VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.4c] [Mr Palmer]

[DarthSpitz717]

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I wonder just how wrong I'm going to be when I guess what Mr. Palmer is going to release. BUT....

With those MP surprises, I hope whatever they are as good as the Timothy/Dale surprise. Forget what happened in the scene but how the event defines Anna's character.

That whole scene fixes and establishes most plausibility problems that are coming up. It just comes down to how Mr. Palmer keeps Anna in character, the nature of future Anna encounters, and how MP evolves Anna's character. Am I expecting Anna to becoming the office slut? No... but more vulnerable to her own desires, YES!

The game has Anna having 3 main paths, faithful, submissive, and naughty. The faithful path is Anna being tempted into compromising herself.

The submissive path is a double edge sword. Anna could be a victim of her own urges, desires, and wants where she is aware of them and actively pursues them. Or she is powerless to her own sexual desires and surrenders to temptation.

Naughty is Anna being the willful party girl going out of her way to get herself into situations.

Thing is those 3 main paths seem to be on a sliding scale. You have faithful dominating Anna's actions (mostly for the wrong reasons) buying into the conventions of being a married woman. Submissive and naughty in the beginning are just normal sub traits of being human. But without a strong-willed mind set Anna was able to keep some of her inner demons under control. The blow to her marriage and faith in David removed her will to behave... and those inner demons are reaching for every excuse to get Anna to let them out

 

[Sadowdark]

Someone in this tread had say there is no real Faithfull path in this game and he/she is right...... you're free to call it Faithfull if you want because there is not penetration,bj or hd in this path....everyone and his point of view but for me Anna is clearly not a Faithfull one.
And in all the path Annna is horny as hell reason why i think the night scene and the bathe shower scene is logic kuz this path where she doesn't cheated is more Anna in a 1V indetermined.She is sexually unsatisfied.....she's fighting her huge and desires.... she's tryin' to resist somethin' that she need very badly that's how that path is....the more apropriate name i could use for this path would be Anna's futile resistance lol

And if someone has the status of,, Anna wants to remain faithful and wants her marriage to work. So what is this path of faithfulness or resistance? Because to me it looks like a path of faithfulness.

 

[Enola Ga... Man!]

Someone in this tread had say there is no real Faithfull path in this game and he/she is right...... you're free to call it Faithfull if you want because there is not penetration,bj or hd in this path....everyone and his point of view but for me Anna is clearly not a Faithfull one.

Cheating always starts in the head. The moment she started thinking about other men is the moment when she started cheating on David.

Having sex is just a final step, deed done - nothing to rescue after that.

 

[Couto25]

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The thing that you and few others are predicting and sharing art....those tease suits the storyline and its actually exciting...but MP chose not to add scene during these situation...he create unpredictable situation for scenes.... Going off official released teasers and following the general writing style was what throw me off. In the last update I thought the opening would be (from the teasers) a bunch of office staff noticing Anna's attire and Anna getting lots of compliments--AND THEN ENTER TIMOTHY AND DALE. Was I hedging a guess Chris would be skulking around the Parker's residence in hopes of talking to Anna-- I thought that would happen at some point... just thought he would text or call Anna in the middle of the night, and they would talk in his car... that would be strike two on my part of guessing and on F95 I went on the record stating some of my ideas.

The thing is those situations that MP creates for scene doesnt feel fit with the storyline......and whatever people shared or suggested, he give blue balls in those storyline.. You're almost saying MP is acting out of spite it doesnt get along with the theme of the story and couldnt hit upto the max point erotically. Not against art and dialogue ...but out of the blue situation and scene thingy doesnt feel erotic if its dropped as a surprise. The problem with Correctly predicting any given scene is anti-climactic in some regards.

Just an example no one has thought/predicted Chris scene location in the last 2 updates..So even if he did added, it feels like it missing something or it should have happened somewhere else with the tease flow like kitchen or in the night bed while chatting from mobile. Yes, no and maybe... The story already had a shower scene earlier and Anna got to see the Anaconda. I'd grade the whole Chris thing scenes B+ to A-. Anna from the first ass grope while showing off baby Sophie all the way up to the BJ was a steady stream of Anna progressively escalating events. Would I have written the events differently--yes, as would any other writer. The only thing keeping the Chris path being A to A+ is two plausibility problems and one too many scenes and the content of how what should be the main scene occurred.

Plausibility:
A: The shower scene of Anna giving a Chris a HJ. Earlier the night before Chris felt up Anna; that whole scene had a time limit of David arriving home and ran the risk of David getting home too soon. But changing the dynamics of time and opportunity, Chris could have arrived earlier... Chris would still grope Anna BUT Chris would kiss and nibble Anna's neck as he gropes Anna... **the game at that point would have 2 choices, stop or keep on going** If the later, Chris would have naughty talk and sexy compliments of Anna while he works his hand past her pants and running her pussy-- Anna in the throes of pleasure, passion, the naughty situation would slip out Chris' anaconda and jerks him off. (no shower scene, just Anna stunned and in shock thinking of the night before coming to grips with it while showering). One Plausibility and that scene that was one too many. Second plausibility concern would be the BJ in the garage. At some point I figured Chris and Anna would have had some car sex at some point. And yes, Chris calling or texting Anna to meet him after midnight when there was near zero chance David would be awake-- Chris and Anna talk, and it leads to a BJ but only after some passionate making out to get Anna in a playful mood and aroused.

And wherever people predicted scene like Rob massage, Jake lingerie shopping and were excited about it, They totally got blue balled by MP lol...David called during massage and we saw just Jake dick during shopping lol. Actually, the Robinson thing was solid. About a grade of A. With David being awake, always paranoid and suspicious as I played, I wasn't expecting much to come from Robinson/Anna meeting. The only thing that detracted from the whole encounter was Anna being too upfront with Robinson and not playing the coy woman allowing herself to be seduced and being aware of it. David's cell phone call that was totally predictable. The Jake thing... hard pass on the route. If Anna was developing feelings for Jake and then starts to lust after Jake, I'd care about the content.

So lets not share bar scenario thoughts about Marvin situation and let MP create one with the flow You are so right-- it's a bar, full of people, limited privacy and something seems missing at this point between Anna and Marvin, though this could be the catalyst that moves that route along....else he will create surprise Marvin scene somewhere else that might be good but it will not be what we are expecting lol. So...just for this time try and create all fantasies of Ana with everyone beside Marvin lol ...then I hope he will create a scene that will fit perfectly as per the normal storyline whatever we have in our mind. The "going to the bathroom" trope is out... in all the bars I been to with lots of people, there never not occupied for any length of time. Stepping out back, and you find the staff and patrons smoking... can you get some naughty in a bar-- OH HELLS YES. But just "some" naughty. Real naughty happens when you drive off from the bar and go elsewhere.

The saying goes, "The devil is in the details." And Mr. Palmer has crossed his t's and dotted his i's and by and large a top 10 game. Since the start of following AMP, I looked at a lot of NTR games just to see if there was any quality. Some wickedly good art out there, but storylines my pet ferrets could do a better job of. In general,... of all other adult games I am hard pressed to name one with good art and a good story.

But we all have our own ideas how each path and character should turn out... just we don't really get a vote in those outcomes. Just with JRR Martin... he doesn't listen when it comes to his most popular characters

Well I think the most good looking antagonist of this VN ...Jake storyline who can compete with David ...like he care about Ana, and He didn't teamed up with Marvin when Marvin asked Jake to share Ana's nude on the group etc..He opted out and didn't wanted to be a part of that Marvin group...and additional physical package to which Ana might get attracted to. Now I guess that path in corrupt route has taken a serious detour in last Lingerie shopping...

It came out Jake tease Ana like Johnny Bravo cartoon character lol during shopping. No touching with Jake, and I don't think that in corrupt/faithful route Jake has made an attractive reputation towards Ana like where Ana is seriously attracted towards Jake ..As per Ana, Rob is the guy she like to prefer to go for dating. No such attraction towards Jake side..I don't know how the story will go on his path in the upcoming update..but by far I guess from Chapter 1 till now Jake hasn't make any progress towards Ana corruption wise. And I think he's the only character that didn't saw Ana naked/groped her including Marcel who had made only 1 appearance with Ana since chapter 1. Jake corruption storyline is a disaster even when his storyline with Ana is covered in almost all updates..beside weekend one, Jake had made an appearance in almost every update and still failed to create any bond with Ana unlike other antagonist like Hank/Marvin/Rob / Chris etc. I am comparing with these antagonist because these antagonist storyline is also covered in almost all updates and see where their corruption with Ana has reached now and where Jake path stand in terms of corruption with Ana. Jake still remain like a johnny bravo cartoon character for Ana.

 

[sslovoe]

model garvin name good guy ?
really
even before see his character in game just look his face and smile you know this man is dirty man

 

[Menace o Santana]

And if someone has the status of,, Anna wants to remain faithful and wants her marriage to work. So what is this path of faithfulness or resistance? Because to me it looks like a path of faithfulness.

The famous whrittin' strategy..... Don't quit know what Faithfull mean to Mr Palmer....nor even Anna. And she want to remain Faithfull fine....but a Faithfull one will not send a lingerie pic to someone else.. for what?..... Surely for Chris to remember it as a good souvenir of their friendship! But Anna is not that naive she knows Chris intention with the picture.

 

[Sadowdark]

The famous whrittin' strategy..... Don't quit know what Faithfull mean to Mr Palmer....nor even Anna. And she want to remain Faithfull fine....but a Faithfull one will not send a lingerie pic to someone else.. for what?..... Surely for Chris to remember it as a good souvenir of their friendship! But Anna is not that naive she knows Chris intention with the picture.

The creator once said that he has a different definition of NTR than everyone thinks and it's not rigid. He once said that sending lingerie pics to a fake friend is not cheating for him. Besides, he gave you the choice of how Anna reacts to sending a picture. And then in Ch2 you can still send pictures to the fake friend yes or no because Anna, for example, realized her previous mistake.

 

[Adhdclassic]

The creator once said that he has a different definition of NTR than everyone thinks and it's not rigid. He once said that sending lingerie pics to a fake friend is not cheating for him. Besides, he gave you the choice of how Anna reacts to sending a picture. And then in Ch2 you can still send pictures to the fake friend yes or no because Anna, for example, realized her previous mistake.

That one still gets me. I feel people now adays are like it ain't cheating unless there is some sort of penetration.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

That one still gets me. I feel people now adays are like it ain't cheating unless there is some sort of penetration.

He’s following Bill Clinton’s rule

 

[Enola Ga... Man!]

That one still gets me. I feel people now adays are like it ain't cheating unless there is some sort of penetration.

Yup, lowering or double standards of our behaviour everywhere. Let's be honest here, we're playing those games for entertainment or excitement, but I guess nobody would like to be in the place of David in real life.

If my woman behaved like this, I mean send some lingerie shot to my friend or anyone else, I would kick her out right away. He is married, so this is much more troublesome...

He’s following Bill Clinton’s rule
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[Belaja smert]

He’s following Bill Clinton’s rule
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Good Trump! He´s not follow clinton.

 

[Menace o Santana]

The creator once said that he has a different definition of NTR than everyone thinks and it's not rigid. He once said that sending lingerie pics to a fake friend is not cheating for him. Besides, he gave you the choice of how Anna reacts to sending a picture. And then in Ch2 you can still send pictures to the fake friend yes or no because Anna, for example, realized her previous mistake.

If sendin’ a lingerie pic to your husband fake friend is not cheatin’ then it is not faithful either….. the fact that she can react differently later and to not do it again didn’t change anythin’ Mr Palmer want to create a path were Anna will not get Penetrated by other mans beside David but that doesn’t mean she’s faithful and all the lewd text between her and Chris when David is not there or sleepin’ just before the scandal of David and the hooker. sorry but Anna is way very far from the faithful one

 

[boobthief]

Cheating always starts in the head. The moment she started thinking about other men is the moment when she started cheating on David.

Having sex is just a final step, deed done - nothing to rescue after that.

Then everyone is a cheater. Because it's totally normal to think about other people. And when everyone is a cheater then no one is a cheater, unless they act on it.

Nobody expects the Thought Police. Because they don't exist.

 

[Sadowdark]

model garvin name good guy ?
really
even before see his character in game just look his face and smile you know this man is dirty man
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[Enola Ga... Man!]

Then everyone is a cheater. Because it's totally normal to think about other people. And when everyone is a cheater then no one is a cheater, unless they act on it.

Nobody expects the Thought Police. Because they don't exist.

You can think about other people. The problem is when you think about them in sexual manner and desire them while being with someone who you assumably "love".

Sometimes nothing will happen. But sometimes one will lead to another and next step will be taken.

And I don't care about what exists and whatnot. I listen to my internal moral compass and thanks to that I know what is decent and what is not. I don't need external assurance. I'm confident man.

Besides, if your partner is okay with you thinking about other people, that's fine. I guess no harm done.

 

[boobthief]

You can think about other people. The problem is when you think about them in sexual manner and desire them while being with someone who you assumably "love".

Sometimes nothing will happen. But sometimes one will lead to another and next step will be taken.

And I don't care about what exists and whatnot. I listen to my internal moral compass and thanks to that I know what is decent and what is not. I don't need external assurance. I'm confident man.

Besides, if your partner is okay with you thinking about other people, that's fine. I guess no harm done.

So tell me this: did you ever think about anyone (attractive, naked, sexually) other than your partner?

No? If no: "Liar!" Please speak honestly, for we all do!

So, there is a difference. Huge difference. Biological imperative difference because humans are designed to think about procreation. But what makes us humans and not animals is the difference between thoughts and actions.

Anna, depending on how you play, is in a bad marriage. Her partner, David, is either cheating or not fulfilling his commitments / making his partner happy. That void is this game. People should not maintain a miserable relationship.

 

[Couto25]

You can think about other people. The problem is when you think about them in sexual manner and desire them while being with someone who you assumably "love".

Sometimes nothing will happen. But sometimes one will lead to another and next step will be taken.

And I don't care about what exists and whatnot. I listen to my internal moral compass and thanks to that I know what is decent and what is not. I don't need external assurance. I'm confident man.

Besides, if your partner is okay with you thinking about other people, that's fine. I guess no harm done.

Thats perfect way to unporn the porn website by Giving faithful speech.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Let's keep it 100 She emotional cheated before Alexia came on the spot hell you can say she physically did as well. Boss booty grab no consequence and Chris booty grab no consequence. Thinking about other men especially dreaming about them. this is all before Alexia so in the end she was going to cross the line. The illusion of david cheating only sped it up.

 

[Taven Val]

Let's keep it 100 She emotional cheated before Alexia came on the spot hell you can say she physically did as well. Boss booty grab no consequence and Chris booty grab no consequence. Thinking about other men especially dreaming about them. this is all before Alexia so in the end she was going to cross the line. The illusion of david cheating only sped it up.

 

[Enola Ga... Man!]

So tell me this: did you ever think about anyone (attractive, naked, sexually) other than your partner?



No? If no: "Liar!" Please speak honestly, for we all do!



So, there is a difference. Huge difference. Biological imperative difference because humans are designed to think about procreation. But what makes us humans and not animals is the difference between thoughts and actions.



Anna, depending on how you play, is in a bad marriage. Her partner, David, is either cheating or not fulfilling his commitments / making his partner happy. That void is this game. People should not maintain a miserable relationship.

We're going quite personal here, and I'm not used to spread information about myself. The less anybody knows about you, the better. I hope you don't mind.


Joking aside, of course in that term I somewhat agree with you, I never said that thinking about others in sexual way is heavy cheating and should be decisive factor in relationship ending. It matters how important those thoughts are to you. How much you desire it.

After all we can daydream about anything, and it doesn't necessarily mean we will act towards it further.
I'm just saying it always starts in the head and it can go deeper.

I would also not degrade animals that much, there are a few species which are monogamous despite obvious disadvantage in terms of multiplying quantity and species perseverance.
But is this just a hardcoded behaviour without any thought behind it- it's unknown. Animals can (and still do) surprise us each day.

Something I cannot agree with, is your claim that Anna is in a bad marriage. She is not. Not at all.
In the best scenario, Anna has a faithful husband which provides for her, he is gentle an confident at the same time, he is a good father to her daughter. He is also honest.
The only thing lacking is the sex aspect, she doesn't feel fulfilled recently due to her hormone problem and his troubles at work - so it may be the cause of his bad sexual performance. Or maybe he is just simply bad in bed?

Is it enough for you to blame this guy and throw him into "bad marriage" package?

Even so, this problem could be talked upon, and solved in few ways, but Anna decides that the best solution would be to flirt with her husbands best friend (or others) behind his back...

That's sick, my friend. You do not solve problems in this wicked way. At least normal person would not do this. On the other hand, someone with "cheating" mentality would try things like that and find many excuses like Anna's "Go with the flow!".

So this is a bad marriage after all. Bad for David with this ticking blonde bomb which can explode and destroy his world, just because she decided to fool around instead of communication with her life partner.

Thats perfect way to unporn the porn website by Giving faithful speech.

I'm doing Jesus work here. Be grateful.

On the more serious note, I see this more as adult game site with porn here and there, but not strictly as a porn site only.
We're discussing the plot of this game which is circulating around many important things, not sex only.

So this place is as good as any to discuss about morality and other things involved.