VN is ExpireI just completed the latest update. Here I share my inputs from the episode.
I think the story was better suited for kinetic novel as none of the choices really matters.
It seems to me that only Jake has real deal of fucking Anna and in the midst they might develop emotions for each other. it would be a good arc to have the character breaking a relationship to have something real for once and not turn into slut.
no matter how much Chris teases her, his chances of fucking her seems low as Anna is quite aware of his nature and will never give him the satisfaction. For Anna, Chris will remain an asshole with big dick.
marvin is a low level cretin employed to move story forward. I don’t expect him to do much once Anna loses her inhibitions to Jake.
hank probably would get some exhibitionist moments and at best have her give some stress relief by handjob but again I don’t think Hank can sway Anna to go the slut way.
I feel and since I liked the way Anna’s character is developing (a great job there, Dev) Anna will cheat and in that she might find something meaningful but I don’t see her turning to slut for now.
As for David, if u don’t know how fired up ur wife’s hormones are raging and how much she craves and u don’t provide for your priorities lies elsewhere, you are bound to lose her. I can’t sympathise with him.
Sure with everybody but ChrisChris has been wanting Anna for the longest time. Maybe David will be a nice friend by having an ending where he willingly shares her.![]()
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You're synopsis is undoubtedly the most realistic, but also the most predictable, and in my opinion, would be the most boring of outcomes. This outcome closely mirrors the story that already exists and can be found on Literotica called "How to ruin a perfect marriage " Again, just my opinion. I am a supporter of Mr. Palmer and would be disappointed if it turns out that I've invested time and money into a story where i already know the ending. No disrespect intended to you.
Is that Mr Strenstronger and in a church?
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Maybe at the funerals of Anna's father, as it is a flashbackIs that Mr Strenstronger and in a church?
Why do we need another flashback?
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You're synopsis is undoubtedly the most realistic, but also the most predictable, and in my opinion, would be the most boring of outcomes. This outcome closely mirrors the story that already exists and can be found on Literotica called "How to ruin a perfect marriage " Again, just my opinion. I am a supporter of Mr. Palmer and would be disappointed if it turns out that I've invested time and money into a story where i already know the ending. No disrespect intended to you.
Then we will probably be able to expect a
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Yay, another ugly old man. Just what this game needed.
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“Molester” Marvin would cut off his pinky toe for a pair of Anna’s used stockingsAnna made mention of the guy who betrayed her family so it sounds like this is that guy. same dude who gifted her a pair of stockings that she wanted to burn; but i think she keeps it and shows it off to Marvin when she gets really corrupted and vulnerable down the line.
To clarify, I didn't say the current story matches what's on Literotica, nor did I draw any comparisons. I was responding to the hypotherical outcome shared by JRU2356 and the fact that his/her hypothetical outcome does match the Literotica story, which i would be disappointed with.Referring to this history that is on Literotica does not make the slightest sense
- this topic returns here like a boomerang
. Yes, the story there has some similarities and characters from the game but that's all. The story that is presented in the game will be completely different
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I have to disagree, just because she succumbs to her lust, does not end the story, absolutely not. As a matter of fact, it just opens the door to Pandora's Box and further down the rabbit hole. This can open so many vices that the dev may choose to use to further the game/story and even make it epic. This can be just scratching the surface.We all have enough experience in NTR games to know that the attraction is in the story structure or the path and not in the actual sexual act. Once Anna is penetrated by all the men, the attraction is gone very quickly. That's why games like AWAM are so successful in the first place. The challenge for Mr. Palmer now is to keep the excitement and suspense up for as long as possible without taking the final step. It's not that simple, because it's a paradox. If he throws too little food, he will be accused of milking and blueballing. If he feeds too much, the supporters will become sated and interest will decrease and he will have to finish the story sooner. From my point of vies, the corruption even went a bit too fast in some places. I actually think that the End of Chapter 2 doesn't leave as much scope for Chapter 3, but I like to be surprised.. (love the game by the way.. its currenlty my#1)