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As it turns out, Marvin & Hank are brothers Marvin is Jakes daddy, and with Marvin being the oldest he has first dip
This is the original story.
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The author TeamEquipe has other great stories too. Beware what you wish for and Matt and Lauren are couple of my favorites.
NewTricks
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I do like the stories, even though the story version of Jake is much more malevolent than his feckless game counterpart. Like every guy other than the husband in Tina's story is completely unhinged. It is like they got some kind of virus that swells up your dick and eats the part of your brain where the conscience resides. Poor Jim, even though he can be a bit of an asshole too.
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Kaustubh_03
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No way ! Now I am gonna binge read all the chapters. If binge reading is a thing idk thanks mate it's way better than waiting for a small update in 3 years.
I wish TeamEquipe hadn't deleted the part 2 of this story. I tried searching for the part two of this story but I couldn't find it.
iainmore
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It might be that they let another writer take on a story. That often happens at Literotica.
Actually, TeamEquipe had posted part 2 of How to ruin a perfect marriage but he took it down because of so many negative comments.
All platforms have those who b***h and bash the authors if they don't like their story or agree with it.
The main reason that I'm still following this game is because of how to ruin your perfect marriage.
iainmore
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I didn't know that about them taking down a story. There is a lot of bashing that goes on there like here Authors need a thick skin like Devs sometimes.
CorruptedMindz
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there was an audiofile somewhere. I think it was posted in this thread. I downloaded too
knight1970
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You mean audiofile for the part 2? If you could share the links or if you could remember from where you downloaded, that would be great.
I remember seeing an audio file named "part 2". But it's actually part 1 story divided into two parts so that they don't have to narrate the story in a long run.
Sadowdark
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This story is different from the game but has some common elements of the main characters some characters from the game. At first the story starts similar but then it is different. But the game will not be the same as this story.
Now what we're getting It's a different approach to the story right? So the dev knows what he's doing not copy pasting the whole story..
Alen1985
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I just hope I can finish the game without cheating, no NTR on my first playthrough, and the second time I play it I'm going to go the infidelity route.
I hope MP sticks with the same storyline with lil bit of variation on some scenes and obviously erotica in main antagonists path...because the way he's adding multiple characters into the game, to be honest I don't like few of his experiments the way he kept adding new characters even after 5 updates on chapter 3...He's losing his touch with main storyline..and the update is becoming shorter from the perspective of main storyline. All he show is repetitive scenarios of tease fest with chris/Marvin/other antagonist, next will be grant...showing more n more Ana's problems in life and she's wet all the time...and the result of upcoming update will be same in the end...Ana didn't cheated, David is trying to convince her to get back/ getting angry on her in corrupt route.
MP has to move main storyline showing someone trying to collect evidence about David faithfulness/ Trying to search Alexia/ Kendra collect evidence of Ana's cheating and give it to David...something like that...The main story is stuck as of now for both faithful/corrupt route...and the game took a long and slow path on satisfying individual antagonist fantasies with all justifications of why Ana is getting corrupted with those individual antagonist. David financial situation since part 1 has not been covered , neither he left for the meeting to save his company. Nobody is trying to search Alexia...I mean the relationship is on a brink of divorce and David is just sitting at home without even trying to collect evidence that he was framed and he's also not trying to save his company too lol.... None of the major factors that created distance between David/Ana has been covered in CH3....and the main story is stuck in tease fest with different antagonist per update with justifications.
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CorruptedMindz
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I tried to upload it here, but it is too large for server.
TeamEquipe
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