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ollakua

Newbie
Sep 19, 2020
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I think the story is great, and if some people don't like it, make your own game or find another way to reach the climax.
 

Couto25

Engaged Member
Oct 7, 2023
2,364
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Tell him to get his story train back to the track and he can enter all the tease whenever any antagonist came on her path related to main storyline.

For me the most favourite moment was Kendra past story, and where David actually went for cheating hiding facts about Alexia and his business and his friends (Rob and Chris) including Kendra's puppet convinced Ana that David cheated on her. This was the last moment when the story was in the track. It's an NTR so most favourite moment should be the reason of why the fight happened. Until that time the story was on track.

Since that point onwards the story never came back on track. ...like where the hell is Alexia? What happened to gym trainer? Why to stretch Ana's daddy issues with her internal fight and keep it as a center of focus for 1+ years (4/5 updates by now..same thing since CH3 started) when the focus of the story should be related to Kendra and her puppet's plot of what Kendra's trying to achieve or to catch them in faithful route?? Instead of that the story goes on different track...her daddy issues, her brother issues, her child issues, reasoning to be submitted to old people etc. I mean where the hell is any content related to search Alexia to get evidence about kendra / to prove David innocence / to show how David is solving his business issue to get financial stability?

Grant can marry Ana's mom and can have sex with her lol Ana's mom is free and can beg for money from grant for her son..if Ana has daddy issues, be her stepfather n treat her like hank lol..but move the story relevant to the main issue that created the distance between David and Ana.
 
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TonyMurray

Forum Fanatic
Apr 8, 2024
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Tell him to get his story train back to the track and he can enter all the tease whenever any antagonist came on her path related to main storyline.

For me the most favourite moment was Kendra past story, and where David actually went for cheating hiding facts about Alexia and his business and his friends (Rob and Chris) including Kendra's puppet convinced Ana that David cheated on her. This was the last moment when the story was in the track. It's an NTR so most favourite moment should be the reason of why the fight happened. Until that time the story was on track.

Since that point onwards the story never came back on track. ...like where the hell is Alexia? What happened to gym trainer? Why to stretch Ana's daddy issues with her internal fight and keep it as a center of focus for 1+ years (4/5 updates by now..same thing since CH3 started) when the focus of the story should be related to Kendra and her puppet's plot or to catch them?? Instead of that the story goes on different track...her daddy issues, her brother issues, her child issues, reasoning to be submitted to old people etc. I mean where the hell is any content related to search Alexia to get evidence about kendra / to prove David innocence / to show how David is solving his business issue to get financial stability?
100% agree. I really enjoyed the initial story, with the two sides shown separately, and then the combination of them for "part three". After that, the release schedule hasn't helped it any, but the game just doesn't seem to have done much - and certainly nothing that's set it apart from any other game of the same type. For me, the opening couple of parts did set it apart though.
 
Jul 21, 2023
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I think the story is great, and if some people don't like it, make your own game or find another way to reach the climax.
Exactly. I have no experience in programming games myself, but it must be a lot of work to render the pictures, make the storylines, adjust them to the player's actions... the thing is, this game has potential to be quite complex... and if every route is to be accounted for, we can probably wait for years until we have a finished game.
But that's my noob assesment.
 

Pypypy

New Member
Jan 25, 2024
8
33
The only good part was the original story setting, which was none of the Dev's business, all he did was a summary.
After that... meh...couldn't even finish a tease properly, most of the hot scenes so far were forced and some were irrelevant, zero fluidity.
If it's not for Anna's model, they game is definitely considered meh...

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He should thank the original writer immensely for all the money he got.
 
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