Couto25

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But buddy you should be happy finally there are trailers where Anna is with other guys.:eek::ROFLMAO: And she's not crying and she's not alone. But you can't see what emotions she has. :unsure:Did the creator listen to you?
I am happy where Ana is with any other guy anyways lol I dont have any preference like I want Ana with Jake or Hank or Marvin lol...I am fine with all of them and I am sure there will be some story with one of them per update anyways.

MP doesnt listen to anyone anyways..He's just trolling around...I just want to see with upcoming updates, whether Ana's corruption will increase and reach to the sex eventually on per update basis where character storyline doesn't matter and only corruption matters for example HJ and BJ with Chris, Fingering with Marvin, licking with Grant and sex with Jake...or his plan is to troll on corruption on per character storyline basis like AWAM like HJ to everyone per update then BJ to everyone per update..then getting fingered with everyone then sex from next week story..something like that. Wanna see how much he wanna troll. lol
 
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Hmmmm...? I just don't know.

It's all about conditions between Anna and Hank. At this moment, Anna is tolerating some of Hank's nonsense and is somewhat leery of Hank; plus, Anna is physically repulsed by Hank and is put off with a lot of his behaviors. Now if you are a writer and need to close a story gap and want to keep the plot plausible, you have to overcome all obstacles to close that gap to bring about the event.

So honestly what are the best strategies Hank could employ to set himself up to make his move on Anna?

Does it make more sense that Hank to constantly physically harass Anna till he has an opportunity to make his play, or to continue is inappropriate discussions with Anna and wear her down that way? Now spanking and groping Anna does work once Hank and Anna are in a physical relationship as well as some office play. But till then how does Hank off-foot Anna so she isn't so guarded?

We don't want a year's worth of updates to evolve Anna's character to come around to accept Hank. Trying to seduce Anna with inaperturate discussions is damn near as long a process as it would take to evolve Anna's character. But the reverse, Hank constantly touching Anna when she doesn't want it or even like it, just makes Anna more guarded against Hank. What is need is a critical catalysis moment that redefines their situation.

Already Hank has started to playout the daddy card and for a lack of a better term for it, he's grooming Anna. It's the fastest path forward in my view for Hank to groom Anna and convince Anna he is harmless. If Anna is totally on her guard against Hank shenanigans, it would be like trying to move a mountain that allows Anna to plausibly and WILLINGLY let events unfold with Hank.

But if it's Mr. Plamer's plan to just a simple power play of boss verse employee... solves pretty much every obstacle. As a member of the audience playing the game what would we rather play...? A corruption path of Anna's own desires and weakness that she is giving into, or an Anna blackmailed into an unwanted relationship.
Obviously hank will play daddy's cards...plus to fulfill his fantasy about ass he'll spank her in form of some punishment where she might not satisfy her clients or didn't manage to get the contract..Hank will groom her to be a perfect bitch to satisfy himself..That's what my guess is.

The sneak peek might be where Ana came in to greet Hank by kissing him or leaving the office after kissing him... that's what he asked for in the last update.. knowing hank, he'll cope a feel of her ass for sure lol.
 
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Well, Chris too was costantly harrassin' Anna but end up with a Blowjob even when he's the so called best friend of long date of David
Hank physics may repulsed Anna but the resistance in the full corrupt path and the Faithfull one have a huge difference and don't forget Anna somehow want revenge on David in the full corrupt path so there is less reason to not cheat with a man physicaly uglier than David.
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I can agree and yet disagree

I'd like it to be just that simple but it's an apple verse potato argument. First Chris has had more time to work on Anna... he's young... isn't 5'8 and 300 pounds and been around the time of the dinosaurs. To be fair yes, gorgeous goddesses do marry fat, ancients with disgusting behaviors (Not going to mention names:whistle:). But under most normal situation's genetics and biological traits as well as social constructs dictate our choices.

"Hank physics may repulsed Anna but the resistance in the full corrupt path and the Faithfull one have a huge difference and don't forget Anna somehow want revenge on David in the full corrupt path so there is less reason to not cheat with a man physicaly uglier than David."

Hank physics may repulsed Anna but the resistance Mr. Palmer seems to have gone out of his way to totally explain Anna's mind set how she feels about Hank. So either by accident or by some intent on stressing that point, something it seems is in the mix

in the full corrupt path and the Faithfull one have a huge difference and don't forget Anna somehow want revenge on David And if so, Chris, Robinson, and Jake make more sense than Hank, Grant or Marvin

in the full corrupt path so there is less reason to not cheat with a man physicaly uglier than David. That just doesn't seem to fit as a motivation for Anna. If a woman is going to seek revenge, would David's friend Chris be the most logical? I mean its digging in the knife deep and really twisting it.

Now you are certainly onto something about 'corruption'...

and what better forms of corruption is Anna's own sexual appetites, weaknesses, and dare I say even naivety as well as being well groomed. Now it's easy to see Hank at a distance his attempts to make certain things becoming "normal" interactions, Anna calling him daddy, kissing, and accepting tenderness (hugs) or just call it grooming. To get Anna, Hank has to get around every other complication that stands between him and his goal of getting Anna.
(Some of the complications is first would-be Anna's reluctance is if caught being with Hank, that would give David more leverage in case of divorce. Right now, I am assuming some factors that Mr. Palmer hasn't address like if Anna is on birth control {that's an issue if it's part of the story}, Hank has only one real do-or-die opportunity with Anna when it comes to the business trip; thereafter it'll be hard to plausibly have Hank visit her at her home--thus most other activities would be in his office.

Now that is why I like this game. Anyone can write a story of a jilted woman in a marriage hooking up with the likes of Chris, Jake or Robinson. But it's the Hanks and Marvins (eventually Grant too) that makes it a story. It's challenging.
 

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I haven’t written here for a long time, but I see you’re bored here/

Merry Christmas to all Catholics!

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chris only one enjoy xmas maybe with anna bad boy...he not gona let her go without smoke burn
 

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this lovely art i try learn and by far its very interesting thing i want to learn and hoop one day i make like this
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Quick thread on interesting plot points Mr Palmer has shared in the story so far and how it could impact future updates:

1. 'Speculation that the poor relationship between Anna and her dad contributed to his sudden decline in health' - probably explains the guilt she battles - but may also be used as a means for Stenstromber and Hank to play into and channel Anna's guilt to coerce her for their benefit. Screenshot 2024-12-29 at 11.10.03 AM.png

2. 'Anna's father had seen Strenstromber greet his daughter with a hug and kiss on her lips' - as we saw in the last update this is something that Hank has now taken up, and the fact Anna was used to this previously might explain why she wasn't as disgusted by the situation as she frankly should have been. Screenshot 2024-12-29 at 11.10.57 AM.png

3. 'If he wasn't here, maybe I'd consider it. Right now? No way.' - Whilst Stenstromber clearly has a long way to go to build bridges with Anna, the fact their intimacy had previously almost reached a level where she considered 'relieving' him shows how close they were.
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4. 'Too bad she's not wearing a skirt' - Maybe a moot point but we know Dale and Anna are set to have a run-in, with Anna wearing a skirt this time round. Will she be wearing the thong underneath that Dale mentioned last time? Maybe an insight into what their interaction could be for the next update.
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5. 'Maybe Hank could refer the best family litigator in town' - going forward Hank's ability to manipulate Anna will increase on the David/Anna broken relationship path as he can use his power to be an ally to Anna as she navigates a potential divorce. No better proof of that then when Anna says straight after - 'Keeping Hank happy may benefit me in more than one way'
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6. 'I want a pair of her dirty panties...and I want naked pics of her.'
Leonard makes his demands clear and we know Chris/Anna haven't sexted for a while. Depending on the path chosen by those playing maybe nudes could be on the horizon. Chris himself says he can't guarantee the nudes but the panties might be easier to come by...could the lingerie pics, if shared with Chris, be a decent compromise for Leonard?
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7. 'And I'm saving your husband's ass from a major lawsuit' - ssd Hank holds multiple cards, from helping Anna with litigation, to helping mentor and groom her for partner and arguably most significantly, saving David's bacon. Depending on the path taken with Anna/Hank this could be a saving grace that helps get Anna/David's marriage back on track or a tool for Hank to tear their relationship further apart and bring Anna closer to him - in fact, Anna might even prefer this to be the case on a certain path if it helps her keep custody of her child.
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8. 'But whatever...I want to leave this city anyways.' - Feel like more should be made of this declaration by Chris. May have been a path dependent line but it's clear he is intent on getting Anna at any cost, given his future lies elsewhere. But does that mean there is no future where Chris/Anna's relationship develops into something beyond just lust, e.g. a second marriage/pregnancy with Chris? Plans can always change, right?
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9. and last but not least... something that's not really a plot point but I find hard to believe - Hank is a tits guy?! Always thought he preferred Anna's ass more given how much he bangs on about it but replaying this scene says otherwise apparently...
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Scenario I think would be a great. ACCIDENTAL PENETRATION. I will use jake in the office skip past the foreplay and get to the how. Jake has her bent over the desk skirt up panties off. Jake slides his dick between Annas thigh and starts stroking back and forth. Anna is moaning as Jakes cock glides against her soaked lips and clit. Anna turns her head and tells jake be careful don't put it in. Jake assures her he won't. This act goes on for a couple of minutes. Jake speeds up Anna is dripping wet, Jakes says I'm going to cum as he speeds up, he gives one rough stroke he penetrates Anna as she screams Jake cums in Anna. Jake pulls out fast and rough Anna and his cum splashes on the ground, she drops to the ground panting and drooling. His and her cum pouring out of her on the floor. Jake starts apologizing, Anna in a low voice tells him to leave. Her body shaking from the mini orgasms that don't seem to have any signs of stopping. She yells out leave Jake puts his pants on apologizes as he rushes out. Anna still on the floor tries to gain her balance she walks to her chair gets wipes and proceeds to clean herself up. As she sits down another waves spasms pass through her. She has never felt anything like this before. Shame starts to pass over her, but it is quickly washed away by curiosity and lust. When she finally calms down, she gets her stuff and proceeds to leave, before she does, she looks at the floor and sees the puddle of her infidelity lying bare for all to see. When she leaves the building, we are bought to the basement of building to find Marvin jerking off while repeatedly watching Jake and Annas sexual escapade. Guess Marvin got the camera working.
 

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Scenario I think would be a great. ACCIDENTAL PENETRATION. I will use jake in the office skip past the foreplay and get to the how. Jake has her bent over the desk skirt up panties off. Jake slides his dick between Annas thigh and starts stroking back and forth. Anna is moaning as Jakes cock glides against her soaked lips and clit. Anna turns her head and tells jake be careful don't put it in. Jake assures her he won't. This act goes on for a couple of minutes. Jake speeds up Anna is dripping wet, Jakes says I'm going to cum as he speeds up, he gives one rough stroke he penetrates Anna as she screams Jake cums in Anna. Jake pulls out fast and rough Anna and his cum splashes on the ground, she drops to the ground panting and drooling. His and her cum pouring out of her on the floor. Jake starts apologizing, Anna in a low voice tells him to leave. Her body shaking from the mini orgasms that don't seem to have any signs of stopping. She yells out leave Jake puts his pants on apologizes as he rushes out. Anna still on the floor tries to gain her balance she walks to her chair gets wipes and proceeds to clean herself up. As she sits down another waves spasms pass through her. She has never felt anything like this before. Shame starts to pass over her, but it is quickly washed away by curiosity and lust. When she finally calms down, she gets her stuff and proceeds to leave, before she does, she looks at the floor and sees the puddle of her infidelity lying bare for all to see. When she leaves the building, we are bought to the basement of building to find Marvin jerking off while repeatedly watching Jake and Annas sexual escapade. Guess Marvin got the camera working.
Very good scenario, except for the Marvin part. Leave Marvin out and this is great!

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