ItsNotUs

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WTF?

I hoped that after the cringe with call me daddy, there would be no more such situations...
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It's strange that Anna doesn't have a drop of regret! Lol Don't be like Sophia every time after something bitter that she did regret it, but at least a drop of regret could be added to this situation for truthfulness! But no, Chris is a friend with a benefit whom i'm just helping to discharge... Ok

We just got to know Anna mother...
She is presented as if we have already seen her more than once, i.e. there is no preparation for their meeting,.. Bam, here's a mommy, forcibly inserted into the scene. Let's not get too far off the subject, but why couldn't dev work on her appearance? To make her a beautiful-attractive MILF, well, as if we have many different ways and many characters, let David charm her, well, who cares (so it's like an idea for the long future). She's dressed like some kind of collective farmer and doesn't look like a rich man's wife!
Just an example of moms from another game and how they are dressed.
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Because of Anna's appearance, they start fighting in front of a small child! What? Anna, you seem to love your daughter! What kind of behavior is this?
It is revealed to us that the mother is like the father, and the father is not just strict, he turns into a tough tyrant! How does Anna love him then? He calls her weak, etc. He's a despot. Yes, i understand that Anna may love him, but not as much as the plot shows us. Let me be a cynic, but with this behavior, it seems to me that Anna and her mother would have breathed a sigh of relief when he "played the box"! It would be better to imagine a pretty attractive MILF who, even if she didn't dress too provocatively, didn't dress modestly with everything and, on the contrary, would support her daughter in choosing her outfit, but she turns into a despot with the words Elies, you were right, she's weak, i'll keep an eye on her! What the fuck?

The first half of the working day, Anna just works, Jake just sits and has such a business, but now it's not up to shenanigans! What? No, come on, shenanigans and Chris, work didn't bother them before!
But Chip and Dale have the hardons on Anna! Anna gets a slap on the ass, kind of displaced and confused, but a wound-up monkey starts pounding in her head and she immediately starts joking as if nothing had happened...

Daddy, sit on my lap... no pain no gain is what daddy always said!? That's what gym jocks say, bodybuilders, etc., not lawyers! Rather, lawyers would be more suited to knowledge, the power of enlightenment, the essence, or to achieve their goals in any way! We omit the whole daddy things and move on to the scene where Anna is sitting on Hank's lap. This scene could have been hotter, starting with stroking her thighs to pawing her ass, where Hank could have gone further and put his hand between her legs and fondle her pussy over her panties! But we get up to the bottom and just hand a little below the waist and kiss!? A kiss? A kiss is a more intimate moment than a paw! And why doesn't this scene have a choice option at all? Does it have other outcoms depending on past choices?

The conversation in the restaurant could have been shortened. I understand that there are very important points there, but there is also a lot of water!
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Here we will meet two guys, but why make bbc so stupid? Oh my watch, I'm flying booga googa ha... WTF?
After the shot, we find out that at a party of David's company, Anna was groped by some guy and she was so excited that they fucked four hours and conceived Sofia. What? If we act out the way of love, is there the same text? That is, we understand that she would have been naughty before, but this is too much, especially in the context of conception after!
You know, it would probably be nice to have some kind of non-sex but teasing hot scene between Anna and a black guy, but Anna pushes him away and Marvin appears to western music...
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Ahahahaha
What kind of fake scene? Well, Kendra obviously set it up. You know, the scene with Marvin could have been normal, it was funny in some places, but you had to turn it into a rape scene? Why take this step with the love drug? As for me, it's a dumb move! It would have been better if everything had gone its own way, Anna would have just had too much alcohol and allowed herself too much, but the scene where Marvin gropes her captures the one that was before!
Then Jake appears, you know, i wish Jake had seduced her himself in the story, he had everything he needed to do it, but thanks to the MP, he doesn't have a brain! He could naturally comfort Anna while helping her find a solution to her situation with David. This could have started a storyline where Anna could fall in love with Jake. I just felt like it after the moment with the drugs!
The scene in Marvin's van can be considered a rape! Marvin licks pussy through panties...
CRINGEEE
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Jake appears, rescues Anna, and drives her home. They end up kissing...

The option not to take the drug is substituted into the shot. Anna admires Marvin's bravery. I can understand when she was under the influence of drugs, this situation rolled over, but why make her such a naive fool? Then they go to Marvin's van, where he put his cock out and starts jerking off, and Anna bares her breasts for him because he saved her, he's so brave...
MP: You're a writer, what kind of "yellow press" it is?
The action unfolds according to the previous scenario, but now Anna grabs Marvin's cock and starts jerking him off...
Fuck, kill me!!!
Is this storyline worse than low-budget films! If the rapid development with Chris could be understood, then with Marvin it's complete nonsense, with such success Anna can suck and jerk off to everyone she drank with at the bar!
Shame on the MP, shame!
You know, yesterday there was an interesting story that didn't pay off, and there was also an unexpected replay that turned the game into shit!
Kendra takes pictures of everything along the way, is MP going to do the same trick with David as with Anna, and like David has to believe the story!? Lol

In short, judging by the fact that there was no conversation with David at the end, this is the loyal path of, that i did not play, but the conclusion is that the update where there are big scenes that the MP artist was working on, it is not clear that a lot of time was spent, but the output turned out to be a substance that smells bad and have brown color!


The only thing i liked was this shot and i would have made the background a little darker.
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La Dani

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I am not very sure that, IRL, the story works like this when a wife is pissed off with her husband and fears that she is betrayed.
I have to ask who knows more than me :ROFLMAO:
 
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WTF?

I hoped that after the cringe with call me daddy, there would be no more such situations...
View attachment 4810125
It's strange that Anna doesn't have a drop of regret! Lol Don't be like Sophia every time after something bitter that she did regret it, but at least a drop of regret could be added to this situation for truthfulness! But no, Chris is a friend with a benefit whom i'm just helping to discharge... Ok

We just got to know Anna mother...
She is presented as if we have already seen her more than once, i.e. there is no preparation for their meeting,.. Bam, here's a mommy, forcibly inserted into the scene. Let's not get too far off the subject, but why couldn't dev work on her appearance? To make her a beautiful-attractive MILF, well, as if we have many different ways and many characters, let David charm her, well, who cares (so it's like an idea for the long future). She's dressed like some kind of collective farmer and doesn't look like a rich man's wife!
Just an example of moms from another game and how they are dressed.
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Because of Anna's appearance, they start fighting in front of a small child! What? Anna, you seem to love your daughter! What kind of behavior is this?
It is revealed to us that the mother is like the father, and the father is not just strict, he turns into a tough tyrant! How does Anna love him then? He calls her weak, etc. He's a despot. Yes, i understand that Anna may love him, but not as much as the plot shows us. Let me be a cynic, but with this behavior, it seems to me that Anna and her mother would have breathed a sigh of relief when he "played the box"! It would be better to imagine a pretty attractive MILF who, even if she didn't dress too provocatively, didn't dress modestly with everything and, on the contrary, would support her daughter in choosing her outfit, but she turns into a despot with the words Elies, you were right, she's weak, i'll keep an eye on her! What the fuck?

The first half of the working day, Anna just works, Jake just sits and has such a business, but now it's not up to shenanigans! What? No, come on, shenanigans and Chris, work didn't bother them before!
But Chip and Dale have the hardons on Anna! Anna gets a slap on the ass, kind of displaced and confused, but a wound-up monkey starts pounding in her head and she immediately starts joking as if nothing had happened...

Daddy, sit on my lap... no pain no gain is what daddy always said!? That's what gym jocks say, bodybuilders, etc., not lawyers! Rather, lawyers would be more suited to knowledge, the power of enlightenment, the essence, or to achieve their goals in any way! We omit the whole daddy things and move on to the scene where Anna is sitting on Hank's lap. This scene could have been hotter, starting with stroking her thighs to pawing her ass, where Hank could have gone further and put his hand between her legs and fondle her pussy over her panties! But we get up to the bottom and just hand a little below the waist and kiss!? A kiss? A kiss is a more intimate moment than a paw! And why doesn't this scene have a choice option at all? Does it have other outcoms depending on past choices?

The conversation in the restaurant could have been shortened. I understand that there are very important points there, but there is also a lot of water!
View attachment 4810175
Here we will meet two guys, but why make bbc so stupid? Oh my watch, I'm flying booga googa ha... WTF?
After the shot, we find out that at a party of David's company, Anna was groped by some guy and she was so excited that they fucked four hours and conceived Sofia. What? If we act out the way of love, is there the same text? That is, we understand that she would have been naughty before, but this is too much, especially in the context of conception after!
You know, it would probably be nice to have some kind of non-sex but teasing hot scene between Anna and a black guy, but Anna pushes him away and Marvin appears to western music...
View attachment 4810182
Ahahahaha
What kind of fake scene? Well, Kendra obviously set it up. You know, the scene with Marvin could have been normal, it was funny in some places, but you had to turn it into a rape scene? Why take this step with the love drug? As for me, it's a dumb move! It would have been better if everything had gone its own way, Anna would have just had too much alcohol and allowed herself too much, but the scene where Marvin gropes her captures the one that was before!
Then Jake appears, you know, i wish Jake had seduced her himself in the story, he had everything he needed to do it, but thanks to the MP, he doesn't have a brain! He could naturally comfort Anna while helping her find a solution to her situation with David. This could have started a storyline where Anna could fall in love with Jake. I just felt like it after the moment with the drugs!
The scene in Marvin's van can be considered a rape! Marvin licks pussy through panties...
CRINGEEE
View attachment 4810191
Jake appears, rescues Anna, and drives her home. They end up kissing...

The option not to take the drug is substituted into the shot. Anna admires Marvin's bravery. I can understand when she was under the influence of drugs, this situation rolled over, but why make her such a naive fool? Then they go to Marvin's van, where he put his cock out and starts jerking off, and Anna bares her breasts for him because he saved her, he's so brave...
MP: You're a writer, what kind of "yellow press" it is?
The action unfolds according to the previous scenario, but now Anna grabs Marvin's cock and starts jerking him off...
Fuck, kill me!!!
Is this storyline worse than low-budget films! If the rapid development with Chris could be understood, then with Marvin it's complete nonsense, with such success Anna can suck and jerk off to everyone she drank with at the bar!
Shame on the MP, shame!
You know, yesterday there was an interesting story that didn't pay off, and there was also an unexpected replay that turned the game into shit!
Kendra takes pictures of everything along the way, is MP going to do the same trick with David as with Anna, and like David has to believe the story!? Lol

In short, judging by the fact that there was no conversation with David at the end, this is the loyal path of, that i did not play, but the conclusion is that the update where there are big scenes that the MP artist was working on, it is not clear that a lot of time was spent, but the output turned out to be a substance that smells bad and have brown color!


The only thing i liked was this shot and i would have made the background a little darker.
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Don't forget the stupidest
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I dunno I really liked this change in Jakes character. Anna has way too many pervy rapists trying to get after her its boring. It's easy for Anna to dodge these creeps and rapists but Jake actually caring about her actually represents an existential threat to her relationship with David. Even if Anna cheats with one of the pervs it wouldn't really mean anything but Jake could now actually replace David so it presents a new interesting angle.
Jake being the nice guy would be fine. As yes everyone is a pervy rapist in the game. The problem is Jake has already been shown to be a complete creep and being a ladies man getting women including a mom and daughter at his last workplace to sleep with him. Working with Kendra for money to seduce Anna. Potentially lying to Anna about even having a girlfriend, sticking his crotch in her face every chance he gets, and sending inappropriate texts.

So him suddenly changing to the good guy because Palmer feels he needs someone like that now, is very poor writing. He should have shown Jake's good qualities before maybe mixed with some player tendencies. I see this happen with other games that are similar. Where they try turn a creep into a good guy, as there are no good people in the game but its too late, you've already made them too unlikeable for most people.
 
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