VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.5b] [Mr Palmer]

[DarthSpitz717]

i like how rob massage anna when she talk phon
if let him massage her again this not gona be soft massage after last one
i not think developer will add him this time and not give hot massage after what happen there will be fingering

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We know the main event will be the afterwork cocktails.

But it's the other things that happen that makes the next update interesting. But we don't know what they are.

A good writing strategy breaks down to something like 40-50% focus on the main event of that chapter and 30-40% setting up the next two chapters with the last 10-20% to introduce something new. For the sake of argument, the last 10-20% reintroduces Marcel. The intent would be to say have his first main role to start within say 1-3 chapters away and each update more and more effort goes into the "Marcel" content. I just use that as an example.

But of the 20-40% spent on setting up the next two chapters, what we are going to get is:

*More David and Anna conflict
*some kind of interaction with some of the main characters
*more development of Anna's character
*surprises!

Now when it comes to surprises like Timothy and Dale, having too many of them puts the reader(player) on guard expecting surprises.

 

[sslovoe]

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We know the main event will be the afterwork cocktails.

But it's the other things that happen that makes the next update interesting. But we don't know what they are.

A good writing strategy breaks down to something like 40-50% focus on the main event of that chapter and 30-40% setting up the next two chapters with the last 10-20% to introduce something new. For the sake of argument, the last 10-20% reintroduces Marcel. The intent would be to say have his first main role to start within say 1-3 chapters away and each update more and more effort goes into the "Marcel" content. I just use that as an example.

But of the 20-40% spent on setting up the next two chapters, what we are going to get is:

*More David and Anna conflict
*some kind of interaction with some of the main characters
*more development of Anna's character
*surprises!

Now when it comes to surprises like Timothy and Dale, having too many of them puts the reader(player) on guard expecting surprises.

Timothy and Dale is best thing happen in game for me and its out of game repeat thing
lot not like add more character
but this wild guy know her lust
and they not part kendra game or control
kendra just give them tip so they make move by them self
they will get access to her panty

not know why after make her show more skin now back to cover her cleavage

if want cover her boobs at least make her with no bra

 

[Adhdclassic]

I think dev is going to push the go with the flow mentality Anna has now which means a lot of things are going to speed up. She did the thing she hates, so everything else will be easy. Question still is who will be the first to penetrate the void. Side joke my wife hates when i call it that.

 

[catgameryt011]

The whole summary of happy hour is to make Marvin happy so that he can fix cam on her office....so he will end up happy for sure . And camera will be there in faithful and corrupt path both I guess. In faithful route, Ana will be framed obviously same like David. We will see though.

There are few unstoppable events where I think David forgiveness in faithful or David say in corrupt before seperation will be there. Fixing camera in Ana's office is one of the unstoppable event I guess. Will have to see whether kendra make him happy or Ana because Marvin demand was Ana.

doping anna in happy hour can only be achieved without jake's intervention.

 

[Amin_sun]

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Timothy and Dale is best thing happen in game for me and its out of game repeat thing
lot not like add more character
but this wild guy know her lust
and they not part kendra game or control
kendra just give them tip so they make move by them self
they will get access to her panty
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not know why after make her show more skin now back to cover her cleavage
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if want cover her boobs at least make her with no bra
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oh shit hana haruna

 

[Sadowdark]

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Timothy and Dale is best thing happen in game for me and its out of game repeat thing
lot not like add more character
but this wild guy know her lust
and they not part kendra game or control
kendra just give them tip so they make move by them self
they will get access to her panty
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not know why after make her show more skin now back to cover her cleavage
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if want cover her boobs at least make her with no bra
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As you know, the creator said that Anna will not wear bold outfits often, rather she will rarely wear them. For her, the first effect mattered and she achieved this effect. She is soaked in this effect, when everyone stops talking about Anna again, she will wear bold outfits again to raise her self-esteem.

 

[Sadowdark]

doping anna in happy hour can only be achieved without jake's intervention.

And that's why Kendra didn't invite Jake, it'll be similar to the old fish at the first Happy Hour. Only Jake will invite himself or Anna will invite him by accident. And he will sit instead of the old fish next to Anna. Where he will protect her so she doesn't fall into the old fish's clutches.

 

[Sadowdark]

The events should be different on both routes. Otherwise what's the point of playing differently on another path if you get the same thing on both paths on this supposedly different one. Otherwise it's hopeless and bloody boring waste of time wasting the creator's time.

 

[Scotty Doesn't Know]

But it will be a different story than what one user on this forum wrote. The game will be completely different. It pisses me off that the story has to be the same on all routes, it's fucking boring and hopeless. I don't play a faithful path or vice versa to get the same on both routes.

Almost every dev gives players the illusion of choice. In reality there's almost no difference for what will happen. Maximum is a few renders and some lines of dialogue that change. Sometimes not even that.

Most devs are too lazy and can't be bothered putting in variables with the Renpy code to make different scenes and dialogue unless its only for small things. Sad but that's the truth. Points in the latest update didnt change at all no matter if Anna does every lewd scene. These stats are put in to make the player think they are getting rewarded and on a separate path. Its fake as dev would never create so many separate situations for each one. There are some great devs who put a lot of work into making completely different paths, scenes and dialogue but they are so rare. Choices leading to different scenes is what makes a game, without this, its just a kinetic VN. A lot of the time the choice will be yes or no to lewd scenes. Saying no means you just end the scene. If it was an actual game, saying no would lead to a different scene.

Dont count on this game having hugely different situations or paths. As you can see already - there's fuck all difference lol.

 

[What'sNew]

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Timothy and Dale is best thing happen in game for me and its out of game repeat thing
lot not like add more character
but this wild guy know her lust
and they not part kendra game or control
kendra just give them tip so they make move by them self
they will get access to her panty
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not know why after make her show more skin now back to cover her cleavage
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if want cover her boobs at least make her with no bra
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I agree Timothy and Dale were good additions. Im surprised at how hot the shot of them standing beside Anna was. Easily the hightlight of the update for me. Even the bj, which was supposed to be a milestone for Anna, pales in comparison.

 

[Couto25]

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Timothy and Dale is best thing happen in game for me and its out of game repeat thing
lot not like add more character
but this wild guy know her lust
and they not part kendra game or control
kendra just give them tip so they make move by them self
they will get access to her panty
View attachment 4260846
not know why after make her show more skin now back to cover her cleavage
View attachment 4260850
if want cover her boobs at least make her with no bra
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Haha..I asked that question to MP in QA section where I said is there any possibility of Ana get so much corrupt to get fucked by strangers or people she doesn't know...He said no to that....so I think it will remain upto tease level only.

 

[Couto25]

doping anna in happy hour can only be achieved without jake's intervention.

Why she needed to be drugged if she'll be high on alcohol to lower her senses? Has anyone tried to drink a half bottle of whiskey or vodka and still need drugs lol? Jake can take advantage of her in corrupt path while dropping her back to home in corrupt route....that could be his first touch with Ana...in faithful obviously like previous part she likes his smell. So a hug or kiss if there is supposed to be a romance path with anyone, I can see Jake on faithful/ confused path. Rest all are corrupt path as of now. Jake gonna be Leo of titanic.

In grant he can drug Ana mix it in water or dinner.

 

[Jack_Sparrow_Pirate]

Is there anything new in 0.7.3b?

 

[metagrossrj]

Almost every dev gives players the illusion of choice. In reality there's almost no difference for what will happen. Maximum is a few renders and some lines of dialogue that change. Sometimes not even that.

Most devs are too lazy and can't be bothered putting in variables with the Renpy code to make different scenes and dialogue unless its only for small things. Sad but that's the truth. Points in the latest update didnt change at all no matter if Anna does every lewd scene. These stats are put in to make the player think they are getting rewarded and on a separate path. Its fake as dev would never create so many separate situations for each one. There are some great devs who put a lot of work into making completely different paths, scenes and dialogue but they are so rare. Choices leading to different scenes is what makes a game, without this, its just a kinetic VN. A lot of the time the choice will be yes or no to lewd scenes. Saying no means you just end the scene. If it was an actual game, saying no would lead to a different scene.

Dont count on this game having hugely different situations or paths. As you can see already - there's fuck all difference lol.

I mean, that's somewhat true, but most of the time, you atleast get some minor changes and a different ending.
"Our Red String" has different paths, but updates can take 6 months, and then there might not be any content for some people who chose a different path. (For example, in that game, the "Seymour path" got content in the newest update, which I didn't follow, so I skipped it)

It has pros and cons.

 

[Niamba70]

Чи є щось нове в 0.7.3b?

No. Added 3 picture.

 

[CaiWez]

No. Added 3 picture.

What 3 pics?

 

[Couto25]

The events should be different on both routes. Otherwise what's the point of playing differently on another path if you get the same thing on both paths on this supposedly different one. Otherwise it's hopeless and bloody boring waste of time wasting the creator's time.

There are few extreme downside if the story is going to develop this way...

1. A huge amount of renders will be required to develop 1 day of storyline....so if he's taking 4-5 months now..it will be 7-8 months easily to launch 1 update

2. If he try to stick to time line then we will see many characters storyline missing in the update which he actually told in this update debrief like it's not possible for him to cover all characters storyline in one update.

3. The update will become boring for whole audience ...if he launch 1 update for faithful and another update for corrupt route....60% of audience will don't like 1 of the update.

4. The time that he has in mind to end the project like say he is thinking like 4/5 years ...that will extend to 10-11 years.

And that my friend is the time when this VN will become AWAM. Where he will stick to few characters storyline on per update basis and don't care about what user want to see.. just an example if I like Jake/ hank corrupt path storyline..as of now since the events are same for both routes , he can cover a Lil path for both....and if events for faithful/confused/corrupt will be different...it will be impossible for him to show what I want to see in all updates...like if he is going to cover Rob romantic route and David faithful path ....something like that ..it will not make sense for me to wait for the next update. Like what Awam is doing, he is launching kids /lesbian /Dylan update.,...if I want to see Sam/school storyline, there's no story for me in that VN for 2 years.

So if you like this VN to become AWAM...ask for different events in different routes lol...3 routes /8 characters/2MC storyline=48 events in 1 day storyline.

 

[dkh8]

There are few extreme downside if the story is going to develop this way...

1. A huge amount of renders will be required to develop 1 day of storyline....so if he's taking 4-5 months now..it will be 7 months easily to launch 1 update

2. If he try to stick to time line then we will see many characters storyline missing in the update which he actually told in this update debrief like it's not possible for him to cover all characters storyline in one update.

3. The update will become boring for whole audience ...if he launch 1 update for faithful and another update for corrupt route....60% of audience will don't like 1 of the update.

4. The time that he has in mind to end the project like say he is thinking like 4/5 years ...that will extend to 10-11 years.

And that my friend is the time when this VN will become AWAM. Where he will stick to few characters storyline on per update basis and don't care about what user want to see.. just an example if I like Jake/ hank corrupt path storyline..as of now since the events are same for both routes , he can cover a Lil path for both....and if events for faithful/confused/corrupt will be different...it will be impossible for him to show what I want to see in all updates...like if he is going to cover Rob romantic route and David faithful path ....something like that ..it will not make sense for me to wait for the next update. Like what Awam is doing, he is launching kids /lesbian update.,...if I want to see Sam/school storyline, there's no story for me in that VN for an year.

So if you like this VN to become AWAM...ask for different events in different routes lol...3 routes /8 characters storyline=24 events in 1 day.

You nailed it !!!!
Just like that.....

 

[jun ja]

why there no h scene?

 

[DarthSpitz717]

There are few extreme downside if the story is going to develop this way...

1. A huge amount of renders will be required to develop 1 day of storyline....so if he's taking 4-5 months now..it will be 7-8 months easily to launch 1 update

2. If he try to stick to time line then we will see many characters storyline missing in the update which he actually told in this update debrief like it's not possible for him to cover all characters storyline in one update.

3. The update will become boring for whole audience ...if he launch 1 update for faithful and another update for corrupt route....60% of audience will don't like 1 of the update.

4. The time that he has in mind to end the project like say he is thinking like 4/5 years ...that will extend to 10-11 years.

And that my friend is the time when this VN will become AWAM. Where he will stick to few characters storyline on per update basis and don't care about what user want to see.. just an example if I like Jake/ hank corrupt path storyline..as of now since the events are same for both routes , he can cover a Lil path for both....and if events for faithful/confused/corrupt will be different...it will be impossible for him to show what I want to see in all updates...like if he is going to cover Rob romantic route and David faithful path ....something like that ..it will not make sense for me to wait for the next update. Like what Awam is doing, he is launching kids /lesbian /Dylan update.,...if I want to see Sam/school storyline, there's no story for me in that VN for 2 years.

So if you like this VN to become AWAM...ask for different events in different routes lol...3 routes /8 characters/2MC storyline=48 events in 1 day storyline.

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No real flaws with your logic... it's a simple case of more possibilities more time and resources are needed to create them for the game. The only real solution is more staff on both the front and back end of production.

Regardless of what paths a player plays, not everyone is going to be happy. Maybe some Marvin fans want x, y, and z to happen and nothing like it is releases. It's also true of the "faithful" path. With a limited staff and budget the only other solution(s) is/are lost content. Let's say Anna in the "groping" scene before the next morning's shower scene, Anna pushes back at Chris' advance, then logical next day we just see Anna showering and 'maybe' some few renders of some inner monologue.

As it is now its allocation of resources and work to move the story along without adding additional content. I said a good working writing strategy is putting 30-50% of time for the main content of a release and using the remaining resources to flesh out the next several updates and just putting into motion future situations. That leaves very little for alternative content to please the majority of those looking for a different ending.

Keep in mind the whole raison d'etre for the game is adult content not a Harlequin happy ending