VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.5b] [Mr Palmer]

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

The problem I have is the speech. It doesn't match the situation it kind of confuses me. I guess it confuses David too when he requests to sleep with her in the room. She acts different then she did earlier. He even says you are all over the place one minute you don't trust me then its I feel you didn't cheat we kiss then it's you give me attitude about getting in the bed. But when the real fireworks start going off, I think Davids balls will drop.

Agreed, I noticed that too; there's a hard shift in dialogue tone over the 3rd act when Anna's still dubious from "reasonable, supportive husband" to "doormat/cuckold-in-training".

At some point, you'd expect a reasonable person in David's situation to talk about boundaries, and what's reasonable to expect from Anna. Meaning one can't expect him to wait at every beck and call while she decides if he's trustworthy; she'd either have to take a leap of faith or start planning for the end, shit or get off the pot.

Yeah yeah this is a game and all, but realistic dialogue will help immerse the player.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Agreed, I noticed that too; there's a hard shift in dialogue tone over the 3rd act when Anna's still dubious from "reasonable, supportive husband" to "doormat/cuckold-in-training".

At some point, you'd expect a reasonable person in David's situation to talk about boundaries, and what's reasonable to expect from Anna. Meaning one can't expect him to wait at every beck and call while she decides if he's trustworthy; she'd either have to take a leap of faith or start planning for the end, shit or get off the pot.

Yeah yeah this is a game and all, but realistic dialogue will help immerse the player.

couldn't have said it any better. If there is a faithful path maybe leap of faith but I am starting to doubt there will be one. I feel like there will be a corrupted hearts situation.

 

[Deleted member 7535870]

couldn't have said it any better. If there is a faithful path maybe leap of faith but I am starting to doubt there will be one. I feel like there will be a corrupted hearts situation.

Me too, i have a huge doubt about a faithfull path...
well, in the stats have one stats said "Anna want to remind faithfull to David" but judging by dev explanation it could easely be a "Slow burn" path
To avoid any confusion Dev doesn't said it will be a Slow burn but with he's manners of explanation that leave people septic about Future path in the game

 

[sslovoe]

make animation in game make good look live action
but the game take long time with animation will take 4 month for short update
if this make game delay more better make less animation and we want see long story update

 

[Sadowdark]

couldn't have said it any better. If there is a faithful path maybe leap of faith but I am starting to doubt there will be one. I feel like there will be a corrupted hearts situation.

this game of corruption of the heart has already been ruined by the introduction of the hopelessly poorly executed NTR. And then Clara has amesia and nothing happened when Leon fucked her. And this game is starting to annoy me when I play on a faithful track. In scenes I am punished with a lack of choice because I have no minimal contact with a sexual predator. Which is illogical and hopeless.

 

[Adhdclassic]

this game of corruption of the heart has already been ruined by the introduction of the hopelessly poorly executed NTR. And then Clara has amesia and nothing happened when Leon fucked her. And this game is starting to annoy me when I play on a faithful track. In scenes I am punished with a lack of choice because I have no minimal contact with a sexual predator. Which is illogical and hopeless.

Seems alot of these corruption games are just generating conversation. The paths make no sense. People don't like to play the faithful path because it's boring. It seems alot of these devs don't know what faithful means. Don't say there is a faithful path and during the path she/he cheats if it be emotional or physical. Cause in the end it's not faithful. Giving choices in a game and we are assuming we are going in this direction just to go nope. It's frustrating. I create saves for each path just to find out result are the same makes a person not want to continue.

 

[Couto25]

Seems alot of these corruption games are just generating conversation. The paths make no sense. People don't like to play the faithful path because it's boring. It seems alot of these devs don't know what faithful means. Don't say there is a faithful path and during the path she/he cheats if it be emotional or physical. Cause in the end it's not faithful. Giving choices in a game and we are assuming we are going in this direction just to go nope. It's frustrating. I create saves for each path just to find out result are the same makes a person not want to continue.

The story on which it is based on Jake will be the one that will get Ana and Kendra disclose it to David...they needed a counsellor for that..Alot of jealousy and emotions, confrontation and the final path of forgiveness obviously...MP made a lil tweak giving opening to Ana on all the paths. Lets see how it goes. There is a Chris path too lol..so let's see. How many paths will be opened for Ana in the end if not on faithful route.

 

[robrize2169]

the best path on Anna's cheating path is her rejecting the shithead Fake Friend. sure she is stringing him along by not giving in to his games, but seeing him all angry at the end of the last update after Anna basically tells him to fuck off was awesome. makes playing Anna cheats path alot more fun. however, i have been on the faithful path too and everything is so stacked against David proving his innocence. at least on that path Anna still doubts that he cheated. but the phone call from the kid at the gym renews her anger. David needs a break and soon.
#DEATHTOCHRIS

 

[Sadowdark]

The story on which it is based on Jake will be the one that will get Ana and Kendra disclose it to David...they needed a counsellor for that..Alot of jealousy and emotions, confrontation and the final path of forgiveness obviously...MP made a lil tweak giving opening to Ana on all the paths. Lets see how it goes. There is a Chris path too lol..so let's see. How many paths will be opened for Ana in the end if not on faithful route.

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Comparing the game to this story makes no sense, because the game will be different than in this story, this topic returns like a boomerag. This story only features common characters and the events in the game will be different from this story. The creator said this many times so as not to compare the story to the game. Unfortunately, if someone finds this novel, the theme of comparison repeats itself endlessly.

 

[ItsNotUs]

this game of corruption of the heart has already been ruined by the introduction of the hopelessly poorly executed NTR. And then Clara has amesia and nothing happened when Leon fucked her. And this game is starting to annoy me when I play on a faithful track. In scenes I am punished with a lack of choice because I have no minimal contact with a sexual predator. Which is illogical and hopeless.

The dev wrote at the very beginning that the first NTR is inevitable and this is a key clue in the story. I could agree with this if there was the right approach to this scene and not just betrayal because of a simple kiss!

 

[Couto25]

Comparing the game to this story makes no sense, because the game will be different than in this story, this topic returns like a boomerag. This story only features common characters and the events in the game will be different from this story. The creator said this many times so as not to compare the story to the game. Unfortunately, if someone finds this novel, the theme of comparison repeats itself endlessly.

This story covers Jake and Chris scene so far and so as of now it's almost same.. obviously there should be a difference in storyline as he can develop in all paths, I am just saying this will be the way of forgiveness for faithful lovers...rest for the corrupt path there are many options, not sure in which path he's going to develop more. Most of em voted for Jake hank and Chris so far...He asked for only 2 characters path for Ana on which members are interested, so these 3 opinions were mostly recommended....it was not an official vote but let's see.

 

[Deleted member 7535870]

the best path on Anna's cheating path is her rejecting the shithead Fake Friend. sure she is stringing him along by not giving in to his games, but seeing him all angry at the end of the last update after Anna basically tells him to fuck off was awesome. makes playing Anna cheats path alot more fun. however, i have been on the faithful path too and everything is so stacked against David proving his innocence. at least on that path Anna still doubts that he cheated. but the phone call from the kid at the gym renews her anger. David needs a break and soon.
#DEATHTOCHRIS

I alwase love those #tag who ivolves Chris allmighty death

 

[PowerFlower]

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Uff. Having read that, I have no more illusions that things can end well for David. As I suspected, the best (read: worst) we can hope for is a "Good boy" ending. (as in: just take it; don't think about it; and pray she doesn't just keep going) Sounds like a great life for our David, doesn't it? Something to aspire to.

All I can really hope for now is that we at least get 2 more choices in the game.
1. let me reject the inevitable makeup session and not bring another child into this world that has to grow up without a family.
2. spare me the couples therapy. the predictable crying, excuses, the sorries and lastly the "it's kinda.. maybe.. no definitely David's fault also". don't really need the gaslighting on top of everything else.

I just want an option that says "You know what, honey. Let's not do that." I'ma just pack my shit and leave, and you can fuck that 70 year old janitor in the basement toilet of your office or whatever else it is you do when I'm not around. Or maybe get together with Chris, I hear he's a really great guy. You two would be a perfect match now that I think about it. (that's your sequel idea right there...) THE END.

 

[OllisNews]

The story with a blonde who has an affair to punish her husband. Anna is well done. David looks like a loser who can occasionally take a stab at his wife. Anna dreams of a big cock between her legs. Let Chris bang her ....

 

[_Thomas_Shelby_]

The story with a blonde who has an affair to punish her husband. Anna is well done. David looks like a loser who can occasionally take a stab at his wife. Anna dreams of a big cock between her legs. Let Chris bang her ....

Something tells me it wont happen this year

 

[BeastMaster59]

Something tells me it wont happen this year

Something also tells me it won't happen, although Palmer said something about really jumping into it, so I could be wrong, if I'm correct he brought out releases around every 3-4 months, correct me if I'm wrong on that.
But I Still enjoy his work, even though progress is pretty slow.

 

[_Thomas_Shelby_]

Something also tells me it won't happen, although Palmer said something about really jumping into it, so I could be wrong, if I'm correct he brought out releases around every 3-4 months, correct me if I'm wrong on that.
But I Still enjoy his work, even though progress is pretty slow.

I cant argue with that as I like the story too but its just the thing that it has been quite some time that this VN has been around and I think there should be at least one actual scene by now (even optional if some slow burn lover wants to skip it)

 

[robrize2169]

well if Palmer follows the original story, Anna will be doing some serious cheating with Jake. and perhaps Robinson will get some too. even though he's kinda a slime too, at least he's not pretending to be friends with David while constantly hitting on Anna like a certain fuckface fake friend is doing. i have zero issues with allowing Anna to cheat on David. but not with Chris. i really hope that Chris meets Jake again after Jake starts fucking Anna and Chris finds out about it. #DEATHTOCHRIS

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

well if Palmer follows the original story, Anna will be doing some serious cheating with Jake. and perhaps Robinson will get some too. even though he's kinda a slime too, at least he's not pretending to be friends with David while constantly hitting on Anna like a certain fuckface fake friend is doing. i have zero issues with allowing Anna to cheat on David. but not with Chris. i really hope that Chris meets Jake again after Jake starts fucking Anna and Chris finds out about it. #DEATHTOCHRIS

People keep referencing "the original story" , was this based on some book or something? Or a past game?

The story with a blonde who has an affair to punish her husband. Anna is well done. David looks like a loser who can occasionally take a stab at his wife. Anna dreams of a big cock between her legs. Let Chris bang her ....

Anna most certainly does NOT dream of sniveling betaboys.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

well if Palmer follows the original story, Anna will be doing some serious cheating with Jake. and perhaps Robinson will get some too. even though he's kinda a slime too, at least he's not pretending to be friends with David while constantly hitting on Anna like a certain fuckface fake friend is doing. i have zero issues with allowing Anna to cheat on David. but not with Chris. i really hope that Chris meets Jake again after Jake starts fucking Anna and Chris finds out about it. #DEATHTOCHRIS

And Jake “the snake” takes Anna’s phone and takes a pic of himself banging her and then when chris asks her what is she wearing she can say “right now I’m wearing Jake “the snakes” cock”