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The thing that you and few others are predicting and sharing art....those tease suits the storyline and its actually exciting...but MP chose not to add scene during these situation...he create unpredictable situation for scenes....
Going off official released teasers and following the general writing style was what throw me off. In the last update I thought the opening would be (from the teasers) a bunch of office staff noticing Anna's attire and Anna getting lots of compliments--AND THEN ENTER TIMOTHY AND DALE. Was I hedging a guess Chris would be skulking around the Parker's residence in hopes of talking to Anna-- I thought that would happen at some point... just thought he would text or call Anna in the middle of the night, and they would talk in his car... that would be strike two on my part of guessing and on F95 I went on the record stating some of my ideas.
The thing is those situations that MP creates for scene doesnt feel fit with the storyline......and whatever people shared or suggested, he give blue balls in those storyline..
You're almost saying MP is acting out of spite 
it doesnt get along with the theme of the story and couldnt hit upto the max point erotically. Not against art and dialogue ...but out of the blue situation and scene thingy doesnt feel erotic if its dropped as a surprise.
The problem with Correctly predicting any given scene is anti-climactic in some regards.
Just an example no one has thought/predicted Chris scene location in the last 2 updates..So even if he did added, it feels like it missing something or it should have happened somewhere else with the tease flow like kitchen or in the night bed while chatting from mobile.
Yes, no and maybe... The story already had a shower scene earlier and Anna got to see the Anaconda. I'd grade the whole Chris thing scenes B+ to A-. Anna from the first ass grope while showing off baby Sophie all the way up to the BJ was a steady stream of Anna progressively escalating events. Would I have written the events differently--yes, as would any other writer. The only thing keeping the Chris path being A to A+ is two plausibility problems and one too many scenes and the content of how what should be the main scene occurred.
Plausibility:
A: The shower scene of Anna giving a Chris a HJ. Earlier the night before Chris felt up Anna; that whole scene had a time limit of David arriving home and ran the risk of David getting home too soon. But changing the dynamics of time and opportunity, Chris could have arrived earlier... Chris would still grope Anna BUT Chris would kiss and nibble Anna's neck as he gropes Anna... **the game at that point would have 2 choices, stop or keep on going** If the later, Chris would have naughty talk and sexy compliments of Anna while he works his hand past her pants and running her pussy-- Anna in the throes of pleasure, passion, the naughty situation would slip out Chris' anaconda and jerks him off. (no shower scene, just Anna stunned and in shock thinking of the night before coming to grips with it while showering). One Plausibility and that scene that was one too many. Second plausibility concern would be the BJ in the garage. At some point I figured Chris and Anna would have had some car sex at some point. And yes, Chris calling or texting Anna to meet him after midnight when there was near zero chance David would be awake-- Chris and Anna talk, and it leads to a BJ but only after some passionate making out to get Anna in a playful mood and aroused.
And wherever people predicted scene like Rob massage, Jake lingerie shopping and were excited about it, They totally got blue balled by MP lol...David called during massage and we saw just Jake dick during shopping lol.
Actually, the Robinson thing was solid. About a grade of A. With David being awake, always paranoid and suspicious as I played, I wasn't expecting much to come from Robinson/Anna meeting. The only thing that detracted from the whole encounter was Anna being too upfront with Robinson and not playing the coy woman allowing herself to be seduced and being aware of it. David's cell phone call that was totally predictable. The Jake thing... hard pass on the route. If Anna was developing feelings for Jake and then starts to lust after Jake, I'd care about the content.
So lets not share bar scenario thoughts about Marvin situation and let MP create one with the flow
You are so right-- it's a bar, full of people, limited privacy and something seems missing at this point between Anna and Marvin, though this could be the catalyst that moves that route along....else he will create surprise Marvin scene somewhere else that might be good but it will not be what we are expecting lol. So...just for this time try and create all fantasies of Ana with everyone beside Marvin lol ...then I hope he will create a scene that will fit perfectly as per the normal storyline whatever we have in our mind.
The "going to the bathroom" trope is out... in all the bars I been to with lots of people, there never not occupied for any length of time. Stepping out back, and you find the staff and patrons smoking... can you get some naughty in a bar-- OH HELLS YES. But just "some" naughty. Real naughty happens when you drive off from the bar and go elsewhere.
The saying goes, "The devil is in the details." And Mr. Palmer has crossed his t's and dotted his i's and by and large a top 10 game. Since the start of following AMP, I looked at a lot of NTR games just to see if there was any quality. Some wickedly good art out there, but storylines my pet ferrets could do a better job of. In general,... of all other adult games I am hard pressed to name one with good art and a good story.
But we all have our own ideas how each path and character should turn out... just we don't really get a vote in those outcomes. Just with JRR Martin... he doesn't listen when it comes to his most popular characters
