IHATESlowburnBluBallgames
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Basically this. To bide my time, I’m working on an irl MILF that I know. I can’t have sex with an elf or a Twi’lek, but I figure I can at least hack that.[/QUOTE
Part 2 0.75b will be released in about 3 weeks or by end of October. Part 2 covers Friday day only. It will not cover Friday night, which is when the "action" is supposed to begin.
Friday night will be version 0.76 and Saturday 0.77.
Do yourself a favor and don't bother trying to guess when those updates are coming out because you're just going to set yourself up to be frustrated/disappointed. They will come when they come. Put it on your watch list and wait. Your mental health advice for the day. You're welcome. Where do I send my bill?
Next week storyline probably... Due to voting and scene that MP initially gave in part 1 and 2..Tease with marvin and Chris were the most with Ana...so these 2 characters got most vote..then Hank because of the role he's playing as boss who can submit Ana..then grant and rob again due to their flashbacks tease. So obviously people voted for these characters because corruption wise they will always wanna see sex...and these characters already been through first step in tease when it comes to touching or groping Ana in the first 2 chapters. Jake is the one who left behind despite of his daily appearance.
Maybe because Jake was the only character who got sex in the original novel, MP took to his ego that no matter what happens he wont show any progress with him even when he got opportunity to show some tease during shopping event with jake. To show that he's not copying things from that real story and building totally different story. But tbh... he's making things worst. If he would have stick to original novel, things would have been much easier showing Anna attraction towards Jake and taking things forward. And david doubting and jealous of Jake mostly so it was good script and perfect setup...now as per MP story, everyone got scene with Ana more than Jake...Now hopefully everyone will get scene with Ana probably after her first sex which i think Chris might get it.
I don't think Hank will get her on Saturday storyline too...He is just creating a hype that corruption will go forward from weekend storyline. Ana will be with Hank on Saturday....And i dont think Hank will be doing sex with her...maybe punishing Anna or different form of BJ/HJ/Boobjob.. making Ana submissive with daddy roleplay..spanking her ass or something. That's the most he will show probably irrespective of hype he create for Saturday. Sunday is doubtful but i guess Chris will be the one who will have sex with her first as he got upper hand as compared with other characters in terms of corruption whenever they will be alone next time. If Sunday covers some other antagonist storyline as main scene then ana will not do sex on Sunday too. Earlier MP told like he will try to finish this project in 4/5 years and will start new story with all gangbang anal fantasies...now I guess he's turning APM to his lifetime project by adding more characters.
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Sadowdark
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However, I doubt Penguin (Hank) will punish Anne on Saturday when he arrives in Jastoom for a business meeting. He'll punish her on Friday when he returns to work—there's even a trailer showing Annie leaning against the desk in front of him.
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For Jake being one of the main antagonist he's getting no play, hell Robinson got more play than him.
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So, by that time it will be 2027 before any actual penetration.
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Hank can openly punish Anna during his business trip on Saturday or get more tease....Friday will be normal tease..almost like none or whatever we have seen previously.. maybe kiss and sitting on lap and normal touches/spank above dress. Saturday there will be only Hank with Ana as far as what has been shown...So there might be a good chance for MP to cover David side of story of investigation on Saturday. On Ana's side maybe a few business meet with random character client with normal tease and in the end with Hank as main scene.
Jake story is on a disaster path and all thanks to MP to develop disastrous improvision of original story. On corrupt path, MP showed jake as a flamboyant showing dick and nude kind of person where Jake hope that Ana will be attracted to his dick and he didn't even got a chance to grope her properly or kiss her. On faithful path, Ana/Jake are getting close romantically, sex might not happen but still Anna is more attracted towards Jake in faithful route kissing him while jake drops her home after bar and this romance development will end up to no scene in faithful path. This Ana's attraction towards jake should be on corrupt route of Jake rather than faithful. So Jake path is completely screwed...whether we play corrupt or faithful, he might not be getting anything.
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The Jake path is the most predictable, and in my opinion, the most boring. I understand why some would prefer Jake vs. the older guys. He's the more realistic option. That said, for the more taboo outcomes with max corruption and degradation of Anna you've got to pick the other guys ahead of Jake. MP seems to be going for that. Some love it, some hate it.
its not boring n it has nothing to do with old vs young characters. Yes his story would have been predictable if he would hv developed as per original story. Jake is the best independent go to option for Ana as a partner if David/Ana get separated because initially both were attracted to each other and Jake did cared about Ana. This romantic development of Jake/Ana should have been happening on corrupt path of Ana. He is the center point of Kendra corruption plan too. But because of voting and initial development of corruption in the first 2 chapters that is shown with Chris/Marvin and other characters..people obviously voted for them...see if I ask everyone by now with whom they wanna see Ana sex with ...Chris might be the best option because they already crossed upto BJ scene. So now the center of story changed to Chris in terms of corruption development ...it revolves mostly around him and his friends. If he would have shown HJ/BJ with Jake...Jake would have got some vote too...but he didnt even showed Jake groping Ana yet in any path...so why would anyone vote for him?
Most funny thing is David doubt and get jealous about Ana being with Jake, Hank and Grant...But Ana is getting mostly corrupted by the people he don't even doubt at...Chris, Rob, Marvin and Leonard. Ana is smart and knows who to hang out with where David won't doubt anything.
the way MP is making, whole story is boring. Sorry if you dont agreeJake is boring.
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Some enjoy it, some don't. I'm in the " enjoying it"camp. I just wish the time between updates wasn't so long, but what can we do about that. Nothing
These were already online but I didn't bother to post them because you can't trust everything online, these are from the author's website.
-Don't anticipate any major lewd events in this update. There is a lot of table setting leading up to the weekend.
-If you're not a Chris fan, or if you are playing the faithful path, this Part 1 update won't be fulfilling. Part 2 will feature more characters around the office.
-It the slow burn, lack of action bothers you, wait until I release the weekend updates (starting v0.7.6).
There will be 7.5 part 2 this month, probably.
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I'll bring up the subject again in the second part. When I released it for gold members, he said it would take about four weeks, but now for free members, he said it would take two or three weeks.
