BulgariAMARA
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- Apr 10, 2023
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Of course, we want to see a lot more, but the update is good. I would call it gorgeous, but the final touch, where Anna transfers from Marvin's car to Jake's car, somewhat worsened the overall picture of the plot for me. I understand, Mr. Palmer, that we have a lot of characters and there is a need to connect the plot with each of them, but this is too much. Because of this, Anna begins to look like a relay trophy and ceases to represent a gorgeous young mother, wife and respected employee of a law firm.
Yes, she made an appointment with her boss for tomorrow, she actually promised to meet with two guys in another office, and this fits into the plot quite normally. But the moment she gets out of Marvin's car and into Jake's, it somehow dramatically changed my perception of the update in a negative way.
I can understand that it was dangerous to leave her with Marvin for a while longer, but on the other hand, if Marvin had stopped and driven Anna to the house, Anna might have gained even more respect for Marvin.
In general, this moment somewhat spoiled for me the overall excellent impression of the update. And of course, it's quite obvious that Mr. Palmer has done a great job, for which I sincerely thank him.
Thank you, Mr. Palmer! I look forward to the continuation of your story.
Yes, she made an appointment with her boss for tomorrow, she actually promised to meet with two guys in another office, and this fits into the plot quite normally. But the moment she gets out of Marvin's car and into Jake's, it somehow dramatically changed my perception of the update in a negative way.
I can understand that it was dangerous to leave her with Marvin for a while longer, but on the other hand, if Marvin had stopped and driven Anna to the house, Anna might have gained even more respect for Marvin.
In general, this moment somewhat spoiled for me the overall excellent impression of the update. And of course, it's quite obvious that Mr. Palmer has done a great job, for which I sincerely thank him.
Thank you, Mr. Palmer! I look forward to the continuation of your story.