VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.5b] [Mr Palmer]

[Scotty Doesn't Know]

It would be moronic for it to not be Chris. He's already gotten head from her. People don't do that and then cool off for such a time that another person could realistically step in.

I'm saying that from a story perspective, not having a preference. It would be goofy ass writing to have someone get that far and clearly have the most personal relationship with her even outside of cheating and it be anyone else. It wouldn't make sense at all even in a "porn logic" sense. It would be trying to force a twist that wouldn't really fit.

Marvin, even with the handy/tit sucking, is still getting by on booze and guilting her into shit. It's not a true want on her end.
Jake is a dude she seems attracted to but he's very far behind the others at this point. Though, he would make more sense than Marvin of written in a true "one night stand" circumstance. They all go out, she gets a ride and it just happens. Her not being as close to Jake as Chris could help Jake in that instance as it could feel like less of a direct betrayal or act than Chris would feel.

But she has already jerked Chris off in a shower IN HER HOME and then sucked Chris off, again, in their home (garage/car). That line is crossed. It would be dipship AWAM logic for Anna to do that and then suddenly draw lines or boundaries, lol.
For it not to be Chris the dev would have to write him out of the story. Chris, despite never seeming him work a job (iirc) would have to suddenly be sent across the globe by his employer in order for it to make sense that anyone el see fucks her first. They're that far along, it couldn't make sense any other way.
Remove the shower and BJ scene? Up for grabs. Could be anyone. After those scenes it's pretty set in stone from the writing perspective of anyone that has any clue what they're doing.

I agree from a story point of view that it makes more sense for it to be Chris who takes Anna's virginity haha.
Ever since the work trip was announced with Hank (maybe close to two years ago?). I had a feeling Anna would have sex there for the first time with another guy. She's far away from home. Hank is manipulating Anna with her career and job. It feels like it's going to be an event update. We keep having iterations of update 7. When we see update 8, it probably will be the time Anna lets loose. In saying that, the dev could already have figured some people would think that and pull a surprise. Blackmail is not allowed on patreon, so might be tough to use those pics from Chris and Marvin. The guys would probably be arrested for trying that anyway, so makes little sense to do it, especially blackmailing a lawyer. I don't care who Anna has sex with first! Just make it well written and hot. Thats all most of us are thinking.

 

[AlfredBundy4]

I agree from a story point of view that it makes more sense for it to be Chris who takes Anna's virginity haha.
Ever since the work trip was announced with Hank (maybe close to two years ago?). I had a feeling Anna would have sex there for the first time with another guy. She's far away from home. Hank is manipulating Anna with her career and job. It feels like it's going to be an event update. We keep having iterations of update 7. When we see update 8, it probably will be the time Anna lets loose. In saying that, the dev could already have figured some people would think that and pull a surprise. Blackmail is not allowed on patreon, so might be tough to use those pics from Chris and Marvin. The guys would probably be arrested for trying that anyway, so makes little sense to do it, especially blackmailing a lawyer. I don't care who Anna has sex with first! Just make it well written and hot. Thats all most of us are thinking.

Agree and especially with the last part. I have no preference of who is first beyond a porn story that makes some level of sense. I'm so tired of the "it's porn logic" being a blanket defense of bad writing.

As for Hank, I'd place him about even with Grant. Hank holds power over her for sure but it might be a stretch to say he could make a threat against her job and immediately fuck her. If not, by the time he worked to that I'd think another would have gotten the job done.
Then again, being out of town and maybe pulling the old "they only have one hotel room available" trick could work lmao? A bit of booze and ya never know.

I also get a funny feeling that the dev will try to make it some twist and half the reason I'm even posting is because the dev does post here and has even asked for suggestions. I'd really want him to know that you can't pull a twist out of nowhere and have it not suck. Each plot point builds to another and there are general rules to storytelling, it's sort of a mastered art. You can't really take back the progress Chris has made without killing Chris, lol. That or sending him away on business or some other awful "it was all a dream" style trope.

With blackmail/coercion I'd say: Chris, Marvin, Hank/Grant and the rest are basically tied.

Without blackmail/coercion I'd say: Chris, Jake, Hank/Grant, Marvin and then the field. Marvin would actually be about even with the neighbor without using the photo to his benefit.

Then again, people have said this entire story is just a ripoff of another story that has the same name. For all I know this dev isn't telling their own story so...? I just want it to make some sense.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Still wonder who will be the forced sex. Playing devils advocate here. Patterns from all the popular AVNS with wife choice infidelity games. All have had a forced sex scene then later we got choices. Let's see if that trend continues.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

Jake is a fuckboy, but if you take away all the personalities of Marvin, Hank, or the other old guy, Jake is more like David, but young, handsome, and full of collagen. Jake just wants to win Anna over, using cliché tactics. I find it boring, but I think he's the most decent of all the characters. Sorry, Jake, but this isn't a romcom.

Who cares don’t you just want to see her finally cheat, cause once she gets some new dick, she’s not gonna be able to stop and then every other guy has a better chance of tapping that ass

 

[Alen1985]

Who cares don’t you just want to see her finally cheat, cause wants she gets some new dick, she’s not gonna be able to stop and then every other guy has a better chance of tapping that ass

In my game, she only wants David's cock. None of those homewreckers are going to have sex with Anna, and let's hope the dev keeps letting them stay loyal

 

[JRU2356]

I have no real preference beyond good storytelling but you seem to have a preference and I guess I should add the one detail that I forgot in my previous post.
I've been trying to cut down on the overly long posts but I'll indulge myself a tiny bit more for a second.

From first hand experience, cheating on your partner does something that you never fully understand until you cheat for the first time. You may know it's possible intellectually but you never fully appreciate it until it washes over you after you cum...and that's the fact that you just handed this person leverage on you. You handed them a rope that they can hang you with whenever they want. You handed them a loaded gun and are asking them to not shoot you. Which, of course, they will assure you they never plan to do lol.

However, people (women in my case as I'm a straight man) are people and they have wants, too. Things make them upset and in some cases they just want drama...so they'll decide to shoot you with that gun you handed them just to do it. It doesn't have to be a case of them wanting you to leave your GF/wife or the like, but it can be.

In this VN, Chris and Marvin have this leverage already. Chris has texts, racy photos and his story on what he and Anna have done already. He has evidence to back up a claim that he's been fooling around with Anna and he need not be totally honest. He could invent other events that never happened because enough did happen to make the husband believe anything he said.

Marvin? He has a photo of Anna in his vehicle with her shirt up. That's powerful leverage. The video of her changing is just a creep shot and not harmful leverage. The photo is.

They both have a nuke and it's really whoever wants to launch it first...if either do. So I guess I should have added that caveat in the above message.

If neither use this leverage, common sense and the laws of story writing dictate it will be Chris. If both are willing, it's Chris. Not even George RR Martin could pull a twist that would undo that, lol. If the dev tried it would suck and make no sense. Again, AWAM level dogshit writing logic.

However, Marvin does have a photo that if threatened to be used against her could change the math. Chris also has that and more of that leverage l but it wouldn't matter if he never uses it and Marvin would.

i feel Anna will have sex with Jake first.
Anna is shown to be prude with a high sense of self-worth
For her, Chris and Marvin are perverts and she maintains her composure everytime they get near to her. it'll be a while before she spreads her legs for them.
However, with Jake, shes attracted and also Jake playing a gentleman, so she wont have after sex regrets.

 

[AlfredBundy4]

i feel Anna will have sex with Jake first.
Anna is shown to be prude with a high sense of self-worth
For her, Chris and Marvin are perverts and she maintains her composure everytime they get near to her. it'll be a while before she spreads her legs for them.
However, with Jake, shes attracted and also Jake playing a gentleman, so she wont have after sex regrets.

I'd agree in that I think she is naturally more attracted to Jake than the others. She has no idea of his scheming yet and he's presented as a typical handsome/hunky type.
However, for it to be him Jake would have to basically hit the grand slam in one go. Jake would have to make his move and be inside of her within that moment or maybe a day or two because, again, Chris specifically is so far along that delaying their fucking would require a ridiculous set of circumstances.

Also, she *is* kind of into Chris (if playing one specific path). He can pretty much touch her in her known home with impunity and even in ber baby's room. She admits to getting off on flirting with him over the phone. While sucking his cock (!!) in her garage/car she quite happily and excitedly looks at him and expresses how she can't believe she's doing it, she swallows his cum, etc. Moving to the car is her idea.

Marvin is more the one she sees as gross and booze mixed with guilt+pity is the only reason Marvin gets anything.
It's written as her thinking Chris is immature and definitely up to shit but she has clearly moved to liking it to a degree.

But who knows? We'll see. Another interesting angle with Chris specifically is that Chris has leverage/blackmail on her now but he can't use it if actual love is what he wants. On a path where he just wants to fuck her and have her on a leash for a while, it's available. If he wants her to leave her husband, his longtime friend, he can't use logically use it and have her love him. So that's another hinge-point at play here.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

i feel Anna will have sex with Jake first.
Anna is shown to be prude with a high sense of self-worth
For her, Chris and Marvin are perverts and she maintains her composure everytime they get near to her. it'll be a while before she spreads her legs for them.
However, with Jake, shes attracted and also Jake playing a gentleman, so she wont have after sex regrets.

Don’t count out Robinson either, the fake masseuse, he’s already massaged her naked tits while she was on the phone with hubby and he said next time he will give her the full body massage and she can massage him too
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[Couto25]

Don’t count out Robinson either, the fake masseuse, he’s already massaged her naked tits while she was on the phone with hubby and he said next time he will give her the full body massage and she can massage him too
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Yup Rob will get a handjob next time....so next sexual thing with rob will be same as what marvin and chris level...with lil fingering n all maybe. Jake can be an option ....but the best possibility is always Chris to get first cheating sex.

 

[Dolphine KIIV]

What would your innocent, hard-working man David do if he knew his sweet wife was letting filthy old men fondle her tits—tits he himself hasn’t even gotten to see for a week or two—and letting them drain all the precious milk that should belong only to their sweet daughter?

And Anna, letting some old loser feel the warmth of where she holds her loving daughter?

Damn, Kendra must’ve drugged her good.

Some great NTR material right there, boys!

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[JRU2356]

Don’t count out Robinson either, the fake masseuse, he’s already massaged her naked tits while she was on the phone with hubby and he said next time he will give her the full body massage and she can massage him too
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The problem with Robinson is he’s more of filler on Chris’s route. He might proceed only if Chris gets it first.

 

[JRU2356]

Yup Rob will get a handjob next time....so next sexual thing with rob will be same as what marvin and chris level...with lil fingering n all maybe. Jake can be an option ....but the best possibility is always Chris to get first cheating sex.

Unless Anna does something she actually despises like doing something sexual with Grant without getting drunk or drugged, then only she’ll have sex with Chris. She needs to give free rein to her lust to get there and that can only happen when she loses her self worth and accept her feelings.
though I will not rule out that Chris might get the maximum blowjobs from her after all he told her he will make the best cocksucker.

 

[JRU2356]

Also, she *is* kind of into Chris (if playing one specific path). He can pretty much touch her in her known home with impunity and even in ber baby's room. She admits to getting off on flirting with him over the phone. While sucking his cock (!!) in her garage/car she quite happily and excitedly looks at him and expresses how she can't believe she's doing it, she swallows his cum, etc. Moving to the car is her idea.

I think her “attraction” to Chris is more about her post pregnancy hormones running rampage than her affinity for Chris or everything Chris stands for.
Yes, blackmail looks like a plausible route but I think Anna won’t do sexual unless she crosses that line with Jake.
As for Marvin’s route, she’s definitely gonna have huge regrets and probably be more open to things with others. but since I am not on that route I specifically want to see how the story unfolds with Chris and Jake without blackmail.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

I think her “attraction” to Chris is more about her post pregnancy hormones running rampage than her affinity for Chris or everything Chris stands for.
Yes, blackmail looks like a plausible route but I think Anna won’t do sexual unless she crosses that line with Jake.
As for Marvin’s route, she’s definitely gonna have huge regrets and probably be more open to things with others. but since I am not on that route I specifically want to see how the story unfolds with Chris and Jake without blackmail.

I could see “Molester” Marvin torturing her from now on with this photo View attachment IMG_4530.avif
If she doesn’t want him to show it to the office boys or put it on the internet she will have to give him daily hj’s & bj’s
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[Bugs Bunny :paranoid]

What would your innocent, hard-working man David do if he knew his sweet wife was letting filthy old men fondle her tits—tits he himself hasn’t even gotten to see for a week or two—and letting them drain all the precious milk that should belong only to their sweet daughter?

And Anna, letting some old loser feel the warmth of where she holds her loving daughter?

Damn, Kendra must’ve drugged her good.

Some great NTR material right there, boys!

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I hope she took a shower after that and scrubbed her nipples well. No trace of old dust

 

[shadowking99]

I agree from a story point of view that it makes more sense for it to be Chris who takes Anna's virginity haha.
Ever since the work trip was announced with Hank (maybe close to two years ago?). I had a feeling Anna would have sex there for the first time with another guy. She's far away from home. Hank is manipulating Anna with her career and job. It feels like it's going to be an event update. We keep having iterations of update 7. When we see update 8, it probably will be the time Anna lets loose. In saying that, the dev could already have figured some people would think that and pull a surprise. Blackmail is not allowed on patreon, so might be tough to use those pics from Chris and Marvin. The guys would probably be arrested for trying that anyway, so makes little sense to do it, especially blackmailing a lawyer. I don't care who Anna has sex with first! Just make it well written and hot. Thats all most of us are thinking.

For fuck sake, she is not a virgin, she has a kid!!!!!

 

[badbull72342]

we need a proper fanart thread for Anna

 

[xert13]

Don’t count out Robinson either, the fake masseuse, he’s already massaged her naked tits while she was on the phone with hubby and he said next time he will give her the full body massage and she can massage him too
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That guy looks like he is forbidden to be within 200 yards of a school. He creeps me out.

 

[ZeroSeventy]

You can't really take back the progress Chris has made without killing Chris, lol.

It all comes down to how you look at this story. You seem to be looking at it from the perspective of the male characters and pitting them against one another in the contest of who got the furthest with Anna to determine who will fuck her first.
But look at it from Anna's perspective: what if, for her, each encounter is just a step on her path to corruption? It's less about the guy she's with and more about letting go of her boundaries. An example would be Hank putting enough pressure mixed with alcohol on her, she might just think that she already steered away from being good wife, sucked off Chris, let Marivin have a taste of her body, so might as well let Hank have some too, you know the "i have already done so much naughty stuff, what's one more" kinda thinking.

My bet is on the guys from work (Dave and whatever the other one was called), I think alcohol + attention from two men, + her letting go of her inhibitions and boundaries is the mix that might get us the first sex scene. With Hank I don't cross a potential bj, with Marvin, well he would be perfect for the "ultimate corruption" scenario but with his micro penis that's a lost cause. Chris is the most obvious choice, hence I think the dev might steer away from that to make it a little more of a surprise. Jake might swoop in, maybe another save from Marvin's hands can land him the score?

 

[jackdiddley]

Still wonder who will be the forced sex. Playing devils advocate here. Patterns from all the popular AVNS with wife choice infidelity games. All have had a forced sex scene then later we got choices. Let's see if that trend continues.

It would have to be r@pist Marvin. I hope he has a heart attack and dies before that though.