Sadowdark
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After this update, Anna will have dinner with the old poisoner fox (Grant) to talk about the money he stole from her father.
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sslovoe
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i creat my version of poker night
am not writer
also not post here and lot game fan not want any other topic post here so i post art fan page
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it just idea will add by part
no render
no scrip
no chat
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not mkae charcter for men or hair just add as part idea and put which one use
poker night be
chris... rob... leonard...david
other friend
so i make new guy name sam be older bolder he one be flirt with anna
i post now part event
be poker night villa
start with anna join david for night poker cause she act he go meet alexia so she decide join him
she play anger him as he is cheater
Reason how she join
house be
living room
kitchen
pool
outside shower
2nd floor
i make pose for living room
pool
2nd floor
shower
will post share other page if someone help with create idea and make scrip
chat
its poker so i make pose for table and chose what happen
my peek
this just fantasy idea like some share his thought and write this event
look my idea as story board
https://f95zone.to/threads/a-perfect-marriage-fan-art.243325/page-2
am not writer
also not post here and lot game fan not want any other topic post here so i post art fan page
>>
it just idea will add by part
no render
no scrip
no chat
>>
not mkae charcter for men or hair just add as part idea and put which one use
poker night be
chris... rob... leonard...david
other friend
so i make new guy name sam be older bolder he one be flirt with anna
i post now part event
be poker night villa
start with anna join david for night poker cause she act he go meet alexia so she decide join him
she play anger him as he is cheater
Reason how she join
house be
living room
kitchen
pool
outside shower
2nd floor
i make pose for living room
pool
2nd floor
shower
will post share other page if someone help with create idea and make scrip
chat
its poker so i make pose for table and chose what happen
my peek
this just fantasy idea like some share his thought and write this event
look my idea as story board
https://f95zone.to/threads/a-perfect-marriage-fan-art.243325/page-2
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fapzoner69018
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next month bruh wait 1 month. He dont tell progress ...but he will take 1 month easily. And the sucky part is, the upcoming update will be short so like 5 min of gameplay.
sslovoe
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we not know what he plan
last msg when post last peek he said there be lot thing to do
and if all peek dale and hanks nothing teas
and night short event
will be disported if take time for short no action or teas
Hank, dale tim won't be that much of a tease...just like kiss, grope and a story buildup for future scenes..Tim Dale might be customer of Alexia lol who knows..
But yea there won't be as such tease with them beside dialogue exchange, same with the flashback scene..the only thing that is relevant is bar scene. That's all..and the next updat will be same with Grant meet probably. A lil bit of office tease and dinner with Grant. These will be short ..yea in the end there will be 2 choices for faithful and corrupt whether to give in or not but I don't think it will add up anything to the main story beside getting Ana more corrupted and more close to sex scene... This one with alcohol and the next one probably with drugs lol....but I don't think that these 2 updates will be more than 10 min of gameplay time as there will be very few options and less antagonist storyline will be covered...like few of his initial updates of part 1. 6-7 months I guess is alot for 2 short updates. Earlier it was good where he use to launch short updates in 2 months..now it sucks.
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sslovoe
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she meet with dal this time
or maybe tim watching door give his freind privet time
maybe anna say to them stop someone could see us
dal tell tim why not go watch out i have something to say to anna alone next time i you get time i watch for you
I don't find the difference between tim and Dale lol...both characters tim and Dale idk what roles they have in the story.
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Wouldn't you agree Timothy and Dale are good agents of chaos? You are correct, the story can go on without either of them because they done their job by showing just how vulnerable Anna is to men's attention. We also get more information about Anna and her past... she stated this was the closest two men got that close to her; ok Anna hasn't had a 3 some. It doesn't mean Anna is now going to go out and look for one-- at most all the breakroom scene shows that given an erotic situation, Anna gets aroused.
The whole Timothy/Dale thing does have a problem if they are kept in the story and have a role. And let's say that role is naughty time with Anna. The question is should it happen early in the story... or later?
The danger of later, is by the time Timothy/Dale get their turn, Anna would be too well aware of all the men in her life and how weak and vulnerable she is to them... so you have to have a plot workaround where it happens.
Too early having Timothy/Dale having a go with Anna messes with the timing of her and David's disintegrating relationship. Their marriage is on the edge but not that close to the cliff to fall off yet. And it might just make the story awkward with the other character paths.
The perfect timing of a Timothy/Dale event would be first, when Anna can get surprised that she finds herself in such a situation; second is either too confident to resist other men's attention or realize just how vulnerable she really is. And the overall situation has to be right where a Timothy/Dale event expands the plots and evolves the story. But as to how to write Timothy/Dale into the story... that's easy and am pretty sure Mr. Palmer can easily manage
are you going to make a fan-made game? that's pretty cool.i creat my version of poker night
am not writer
also not post here and lot game fan not want any other topic post here so i post art fan page
>>
it just idea will add by part
no render
no scrip
no chat
>>
not mkae charcter for men or hair just add as part idea and put which one use
poker night be
chris... rob... leonard...david
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other friend
so i make new guy name sam be older bolder he one be flirt with anna
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i post now part event
be poker night villa
start with anna join david for night poker cause she act he go meet alexia so she decide join him
she play anger him as he is cheater
Reason how she join
house be
living room
kitchen
pool
outside shower
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2nd floor
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i make pose for living room
pool
2nd floor
shower
will post share other page if someone help with create idea and make scrip
chat
its poker so i make pose for table and chose what happen
my peek
View attachment 4529824
this just fantasy idea like some share his thought and write this event
look my idea as story board
https://f95zone.to/threads/a-perfect-marriage-fan-art.243325/page-2
sslovoe
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no
just addicted to anna
just learn how create character hair body and cloth pose
art need lot learn light and render
maybe by waiting 4 month this game will not end after 4 year i get Chane every update i will learn how to make this this one day
If MP wants to show that Ana is getting attention from men around the office/public and do something naughty with them...he can do that with Marvin, Hank, Leonard, Marcel and Jake..thats what they are for where Marvin is into building management, Jake as co worker and Hank as a boss, Marcel as gym trainer, Leonard as David's poker friend. These are random characters from the office and public life of Ana that she knows and they are attracted to Ana already and have major roles in the story.
One possibility might be that Tim/Dale might be the ones who push Ana to the edge of 3some fantasy I guess. It could have been done in any combination of antagonists that are already existing in the story like Jake/Chris , Jake/Marvin, Poker gang etc.
Now introducing 3some plot with the existing characters could have made more sense after Ana gets comfortable with groping by all existing antagonists individually. It feels awkward where Ana didn't want to be groped by Jake/Leonard/Marcel yet, the ones who has important roles to play in the story and are being introduced in first chapters in the game but Ana feels okay by being groped by 2 random characters together introduced in the middle of the story from the first day itself without knowing them.
Just saying when Ana wear mini skirt in the office to see if she gets men's attention..it would have been more enjoyable and made more sense if she would have been groped by Jake, getting his attention rather enjoying being slapped by random street guy in public because Jake is relevant to the story....we know he's attracted to Ana. Now introducing street guy/ new office colleagues in the middle of the story and building tension between him and Ana is more like an additional plot and waste of time.
Ana and her past or flashback should be related to someone that are already existing antagonist. Like if flashback show her tendency to please her father/old guys where her father was strict to her, it should effect Hank's path or her relationship with old guys like Marvin/Grant. If her flashback is regarding how her father/David stop her from seeing other guys she's attracted to then it should be related to Jake/Rob. That will make more sense..rather introducing new characters and building new paths.
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Sadowdark
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It looks to me like the AWM replacement Sophia never had sex with anyone in the main storyline, except her husband. And so that followers don't give up due to lack of sex and have to wait who knows how long for their first sex scene. It gives events from the past and dreams. Where Sophia is wild and has sex with whoever she wants. It's a taste of the sex that awaits Sophia in the game. Just like MP gives these two random characters for Anna.yea thats what i called trolling...excuses everytime...and if we ask like why Ana didn't gave in upto sex with Chris, he has another excuse for trolling that Ana has not been tested with pussy touch. The more steps he introduce for sex scene via introducing step wise tease scene or by adding more paths, the more slow corrupt lovers will support him. So he decided to troll. I though MP has a good story, he doesnt need to troll with tease scenes and hold sex...but I guess i was wrong. He started trolling by new character introduction and adding more step to tease before sex.
For those who love this VN story wise, they have only 2 main things to see in the upcoming update...1st Her father nature towards her. 2nd The real story whether kendra get successful or not in her plans to put Cam in her office. And in the next update with Grant, story wise we will see whether Grant will give her money or not and what's his terms. Rest of the thing whatever he build for the next 2 updates is trolling if he doesnt introduce sex. He will just put all the excuses of why Ana cannot do sex that's all.
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I've stated many times that the pacing has been terrific so far but pushing off sex with Chris specifically will break the story. Pulling the L&P AWAM move will kill this game. You can't have them get to the point of a blowjob and then have them go multiple updates without fucking.
In game time it has to be within a few days, which should make the update count no more than 3.
Fucking with basic logic pacing to stretch the story ends horribly in every VN I've ever seen. Fans get pissed because they know something is off, the dev gets lazy and fucks with the story to justify and try to make sense for why the pacing is stretched. Etc.
Every dev that does it thinks it's the right move and it never is. You set the pacing when you start, you don't do it 5-10+ updates in.