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Of course, we want to see a lot more, but the update is good. I would call it gorgeous, but the final touch, where Anna transfers from Marvin's car to Jake's car, somewhat worsened the overall picture of the plot for me. I understand, Mr. Palmer, that we have a lot of characters and there is a need to connect the plot with each of them, but this is too much. Because of this, Anna begins to look like a relay trophy and ceases to represent a gorgeous young mother, wife and respected employee of a law firm.
Yes, she made an appointment with her boss for tomorrow, she actually promised to meet with two guys in another office, and this fits into the plot quite normally. But the moment she gets out of Marvin's car and into Jake's, it somehow dramatically changed my perception of the update in a negative way.
I can understand that it was dangerous to leave her with Marvin for a while longer, but on the other hand, if Marvin had stopped and driven Anna to the house, Anna might have gained even more respect for Marvin.
In general, this moment somewhat spoiled for me the overall excellent impression of the update. And of course, it's quite obvious that Mr. Palmer has done a great job, for which I sincerely thank him.
Thank you, Mr. Palmer! I look forward to the continuation of your story.
Yes, she made an appointment with her boss for tomorrow, she actually promised to meet with two guys in another office, and this fits into the plot quite normally. But the moment she gets out of Marvin's car and into Jake's, it somehow dramatically changed my perception of the update in a negative way.
I can understand that it was dangerous to leave her with Marvin for a while longer, but on the other hand, if Marvin had stopped and driven Anna to the house, Anna might have gained even more respect for Marvin.
In general, this moment somewhat spoiled for me the overall excellent impression of the update. And of course, it's quite obvious that Mr. Palmer has done a great job, for which I sincerely thank him.
Thank you, Mr. Palmer! I look forward to the continuation of your story.
The point of this update was to serve Ana as a dish to Marvin so that he could install the cam.
Now he left the story of Marvin in a cliffhanger...When Kendra successfully intoxicated Ana and Marvin took her to get a chance, Jake arrived and saved her lol.
When Ana is not intoxicated, then Marvin got a HJ....so in full corrupt route with drunk Ana, Marvin is still unsatisfied. Did he agreed to install the cam in her office after that? I miss that part. He did got topless pic of Ana to jerk though.
Now he left the story of Marvin in a cliffhanger...When Kendra successfully intoxicated Ana and Marvin took her to get a chance, Jake arrived and saved her lol.
When Ana is not intoxicated, then Marvin got a HJ....so in full corrupt route with drunk Ana, Marvin is still unsatisfied. Did he agreed to install the cam in her office after that? I miss that part. He did got topless pic of Ana to jerk though.
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hi, new here
"If smaller updates bother you, wait a few updates before downloading/playing."
"This game is a slow burn and won't contain much sexual content until Part 3 "
where are we in terms of parts?
so does the wife get fucked & bred by others than MC or not yet?
i understand it's a "slow burn" but there's slow burn & there's maybe it'll be completed once i'm sex feet under type of "slow burn"
so which one this AVN falls under?
"If smaller updates bother you, wait a few updates before downloading/playing."
"This game is a slow burn and won't contain much sexual content until Part 3 "
where are we in terms of parts?
so does the wife get fucked & bred by others than MC or not yet?
i understand it's a "slow burn" but there's slow burn & there's maybe it'll be completed once i'm sex feet under type of "slow burn"
so which one this AVN falls under?
We are in 5th update of chapter 3.. if you're looking for penetration sex then maybe after 4th updates from now, the story will reach there. 18 months approx just in case if trump policies didn't hamper the work time he allocate to work for this VN.
By sexual content, he meant tease scenes.
for the one millionth time, i feel so badly that this game would be so much better without that ridiculous Kendra character. What an absolute mood killer.
Killerboy223
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waited 10years for HJ lol
mike087
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Do you think its gona be nauthty scenes with David's father?
ugh ugloidd marvin putting hands on anna, worst update literally nothing. we want chris and jake not od hags
Kaustubh_03
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I know right don't want to see her at all, feels like it's forced unless they add something more to her in the future even then I'd skip her scenes
kayoo007
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I completely agree with you.
IMO the update is great and I appreciate how the developer takes the time to build tension.
When Jack showed up and Marvin didn't start the car to leave the parking lot, I feared the worst, and unfortunately, it happened.
In my personal opinion, Jack is a pale copy of Chris and thus the most boring character in the game.
So I would have preferred it if Marvin and Anna had gone, where they actually were within the game, then, for example, had seen Jake approaching, and Marvin had driven past Jake with Anna beside him, grinning, implying that he may lay her tonight, but just taking her home anyway, because she insisted or whatever.
But I'm also a self-proclaimed fan of giving unattractive characters who are nowhere near on the same level as the woman a chance with her, so I'm biased
EDIT: There is an ending, where Marvin takes her home by the way and I prefer this one.
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JEER0X
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i find it a little unimmersive that 1 crazy ex somehow controls the whole town
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This forum is exhausting. I swear we went through the entire vicious cycle in less than 2 hours.
It would be an acceptable update if it hadn’t taken more than half a year… how mediocre and full of hot air Mr. Palmer is…