake with Ana the most.
MP trolled so much on Jake storyline and delayed corruption of Ana on Jake path that we didn't see even 1 proper tease scene of Ana with Jake beside few naughty dialogues. If he would have build up the proper storyline on his path. Without a doubt he would be the most wanted antagonist with Ana.

Same with Leonard, he has all the evidence to prove David innocent. He could have developed the proper submissive and blackmail path in Ana-Leonard storyline but in the end we just see Leonard getting satisfied with just a nude pic and panty. So less demand from him..Not wanting Ana's ass or sex or anything. His pervert ness for Ana is minimum as compared to other antagonist.

These two path I will say are the worst buildup antagonist storyline of this VN.

I will go for Grant. I feel his storyline is just pushed all the time that has nothing to do with the main storyline. The only thing he got is money that Ana need if she gets divorced. But he hyped Grant storyline alot I will say..even more than Marvin. Marvin jerked watching Ana once and Grant jerked like 3 times already in flashback scenes. Plus he has ugly way of taking advantage of Ana and that is drug. And I wanna see submissive/naughty scenes of Ana..Not like drugged and been raped...it will make no sense of corrupting Ana that way. Like having sex with unconscious Ana and giving her money doesn't make sense for me. So it will be waste of renders.

Second one is Rob...Yes he only got massage skills or kinda seducing neighbour storyline going on so whoever is interested in watching those scene will be interested in him....but his storyline has nothing to do with David cheating storyline or proving David is innocent or Ana office storyline. Neither he is rich to support Ana after divorce..I mean Jake has yatch, rob just give massage to all neighbours with fake degree. That character storyline I feel is pushed in the main story. He doesn't have any evidence of David innocence, he doesn't know anyone from Ana's office, he doesn't have any connection with main villian kendra or Alexia, neither he's close to Ana/David...All he knows is whatever Ana or Leonard told him that's all. So no matter massage fantasies on his path is good but story is not interesting on his path. Leonard should take more advantage of Ana than Rob to be honest because he has more information but his fantasy for Ana is not even having sex with her....poor story building on his path.

 

[Sadowdark]

Lol Jake should be the main character as per original story with whom Ana should cheat. And Ana gets attracted to Jake. The only character that David doubt the most...He don't doubt on Chris,Marvin,Marcel etc. or his poker friends ...He doubt Jake with

Only David knows Jacek, the fake friend, Marcel. The fake rehabilitator Rob, the cobra Panty man. He doesn't even know the old fish and the others.

 

[Couto25]

Only David knows Jacek, the fake friend, Marcel. The fake rehabilitator Rob, the cobra Panty man. He doesn't even know the old fish and the others.

He knows hank, grant too.. he's jealous of them too but not that much. But Whenever he hear Jake, his mind goes off because Ana favour Jake.

 

[Saitamom]

I didn't see any Anna cheating sex. Wth!?

 

[Couto25]

i agree with time will take forever to get this part

that why i said its good as novel
you see anna novel some fan creat with marvin he make many chapter with many detail cant make art like novel
cause in novel you read many chapter with detail and also slow burn
not same game is need make character and art take time
that different and written story is more open with many character you not need to short talk or chose one person
you can move in time and place and in fell
that why i mean is good story

and for game i think two character add is better than old wast two year teas
dal and tim add spicy part
and she invite them her office
and they invite her to there section party after work
so think this will make spicy game more than boring jake
if you chose jake and old grant or this two guys i think you not want more boring jake story
add dal and tim is better for game


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The thing is I don't mind adding new characters...but the way he develop character storyline. I want Ana character to build up to full corruption first then he can add infinite characters as much he wants.

Adding new characters before building Ana's corruption means ending to blue balls upto infinite timeline. Same like LP is trolling with infinite characters storyline. And all update end up with tease and excuses for not sex scene.

 

[xert13]

I didn't see any Anna cheating sex. Wth!?

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[sslovoe]

Lol Jake should be the main character as per original story with whom Ana should cheat. And Ana gets attracted to Jake. The only character that David doubt the most...He don't doubt on Chris,Marvin,Marcel etc. or his poker friends ...He doubt Jake with Ana the most.
MP trolled so much on Jake storyline and delayed corruption of Ana on Jake path that we didn't see even 1 proper tease scene of Ana with Jake beside few naughty dialogues. If he would have build up the proper storyline on his path. Without a doubt he would be the most wanted antagonist with Ana.

Same with Leonard, he has all the evidence to prove David innocent. He could have developed the proper submissive and blackmail path in Ana-Leonard storyline but in the end we just see Leonard getting satisfied with just a nude pic and panty. So less demand from him..Not wanting Ana's ass or sex or anything. His pervert ness for Ana is minimum as compared to other antagonist.

These two path I will say are the worst buildup antagonist storyline of this VN.

I will go for Grant. I feel his storyline is just pushed all the time that has nothing to do with the main storyline. The only thing he got is money that Ana need if she gets divorced. But he hyped Grant storyline alot I will say..even more than Marvin. Marvin jerked watching Ana once and Grant jerked like 3 times already in flashback scenes. Plus he has ugly way of taking advantage of Ana and that is drug. And I wanna see submissive/naughty scenes of Ana..Not like drugged and been raped...it will make no sense of corrupting Ana that way. Like having sex with unconscious Ana and giving her money doesn't make sense for me. So it will be waste of renders.

Second one is Rob...Yes he only got massage skills or kinda seducing neighbour storyline going on so whoever is interested in watching those scene will be interested in him....but his storyline has nothing to do with David cheating storyline or proving David is innocent or Ana office storyline. Neither he is rich to support Ana after divorce..I mean Jake has yatch, rob just give massage to all neighbours with fake degree. That character storyline I feel is pushed in the main story. He doesn't have any evidence of David innocence, he doesn't know anyone from Ana's office, he doesn't have any connection with main villian kendra or Alexia, neither he's close to Ana/David...All he knows is whatever Ana or Leonard told him that's all. So no matter massage fantasies on his path is good but story is not interesting on his path. Leonard should take more advantage of Ana than Rob to be honest because he has more information but his fantasy for Ana is not even having sex with her....poor story building on his path.

game make us think lingerie shop will be best thing in game
and jake ask anna to help him over and over
this really not want we expect to see when you wait over year and this result
nothing
not even he try little

also when he talk about boat
we think this be wild part of game
we not make big expectation on that also
cause if this part be other wast idea the developer have issue to make good idea build
he ruin good idea
like pool she not swim with marvin and she wear old women swimsuit