sercan15677
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And I hope David will catch and kick his ass.Wouldn't be surprised if a sexual assault happens. Especially when Marvin remarks he was going to have her to Kendra on the faithful path when she left alone.
Aren’t you scared of bad ass “Marvin the molester”And I hope David will catch and kick his ass.
Oh david will wipe the floor with him.Aren’t you scared of bad ass “Marvin the molester”
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Marvin already got there…over the panties, but still…What kind of scene does Grant gets in the next update? I guess he'll be the main scene guy for next short update. And it will be a tease so will he be the first to touch Ana's pussy?
Yea I don't think that count as touching pussy lol...that's like 1 more step of Corruption added in between before real pussy touching scene ...if Marvin would had done fingering that would have made more sense.Marvin already got there…over the panties, but still…
______________________________++++++++++++++++++_____________________________________________What kind of scene does Grant gets in the next update? I guess he'll be the main scene guy for next short update. And it will be a tease so will he be the first to touch Ana's pussy?
I hope Ana won't be drugged in the next update..I mean submitting unconsciously back to back is cheap.
And with her Dad's background story in the last update, I guess all flashback scenes are done. And no more flashbacks are required going ahead. I just want to see Ana taking initiative without thinking about David next time as that's covered twice already..She don't have to think about David all the time whenever she go in the main scene with anyone. Start making her corrupt and naughty rather submissive in all paths.
The thing is we already know about Grant/Ana relationship where we know grant intentions and how Ana feels for him..He doesn't have to go to flashback all the time lol..let the feelings from the current situation flow...The situation is perfect where she need money for her daughter and now she also knows that one of her brother needs money too. So this situation and current moves of Grant should matter...I guess we already seen 2 flashback of Grant, and his jerking thoughts in current storyline. It would be better if tension could be created in present storyline with conversation and moves rather than throwing past scenes/ David's thought ..Like the kitchen scene with chris/bar scene with Marvin...Bar scene literally could have been made better. I feel like the bar plot has not been used properly same as with Jake shopping plot..Like scene could have been created dancing on the floor/ touching after few drinks with guys to excite Ana upto certain level before Marvin make his entry..but he directly went to car after few petting scene with Marvin. But anyways what's done is done...I just feel like Ana is stuck in perfect situation with Grant and he can use money conditions/previous encounters story plot with him and continue the story from that but lets see how MP wanna go about it. Flashbacks / having a thought about david while giving in removes the feel of cheat from Ana/ downgrade naughtiness tendencies of her and feel like she has to be submissive in all situations/ remove the feel of sexual tension that has been created with antagonist as per current story plot and feel like it has been forced or she's doing it as revenge.______________________________++++++++++++++++++_____________________________________________
Couto25
"What kind of scene does Grant gets in the next update? {And that is complicated} I guess he'll be the main scene guy for next short update. Anna's family attempted to sue Grant to recover the father's estate, and it's fair to conclude any good will was lost toward him... And it will be a tease so will he be the first to touch Ana's pussy?
I hope Ana won't be drugged in the next update. I mean submitting unconsciously back-to-back is cheap. I think we can check off the drugs box on the list of tags. And even if drugs are used, again they'll be in a restaurant, so nothing is happening there; then there is how does he slip a micky in a drink?
As stupid as Anna can be in the grander scheme of things, she is pretty sharp about the reality of any given situation. While at Rob's house, Anna knew what he was up to... went out of her way to tease Timothy/Dale... admits her interactions are friends with benefits with the added advantage of keeping Chris on her side... her teasing and putting up with Marvin fuels her sense of empowerment being able to toy with him.
I serious don't see Anna drinking (at least at first) during the dinner with Grant to keep a clear mind. She's going to be eagle eyed looking and hoping to get back the family's money
And with her Dad's background story in the last update, I guess all flashback scenes are done. {I just don't see how Mr. Palmer can't help but use flashbacks... the audiences only know a little bit about Grant/Anna's history.} And no more flashbacks are required going ahead. I just want to see Ana taking initiative without thinking about David next time as that's covered twice already. She don't have to think about David all the time whenever she go in the main scene with anyone. Start making her corrupt and naughty rather submissive in all paths." Plausibility.... plausibility
Anna has had a long time to stew and nurture her hate for Grant. In that time a lot of good memories they shared got painted over with loathing rage and anger. You can bet the farm Grant will attempt to come on as if nothing happened and he hadn't done anything wrong... but that doesn't solve the problem of getting back into Anna's heart. So just how much time and scenes will Mr. Palmer need to cross that minefield?
Just a thought to consider. It's very possible to either be the aggressor by taking the initiative or maneuver your opponent into a trap. Consider the following premise:
Anna knows now just what can happen with Marvin--there is no innocent Anna giving an old man a cheap thrill. If she excepts going to the pool with Marvin, she'll know full well he'll try again. Next time Anna meets with Chris and if it's going to be in private, Anna knows he'll try something. Visiting Robinson again Anna knows his game. Throwing up the Marriage Shield is plausible deniability for her own actions... a forum of roleplay of being an innocent young woman being at the mercy of terrible men.
Where Anna gets stupid, is things blow up in her face. She wanted some naughty and tease Timothy/Dale and get some attention... KA-BOOM! Allows herself to be alone with Chris in the car garage... KA-BOOM! All her want for just a sip of play and naughty to get men's attention and earn some self-esteem points have things go sideways.
So if going forward does Anna need to call Chris and say "come f**k me" or allow herself to be in a position where she already knows he will... Anna fully understands consequences dealing with Marvin and can easily avoid him... if she wants to. And she knows she can easily be welcomed over at Robinson's place... so yah, she's corrupt. It may come to pass where Anna doesn't have or want to take these circular maneuvers and just make aggressive moves
___________________________________++++++++++++++++_____________________________________________The thing is we already know about Grant/Ana relationship where we know grant intentions and how Ana feels for him..He doesn't have to go to flashback all the time lol..let the feelings from the current situation flow...The situation is perfect where she need money for her daughter and now she also knows that one of her brother needs money too. So this situation and current moves of Grant should matter...I guess we already seen 2 flashback of Grant, and his jerking thoughts in current storyline. It would be better if tension could be created in present storyline with conversation and moves rather than throwing past scenes/ David's thought ..Like the kitchen scene with chris/bar scene with Marvin...Bar scene literally could have been made better. I feel like the bar plot has not been used properly same as with Jake shopping plot..Like scene could have been created dancing on the floor/ touching after few drinks with guys to excite Ana upto certain level before Marvin make his entry..but he directly went to car after few petting scene with Marvin. But anyways what's done is done...I just feel like Ana is stuck in perfect situation with Grant and he can use money conditions/previous encounters story plot with him and continue the story from that but lets see how MP wanna go about it. Flashbacks / having a thought about david while giving in removes the feel of cheat from Ana/ downgrade naughtiness tendencies of her and feel like she has to be submissive in all situations/ remove the feel of sexual tension that has been created with antagonist as per current story plot and feel like it has been forced or she's doing it as revenge.
Not looking forward at all to this next old man update and if this bastard can poison her hubbys drink than he can definately try to add a sex drug to Anna’s wine hopefully there will be an option not to drink the wine______________________________++++++++++++++++++_____________________________________________
Couto25
"What kind of scene does Grant gets in the next update? {And that is complicated} I guess he'll be the main scene guy for next short update. Anna's family attempted to sue Grant to recover the father's estate, and it's fair to conclude any good will was lost toward him... And it will be a tease so will he be the first to touch Ana's pussy?
I hope Ana won't be drugged in the next update. I mean submitting unconsciously back-to-back is cheap. I think we can check off the drugs box on the list of tags. And even if drugs are used, again they'll be in a restaurant, so nothing is happening there; then there is how does he slip a micky in a drink?
As stupid as Anna can be in the grander scheme of things, she is pretty sharp about the reality of any given situation. While at Rob's house, Anna knew what he was up to... went out of her way to tease Timothy/Dale... admits her interactions are friends with benefits with the added advantage of keeping Chris on her side... her teasing and putting up with Marvin fuels her sense of empowerment being able to toy with him.
I serious don't see Anna drinking (at least at first) during the dinner with Grant to keep a clear mind. She's going to be eagle eyed looking and hoping to get back the family's money
And with her Dad's background story in the last update, I guess all flashback scenes are done. {I just don't see how Mr. Palmer can't help but use flashbacks... the audiences only know a little bit about Grant/Anna's history.} And no more flashbacks are required going ahead. I just want to see Ana taking initiative without thinking about David next time as that's covered twice already. She don't have to think about David all the time whenever she go in the main scene with anyone. Start making her corrupt and naughty rather submissive in all paths." Plausibility.... plausibility
Anna has had a long time to stew and nurture her hate for Grant. In that time a lot of good memories they shared got painted over with loathing rage and anger. You can bet the farm Grant will attempt to come on as if nothing happened and he hadn't done anything wrong... but that doesn't solve the problem of getting back into Anna's heart. So just how much time and scenes will Mr. Palmer need to cross that minefield?
Just a thought to consider. It's very possible to either be the aggressor by taking the initiative or maneuver your opponent into a trap. Consider the following premise:
Anna knows now just what can happen with Marvin--there is no innocent Anna giving an old man a cheap thrill. If she excepts going to the pool with Marvin, she'll know full well he'll try again. Next time Anna meets with Chris and if it's going to be in private, Anna knows he'll try something. Visiting Robinson again Anna knows his game. Throwing up the Marriage Shield is plausible deniability for her own actions... a forum of roleplay of being an innocent young woman being at the mercy of terrible men.
Where Anna gets stupid, is things blow up in her face. She wanted some naughty and tease Timothy/Dale and get some attention... KA-BOOM! Allows herself to be alone with Chris in the car garage... KA-BOOM! All her want for just a sip of play and naughty to get men's attention and earn some self-esteem points have things go sideways.
So if going forward does Anna need to call Chris and say "come f**k me" or allow herself to be in a position where she already knows he will... Anna fully understands consequences dealing with Marvin and can easily avoid him... if she wants to. And she knows she can easily be welcomed over at Robinson's place... so yah, she's corrupt. It may come to pass where Anna doesn't have or want to take these circular maneuvers and just make aggressive moves
I'll never understand why so called "straight" men would even care what the guy looks like! Yet all we hear from them is how they need a good looking guy to fuck lol.I'll never understand why people want to see the old, ugly guy seduce the wife...
because you will get old someday and you would want sexy young wife.I'll never understand why people want to see the old, ugly guy seduce the wife...